A good read. While the ending was a bit predictable it was written in such a way to make it satisfying. I liked the characters and their level of development so that you could relate to them, esp. the main character. I enjoyed the thought patterns of Katie the most and how she expressed them. Good job.
Would love to hear more about this character (characters). Loved the short story. Very well written, funny and enjoyable but WAY too short. Please give us more of this!
A Scene from the Life of Shadowfax- Gandalf's Horse
on Nov. 19, 2011
Very short but entertaining. Most people don't wonder about the fate of a secondary character but its obvious that some do and can share it with us. Now I have to go back and read some passages about Shadowfax and see if he's quite as hard done by as described. Great job. :)