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  • Paid to Watch on June 12, 2012

    Very good story; good plot and very well written. Storyline is totally believable and imaginable. I would definitely buy from this writer again. Nice short story that gets you hot and can be used to get you off.
  • Lusting After Step Dad on June 12, 2012

    Very well written; good plot, imaginative, and hot. Definitely would read more from this writer. Downloaded this free but will look at her "priced" books for another hot one.
  • The Dog Upstairs; A Short Story of Bestiality on June 13, 2012

    Very well written, descriptive (very hot), and believable. A taboo subject; it's a story most people won't admit to reading. Definitely re-read, as it is sure to become one of your favorites (and one of your favorite fantasies to work off some steam). Sure to get you off!
  • A New Year's Celebration with Brenda on June 13, 2012

    Very well written and oh so hot! I was absorbed into the story as if I was 18 years old and young Brenda. Definitely worth the read and would buy more of this author.
  • Daddy's Sweet Girl on June 13, 2012

    Terrible story. Hard to decipher sentences because I don't think a comma was used in the first few pages. Punctuation was non-existent at times and there would be starting quotes but no end quotes. I don't know if English is not the first language of this author or if the author just wrote it all down and never re-read it - - it was very hard to get into the story because of the grammar and punctuation problems. Don't waste your time or $$ with this story.
  • Gangbanged By His Mommy and Her Friends (Taboo Sex/Family Sex) on June 15, 2012

    Not a bad short story. The book also had a page or two from two other short stories as a preview to other works. I don't think it is all that believable, but hey, I'm not looking at it for pointers on what to do. It had hot, descriptive scenes and was an enjoyable short read. I bought some other stories from this author (all at once) but I don't know that I will buy more.
  • Best Friend's Mom on June 15, 2012

    A short read...maybe 15 minutes. It includes a few pages from another book from this author so approximately 8 pages. Not an in-depth storyline, not very descriptive in the sex scene (there is only one), not very hot. Just "okay". Writes in the third person view, which was annoying because I couldn't figure out who was the one narrating. I downloaded a few from this author, free; wouldn't buy one in the future.
  • Busting Step-Niece's Cherry on June 15, 2012

    Very hot story but seriously needs an editor for proofing....seriously. Some grammatical errors - commas needed in some spots or need to be removed in other spots, words are plural instead of past tense, line breaks in the middle of sentences, and a whole lot more. Very good writing style otherwise. Story was very hot (as I said) and was worth the $1 spent. Would definitely buy more from this author.
  • Doctor, Doctor on June 15, 2012

    Not a bad story. Distracted by the italic formatting commands scattered throughout...you know...{I}. Wasn't really my style; I thought it was going to be something else than what it turned out to be...imagination-fuelled fantasy with lots of begging.
  • Boss Bangs the Secretary on June 17, 2012

    Pretty good story. Graphic descriptions, hot tale, well written.
  • Cheri's Family Collection #6 on June 19, 2012

    Very hot and graphic; story lines may not be to everyone's taste. This book will be the only book I buy from this author. It was good but not great. After the second story, it was kind of predictable, even some of the names were re-used so it was a bit confusing, thinking that we just read about them in the previous story and maybe this is a continuation (it's not).
  • A Chain of Mothers; Erotic Tales of Incest on June 19, 2012

    Smoking hot!! I bought several of Esmeralda Greene's books and I love each and every story in them. Yes, the story lines are taboo, but that is what makes it even hotter. It's good for imagining yourself as one of the characters and getting off, as a result. Definitely a "10". Well written, strong story lines, communicates very well. Please continue writing more stories!
  • Great With Child; A Short Story of Pregnancy and Bestiality on June 19, 2012

    This story is another hot number from Ms. Greene, although it does seem a little over the top....but hey, why can't there be some humor in erotica? I've enjoyed every story from this author...I hope she continues to write, and I will continue to buy. Definitely another "10"!
  • Intrafamilias on June 19, 2012

    Another smoking hot book from Ms. Greene, and another "must read". Many stories/chapters in this book....all one big happy family :-) Yes, some of the story is a bit far-fetched, but it is fantasy, after all....and as long as you enjoy it, that is what counts. It's all good.
  • Lust for Marie's Daughter on June 19, 2012

    Very hot (and graphic) story. An excellent read, sure to get your fantasies stirring, and the juices flowing ; -)
  • Mom and Muttly; A Short Story of Incest and Bestiality on June 19, 2012
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    Another great short story from Ms. Greene. Very well written. Very graphic. Very erotic. Yes, another "taboo" subject (actually 2 taboo subjects) but she doesn't make it sound or feel dirty or demeaning. Very tastefully written.
  • The "Greene Shorts" Incest Collection; Volume 1 on June 19, 2012

