I really enjoyed reading this book. Who were the people trying to kidnap her? She is a rich heiress, she was almost kidnapped, is there a connection? Grayson's dad keeping an eye on her is basically stalking, why wasn't she more upset? As much as i enjoyed this read, i had a few questions i would have liked answered.
As an avid reader, it all fell into place in my head as the story seems like pure escapism. Are u a young adult by any chance, if u r, then i can't wait to read when u r more mature, it'll be brilliant. Good luck.
PS, where're the other stories
For the first time in a long long while, i actually read every word in a book. i felt like i was her, even the sex scene had a storyline. what would be more brilliant is if you could write a proper story on these two (no pressure).
I dont want to seem ungrateful, but it's absolutely annoying when u are reading a very good book and then it ends just as u get to another good bit AND u have absolutely no idea of when the next book will be out.
It IS a very good book and i only witheld the last star bcos i need to wait for the next one. i mean, really!
I love it, i love it, i love it, aaaarrrrghhhhh. I'm so knackered but i just couldnt put it down, i had to finish it. And then that little tidbit, i want to read it. Thank you for a great book and the next one in advance too. Ta xx
I loved it. It it really made me laugh out loud (which i haven't done in a very long time). It gripped me and sucked me right into it."...by odin's empty eye-socket', crack up. Thank you. Now i need to save up to buy the others, there's a recession you know.
WWWHHHHYYYYYYYYYYYYY did it have to end?!?!?! And then i have to wait?!?! It is a truly wonderful story, i couldn't put it down. My boxing day was very happily spent with this joy. Cant wait for book 2
It was a good story as firsts go, i'm guessing it picks up even more in the coming sequels. Fans of David Eddings would really enjoy this series. i'm going hunting for the others. Pls put them on smashwords, thanks.
No matter the ecstasy, it was still non-consensual. Rape is rape no matter how u look at it. I'm in a bit of a quandary because, the book was good but morally ????? I believe the book could be fleshed out so the story doesn't look as bad as it does currently (y'kno, an officer of the law sexually overpowering a person trying unsuccesfully to hold herself together after a nasty experience - it just don't look good).
Write in a scene before the pleasure begins, give it abit more story, give an indication of some sort that she wants him.
Everything so far is fine, actually better than fine. Carry on pls, don't mind us, just keep writing but pls give us a warning next time if the book is gonna stop in the middle. I am looking forward to the continuation of the book.
It's 4am and I've just finished reading this book. OMG, it's amazing. I started reading at about half 9 and I couldn't put it down. I hope the next one is just round the corner, I can't wait. The rapport, the training, the fighting, the togetherness, it all just comes together so beautifully. I love it, I love it, arrgghhh.
I was so sorry to see Damien like that after Beth died, he changed completely although I am glad to see that he still has a conscience. I've always had a bit of a thing for him and I can't wait to read his own story. Nicky, once again you have done it and I thank you.
I can't figure out why no one has rated this book yet. It was absolutely riveting, I couldn't put it down. I like the way you get their history with just a few words. I'm off to hunt for more Joss Wulff books. Thank you Joss.