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  • Backstage Pass: Absolute Beginners on Oct. 23, 2011

    Explicit short story delivers what it promises.
  • Daddy's Dirty Girl on Oct. 23, 2011

    Delivers exactly what it promises. The first few paragraphs, with exhibitionist Liddy showing off for stepdad, really set the tone.
  • Daddy's Tight Girl on Oct. 23, 2011

    Delivers just what it promises.
  • Daddy's Little Whore on Oct. 24, 2011

    Satisfying variant on the popular step father fantasy
  • Daddy's Lil Devil on Oct. 24, 2011

    This variant on the popular step father fantasy features a virgin whose reaction to her minister stepdad's corporal punishment is not what he intends it to be ... or is it?
  • Pumpkin's Cherry Pops on Nov. 21, 2011

    Not my favorite of Mary Chi's stories. A bit distracting that only one character actually has a name.
  • Open Wide on Nov. 21, 2011

    Raunchy, but sweet. Grammar a little rough.
  • Poker Slut on Nov. 21, 2011

    Raunchy, but tender, too. Grammar a bit rough.
  • Jaemin and the Delve with the Sex Machine on Nov. 22, 2011

    A fairly standard D&D-ish quest story substantially enlivened by some imaginative vocabulary, creative world-building, and unusual antagonists. Recommended for fans of smutty quest fantasy despite generous handful of editing gaffes.
  • Oral Sex: 2 Balls, 1 Mouth on Dec. 02, 2011

    I didn't really connect to the characters and longish stretches of dialogue with no attribution were a bit confusing. I've liked other stories from this author better.
  • It's Miller Time! (Book 26 of "The Promise Papers - Sensual Yearnings") on Dec. 15, 2011

    Short and to the point with a little bit of homoerotic subtext
  • Sexy Little Cheerleaders: #1 Practice Makes Perfect on Dec. 21, 2011

    The accidental-on-purpose girl-girl seduction was pretty hot. Keywords don't mention big breast fetishism, but there's a big emphasis on breast size in the story, also an exhibitionist theme.
  • Sexy Little Cheerleaders #2: Creaming The Competition on Dec. 21, 2011

    Plenty of ff and mf action, just a little dash of mm action for some non-standard flavor.
  • The Cheerleader & the Team - A Naughty Cheerleader Sex Story on Dec. 23, 2011

    Hot dialogue and action.
  • Stacy and The Boys on Dec. 31, 2011

    What makes this work so hot is Chloe's narrative voice. Her friend Stacy is an unrepentant slut and knows it . . . Chloe is probably almost as bad, but she thinks she's a "good girl." Watching her learn how wrong she is is a lot of fun!
  • Little Virgin Sister's Webcam (Taboo Edition) on Dec. 31, 2011

    Editing in this story was pretty rough, but I liked the basic scenario. Reese watching as much porn as she can to learn what camera angles and positions will make her the most revenue was a cool idea (maybe even a bit like an erotica author reviewing the market...). And Reese and Luke making out to a soundtrack of webcam porn was pretty hot.
  • Stacy on Vacation on Jan. 01, 2012

    More sizzling erotica in the second of the Stacy and Chloe series. Virginia Wade generates heat with with characters you can actually care about struggling against their own desires. Chloe's mostly given up pretending she's a good girl, but she's just starting to acknowledge her dom/sadist tendencies. Frank has sworn to leave stepdaughter Stacy alone, but she's making it very hard. (Some dubious consensuality and fetishism of interracial sex went a bit outside my comfort zone. Also lots of large toy action to go with the fisting.)
  • Stacy Unleashed on Jan. 02, 2012

    Although Stacy plays the title roll, what makes this series so hot is narrator Chloe's slow journey toward the self-discovery that she's just as much a nympho as her friend. There's also a general theme of people struggling to rein in their lusts. In addition to the listed keywords this particular story might appeal to bukkake fans.
  • Stacy's Gangbang Wedding on Jan. 03, 2012

    The final (?) installment of the Chloe and Stacy series wan't completely emotionally satisfying for me. Still had lots of hot sex, less emphasis on erotic teasing.
  • Stacy's Sexy Threesome on Jan. 05, 2012

    The erotic tension between Chloe and Stacy, and Chloe and Frank is still sizzling in this 6th installment. Offers some penetrated-male anal eroticism, an area the series has previously left unexplored. Continues to be bittersweet, and one of the most emotionally involving porn series I've read.
  • Marian in the Mirror on Jan. 06, 2012

    I thought the peeping tomboy revisiting the scene of her crime and getting caught plot sounded pretty hot, but the execution was disappointingly pedestrian. Minor grammar and punctuation errors were distracting.
  • Santa's Daisy Chain on Jan. 06, 2012

    Santa's naughty detector says something about a "daisy chain" and the jolly old elf doesn't know what it is or what's naughty about it. So clearly he needs a demo, which Mrs. Claus arranges. Very light, almost humorous tone. I had a bit of trouble keeping elves Sherry, Terri and Mary straight, not that it matters much.
  • Brendella: Collected Stories Volume One on Jan. 07, 2012

    This wasn't what I expected: tease more than hardcore. As a sword-wielding warrior Brendella is pretty incompetent, especially at retaining her clothing. She also seems kind of dim, and although she frequently gets into dilemmas that some might find erotic, they're not erotic to _her_ which is a bit of a buzzkill for me.
  • Pastor's Lil' Slut on Jan. 10, 2012

    Hot! Long, slow tease before the payoff. The punishment scene was a bit rough for my taste, but the psychological dimension made it work for me.
  • Whispers in Darkness: Lovecraftian Erotica on Jan. 21, 2012

    About as odd as it sounds. Shares plot details with the Lovecraftian universe, but not so big on Lovecraft's characteristic xenophobic dread (probably a good thing for an erotic collection). I thought it was a little uneven; I liked Bernie Mojzes "Ink" and Elizabeth Reeves' funny/hot "The Dreams in the Laundromat" best.
  • Lisa's Erotic Adventures on Jan. 26, 2012

    The car-trouble set up gets us into the head of the narrator a bit and helps ground the outlandish action. Still found the narrator's response a bit hard to believe. Really could have used some editing; I found things like using the word "length" twice in one sentence distracting.
  • Double Stuffed on Feb. 01, 2012

    The description says it all -- Jill really wants some anal action, her boyfriend Dave is just not into it. I thought the reversal of the cliche was unusual and interesting.
  • Dressing for Daddy on Feb. 06, 2012

    The title is a bit of a spoiler, as Rylie starts the story knowing her brother's a perv who takes any opportunity to ogle her. So of course she assumes it's him who leaves her stuck with the way-too-short skirt . . . but that's not the whole story. Rylie's flip-flop from repulsed to aroused didn't work as well for me in this story as in "Daddy's Horny Girls," but still hot, will definitely read more from this author.
  • Jennifer's Journey on Feb. 11, 2012

    Check out the sample to see if this writer's style appeals, it is very idiosyncratic and well-formed standard English sentences are a rarity in this story. Very, very strong fetish content, borderline scat, mucus eating, etc., in addition to what is mentioned above. It was not to my taste.
  • XXX-Mas Party Vixen Bundle on Feb. 22, 2012

    These three stories share a Christmas-sex-on-the-job theme with some holiday costumes. The first two mix some romance in with the hardcore.
  • Pride and Penetration (The Filthy Classics Collection) on Feb. 22, 2012

    Wade recasts the dynamic of Austen's classic characters in a 21st century setting. She takes the bare bones of Pride and Prejudice's plot. She (wisely) doesn't ape Austen's style or try to match her wit. What she does is basically replace the coded glances between Darcy and Elizabeth Bennett with a series of sexual encounters, and it works surprisingly well. Note: this is a little vanilla compared to many of Wade's other stories, which means there's still a touch of S&M play and a MFM threesome. Doesn't mean it's not hot and involving.
  • Sense and Sexuality (The Filthy Classics Collection) on Feb. 22, 2012

    Virginia Wade puts Austen's characters and plot (in a very condensed version) into a 21st century setting and adds explicit sex. No faux-Regency prose nor witticism-for-the-ages dialog, but the skeleton of Austen's story proves surprisingly sturdy in this new mode. Works better much for me than other attempts to sex up Jane, like "Pride and Promiscuity." Rather mild compared to many of Wade's other stories. Still hot!
  • Naughty Emma (The Filthy Classics Collection) on Feb. 22, 2012

    My favorite (so far?) of Virginia Wade's modern-day, tarted-up, whirlwind takes on Jane Austen plots. This one had a voyeuristic component the others did not.
  • Backstage Gangbang on Feb. 22, 2012

    This story of two rival groupies competing for a band's attentions had a touch more emotional realism than many stroke stories, without sacrificing heat. Will read more from this author for sure.
  • Ghostfuckers on Feb. 23, 2012

    Sexy, with strong descriptive prose - Pembroke is definitely a good writer. Creepier than I expected, I would have given this story a "horror" tag.
  • Ghostgasmic (Paranormal Erotica) on Feb. 23, 2012

    As described, short, weird, and hot. I will read more from this author.
  • The Ghost Fucker: Hung like a Dead Man on Feb. 24, 2012

    Sharp writing. Definitely hot but a little disturbing, too.
  • The Ghost Fucker II: Possessive Husband on Feb. 24, 2012

    Katrina's back to "lay" another sexually frustrated ghost to rest; this time there's a little bi action, too. My only quibble is some of the descriptive language is a touch too similar between this story and the first. I'm onboard for the whole series, though.
  • A Lesson from Teacher on Feb. 27, 2012

