Rebels
on July 28, 2014
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A book with great ideas. It'd be a great read, if the author could write to even middle-school standards.
The book is full of run-on sentences: three, four, or five sentences run-on, with no punctuation. The book is riddled with random uses of "your' versus you're"; "its" (possessive) which should be "it's" (contraction of "it is"). Even more annoying is the capitalization of (almost) every word after a closing-quote. As in"
"Not so fast." Said Carol.
Here's an example sentence:
“Accord to these records its behind scheduled and off course.”
Read it ant wince.