Lucinda

Smashwords book reviews by Lucinda

  • Brunswick on July 18, 2012

    If "Brunswick" had started out with the richer dialogue & action it ended with, this would have been a good read. The flow of the story was very slow and grey at the beginning. A third of the way in, the drama perked up and the story became more dynamic. The ending was told very well and was a nice wrap to the plot. Unfortunately, I will not recommend this book. However, I hope the author does not give up as I see plenty of potential to become an awesome storyteller.
  • Freewill on Sep. 13, 2012

    Free Will, the first book in the trilogy, is overall a good read. The introduction leaves the reader wondering what is going on. There appear to be many loose ends to the story. As Ellie, the main female character, learns about herself and the world around her, you start tying up the loose pieces of the story. This is a unique series and I gladly began the second book, Consequences, immediately following the completion of Free Will