    The description and tags are accurate, but they don't do justice to the fresh twist Pembroke brings to the classic discovered-and-punished scenario, or show how good the prose is. This story made me add the author to my favorite authors list.
  • With My Boots On on Feb. 29, 2012

    Nothing terribly surprising here and a few editing gaffes, but if you're looking for a tale of a horny young woman prostituting herself to the local pastor and wearing some kinky boots throughout, this delivers the goods.
  • The Ghost Fucker III: BOO-kkake on Feb. 29, 2012

    Definitely not as light-hearted as the punny title suggests, there's a dark streak in this laying-ghosts-to-rest tale. A smidge of Ds in addition to the listed keywords. I didn't think this was quite as strong as the first two stories - the action maybe a little bit more formulaic -- but still strikes a nice balance between (mostly) hot and (a touch) creepy/scary. I find myself hoping for a happy ending for Katrina at the end of the series (but not eager for the end of the series).
  • The Ghost Fucker IV: Lucky Stiff on March 06, 2012

    More hot fun with Katrina, a sexually frustrated ghost, and, this time around, the ghost's widow. These stories have a note of emotional realism that really separates them from run-of-the-mill "stroke" tales; some of these are a little scary, this one has a melancholy tinge.
  • Russian Anal Angels: Svetlana's Fist on March 14, 2012

    Hot and nasty, with a splash of watersports and some Ds roleplay and infidelity themes in addition to the action described in the tags.
  • Russian Anal Angels: Olga's Ass to Mouth on March 15, 2012

    Delivers exactly the level of not-quite-scat nastiness the title promises. The sex is not exactly tender, but it's Olga pushing her own limits more than Sergei pushing her, which makes it hotter for me. In addition to listed tags, toy use is also a theme.
  • Your Every Wish (Fantasy Erotica) on March 18, 2012

    Great balance between heat, humor, and tenderness, with an assured narrative voice and some genuinely creative action. A winner.
  • The Naughty Nun; In the Beginning - Multiple Partner Erotica on March 19, 2012

    Accident-prone Sister Mary Immaculate spins quite a tale for her confessor, with unexpected results. Could use a light copy edit, but picks up a star for originality.
  • The Naughty Nun; Sister Mary's Edible Undies, Erotica on March 19, 2012

    Accident-prone Sister Mary Immaculate wants to wear something unusual to her next confession, but the results aren't quite what she expects. Nicely sustained tease (with eventual payoff, of course) and a touch of humor.
  • Jillian's Secret on March 19, 2012

    Could really use a copy-edit, but I give it an extra star for a little more emotional realism than typical for this type of story.
  • I'm a Bad Babysitter on March 22, 2012

    Nothing terribly surprising in this babysitter-caught-mid-blowjob story, but it's nicely executed. Some spanking in addition to the listed tags; some typos.
  • Teaching the Babysitter on March 22, 2012

    Elly's always been scared of sex. So why does she peek at her babysitting client jerking off? Maybe the young couple could help her get over her uptightness? And maybe Wynne Burroughs can turn this into a story that really delivers the goods. (Unfortunately there are a few distracting typos.)
  • Get Me, Got Me, Good on March 31, 2012

    I've always wondered about on-TV marriage proposals... what happens if the answer is not "Yes!" ... better hope there's not a producer type hottie lurking around, I guess.
  • Sex With Her Girlfriends (A FFF Erotic Story) on March 31, 2012

    Has a voyeurism theme in addition to the listed tags; the action is between women, but there is a male observer.
  • Anal Annie on April 06, 2012

    The narrator recounts significant steps of her progression in incorporating anal eroticism in her sex life. The middle section is almost more instructive than hot, overall it's unusually realistic for a smutty story.
  • Wet Panties on April 06, 2012

    Hot, tender, and even a little bittersweet.
  • Cumming On My Daughter's Face (Winning My Daughter's Virginity, 1) on April 07, 2012

    Nasty! Lesbian, fisting, and questionable consent activity in addition to the listed tags.
  • My Boyfriend is a Lesbian on April 17, 2012

    Delivers everything promised in the description (if I tagged the story I'd include "femdom" as well). Nicely character driven with some real tension to the story. Would benefit from a copy edit, lots of typos.
  • Webcam Gangbang on April 19, 2012

    More emotional (and even physical) realism than the run-of-the-mill gangbang tale. I liked how modern technology is integrated into the story. Also appreciated that although there's some interracial action, it's presented matter-of-factly rather than fetishized.
  • Grace Fucks a Ghost (M/F Paranormal Erotica) on April 26, 2012

    Romantic take on the ghost sex genre, for once addresses the issue of how a ghost gets solid enough for all the fun described.
  • Hostel Whore on April 26, 2012

    Deserves a dubious consent tag in addition to those listed. More guilt and unhappiness than you might expect, although it ends on an upbeat note, if you enjoy rough degrading sex (the narrator does).
  • Babysitter Grand Slam on April 26, 2012

    Delivers just what it says it does. When Stephie's babysitting clients finally turn up they're not happy about what she's been up to in their house . . . I wish there'd been a bit more of their domination of her.
  • Miley's Birthday Orgy on April 26, 2012

    Kind of like the written equivalent of those Hustler faux-celebrity Untrue Hollywood stories videos. More mechanical/less psychological than I usually go for, but executed with such over-the-top abandon that I give it 4 stars anyway.
  • Love the Monster (#2) on June 11, 2012

    Prose is pretty rough. Sex of the not-quite-consensual-at-first variety.
  • Love the Monster: Tentacle Sex (#3) on June 11, 2012

    This section has more actual plot than the two previous installments, and is a bit violent. It also switches things up a bit with some femdom.
  • Cheating Housewives Knocked Up: Rent Money Slut on Aug. 04, 2012

    I liked how Natalia Darque's story started a bit rough and nasty and actually got more romantic -- reversal of the standard smut escalation arc. But it was a little too repetitive, and the phrase "black seed" made me giggle a bit each time it came up. (That said: free, and better than plenty of stories here that I've paid for.)
  • Hardcore Hotel: A Wrinkle Inside on Aug. 18, 2012

    A voyeuristic couple haunts a hotel in this collaboration between Rachel Boleyn and Kelly Haven. Nothing too surprising, but solidly constructed, with a hint of real character development. Seems like this was intended to be the first of a series and I would definitely read more. Rounding up from 3.5 stars.
  • Book Club Sex Party! on Sep. 09, 2012

    The book club turns out to have participants both who are new to Sapphic games and pretty experienced at them, so there's an element of seduction. Who picked that smutty book, anyway? Hmm.
  • Darkest before the Darkwater on Dec. 01, 2012

    Starts with a bang and establishes an intriguing milieu, but stops before it gets anywhere. Clearly a teaser for a longer story, but doesn't specify exactly which book it's a teaser for.
  • Tramp Stamp on Dec. 31, 2012

    Kayla starts out the story by trading some oral action for the new tat that provides the title, and she only gets trampier from there. Uncomplicated, unsurprising, but plenty hot. I will definitely read more from Jasmine Dwayne.
  • My Hung Cousin on Jan. 03, 2013

    Story features male homoerotic subtext and eating of (defloration) blood.
  • My Hard Uncle on Jan. 03, 2013

    Compared to the first story in the series, this has more elements of male domination and is less clearly consensual.
  • Vicki Venus and the Temple of the Lust Gods on Jan. 03, 2013

    Nonconsensual and violent Tomb Raider parody with aliens, mummies, tentacle monsters, etc. Not exactly sophisticated, but sincere. Easy to imagine it being written one-handed.
  • Banging My Drunk Sister on Jan. 06, 2013

    Mercy is basically passed out for most of this story, which was not a turn on for me.
  • Seven Man Creampie! on Feb. 01, 2013

    Jumpy, lots of typos/grammar errors, not very descriptive -- but convincingly dedicated to its fetish.
  • Daddy, I Think I'm a Succubus on Feb. 01, 2013

    I was a little disappointed by this one, the title suggests a bit of playfulness/camp humor that didn't actually feature in the story.
  • The Aesthetics of Dirty Pictures on Feb. 02, 2013

    Strikingly original story, very dialogue-driven, with a man explaining to his increasingly intrigued female partner _exactly_ what he likes about smutty photos. Five stars for both heat and fresh approach, despite a few typo/grammar problems and some descriptions of the photos that are a little hard to visualize. But still, I'm buying Alyx Crowley's other Smashwords story right now, and looking forward to more.
  • The Island of Doctor Sex - Bred by the Lizardman on Feb. 03, 2013

    I thought the introductory chapter of Neneh Gordon's story was hot and solidly written, will read more of these for sure. It plays with consensuality a bit, but from the perspective of the narrator wanting things she feels dubious about. The story so far emphasizes the power dynamic between Miss Gardner and the "scientist" in charge of the island more than fetishizing the interspecies aspects.
  • Aunt Frisky; A Short Story of Incest on Feb. 06, 2013

    Esmeralda Greene's story is a very nicely executed take on the horny-relative's-arrival-shatters-everyone's-inhibitions sort of porn tale, a bit like the 80's Beeline books: thoroughly consensual, filthy, no pussy-footing about relations only by marriage, all participant's ages established as 18-up but not fetishized in the text. Well above average.
  • Bad Bikers: Daddy's Girl on Feb. 08, 2013

