The Letter
on Dec. 01, 2011
This is a terrific story though I thought it should be longer.
I'll check out your others.
Really liked it!
CR
The Watchman
on Dec. 01, 2011
This is a great story but agan how come its so short? Please write some long ones. Your a great writer!
CR
The Mirror
on Dec. 01, 2011
I think this story would be good for TV.
I like your imagination.
Great
CR
The Best Friend
on Dec. 01, 2011
I wasn't expexting that...
I like the way you write stories but would like them longer.
Other than too short, their outstanding.
CR
Soul Survivors
on Dec. 01, 2011
I was surprised you killed off the kids. Didn't think that was where the story plot was going. Great ending thoguh.
CR
The Magic Bag
on Dec. 01, 2011
this was good because it showed how someone can be good in one way (or more) and psychotic in other ways.
Im sold on your writing.
Good job
cr
The Window
on Dec. 01, 2011
now this story is my favorite.
I could picture it all.
Awesome
CR
When Is Ever After?
on Dec. 07, 2011
Absolutely great. I think there's people like that in every office and we all ignore them becuase they're not flashy.
I really thought this was well thought out.
Would like this to be a longer story, though.
cr
Amanda Ackers and The Deep Forest Elves
on Feb. 22, 2012
So it took me 3 weeks to get through this and at first the italics threw me. BUT once I got past that I had a hard time putting the story down to do important stuff-like go to work.
This is a great story but needs to be on the big screen to get the full effect. So many things going one thatkept me riveted.
And if this is Book 1 can't wait to see Book 2. How much longer until you get it onto here? I need to know what happens, man!