John Smith, World Jumper Book One: Portal to Adventure
on Nov. 10, 2008
As I've said already, I'm really enjoying the story so far. I'll keep reading as long as you keep writing. Your story and style of writing is comparable to the old style of sci-fi I enjoyed as a teenager and still enjoy to this day. It is refreshing to emerse myself in this story as you're writing it. So you'll know who this is...in the world you're writing about now, it wouldn't hurt to see the inclusion of wapiti or at least the Irish Elk. It would fit perfectly into the world you are now writing about. I'll leave it to you to research and include if you see fit.