    In three individual chapterlets, determinedly slutty Rachel seduces some of her dad's buds to get them to support her bid to go on a cross-country bike-trip/orgy with them all. I thought her garage session with a lesbian with a dominant streak was the hottest. There's some sexual tension between Rachel and pop, but nothing explicit happens between them in the story. Well above average.
  • Daddy's Bukkake Girl on Feb. 08, 2013

    There's a lot of "daddy" talk, but this is not the sort of incest-themed story where anybody is getting seduced or dwelling on guilt -- as this story opens Frank and Emma are prepping for a bukkake session, and it's not even their first time. The action sometimes gets a little confusing what with a guy named Shane, a girl named Shayna, and fair number of typos. But thoroughly hot and nasty.
  • Our Little Secret Part 1: Charlotte's 18th on Feb. 09, 2013

    Charlotte and her dad don't consciously acknowledge they have the hots for each other throughout most of their accidentally-on-purpose mutual seduction. Pushes the boundary of the "barely legal" genre with the randy twosome more-or-less watching the clock for Charlotte's birthday to officially pass.
  • Seven Sins of Snow White on Feb. 10, 2013

    A different take on smutting up the classic fairy tale with no dwarves or poison apples (but with an evil stepmother). This version on Snow is from the naive-but-fast-learning school of porn protagonists, and the village she wanders around in is a little more realistically portrayed (in a Conan sort of way) than the Disney vision of Grimm. I thought it was hot.
  • Undressing Snow White on Feb. 10, 2013

    Ana Star's take on Snow White is impressively slutty -- she enjoys being dominated by her stepmother, and opens herself in every way to the queen's huntsman, the prince, and the dwarves. The ending was a little abrupt, but overall this was well-paced and thoroughly nasty.
  • The Orgasmic Awakening of Snow White on Feb. 10, 2013

    I've enjoyed several of Whiskey McNaughton's other stories and I like the raunchy twist at the end of this one, but almost all the action takes place while the dwarves and the prince think Snow White is dead -- the story really should have a nonconsensual tag and it was out of my comfort zone. I did think it was well written.
  • S&M: Sex and Machinery on Feb. 10, 2013

    This is really four short stories, two of which are linked. The first pair is pseudo-Victorian with a handful of steampunk trappings (and caning), with a femdom/maledom split between the tales. The second portion, with a character willingly transforming herself into a marionette, was the most original, and I thought it was the hottest, too. The other pair of stories concern a journalist stalking a reclusive and kinky musician, and then provide some of the musician's paranormal backstory. It ended rather abruptly. Both stories would benefit from a good copy edit, but my main problem is that the details of both settings are unconvincing.
  • Snow White And Her Seven Lovers on Feb. 14, 2013

    A modern day spin on the classic fairy tale, with the heroine as an amnesia victim who winds up as the lover of every man in a group house. The guys are a little kinky, running the gamut from the classics (doctor/patient; principal/troublemaker) to the downright whacky. Funny, romantic, hot, makes me curious to read more from Jenna Ives. Not quite 5 star -- some of the scenes are a little overwritten (every! orgasm! the most mindblowing! ever!) -- but really good.
  • Alice in Eroticland [Grown-up and Ready to Party] on Feb. 18, 2013

    Mildly pervy and not very imaginative riff on Carroll's classic with a thoroughly grown up Alice. The White Rabbit, Cheshire Cat, etc. become more human before they are sex partners; Wonderland food modifies genital sizes (although perhaps not as you might expect). Anal sex in addition to listed tags. Dee Dawning's tale would benefit greatly from a copy edit (even switches from 3rd to 1st person at one point).
  • Real Campus Call Girls: Ashley on Feb. 23, 2013

    Above-average, although I would have liked a little more exploration of the professor/student dynamic.
  • Real Campus Call Girls: Lindsey on Feb. 23, 2013

    Cute story with just a little twist at the end, interesting narrative voice. Above average.
  • Daddy's Little Angel on March 03, 2013

    This solidly executed entry by Rachel Boleyn in the popular step-dad/daughter genre fetishizes the latter's virginity and the we're-bad-but-not-SICK aspect conferred by the step-. Consensual with a hint of mdom/roughness (dad is def a dick to the maid, not to mention his wife, who is really demonized).
  • Golden Waterfalls on March 06, 2013

    Over the course of this story Jim gently -- even tenderly -- introduces his wife to a fetish she doesn't really share, and she realizes even if it doesn't intrinsically turn her on, the way it turns him on _does_. Perhaps not very imaginative, but unexpectedly sweet.
  • Horny Old Elf on March 29, 2013

    I usually like Whiskey's stories, but this one emphasized non-consent too much for me to get into it. Definitely a unique twist on the horny Santa theme, though.
  • Pretty Little Sluts: Ariel on April 02, 2013

    told in alternate first person from both the male and female perspective of an illicit teacher/student affair impacted by a mysterious blackmailer. smoking hot & I'm dying to know what happens next.
  • Daddy's Punk Pussy on April 26, 2013

    Whiskey's stories are hit and miss for me, and this one was a miss. There's nothing punk about it, and the narrator's resentment of his wife was tiresome.
  • Kate Gets Two Cocks (Co-ed Menage) on April 26, 2013

    The two cocks Kate gets in the story belong to supposedly gay dudes, and the story is very unusual in that it features explicit guy-on-guy action without fetishizing it. Our narrator Kate isn't squeamish in her descriptions, but what the guys get out of it is really incidental to her story. I thought that was hot, and I will definitely read more by Audri London.
  • Probe Me (Alien Tentacle Sex Series) on April 26, 2013

    Not really a complete story, but a very promising start, with some psychological depth and, for once, and a bit more science fiction content than alien sex stories usually feature.
  • The Babysitter's Seduction (Babysitter Diaries #1) on April 26, 2013

    The seduction is of the client by the babysitter in Kelli Wolfe's free intro chapter of her Babysitter's Diaries series. Solid if a bit unsurprising, certainly good enough to get me to check out the for-pay sequels.
  • Babysitter and the Beast (Babysitter Diaries #2) on April 26, 2013

    This entry in the Babysitter Diaries has more psychological tension than the first story. Dylan's attraction to Jenna is so powerful it frightens him, and leads him into some kinda creepy, stalker-y behavior ... but it turns out Jenna is every bit as much into him as he is into her.
  • Swallowing; A Short Story of Semen Fetishism on May 21, 2013

    Blistering hot, super nasty. Esmeralda really gets you into the (semen-obsessed) head of her main character.
  • Tied to the Scene; A Short Story of Domination and Humiliation on May 21, 2013

    Ashley gets enough more than she bargained for that this probably merits a dubcon tag. But Esmeralda Greene gradually dribbles out revelations about Ashley that make you want to see her get a comeuppance ... and she does!
  • Pregnant Interlude; A Short Story of Eroticized Pregnancy on May 26, 2013

    Esmeralda Greene can even sell me on a fetish I'm not especially into.
  • The Collected "Greene Shorts"; Volume 3 on June 04, 2013

    I bought this collection for the bonus story even though I'd purchased most of them individually; I'm not sorry. Greene has a way of getting inside her characters' heads that makes these stories hot even when I'm not really into the fetishes being explored (and a LOT of fetishes are explored; not for the faint-of-heart). The bonus story, about an adulterous seduction in a grocery store is one of the more vanilla entries. I was also particularly impressed by the story-within-a-story construction of "Teacher Fantasy."
  • Ian's Gang - Mousetrap on June 19, 2013

    Has something of the vibe of the sort of B-movie MST3K loved to lampoon, but much gorier. More about mood than character or a plot with any real tension.
  • Switek: Episode 1 on June 21, 2013

    Told in a breathless, light-on-details, almost script-like style, Zinetti's randy fantasy about a loutish minor leaguer is just quirky enough to snare me past the first three chapters.
  • Switek: Episode 2 on June 21, 2013

    Told in a breathless, light-on-details, almost script-like style, Zinetti's randy fantasy about a loutish minor leaguer is just quirky enough to snare me past the first three chapters.
  • Switek: Episode 3 on June 21, 2013

    Told in a breathless, light-on-details, almost script-like style, Zinetti's randy fantasy about a loutish minor leaguer is just quirky enough to snare me past the first three chapters.
  • Art School Gangbang on July 10, 2013

    Straightforward, pretty romantic for a gangbang story. The edition I downloaded had some distracting typos.
  • Centaur: Paranormal, Beast Sex, Mythological Creature Erotica on Oct. 17, 2013

    Kinky fun, with a fresh, breezy style. I will definitely read more in the Treena series.
  • Dark Secrets: Taken on The Train (Public Stranger Sex, Extreme Anal Sex, Taboo Erotica) on Oct. 17, 2013

    Jake is rough and dominant but Becca is way into it in this brief tale for public transit fetishists.
  • Anal Gangbang for Daddy's Girl on Oct. 17, 2013

    Opens with a scorching phone sex scene as Sara tells her stepdad how she spent her night. Some confusion about who's in which orifice when took me out of the story a little bit. Very rough with emphasis on gagging and some dubcon elements.
  • Rough Stuff for Daddy's Girl on Oct. 17, 2013

    Sara's stepdad is pretty shocked when Sara confesses that she's added watersports to her already prodigious sexual repertoire. In response he tries -- and fails -- to find the amount of roughness that's too much for her. Lots of gagging in addition to the listed keywords.
  • Big Black Cock for Daddy's Girl on Oct. 18, 2013

    As the 5th story of eager submissive Sara and rough step dad Steve opens, Sara has progressed to the point that a quick near-anonymous assfuck in the loo is almost too vanilla for her. But as always, Steve knows how to push her boundaries...
  • Anal Adventures for Daddy's Girl on Oct. 18, 2013

