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Sep. 07, 2013
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Charity Begins at Home
on Sep. 07, 2013
This is a decent steamy story, although i thought they were step siblings at first. I enjoyed the dialogue between Sarah and Scooter but there are too many missing words, extra words and grammatical errors. The story needs to be edited more carefully.
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Family Fucking: My Cousin's Ass
on Aug. 06, 2014
This story was too rushed. The sex scenes were far from erotic. There was no plot or story to explain why they were hooking up.
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My Friend's Older Brother
on Aug. 07, 2014
This was a well written little story, however I wish the author had continued the story a little further or released the next book in a short time frame. One of the keys to self-publishing a short story series is to publish each book in the series one after the other. If not you risk losing fans/readers who enjoyed your last book.
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JoAnne's First Doggy Blow-Bang - Bestiality Blow-Bangs in Bluejeans #7
on Aug. 10, 2014
This is one of the most taboo and stupid stories I have ever read. The plot was ridiculous. There was nothing erotic or exciting about this story. The descriptions of what JoAnne was doing with the dog and her brother & his friends was so basic, rushed and missing any kind of climax. I was curious to read one of these Bestiality stories. There is nothing erotic about these types of stories, they just come off as nasty trashy porn that is supposed to push beyond the limit. Loving a dog as a pet and friend is one thing. Giving a dog a blow job is another thing. I appreciate fantasy but this is ridiculous.
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Daddy's Girls - First Encounters (7 Erotic Stories)
on Aug. 11, 2014
There is nothing erotic about these stories. They are all wham bam thank you stepdaughter. Very little build up. If this makes people get hot, I'm surprised.
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Brother, Be My Lover (A Psuedo-Incest, Brother-Sister Erotic Romance)
on Aug. 12, 2014
The sex scene and dialogue were below average. It's hard to find a good taboo story on here.
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Poor Little Rich Girl (reluctant teen billionaire breeding)
on Aug. 12, 2014
The beginning was quite good. Then this author did what too many authors in this erotica genre are doing. They are writing these wham bam rough sex scenes. It's not even hardcore, its like soft porn with some douche bag man. This one being her stepfather. This was one of the worst lines from the book. 'It felt like he was filling me up with hot fudge sauce' Why is he calling her a slut when she's a virgin? Writing erotica shouldn't give writers a licence to write trashy nonsense. Deleted from my kindle
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Deflowering My Wife's Sexy Little Sister
on Aug. 12, 2014
This was an average read. I really think this author is good at building a little back story and introducing the characters, then she falls short when she starts the sex scenes.
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Punished By A Tranny
on Aug. 13, 2014
What is going on? This is a 620 word story and it is full of typos and errors. How long would it take to read and edit this short story? 15-20 minutes maximum. E.g. She dress falls to the ground. It's 'Her dress falls to the ground.' 620 words is a bit short too. There's no room for a set up/build up and a decent sex scene. I've read better stories on Wattpad and a lot of the writers on their are very young.
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Football Party, Part I
on Aug. 16, 2014
Far too rushed and it did not make sense how the girl was worried her boyfriends friend could hear them having sex one day, then the next day she's ok with having a threesome. Why would two male friends just start giving each other blowjobs? They've been friends for a while and there doesn't seem to be any indication that they were bisexual before. It seems like the author just added that for shock value. A guy doesn't just start giving another man a blow job, even if they are horny as hell.
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Football Party, Part II
on Aug. 16, 2014
Too rushed, got a little disgusting at the end. The bisexual behaviour was weird. A guy doesn't suddenly start blowing another guy and enjoying it, unless he had those feelings or desires before. The guy telling the story doesn't once say how he feels about what's he's doing.
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Punishing The Wife
on June 29, 2015
This was awful trash. There was no build up, started with her husbands brother ready to have sex with her. Then the brother comes in and the dialogue and description was so messy and basic, it was like the cheapest porno movie. The author did not even spend time to describe the sex scene and make it sound sexy. Just cheap quick reads that are not worth a penny. Good they are free. 0 stars
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The Club Book 1: Covered by the Billionaires: A Billionaire Alpha Male BDSM FFMMMMMM Multiple Partner Fetish Story
on July 24, 2015
Awful set up, build up and trashy porno sex scene which is poorly written. He did this and he did that. It was unsexy and had to be deleted off my kindle.