    Great stories within this collection, but then all Ms. Greene's stories are great. Well written, smoking hot and sexy. Each story is enough to fuel the fantasies and get you off. With 6 of them in this collection, that's a very busy (and satisfying) night of reading pleasure :-)
  • The Collected "Greene Shorts"; Volume 1 on June 19, 2012

    Very hot and bothersome, but in a good way. Very well written, good graphic text, and the stories have depth to them. I bought all of her books and hope she continues to write more. Extremely satisfied .
  • The Collected "Greene Shorts"; Volume 2 on June 19, 2012

    Another great story. Well written, good editing, stories have "heat". There are only 4 stories in this collection, but don't kid yourself....they are extremely hot and will stick in your imagination long after you've finished them. Another perfect score.
  • The Collected "Greene Shorts"; Volume 3 on June 19, 2012

    Hot and erotic describes all of Ms. Greene's stories and these are no exception. For all that she has written, each story is something new. I hope she never runs out of stories. The stories are well written, very graphic (but tasteful) and very erotic. Sure to please.
  • The frist trial of ebooks on July 30, 2012

    Very hot and steamy. Well written and no grammatical errors. Definitely a good author to read. The story is only a 5 minute read, but it is very descriptive (did I mention steamy?). Will look for more from this author. Download it....you'll love it as well.
  • My Neighborhood- 4-Cold January Nights on July 30, 2012

    Not a bad story, certainly is hot enough, but the grammatical errors are distracting and it takes away from the scene. The author does note that he's writing this for therapy and isn't correcting the errors so, if you can live with the errors, then go ahead. For me, nah....not when I read that he shoved one two three finders up her and she was moaned. And commas are a rarity so the sentences have to be re-read to really understand them fully. More of a "huh?" than an "ooh" story for me.
  • Daddy's Lactating Whore on July 31, 2012

    Very hot & steamy. Very well written and descriptive. Approx 10 pages of explicit and erotic sex. This one is definitely a keeper. :-)
  • Daddy's Lactating Whore 2 on July 31, 2012

    Roughly 10 pages. Same characters (plus an additional one) from the first story but with a different scenario; still very hot and steamy. Hopefully this becomes a much longer series. Descriptive and well-written and totally believable. Definitely worth the price and the read. This is a must-have.
  • DP for Daddy on July 31, 2012

    Very hot and steamy. I haven't read the first book so will definitely be getting that one. This book is well written, very descriptive, and oh so hot. It is a short story (less that 15 pages) but it is a complete scene/story. WOW!!
  • Breastfeeding Her Brother (Lactation - Sibling Fantasies) on July 31, 2012

    Very good book, well written. It is a steamy, hot, sexy romp of approx 10 pages (the rest are promo pages of other books by this author). Very descriptive and believable. Totally worth the read and price. I bought a few from this author, and I hope they are all as enjoyable a read as this story was.
  • Her Other Husband: A Snap Decision on Aug. 07, 2012

    A pretty good book - - well written, good character development, and a good storyline. It did have a few editing errors, but not a lot and nothing major that made you shake your head. The story is 6 pages long. Although it's not scorching, burn-your-clothes-off-sex, it was still pretty hot. And the fact that it's "her other husband" made it seem illicit, so it's a bit of extra spice. Definitely worth a read.
  • Stuff Me Full of Fruit on Aug. 07, 2012

    Hot and sexy but stretches the imagination a bit too far. That no one else is around them and that no one in the store hears them? And the stuffing of all those cherries, grapes,and strawberries - - and she still wants more - - and he gives it? My first thought was what a mess that is going to be to clean up and out. It is erotic and descriptive, and I like the fruit idea, but this story wasn't for me. There are a few grammatical errors but nothing that gets too confusing - - until "ho" is used in place of "who". Freudian slip, perhaps? This could be the story for you, and it is explicit and erotic, but reality tells me it wouldn't work (at least my version of reality).
  • Adult Baby Escapades on Aug. 08, 2012

    Never read this type of storyline before so didn't know what to expect. There are about 5 stories in this book. At first, I thought they were a continuation of the main story, but they aren't. Each one is independent and about 10 pages or so. On the whole, there were some grammatical errors but otherwise the storyline and characters were well described. It just wasn't my kind of erotic get-you-hot type of story. If you are into this type of fetish, you will love it because it's all baby. I didn't like a few of the activities, as they bordered on abuse but this is two consenting adults who clearly wanted it this way. My rating is based on my enjoyment of the stories.
  • Daughter's Purity Ball (Incest Orgy Gangbang) on Sep. 23, 2012