    This collection offers 5 of Atherton's stories for the cost of many single short stories, a great value. Extreme throatfucking and brutal anal action is the order of the day, with girls who love it rough. Includes the story of how Sara and step dad Steve started their nasty games, as well as "Anal Schoolgirl Party for Daddy's Girl," with 4 guys taking Sara and her friend Megan to their limits, and a really hot sequence of Sara prepping Megan for what she's about to get. Giving this 5 stars for the value despite a few distracting typos.
  • Fist Fun for Daddy's Girl on Oct. 19, 2013

    The title says it all - this story has a lot of fisting (front and back) and anal toy action, and not-blood relative kink. The focus is really on the fisting, and this story doesn't feature the rough oral action that features in most of this series.
  • Anal Punishment for Daddy's Girl on Oct. 19, 2013

    Sara tells Osagie she likes it really rough, but he doesn't quite believe her -- until her step dad instructs him.
  • More Anal Adventures of Daddy's Girl on Oct. 21, 2013

    A couple of these stories are almost too strong for me, with oral gagging and overtones of scat. There are some typos and sometimes dialog or a description seems to be applied to the wrong person. But if rough anal stepdad/stepdaughter action is your bag, this is a great value with 5 stories for the price of one. Some lesbian, wet & messy, & fisting in addition to the listed tags.
  • Bound Submission for Daddy's Girl on Oct. 21, 2013

    Megan and Steve jointly top Steve's stepdaughter Sara, then of course Megan submits to him as well. All the nasty anal and extreme throat action you expect from Atherton, and some fisting too.
  • Food Fetish for Daddy's Girl on Oct. 21, 2013

    The food sex is wet and messy, with some vaginal fruit play. Very unusual for A Cindy Atherton story, Sara makes it 3/4 of the way through with nothing up her butt. (That doesn't last, of course.)
  • Dirty Games for Daddy's Girl on Oct. 21, 2013

    Cindy Atherton's stories about Sara and her dominant stepdad Steve have mostly been just this side of too kinky for me. They typically have a hint of dubcon, but Sara really likes being topped. The oral action is generally very rough with gagging and choking, but again, Sara gets off on it. This one goes a little too far for my taste, featuring vomit, enema action with scat overtones as well as golden showers.
  • Liz and Mandy: Hard Licker on Nov. 09, 2013

    A really well put together - and hot - bit of smut. I will definitely look for more from this author.
  • Andy Unbroken (Geek Meets Girl Erotica) on Nov. 10, 2013

    A really fun cake-and-eat-it exercise: bitter geek Andy writes (and shares with the reader) competent but unimaginative mind-control revenge porn, at least until he meets a mildly improbable nerd-girl.What ensues is funny, sweet, and sexy.
  • Her Best Friend's Dad on Nov. 10, 2013

    Just a dash of male domination colors this barely legal tale. Nothing too unusual, but a typically solid showing from the dependable Rachel Boleyn.
  • Anal School: Private Lessons on Nov. 14, 2013

    Cindy Atherton's stories are usually a cut above the usual, and this is no exception, featuring some actual content about Shelley and the Romantic poets. It's a bit tamer than many of Atherton's tales, but still has a bit of Mdom to counterbalance the sweetness.
  • What Happens at the Tavern Stays at the Tavern: Epic Fantasy Quest Erotica on Nov. 30, 2013

    These are mostly bona fide high-fantasy stories incorporating explicit sex, rather than erotica with a veneer of fantasy. Two play with the trope of women required to remain chaste, or at least technically virginal, despite their inclinations. I liked Andrea Trask's tale best, although it's elliptical resolution made it feel a bit like an excerpt from a longer work ... One I would definitely like to read.
  • Night of the Tentacle (A Tentacle Gangbang Epic) on Dec. 13, 2013

    This takes an angle on tentacles I've always wanted to see -- it flirts with mind control, but it's more consensual -- the tentacles unlock the desires the characters already have, but might not consciously acknowledge. The story includes straight boys who are surprisingly open (pun intended) to tentacle penetration as well as some boys who aren't as straight as they thought they were, and of course plenty of het-male-friendly MF and FF action. And it's actually kind of romantic, at least, for a story featuring rough anal fistng and multiple multiple penetrations. A couple of the tags seem left over from another story, there's no murder/crime (unless summoning a demonic entity is a crime). Five stars despite a wealth of distracting typos, better written than average and the world needs more consensual tentacle gangbang orgy tales..
  • Keeping It In the Family: A 5-Story Taboo Collection (Incest Erotica/Family Sex Bundle) on Dec. 13, 2013

    Note: There were actually 6 stories, not 5 when I downloaded this book. Many of these stories have a mind-control theme, and there's also a sub-theme of women -- and one deluded guy who's not as straight as he'd like to think -- who don't think of what they're doing as sexual when they're controlled -- there's a bit of a "it's so perverted and wrong for me to get turned on when all I'm doing is [insert sex act]" vibe, which I thought was weird, but not necessarily un-hot. I would read more from this author.
  • Lesbian Vampire Biker A-Go-Go on Dec. 13, 2013

    Definitely better than average prose, but the story felt too predictable, and the sex scene felt very standard (apart from incorporating some blood play). The romantic angle wasn't well enough supported for me to really believe it.
  • Stuffed! Taken by the Toys (Paranormal Holiday Gangbang) on Dec. 14, 2013

    The toys doing the taking in this story aren't just stuffed animals that suddenly sprout endowments;; they acquire anthropomorphic forms that still retain a few animal characteristics, and a whole lot of fuzzy. Reminded me of how the ladies in Dark Bros films were always getting it on with dudes in assorted animal costumes, only without all the erection-deflating misogyny.
  • Stuffed! Taken by the Toys II (Paranormal Holiday Gangbang) on Dec. 14, 2013

    What does a girl with a plushie fetish do when she catches an anthropomorphic rabbit in her apartment? She comes on to him! How does he react? He calls in a bunch of his anthrobunny buddies! Does she mind? Oh my goodness, she does not mind one bit. The more the merrier!
  • Red on Dec. 15, 2013

    As you might expect, this free teaser ends with a bit of a cliff hanger. I thought the plot, characters and setting were all a bit unsurprising, but well executed, with above average attention to detail, Princess Jones uses modern vernacular for her characters rather than getting all thee and thine-y, a choice I applaud. And the romance/erotica elements are believably integrated into the story.
  • Plush Lover on Dec. 16, 2013

    I found the end of this emotionally unsatisfying, but it was still a fun little story. Even if I'm not sure exactly how the teddy bear can hold the dildo. ;)
  • Satisfied by Sex Robot on Dec. 21, 2013

    This has a scenario I found promising: Melody configures her new sex robot for maximum libido, and when her friends Candy and Sally drop by to try it out, they don't know its safewords. But I found the execution disappointing. And the robot is called Obama, which I found distracting.
  • Orgy in the Witches' Den - MFFF Witch Erotica on Dec. 21, 2013

    Nicely atmospheric (and creepy) buildup before the payoff; lush and descriptive prose. I would almost call this erotic horror, and it definitely has dubcon and femdom elements.
  • Sharing the Preacher's Daughter on Dec. 21, 2013

    This story has a repeating pattern: Cindy knows she shouldn't escalate the sexual tension between her and camp counselor pals David and Kyle. But she's having fun, and she's going to let it go just a >little< further before she calls a halt. I thought CC Corrigan nailed Cindy's narrative voice as she argues with herself, and I would definitely read more from this author. (Note: despite the "d" word in the title, there's no PI or ageplay)
  • Pauline Takes a Ride on Dec. 22, 2013

    A solid gang bang tale incorporating some unusual elements: bukkake, watersports, and guys who (somewhat to their surprise) like cream pie action. I enjoy gang bang stories, but they sometimes have of a note of misogyny I really don't like. This one does not. Pauline's boundaries get pushed a little bit, but it's her desire that drives the story, and it's notable that none of the words "slut," "bitch," or "whore" appear. I also liked the gradual introduction and escalation of the watersports elements. And either there were relatively few typos, or I was too involved in the story to notice many of them. I will definitely read more from this author.
  • Penny and Her Peculiar Problems on Dec. 22, 2013

    This was a strange little story for sure. I don't want to spoil it, but it's not quite like anything else I've read, about equally creepy and hot. Will definitely read more from this author.
  • Cowgirls and Minotaurs (Monster Orgy Erotica) on Dec. 22, 2013

    What are minotaurs doing in the Old West? Rustling cattle, what else? What are two randy, take-charge cowgirls and their more innocent but equally bi-sexual hired hand going to do about it? What do you think!? Well written despite some distracting typos ("side" for "sighed", etc.)
  • Brainwashed to be Bi: Three Innocence-Corrupting Mind Control Tales (Erotica Bundle) on Dec. 26, 2013

    Most of the mind control erotica I've read is from the perspective of the controller, but these stories are from the perspective of the controllee, so there's an interesting tension that comes from having an unreliable narrator. The first two (really one long story in 2 parts) is told in a series of diary entries. A bit creepy, I'm not entirely comfortable with enjoying them ... but I did.
  • The Gangbang Girls Are Go! on Dec. 27, 2013

    Comparable to late 80s Greenleaf/Liverpool books for sheer filth, and certainly better written than Star novels of that era. There's a lot of blackmail sex that's a bit dubcon. Also an emphasis on descriptions of animal anatomy. Although all the sexually active characters are adults at the time of this story, prior noncon experiences shape their psyches, so if that's triggering for you (and all the other listed keywords somehow aren't!) proceed with caution.
  • Adam and Sheree’s Family Business on Dec. 28, 2013

