Are these other reviewers on the payroll? This is a nice little story, its not a five star read. The writing is not appropriate for a short format story, lots of extra "stuff" not needed from my perspective.
Story is great, writing is in the okay range, definitely needs editing work, for example see excerpt below.
"They never left their hotel room and he couldn’t have thought of a better to spend it then under the learning hands of his new wife."