I thought this book is a great introduction into the world of BDSM. For a short read I thought the learning and introduction process had a good timeline. Nick took cues from Sondra on how to progress and let her decide what she was comfortable with. I have dabbled in the literary world of BDSM a few times, but I consider myself new to the world, and this book was a great read for someone at my level of knowledge and personal comfort levels. I intend to keep going with the series to follow Sondra as she learns and fully steps into Nicks world.
This was a short read that left me wanting more. There was/is so much potential to take this story to the next level. Definitely fun and hot to read. Well Done Malia!
on March 08, 2012
My impression of this "story" is that it might have been a paper written for a create writing class. It wasn't actually a book or story for that matter.
Good Luck with future writing Alisha Steele
This short story is a free read on smashwords. It's entertaining, but there were a lot of editing issues. It's a real cliff-hanger ending so I hope there is either another book coming, or this was just a peak at a larger story. Pretty good overall, it just needed cleaned up a little more and I would have liked more story.