    Sheree is a really impressive creation, a mix of sweetness, avarice, insecurity, a domineering streak and sheer unbridled lust that's much more complex -- and compelling -- than I expect from the typical smutty story. And the dynamic between Sheree and Adam is remarkably believable. The titular "family business," meanwhile, gives Renarde ample opportunity to explore a wide range of kinks. For me, this was the sort of story that made even the stuff I'm not personally into seem hot. I'd give it 6 stars if I could.
  • A Governess' Tale on Dec. 29, 2013

    Laura Knots editing is usually rough and this is no exception, e.g., "past" instead of "passed" and it looks like there was a late change from 3rd person to 1st person, so there's a mix of "my" [body part] and "her" [body part] which can get confusing. But despite the editing problems, some of her stories work for me because they're so sincerely committed to the kinks and fetishes being explored. This one felt a bit lacking, there wasn't much tension to it. Should really be tagged dubcon or even noncon.
  • Alice Through the Porn Window on Dec. 29, 2013

    A few witty touches liven this up considerably . I like somewhat richer prose descriptions -- it's a bit thinly sketched - but this has some nicely pervy qualities.
  • Alice's Sexual Discovery in a Wonderful Land (Fairy Tale Erotica) on Jan. 01, 2014

    Liz Adams erotic reworking of Alice in Wonderland is long on tease, with Alice spending a large chunk of the book trying unsuccessfully to reach her first orgasm. I found some of it a bit creepy, particularly Alice's encounter with a group of men poised somewhere between imbecility and disturbingly child-like innocence. Many Alice erotica tales feature BDSM themes and couplings with non-humans; this one doesn't. It does feature a smidgeon of bisexual behavior, some back-door action, and several multi-partner scenes. Alice's insecurity grated on me a bit, and I found the dénouement disappointingly vanilla, but it had some clever touches and hot scenes.
  • Big Red Rides (BBW, Werewolf, Weredog, Bestiality) on Jan. 01, 2014

    Romantic , despite the strong content. I found the shifts between present and past tense distracting. Still liked this enough to read more stories by Ruby Winchester.
  • Daddy's Little Gymnast on Jan. 01, 2014

    Audra being a gymnast is not an afterthought, it's really woven into the story. Short but hot. Hope there's a sequel!
  • Dirty Mouth on Jan. 01, 2014

    Beautifully executed tease leading to a great payoff. I love how the story itself only refers to "the c-word" for the first several pages. Who says monogamy can't be hot? This is scorching. And funny.
  • Dominated By A Clown (Cream Pie Erotica - literally!) on Jan. 03, 2014

    inventive and hot, perfectly poised between sweet and nasty. I love how the narrator's fraught relationship with her ex-husband helps establish her personality. After I finished this I purchased several other Britten Thorne stories.
  • Happy Hallow-Kreme on Jan. 03, 2014

    I have really mixed feelings about Kreme's stories. I like tales of people overpowered by desires they may not want to acknowledge, but stories in which smart women become dumb have a not of misogyny that's uncomfortable for me. But on the other (third?) hand, Kreme's inventive, fetish-y and sci-fi/horror flavored scenarios are a lot of fun. This was no eXception. Made me hot and a little ashamed to be hot.
  • Don't Tell Mom! (Taboo Family Incest Erotica) on Jan. 04, 2014

    Vera Saint Luc's story is one of the _just_ turned 18 variety. The narrator's step dad and his sick pal have been prepping her for her birthday, e.g. teaching her to slide bananas far back in her throat. Kelly is naive, but very willing, even when things get a bit rough. Mdom themes in addition to the listed tags.
  • Flicker on Jan. 04, 2014

    The lead story, a supernatural serial killer tale that (mostly) left a lot of gaps for the reader to fill in barey held my attention .. I would have given it 2 stars. But the bonus essay about the history of "Scooby Do" and its influence on horror cinema was much more interesting. I'd give that 4 stars.
  • High Strangeness on Jan. 04, 2014

    A mix of short stories and flash fiction, several setting up a twist that didn't surprise me. I liked the story about the washed up musician who only knew one song and the one about the modern porn film crew haunted by a ghost of 70s porn best.
  • Aurealis #65 on Jan. 04, 2014

    I enjoyed both of the (dark fantasy) short stories, the rock'n'roll one more than the sacrifice/adultery one (despite details that feel inauthentic to me, like a guitar soloist with a 7-string instrument). But the real winner here was Patricia O'Neill's nonfiction piece summarizing recent sleep research. Entertaining and informative!
  • Rainbow Party on Jan. 04, 2014

    Really surprised me, which is rare for a smutty story. Narration was a bit tell more than show for my taste at first, but it eventually developed unexpected emotional depth. And it was hot. Will definitely read more from Huck Pilgrim.
  • Whatsoever He Might Kind of Want or Desire on Jan. 04, 2014

    Worked for me at a parody level, but not at a romance level. Well-written enough to make me curious about Jody Wallace's writing when she's not funning.
  • Daddy's Special Lemonade (Taboo Family Erotica) on Jan. 05, 2014

    Formatting problems in the epub version made this difficult to read. The action seemed very generic, cut-out characters in a situation I really couldn't believe. "Lemonade" isn't what you might expect, either.
  • A Starscape Slightly Askew on Jan. 05, 2014

    Lovely balance between a fairy tale-esque mood (and plot skeleton...) and a far-future interstellar setting. I'd really like to read more stories set in this milieu.
  • Dorothy’s Wizard (Mind Control BDSM) on Jan. 05, 2014

    There are some interesting aspects to the reworkings of the familiar Oz denizens -- a dash of steampunk, for instance -- but to connect for me the story would need richer descriptions and more character development.
  • Bowl of Candy on Jan. 05, 2014

    I thought this story spent too much time setting up Candy's back story -- only the last third or so is really "present day." I also think it would have benefitted from richer descriptions of Candy's outrageous outfits.
  • Jane 8086 Part One on Jan. 05, 2014

    Fun, and funny little story, but really marred for me by some gratuitous sexist asides.
  • The Alien Next Door on Jan. 06, 2014

    Laura Knots is hit or miss for me, and this is a miss: the alien is very humanoid - no tentacles here, folks - and the action is much more noncon than dubcon.
  • Kandy Korn 2 on Jan. 06, 2014

    2 long stories, one short one. I liked the short one best, a macabre femdom quickie (bit of a switch for Kreme). The zombie tale I found gross rather than erotic; I thought the last story, in which Plutonians come to teach earthlings a lesson for demoting Pluto from planethood started off promisingly, but by the end it felt too repetitive ... It ratcheted up the kink factor, but in a predictable direction.
  • Disturbed Issue 2 on Jan. 06, 2014

    Alban Lake's "Cassandra's Eyes" is a terrific, unsettling, tale, it made me think of Robert Bloch. It knows the tradition it's working in, but there's enough solid, specific detail to elevate it from the derivative, and it's nicely executed and paced. Literally worth the price of admission. I enjoyed most of the other stories too, Hallstead's especially.
  • Night of the Incubus on Feb. 01, 2014

    I wasn't sure if his was contemporary or historical, which I guess doesn't matter too much, but does indicate how thinly the setting is sketched. But I liked this enough to read more from Morrigan -- almost romantic, very female-pleasure-centric take on demon sex. Could really use a copy edit, though, some distracting typos/wrong/missing words.
  • Sex By Proxy on Feb. 05, 2014

    I guess if you want to imagine the President of the United States as a mindless sexbot, you might like this story better than I did...
  • Night at The Plantation - A Halloween Story on Feb. 06, 2014

    Atmospheric and well-paced. Didn't necessarily make a lot of sense, and I was frustrated by the protagonist's slowness at putting things together, as well as a major plot question the story leaves unresolved. But I would read more from Xavier Edwards.
  • A Wolf in Grandmother’s Clothing on Feb. 06, 2014

    The title really says it all, this is Little Red Riding Hood with the wolf's crossdressing as the main event. Kinky, fun, but also a touch macabre.
  • Dr. Madison K9 Addict on Feb. 06, 2014

    If Kat really thinks her girlfriend has an addiction problem with dog sex, more dogs trained for sex doesn't seem like the best approach, but that's what Kat tries. Predictably, this leads to more sex with dogs and women, and between women, with a little May-December interaction thrown in. Nicole Draylock is reliably filthy as usual.
  • Taken By the Fairies on Feb. 06, 2014

    A bit of emotional tension enlivens this paranormal dubcon gangbang story.
  • Pixie Chix - Episode 01 - The First Taste is Free on Feb. 08, 2014

    snappy dialogue, clever world-building, evocative descriptions. And, oh yeah, really hot. Impatient to read more in this series!
  • Mary Blows Santa on Feb. 09, 2014

    When painfully naive Mary sees sister Kim orally pleasuring Santa (who mysteriously reminds her of Dad...), she's determined to go down on him, too, even if she and her sister have to fellate Anabelle Chong-style numbers of grocery store Santas to find him. (Doing the same to his reindeer remains an unfulfilled ambition in this installment.) Very specific in its fetish, but with a sense of humor. Squicked me and turned me on at the same time.
  • A Magic Broken on Feb. 09, 2014

    Well executed fantasy in a D&D-style fantasy world (Elves, orcs, dwarves...) with a gritty, norish vibe and a complex political environment. Bit slow to start. Worth a look if it sounds up your alley.
  • A Susan Slutt Mystery: Susan Slutt Solves the Mystery on Feb. 09, 2014

