Absolutely great. I think there's people like that in every office and we all ignore them becuase they're not flashy.
I really thought this was well thought out.
Would like this to be a longer story, though.
So it took me 3 weeks to get through this and at first the italics threw me. BUT once I got past that I had a hard time putting the story down to do important stuff-like go to work.
This is a great story but needs to be on the big screen to get the full effect. So many things going one thatkept me riveted.
And if this is Book 1 can't wait to see Book 2. How much longer until you get it onto here? I need to know what happens, man!