This is a cute little story, or really the beginning of one, that succeeds at making you genuinely like the central character, both envy and dread the highs and lows of their existence and yearn to learn more about their journey.
The editing has a few, minor rough edges, but don't let that stop you from enjoying a really good, vividly imagined story.
This classic mystery/adventure romp (with some pleasingly modern twists) is just a lot of fun. The author does a great job of presenting this fantastical setting and setup, but doing so with believable, earnest characters that you genuinely want to see win and succeed.
I really enjoyed Glen & Tyler's Honeymoon Adventure and can't wait to read about their further adventures.