Zombi storylines can be very predictable and cliché, not so Fire (Elements of The Undead) I really enjoyed reading this book, fast paced and full of action, I couldn't put it down I just kept turning the pages form start to finish. Now I will wait inpatiently for the next installment
Having read a few of the reviews and acknowledging this is the first book for a talented 20 year old, I do agree with most of the previous reviewers.
The Book is in need of editing and proofreading, spell check and family/friend proof readers can miss things. The book does get bogged down in places with every move, every action of the hero's moves documented, thus losing the story's momentum.
Having said all this the storyline is good and I would happily read more of Kyle's work, even more interesting I would enjoy reading Staying Human once a few more years of experience and a re-edit happens. So please Kyle keep writing and trust in your talent.
Just one other thing, it is quiet obvious that your number one fan is your Dad and that is great and undoubtedly as your Dad has written you have worked very hard, BUT family members writing reviews for you in the open market can have the opposite desired affect