I really enjoyed this book. The sex was hot and kinky the storey was well written. If there I were to change anything it would be to spend a bit more time exploring Laura’s feelings about what is happening to her and how her views are changing. As it is it seems like it happens all at once.
This story was well written but a bit repetitive. The main character kept obsessing over what had been done to him in the same way over and over. This story doesn’t read like erotica, it’s written more like a horror storey, there’s just no heat.
This was a good story with a nice romantic ending that just made me smile. Some good hot sex and a good story, loved it. To top it all off the author is very sexy and it is easy to imagine her in the role of the female lead.
A nice twist on the transformed by a drug story and presented with a good setup but ultimately never developed to it’s full potential. She was given 14 lollipops but the story ends after she has 2 and he accepts the transformation to quickly. Could have been much better.
The story turns a bit darker but is still a great follow-up. I hope we see more of Ashley enjoying her degradation in spite of herself and not a decent into Jon brutally abusing her just because he can.
It seems like it could be a good story but it is almost impossible to read due to numerous misspellings, typos, and mangled sentences. As an example for several paragraphs approximately 13% into the book “Malcolm” one of the main characters became “welcome”. Hopefully this will get cleaned up and republished, but till then stay away.
I must agree with the other reviewer as far as the spelling and sentence structure are concerned. This needs an editor so badly and it’s such a shame too, because the story has some real potential. The readability deserves 1 star but the story is a 3 or 4 when you can fallow it, so I will give it 2 overall. I hope the author reads this and edits the story.
This ended up going in a slightly different direction than I expected (more of an accidental tumble down the rabbit hole where I was expecting more retaliation back and forth) but that said I liked it. It was slightly humorous and very sexy. Well done.