Location: United States
Member Since: Aug. 25, 2010
Exy Breeze
Books
This member has not published any books.Smashwords book reviews by Exy Breeze
- Angel's Story
on Aug. 25, 2010
Decent idea, but the story needs to be expanded on. I found it far too short. As this is your first book, keep trying. The jotted note style isn't really the way to get this story across, you need to describe the world, the people, the situation. Also, watch for your POV, some words just slip.
- The Stable Hand
on Aug. 25, 2010
nice sweet little story, the only thing I didn't like was the "*5 days later*" thing. This could be put into a sentence to make it look more professional :)
- Steven, Space Stowaway & Super Zombie Juice Mega Bomb Extended Preview
on Aug. 25, 2010
I really like this one! It's nice and short with lots of adventure crammed into it! I totally want to read the zombie super-soaker one too!