This short story "The Devil Inside Me" by Greg Burdon is absolutely brilliant. Let me firstly state that I am not usually a fan of horror/thriller stories but I could not stop reading this particular story. The writing is akin to what Edgar Allan Poe would write, such as The Raven or the Tell Tale Heart but with a slightly modern writing style. I urge everyone to read this story, you will be pleasantly surprised.
I loved this story, throughout there is a certain mystery to the entire story, therefore keeping you guessing. My only critique is that I felt as if the story needed to be a bit longer, but other than that, great work!