The Girl Who Only Ate Bread is a story about a little girl named Jasmine McLoughlin that has unhealthy eating habits. She refuses to eat anything but bread and her whole world changes because of the consequences.
Smashwords book reviews by Christopher S. McLoughlin
Why
on Sep. 26, 2012
I enjoyed this short work of fiction. It was sad, and very downhearted, however the irony at the end was appealing.
Chris McLoughlin
soapbox.publishing@yahoo.com
smashwords.com/books/view/225751
What the F*ck is a Christian Anyway?
on Oct. 01, 2012
(no rating)
I enjoyed your essay.The point is very loud and direct. I believe in the same fundamentals when it comes to spirituality. I however, won't admit that I share the same beliefs with the hypocritical church going crowd, but I will utilize my manners and open doors for them even when they don't say thank you.
Chris McLoughlin
https://www.smashwords.com/profile/view/cmcloughlin1218
Be Still, Sweet Morsels
on Oct. 01, 2012
(no rating)
This was a very creative and interesting short story involving only one scene and one purpose. The amount of description and length were just enough. I look forward to reading other works from this author.
Chris McLoughlin
https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/237061
Envy
on Oct. 27, 2012
Funny story but needs a little less sexual innuendo and some more description.
Smashwords Style Guide
on Oct. 27, 2012
Great read! I could not have uploaded my book without it.