    WOW!! Super hot and spicy. Yes, some of the "acts" would be pretty much impossible for the girls, but the story is about the raunchiness of sex and a taboo subject and boy does it deliver on that front. It's explicit and sex-filled from Page 2 onwards. A definite keeper. Well worth the $. This storyline will definitely be a recurring fantasy for me (and others who are too shy to write a review but who thoroughly enjoyed the heat of this book). Keep up the good writing ... I will definitely look for more from this author.
  • Daddy's Lactating Whore 3 on Sep. 25, 2012

    Third in the series and still loving them. Same storyline but with another new character. Wish the stories themselves were longer (stories are approx 10 pages) but now that I bought all 5 of the series, I'll just read them all - - one after the other so it seems like a longer book. Very well written. Descriptive, good grammar. Oh yeah, and the sex scenes are very hot and believable without being crude. Another keeper. Definitely worth it.
  • Susan, King, and Family on Sep. 27, 2012

    Not a bad book, on the whole but not very believable, either. There are several grammatical errors - - commas instead of periods, compound words split into two words - - but it doesn't detract too much from the storyline. Without giving it all away, it's just hard to believe that she goes from one sexcapade to another without a blink of an eye, guilty conscience, or hang up. It's like open season on sex and every-and-anything is acceptable. Just a bit too far-fetched. And the sex trash talk - - just spurting out anything that came to mind. The scenes were very descriptive and if the trash talk wasn't too cliched, I would have liked the story much better. I am all for these story lines, I just don't like the way this one was written.
  • Paying Uncle's Toll on Oct. 09, 2012

    Very good book; well written, very descriptive, and most important of all - - well described sex scenes. Approx 8 pages (on my tablet it was 15) so although it was short, it was still a good length. Definitely worth the price and the read. Well worth the stars...
  • Candy's Canine Capers on Oct. 09, 2012

    An okay book....it requires some editorial changes throughout. At times the italics are for Candy's thoughts but then they are just there for dialogue. Very confusing because you'll start with italics and then it's in plain text. And! The! Exclamations! And punctuation! And repeat repeat repeat text. Yes, I get that it feels good good good but it's different when you are describing the action (lick lick lick) and when you are just repeating yourself yourself yourself. I found it just didn't read that well, didn't flow, so to speak. It was really like an unbelievable porn story that falls flat. Just wasn't there for me, just didn't feel the lust.
  • Porn Star Family on Oct. 11, 2012

    Not a good book. It needs serious editing - - run on sentences, ! in the middle of a sentence, incorrect word usage (has/was, the/then) and the ever so abused apostrophe possessive. Porno's is a possessive of whom? The entire story reads like a bad porno movie. It is trite and overplayed. Storyline would be believable but the dialogue is quick to dash that belief. Hard to believe that the dogs french kiss better than humans, have bigger cocks than humans, are better lovers than humans, and that a woman can come (correction - - have screamingly enormous orgasms) about a dozen times in a short time span and be ready to go for more. Only a guy could write something so unbelievable. Not worth the read or the $$. My recommendation is to give this one a miss.
  • Mrs. Robertson's Donkey on Oct. 12, 2012

    An okay book. Very similar to other books by this author - - it needs editing. Wrong words used, italics used all over the place, and lots of - - - (dashes). Takes away from the reading. It reads like a bad porn movie with the sex and dialogue. Unfortunately, I bought several books at the same time from this author, otherwise I would have just stopped at the one and said "no more". Alas, that mistake in judgment is costing me. The scenes are somewhat descriptive but short so you don't get off. The ending was really weird. Wouldn't buy from this author again (once I finish them all from the last go-round of buying).
  • A Pony For Paula on Oct. 12, 2012

    A bit better than the other books but not great. Still needs editing, still has italics in the wrong areas, and the dialogue isn't that great. There isn't a lot of sex scenes with the horse, so if you are buying it for that, you'll be disappointed. A so-so read. Not anything great or outstanding. Not anything to keep to re-read or lust over. Just "meh".
  • Mary and Joseph; A Short Story of Bestiality and Incest on Oct. 12, 2012

    Very well written and oh-so-taboo. As usual, this author manages to overcome the taboo and make it seem ordinary. A very hot book with some humor in it. Hot, descriptive sex scenes and sexy dialogue. The book is under 20 pages long. Well worth the $$ and the read.
  • Circus! Circus! A Zebra For Zelda! (The Most Erotic Circus-Sex Act Ever!) on Oct. 15, 2012

