Great read, the author really takes you through the time-line. I almost expected the mother and son to get involved, but that didn't happen. This is my first purchased book, and my first review, so i'll go with a 4/5 and use this example as my litmans test for now on.
I've been a fan of Kreme ever since the mcstories days. I know that Kreme is a great author of detail, bimbo-ism, video game/game changing and all that. The price wasn't bad for this one, being my first smashwords experience with Kreme, but it wasn't all that great. Maybe I had higher expectations, but I feel that this had so much potential to be one of my favorites. 3/5
Not a bad follow up for the Sintendo Wii series. This one is unique and certainly isn't another re-hash of the old material. We follow two video game players as they mess around with two female bully figures. I hope more in this series is written. The price might be a little steep for some, but it is all in the name of good art. If you are looking for a little techno-mind control erotica, look no further!
I love the sintendo series...but this seemed rushed. I don't know, the concept is good, but the follow through isn't the best. I would like to see more scenes, the erotic parts seemed rushed. I would read a page and have to re-read it to get the full erotic affect. After reading other authors, I think that I expected more than I should have.