    I read plenty of series books as a kid, but maybe not enough to get all the gags crammed into this story. I wanted to like it, but the humor was a bit too shallow and the plot didn't hold my interest. Not as naughty as the title might imply, but pretty off-color.
  • Lesbian Lust in Fantasyland: Horny Halfling: Serving the Elven Queen (Lesbian Femdom) on Feb. 09, 2014

    Kinky fantasy interacial action in a not-overly Tolkeinesque setting, with an actual plot and even some character development. A bit of size-difference fetishization, but the titular halfling is not described as particularly hirsute. Will read more Odessa Piper for sure.
  • Lesbian Lust in Fantasyland: Horny Halfling: The Gnome and Her Sex Potion on Feb. 09, 2014

    In this context "gnome" seems a not like code for "nerd girl" -- and I'm fine with that. This seems more like an interlude in a larger tale than a completely self-contained story, compared to the other entry in this series I read. (I'm probably getting them out of order.)
  • Stable Slut on Feb. 09, 2014

    Every bit as filthy as you expect with a title like that, with some bonus psychological tension to lift it well above the run-of-the-mill. Will definitely read more from Miranda Push.
  • The Pooka's Pet on Feb. 09, 2014

    I really like how Raya Ezelle is following the current trend for monsterotica, but giving it her own spin with some beasties from the ... erm ... long tail of the mythological spectrum, if you will. Although the pooka's tail is presumably quite short. Anyway, I thought the looks was very nicely balanced between menacing and sexy, and the story was lot of fun.
  • Taken by the Space Bug on Feb. 12, 2014

    Promising start, with the bored wage-slave of the future nicely established, but quickly got formulaic (the mantis creature has a humanoid penis? really??). Very distracting typos, "wonton" for "wanton" being one of the funniest. Sex is dubcon with blood/knifeplay elements.
  • Taken in the Haunted House (Extreme Horror Erotica) on Feb. 12, 2014

    Nice setup and pacing, but a lot of distracting typos -- "dry eyes" instead of "dry ice" really puzzled me for a moment. Maybe the publisher will upload a version that fixes some of these. Sex is more-or-less consensual but rough in the "draws blood" sense, so beware of that.
  • Carnival Games (Lesbian Ghost Hunters, #2) on Feb. 12, 2014

    After reading and loving the first in this series (not currently available on Smashwords, I found it on AZ) I was a bit worried the sequel wouldn't live up to it, but this is another winner: some real character development and romantic tension between characters, an actual plot that's even a bit surprising, and a lot of hot sex (with a hint of Ds).
  • Fetish Photo Shoot on Feb. 13, 2014

    Down-on-her-luck Maggie hooks up with sleazy photog Andy to do some "tasteful nudes" for quick cash, and this is how it goes: Maggie sets a "but I won't don't THAT" limit, Andy pushes it Maggie caves (the story should probably have a "dubcon" tag) ,she says "more please" and sets a new "but I won't do THAT" limit. Repeat until the story is well beyond the boundaries of mainstream porn. Prose was a bit flat, but I thought the story was pretty hot overall. Look forward to reading more from Alexis Alexandra.
  • Yes, Virginia, Santa Claus is Horny on Feb. 13, 2014

    Yes, Virginia there is Santa porn by Jenevieve DeBeers . . . and it even has a sense of humor. Rule 34 FTW.
  • Built on Feb. 15, 2014

    Really interesting speculation about the intersection between sex and technology, with an emphasis on virtual reality and body modification. Will definitely check out more from Grace Vilmont. One aspect that didn't appeal to me: Sophie may technically consents to everything in the story, but she doesn't enjoy all of it -- so this story almost worked better for me as science fiction than as erotica. Could also definitely use a copy-edit, as the typo in the description suggests.
  • Vanima's Messy Mix Up (Part 1) (Monster Sex) (Domination Erotica) on Feb. 20, 2014

    Liked the setup, but I thought it took a turn for the formulaic/pedestrian as it got more explicit.
  • F*cking Satan in Hell on March 02, 2014

    Liked this even though it doesn't meet most of my standards for "good" erotica: the plot really makes no sense, there's not much emotional/erotic tension, the language is mostly pedestrian with some thesaurus-misfire gaffes. But in its favor, narrator Julie is an intriguing, if not very credible, mixture of innocent and slutty: kinky enough to borrow her mom's vibe, fastidious enough to wash it first, and there's a little bit of femdom role-reversal. I didn't think the rest of the story quite lived up to the vividness of the first scene. Story could also be tagged anal, and possibly tentacle (demons' tongues are large and prehensile). Multi-page samples of 2 other Carmen Foxx stories are included.
  • The Buggy Seduction Of Gaby on March 04, 2014

    To each his/her own. The mind control stories I like are usually about the tension between what people want and what they admit they want (or are willing to do in a given circumstance), or told from the OMG-can't-believe-I'm-doing-this perspective of the controllee. In CIndy Cumby's story, Gaby is not into what's going on, and she sometimes recovers herself enough to clearly state that (which is a big turn-off for me, personally). And narrator Roger apparently is fine with being the beachhead for an alien invasion of Earth as long as he gets his nut off. Ew.
  • Plushie: An Erotic Romp on March 04, 2014

    Five stars even though this breaks one of the cardinal rules of erotica: the sex scenes all have the same participants doing basically the same things. But I didn't mind that because I was caught up in the story. Mr BIgglesworth is kinda creepy (he has a bit of stalker vibe) and the action is hot . I was hoping for a 3-way with Sierra's college "experimental days" pal, which didn't happen. But now I'm hoping for a sequel. I will definitely read more Clea Kinderton stories.
  • My Teddy on March 07, 2014

    Mildly surreal tale of a jilted young woman and a large, well-equipped teddy bear. There's a hint something supernatural could be going on, but it's not a "stuffed animal comes to life" story.
  • My Special Teddy Bear (The Naughty Virgin Diaries) on March 08, 2014

    Could really use a copy edit, but pretty hot. I'll read more by Nadia Dantes.
  • My Teddy Bear Fucked Me! on March 08, 2014

    The story doesn't really commit either to naturalistic masturbation with an inanimate object or outright bear-comes-to-life fantasy; it's in between, which I found distracting. Editing is pretty rough, and description's a bit flat.
  • Fucking Teddy on March 08, 2014

    Not so much of the psychological dimension that made me a fan of Fannie Tucker to start with, a bit more physical realism than other similarly themed stories I've read recently.
  • The Ghost Fucker V: No Body to Love on March 09, 2014

    Another hot/scary entry in Fannie Tucker's ghost sex series. Well written, but maybe not for anyone with a fear of heights!
  • Fuzzy on March 10, 2014

    Filthy talking, magical teddy bear has a wide mdom streak in E B Jones' story. Threesome is hinted at but presumably reserved for a sequel.
  • Taken by Teddy (Plushie Group Sex Erotica) on March 10, 2014

    First Maggie's teddy bear magically comes to lustful life, then her stuffed unicorn wants some action too. He's pretty horn-y.
  • Taming My Teddy Bear - An Erotic Story on March 10, 2014

    I've read several similarly themed stories lately and this one really stands out as different from the norm: there's nothing supernatural going on, and there's some sexual, if unconventional interaction between human beings in addition to plush pals.
  • Touched By My Teddy on March 11, 2014

    The story lays groundwork for why Katie is happy to turn to her teddy bear for comfort and sexytimes, but it does so with two scenes that are explicit, but not sexy, because the reader *knows* they're going to end badly. Teddy only enters in the last third of the story; I would have preferred to see the backstory compressed a bit and a bit more time devoted to the central fetish. Enough craft here for me to try something else from author Kirsten Rose.
  • My Stepmom's Secret - An Erotic Story on March 11, 2014

    This starts with an awkward, nonconsensual attempted and emphatically rebuffed seduction by the older partner. What happens after that is consensual (and initiated by the younger partner) but the first scene colored the way I saw the rest of the story, and it just didn't work for me.
  • The Ghost Fucker VI: Mourning Wood on March 12, 2014

    This story really makes it clear that this series is really a novella broken into chapter installments -- it didn't work well for me as erotica (the actual sex is pretty vanilla, and rather generically described) but it's emotionally satisfying in the larger context of the story. I give it four stars, but it's definitely not where you should _start_ in this series.
  • Treesome on March 14, 2014

    Strikes a nice balance between an eroticized fairy tale mood and catering to the currently popular "weird partner" fetish: romantic, sweet, but odd (with a dab of dubcon).Prose and dialogue were both a little flat - readable, but not rich. But promising overall; I would read more from Angelicka Wallows.
  • The Princess and the Troll Thief on March 15, 2014

    Most fantasy monster sex stories are from the lady's POV ("OMG I can't believe this bestial monster turns me on") but this reverses it:( "OMG I can't believe this delicate human turns me on.") Iqbar is creepy by human standards, but restrained by troll standards. Technically a bit dubcon (the princess doesn't explicitly consent to everything in advance), but also kinda rom and very female-pleasure centric for a male POV story. All this wrapped in a not-bad-at-all sword and sorcery setting that doesn't feel generic. A winner! Look forward to reading more Katie Ayres.
  • Tremblers (tentacle sex) on March 15, 2014

    Starts with a series of vignettes establishing that the tentacled creatures menacing the town are drawn to people having sex. Questionable consensuality (with a hint of mind control) and every which way gender pairings. A little scary, a lot pervy. I thought the dialect dialogue at the beginning was a bit much, but it didn't continue throughout. Definitely leaves me curious to read more from NL Allen.
  • The Ghost Fucker VII: Dead Stick on March 15, 2014