    I didn't like this book much - for the same reasons as the author's other books - - reads like a bad porn story. No depth, no feeling. It's like every person in the story is having sex with everyone else and they are rarin' to go - even after just having sex. A sex scene lasts maybe a page, then on to the next person/sex scene. The animal part is very, very minimal...the last 2 pages so don't expect it to be anything other than that. I think this is the last of the books from this author (I bought several and didn't like any of them). I will pass on this author in future. Not worth the $ or the time and effort.
  • Daddy's Lactating Whore 4 on Oct. 29, 2012

    As usual, a very hot erotic tale that is also very graphic. This author never fails to deliver a sex packed short story. Similar to the previous 3 stories in this series, the main character is lactating and loves sex. And I love to read all the details. Well worth the read for the entire series. Sure to get you off ; )
  • Daddy's Lactating Whore 5 on Oct. 29, 2012

    Wow!! Very hot and graphic...and wow. I hope this isn't the last of this series as I'd like to hear more about Nina and Liam. Very well written. Read the whole series...you'll love them all. Gets me hot and bothered, in a nice way.
  • Girl, Don't Ride The White Horse 2 (Incest Bestiality Gangbang) on Oct. 31, 2012

    Not to my tastes, as I mentioned in my review of book 1. This story is more gang bang than anything else. Don't know how it can be classified as western just because the gang are cowboys - - it's not as if they are riding the range or taming horses. It's more forceful takings than anything - no prep, lube, or slowly inching in. They have a hard on, they jam it in. The violence wasn't my thing and neither is the so-called magical horse. Not a lot of animal sex in here...more human sex, so don't buy it if you are looking for the animal aspect. Wouldn't buy any other stories of this type from this author. The story is about 12 pages. It was a waste of time and money for me for buying both books at the same time because I didn't care for either one.
  • Daddy's Girls on Nov. 01, 2012

    Very hot stories. Personally, I liked the last one best but they were all pretty darned good. Roughly 23 pages total, each story is about 7 pages long. The stories are well-written, descriptive and pretty believable. Overall, an enjoyable read. Definitely worth it.
  • Pegging Tales on Nov. 04, 2012

    Total of 3 stories, each around 14 pages long. All 3 stories were very well written, descriptive, and hot. This author pulls you into the story so believably with the scenes and descriptions and sets up for some very hot, enjoyable sex for all parties involved. Well worth the read (and price).
  • Oh! Brother: Sibling Sexcapades The Complete Series (Includes Sex Club Surprise, Sex Starved Sister, Hot Valentine, Sex Crazed Siblings, Sibling Jealousy, & Bonus Story) on Dec. 08, 2012

    Good read. The first couple chapters, I thought it was more romance than erotica. Not that it's a bad thing, but the storyline just seemed to be heading that way. But I was wrong....it was more erotic for the last couple chapters. There is errata - oogling instead of ogling is one example - but not enough to detract from the stories. There really isn't a taboo factor in the stories; yes he is her step-brother but they were older when their parents got married so it's not like it started at a young age. It was hard to believe that someone who wasn't that experienced with sex was so open & carefree about it once she got going. And the fact that she was in love with her step-brother but wanted to f*ck other guys (threesomes and more-somes) was a bit off. Scenes described were hot and descriptive, but it just seemed to be sex for the sake of it. Several descriptive phrases were repeated over & over and it was tiring after awhile. If it would have stayed as a romance it would have been great. If it would have started like a slutty novel and stayed that way, it would have been great. This was just good.
  • Pony Play on March 07, 2013

    Not a bad book, overall. Approx 17 pages of actual reading (24 pages total, which includes a blurb about the author, how to contact the author, etc.) It was a bit funny with the interactions between Drew and the others, but in a way it was also a bit more intense than normal "play". The story was written beautifully; very descriptive, good writing technique, and ability to suck you in so you feel you are there - - watching or participating. I gave it a 3star but only because it was a bit out of my comfort zone. I like pony play (and puppy play) but this was not the kind I like. No safe words, locked into the gear with no way to call a halt to it...it almost seemed cruel. Yes, it does work out for Drew, but I didn't like the path to get there.
  • Our Family Secrets 2 (Pseudo Incest Confessions, #2) on March 07, 2013

    A short read; 3 stories, total 13 pages so roughly 4 pages per story. Stories were short...in length and depth. What can you describe in that short amount? Nothing special about the action, but by doing it with a 'family' member makes it seem like incest, even if the family isn't related by blood. Not really much to grab and fantasize over. I'd give it a miss.
  • Our Family Secrets 3 (Pseudo Incest Confessions, #3) on March 07, 2013

    A short read. Approx 14 pages, 3 stories, so about 4 pages each. The stories are too short to get anywhere and the sex is so common, it's nothing. Not worth the $$, and doesn't do anything to get you hot & bothered. Skip it.