While a good thought for a story, the execution leaves very much to be desired. The author, Nicely Naughty Girl, would benefit from having a better editor. An editor would have brought out more emotion in the writing. Although a novella/short story, she failed to capture the true emotions of what a Daddy's Girl feels while waiting for her Daddy. It felt superficial, almost like what one should feel, instead of it coming from Daddy's Girl's heart.
The story felt forced and inorganic. Maybe she will fare better with her next story, but I won't be paying for it if it's anything like this.
I can't quite describe it, but overall this story hasn't resonated with me as other stories of this genres have.