    Another fine entry in this series.
  • The Ghost Fucker VIII: Corporeal Punishment on March 15, 2014

    Thers's nothing particularly final about this installment of Katrina's adventures, so maybe Fannie Tucker will revisit the series at some point. It does feel like the author might have been struggling a bit to find new ghost activities to subject her heroine to, but all-in-all this is one of my favorite Smashwords erotica series ever.
  • 1 on March 15, 2014

    These stories recall the epic sweep of sci-fi pioneers like Olaf Stapledon - they span decades, or even centuries. Some barely have dialogue, or even characters, at all. (They're very much "tell, don't show.") Several have religious themes. Your mileage may vary, but these were not at all to my taste.
  • 3-Z on March 15, 2014

    These zombie takes all feature at least one twist, but they were the sort I saw coming well in advance. Enlivened a bit by some grim humor, but not my bag.
  • The Other Side of the Looking Glass on March 16, 2014

    Walter stumbles into a group of rich, all-fetishes-embraced lifestyle Ds devotees. They tell him their story in narrated flashback while drawing him in to their circle. (He starts out so naive they have to define B&D for him, which I found a bit hard to swallow.) Unfortunately the story is unedited, there are so many missing words, misplaced quotation marks, etc. that it is sometimes hard to follow. It's also sometimes interrupted by rants about the narrator's ex-wife.
  • Slutty Schoolgirl Demon Slayer on March 23, 2014

    For my preference, too much of this story was written in a very dry style, almost like a synopsis. Definitely try reading the sample to see if it's to your taste. Noncon/dubcon and bimbofication themes in addition to the listed tags.
  • A Nasty Trailer Park Love Story on March 25, 2014

    Definitely better written, despite plentiful typos, than most stories dealing with this sort of fetish material, and actually has a (violent) plot. It was not to my taste, partly because of the passivity and lack of believable motivation of the female characters, partly because of the narrator's emphasis on self-justification. As always, your milage may vary.
  • A Stegosaurus Tail on March 25, 2014

    Ali and Stephanie can't have been transported back to the age of dinosaurs, it must be a dream. Of course, they can't agree on which of them is dreaming -our if they're both a dream of the improbable, horny (in more ways than one) stegosaurus. But either way it's an excuse to indulge desires they'd never acknowledge in "real" life. Editing was rough, but I thought this was fun. I'd read more in this series.
  • A Tentacle Monster's Love (Tentacle Breeding) on April 05, 2014

    4 stars for content: hot, sweet, weied but consensual; 2 stars for editing, with your/you're and its/it's mistakes really pulling me out of the story.
  • Abduction Affection on April 05, 2014

    Enough good points that I'm inclined to try at least one more Blaine Teller story to see if it's more to my taste, but i found this one a little flat. I found the fact that the alien is referred to only by a strong of digits distracting.
  • A Treat for Halloween Tricksters on April 05, 2014

    Not a lot of dramatic or romantic tension; sweet and romantic but not terribly compelling.
  • A Thousand Silent Beats a Minute on April 05, 2014

    Odd but interesting story about grief, guilt, and love. Features a clockwork heart that's not the least bit steampunkish. Marred by some distracting typos.
  • Alien Ride (Paranormal Erotica) on April 06, 2014

    Fresh spin on human-alien interaction, with an amusing twist. Liked this a lot despite some clunky editing, reading more Mina Shay for sure.
  • Alien In My Basement (Tentacle Breeding Erotica) on April 06, 2014

    I think this is the first tentacle riotous I've read where the tentacles are used for massage. Points for originality! The breeding element of this story seemed kinda grafted on, though.
  • Amy's Tijuana Sex Show on April 06, 2014

    Dubcon elements, really rough editing (lots ofpast vs present tense confusion. But reliably filthy, Crimson Rose does not pull punches.
  • Accounts: An 'Intimate History of the Greater Kingdom' Story on April 06, 2014

    Atmospheric and morally ambiguous fantasy vignettes, set in a world with evident thought behind it. Creepy/intriguing.
  • Alien Abduction (Paranormal Erotica) on April 06, 2014

    The story starts with Cassie abducting the titular alien, and that's not the only reversal in store.it also emphasizes the alien's special abilities over his physical attributes. Funny, hot, and a little dark -a five-star winner despite rough editing.
  • Bred by the Alien Tentacles on April 07, 2014

    This is a sequel to Alien in the Basement. I was critical of the first story for throwing breeding elements in (it seemed) arbitrarily at the end, but this story deals explicitly with the consequences of the alien pregnancy (it's really one story spit into 2 parts). Dubcon, with a dark streak, largely recapitulates the erotic action of the first story ... I liked it anyway.
  • Alien Ecstasy (Paranormal Erotica) on April 07, 2014

    MIna Shay delivers another twist to differentiate this from other human/alien stories you may have read. In this variant, the alien is hurt. Guess what he needs to get better? And is Ruby up for it? You bet!
  • Alien Gangbang (Monster Bondage and Breeding) on April 11, 2014

    I really liked Natalie Dechain's "Stuffed" series. This was disappointing by comparison, OK, but not exactly inventive.
  • Alien Escape (Alien Abduction Erotica) on April 11, 2014

    My favorite thing about Mina Shay's alien stories is how different they all are, from each other, and from other authors' alien sex erotica. This one features aliens with a sort of cosmic blue ball syndrome, bifurcated anatomical features. and a mood on the very strange line between mind control and rom. But it felt more standard-issue than most of Shay's stories.
  • Alien Dreams on April 11, 2014

    I'll go with 5 stars here despite rough editing because this had a fun and original angle. Shelly starts the story off by masturbating to some tentacle porn. She falls asleep afterwards, and intends to practice lucid dreaming techniques to have more sexy fun. But gradually she realizes she might not be dreaming... I'll definitely read more stories by Juliette Lubach
  • Alien Visitation (Paranormal Erotica) on April 12, 2014

    Nice set up, but the erotic content felt a little pedestrian. Definitely not my favorite from MIna Shay's "Alien" series.
  • Allured By Nine-Tails (Mating with Monsters #9) on April 12, 2014

    Fun story about a famous kitsune of legend, with mild femdom/bondage elements. Male POV. Four stars despite some sloppy editing. I will read more in this serious.
  • Alyssa Vanguard (Psychoverts: Volume One) on April 13, 2014

    Sci-fi/espionage themed erotica with slight femdom and mc themes. Many unresolved poly elements in this installment.
  • Amorous Aristocrats on April 19, 2014

    Unconnected short stories all set in the same community. Varied, but older women/younger men, infidelity/cuckolding, voyeurism and reversal of power figure in many of the stories. One story featured a depraved architect who'd laid the community out to facilitate his voyeurism, I wish more had been done with that theme, but it earns a round-up from three and a half stars to four.
  • Aphordite's Pendant 2: The Domino Club on April 22, 2014

    Continues the story of Julie and Greg as their lives are changed by the mysterious pendant that opens their minds and (literally) orifices to sexual adventures they'd never considered. This installment ups the ante a bit (and is more M/M M/trans oriented) but doesn't resolve the story. I hope Crimson Rose returns to finish it.
  • Aphrodite's Pendant on April 22, 2014

    Begins the story of Julie and Greg as their lives are changed by a mysterious pendant that opens their minds and (literally) orifices to experiences they'd never considered. Some M/M content, mild D/S. I thought this was a lot of fun.
  • Blackmailed for Sex (Five Hardcore Rough Blackmail Erotica Stories) on May 05, 2014

    Definitely liked this collection well enough to try more from Jane Kemp. These stories are on the milder side of dubcon/reluctance and prioritize female pleasure. Almost all of them have a bit of a twist that adds some plot tension.
  • Arrested by My Cop Daddy on May 05, 2014

    Julie can't afford a $500 ticket for public indecency, but her mean cop step dad seems inclined to throw the book at her when he catches her in a compromising position. Unless ...?
  • Beneath the Ice on May 05, 2014

    I think this may be the first Inuit-themed erotica I've read? Fun and unusual.
  • Backseat Fast Girls (Retro Spanking Lesbian Erotica) on May 05, 2014

    I really liked Lula Lisbon's historical erotica about a carhop widening her horizons. Will read more from this author!
  • Aunt Jess's Disciplinary Farm: Tiffany's Rude Awakening (Taboo Erotica) on May 05, 2014

    Almost -- but not quite -- too nasty for me. Dubcon or noncon, depending on how you look at it, and really rough. Jess wants to break Tiffany's will, and I'm rooting for Tiffany to out-slut her dominant aunt and not get broken ... but not sure that's how it will pan out.
  • Fucked in the Captain's Cabin on May 05, 2014

    Lisbeth Frey has a singleminded devotion to getting off that's so selfish it borders on the sociopathic. And she thinks she's going to call all the shots, but we know how that's going to go, don't we? But it's okay, because we also know she won't mind ceding control one little bit.
  • Straight-Laced Sister; A Short Story of Incest on May 05, 2014

    The description is actually for the wrong story (Aunt Frisky) -- in this story Lilly tells Juliana she doesn't want to play their special game anymore, but Juliana's sure she knows better. Then Lilly's mind gets a little blown by all the craziness in the house ... but she still manages to have the last word! As usual, Esmeralda Greene pulls no punches.
  • His Naughty Little Girl on May 05, 2014

    Is Blaine really so drunk he thinks Chloe is her mother?? Mmmaybe not.
  • Daddy May I? on May 05, 2014

