Fuckin’ Stranger (Lesbianism)
on March 04, 2013
(no rating)
I only read half of this story, unwilling to read further due to the unprofessional writing. When a story is written and is going to be "published" whether in paper form, or online, proof reading your story, and/or having a second reader/beta read through it to find errors. Each page of this story is extremely short, but there are a minimum of 2 errors per page. Silly, simple errors, such as "buy" instead of "by", etc. I highly recommend it being edited before it's offered up for download.