RN by trade, writer for fun and pleasure. I'm currently working on a futuristic teen sci-fi/dragon book and am really enjoying getting to know my characters. I hope to put my first book out within the next few months.
I like it! It catches your attention quickly and moves right along. My only suggests would be to format a little more like a book rather than big paragraphs as it would be easier to read and might flow better. The middle of the book seems a bit rough with sluggish wording/interchange, almost a little trite; but otherwise a fun read! Thanks. Keep it up!
I had a hard time getting into it. The frequent word repetition put me off (time, time, camp, camp) and the plot didn't grab my interest. There just wasn't enough built in suspense to keep me reading. I didn't make it past page 4. Sorry.
Very well written. I love the author's way with words, the images she portrays. This is a well told tale that builds the suspense and wraps it up neatly in a tidy little package.
A few minor typos and some scattered uneven wording left me confused here and there, which is why I give it a 4 star. Otherwise it's a solid 5.
Read it aloud and you'll catch them yourself.