This is a decent steamy story, although i thought they were step siblings at first.
I enjoyed the dialogue between Sarah and Scooter but there are too many missing words, extra words and grammatical errors.
The story needs to be edited more carefully.
Oh dear, this story is ridiculous. Why would this teenage boys step mom suddenly have the hots for her step-son after seeing a picture?
The whole thing with sending dirty text messages was a ridiculous plot. The dialogue reads like something out of a semi erotic 80's novel. This is not how you tell a story.
I don't understand how someone can write a short story, less than 10,000 words and still have errors. Its 19 pages for goodness sake. It only takes a few minutes to read through this story and pick up on the grammatical errors.
This story was quite creative.
The games they played with the sister set this story apart from other sibling erotic stories.
I did think the sex scene happened quite suddenly. I don't want to add any spoilers but the ending could have been extended a little.
As others have said there were some errors. It was far from a boring story.