    Feels a little too generic, and the extended flashback structure removes some of the dramatic tension.
  • Daddy's New Lover on May 05, 2014

    Takes a while to get going and has some clunky errors (switches between first and third person a couple times). Voyeurism is a major theme in addition to everything else. I liked the tease better than the payoff; the action seemed a bit generic, with maybe a few too many participants for the author to juggle at once.
  • The Cruise Ship Affairs – the Sex List on May 06, 2014

    Determinedly kinky, and I liked how the parties were more realistic than the standard porn Barbie Dolls,but this was spoiled for me by an unpleasant misogynist vibe. Borderline scat activities were also not my thing. I think Mister Average is probably not for me.
  • Bimbo on May 06, 2014

    In addition to the listed tags, this has BDSM and desperation themes. Brief, but well executed.
  • Tasting Bree on May 06, 2014

    Really enjoyed the mix of sweet/awkward/kinky in this story about a girl whose crush on her BFF might not be quite as hopeless as she thinks ...
  • Isabelle's Big Bang on May 06, 2014

    Unusual amount of emotional tension enlivens this story of Isabelle, who's doesn't want to choose between burgeoning romance and living out her gangbang fantasy. Will she have to?
  • Her Gift -- The Duchess on May 07, 2014

    Yummy historical seduction with a little D/s seasoning. Very nice.
  • Her Gift -- The Houseparty on May 07, 2014

    Charlotte's tutelage continues. Lots of voyeurism/exhibitionism in this installment, as well as D/s themes.
  • Down on the Beach on May 07, 2014

    Hot, well crafted vignette. Reading more Alessia Brio for sure.
  • Daddy's Little Cherries on May 09, 2014

    What really makes this story work is the contrast between Anna, who jumps in with both feet, and Kelly, who needs a little more time to get used to the ideas the girls are exploring.
  • The Devil's Bitch on May 11, 2014

    This one really straddles the line between horror and erotica, there's a nontrivial bodycount and a dark streak that goes well beyond the dubious consent that's so common in paranormal erotica. Caveat lector!
  • Daddy's Pumpkin Patch Party on May 11, 2014

    Short but action-packed. Just a smidge of (male) homoeroticsm seasons this one. Step dad and daughter don't interact directly, but there's plenty of exhibitionism/voyeurism in the mix. Creepy fun!
  • Daddy's Haunted Hayride on May 12, 2014

    This companion piece to "Daddy's Pumpkin Patch Party" -- both stories follow on the same original off-screen event -- is even dirtier, with mind control, bondage, and (just a little bit) of M/M and F/F action in addition to the listed tags. I liked it a lot, although I thought it drifted toward the formulaic toward the end. Still leaves me wanting to read more MIchael Jade for sure.
  • Shackled in the Barn on May 12, 2014

    Stacy finds some weird stuff in that run down old barn... And some weird stuff funds her!
  • Daddy's Secret Santa Switch on May 12, 2014

    The mistaken identity thing was a bit creepy, but in Michael Jade's fantasyland no one really minds. Some FF in addition to the listed tags.
  • Shadow Play on May 13, 2014

    Rachel's reaction to being haunted is a bit... odd.
  • Open Your Legs For Me on May 14, 2014

    Not badly written and the sub seems enthusiastic enough, but the doom just seems like a jerk. Some watersports.
  • Santa's Backdoor Baby (Christmas Holiday Sex #1) (MFM, DP) on May 15, 2014

    Thought this was just ok, very flat dialogue, rote action, and Holly seemed a bit too much like a male fantasy, and not enough like a character with some motivation beyond being a doormat for any horny dude.
  • Beach House Sex Party: Lucy's First Orgasm on May 31, 2014

    Hot and romantic
  • Vanilla Dreams on May 31, 2014

    Fun adulterous fantasy, with a nice twist at the end.
  • Aunt and Niece Squirt Fest: A Lesbian, Incest, Squirting, and Pee Fetish Story on May 31, 2014

    Really rough editing, very short. Barely any plot or character development, very abrupt ending. But committed to its fetish.
  • Say Yes, Alice (Brazen Babysitters #1) on June 01, 2014

    Loved the first chapter, glad there are four more.
  • No More Monsters on June 02, 2014

    I'm a fan of consensual tentacle stories in general, but I had trouble with willing suspension of disbelief for this one -- Tanya seems just a little _too_ open-minded, too soon (maybe if she had explained how she was really into hentai porn?).
  • Strange Sex Stories: My Dildo is Haunted (Paranormal Erotica, Erotic Humor) on June 04, 2014

    Really nice sustained tease/buildup, with satisfying payoff. I like how it's not very penetration-centric, and the hint of mind control isn't oversold. With a light edit this would be a 5-star story, but there a few near-repeat sentences and a couple of descriptive elements that seem out of sequence. Also, the title is a bit of a spoiler. But overall I liked this a lot.
  • Japanese Tentacle Toy (Tentacle Breeding) on June 07, 2014

    I thought this had a really promising start, but the descriptions kept flipping between first and third-person (my body part, her body part in consecutive sentences) and I found that really distracting. And it made me pay attention to how formulaic the action was, despite the creative setting and unusual monster.
  • Dancing on Daddy's Pole on June 07, 2014

    Average. Title is a bit of a spoiler, since the relationship is only revealed in the last pages.
  • Teaching an Old Dog New Tricks (Bestiality Animal Sex Erotica) on June 07, 2014

    I just didn't buy the characters' motivations, particularly the innocent virgin suddenly deciding to start with a nonhuman penis. And I felt a little bad for the poor old pooch, he really gets put through the ringer. Many of the listed tags don't actually apply to this story, there's no sexual interaction between the human characters and no BDSM elements.
  • Daddy Cum Join Us on June 07, 2014

    Kinda unusual in a story like this to leave a character sexually frustrated for a while, that made me pay attention and earns a third star. A light copy edit would really help, many awkward, choppy sentences.
  • JoAnne's Fun with Max - Bestiality Blow-Bangs in Blue Jeans #1 on June 11, 2014

    Fetishisizes the amount of time the described acts take. In addition to the listed tags, there are dubcon, watersports and voyeurism elements. I thought this was just so-so -- pretty repetitive.
  • The Humiliated Elven Bride (m/f, spanking, forced sex) on June 14, 2014

    Right on the edge of too noncon for my taste, but definitely better written/edited than many other similarly themed stories. Betrayal from an unexpected quarter adds a bit of psychological tension.
  • The Humiliated Lady Frost (f/f forced pseudo-incest, bestiality) on June 14, 2014

    Right on the edge of too noncon for my taste, but definitely better written/edited than many other similarly themed stories. Nice tension in the opening scene, where Alyce thinks her lover is describing a fantasy that pushes her boundaries a little. But it's not just a fantasy . . . Not sure why the other reviewer described the story as 8 pages long, 4700 words was 16 pages on my ereader.
  • Age of Dragon Sex Bundle: Humiliated Damsels (spanking, pseudo-incest, forced sex) on June 14, 2014

    Jane Amber's dark erotic fantasies are just on the edge of too nonconsensual for me, but definitely above average quality. All three of the stories share a subtheme of betrayal by someone the protagonist trusts.
  • Ann of the Apocalypse (A Post-Apocalyptic Erotic Adventure) on June 14, 2014

    I've enjoyed many of Virginia Wade's stories, but this one was a near miss in a few different genres: too noncon oriented for the romance to work for me, too plot-heavy for porn, but without enough unique story elements to succeed on a science fiction level. But I did really like the detail that Ann learned to use a bow because she was a Hunger Games fan.
  • Babysitter Gangbang: Three Holes, Four Woods on June 14, 2014

    Nothing too surprising, but really hot.
  • Robo-Dong Deluxe on June 15, 2014

    Hot, funny, and features some legit cunnilingus tips.
  • Oh Say Can You Suck Daddy's Dick on June 21, 2014

    Awkward phrasing like, "Rick’s expressions were priceless. His face contorted in ways that had never been seen on this man. He ended up making so much noise that a neighbor decided to stick his head over the fence." stopped me from getting involved in the story.
  • Your Turn, Alice (Brazen Babysitters #2) on June 21, 2014

    Can Alice keep quiet while Carla and/or Beth work her over? That is,quiet enough that her parents won't hear funny noises and catch her in flagrante delicto? A little bit of voyeurism adds some additional spice. Ends a bit abruptly.
  • In Space, no one can hear you Spank your Secretary on June 25, 2014

    A telepathic lie detecting alien adds a lot of spice to an erotic military discipline session. I didn't quite buy the romantic twist at the end, but this was decidedly fun despite some editing gaffes.
  • Lesbian Lust in Fantasyland: Horny Halfling: The Pirate's Booty on June 25, 2014

    Famed adventurer Miranda is awfully easy for the pirates to capture. But that's OK because it turns out she really likes being a pirate captain's captive there's a lot of consensual FF Ds play and a bit of noncon MF grabass. Not much of a plot to this installment, and several details felt anachronistic. But fun overall.
  • Otherkin: Journals of Discovery - Beyond the City(Smut Adventure with Naughty Nymphs!) on June 28, 2014

    Has some originality to it, something of a plot, and an interesting mood -- but the prose is really rough (e.g., "Her powerful legs approached me, one by one.") I definitely recommend checking out the samples before purchasing.
  • A Cheerleader in King Arthur’s Dungeon (Bondage Erotica) on June 28, 2014

    Usually it annoys me when reviewers complain that a story is too short; it says clearly that this one is less than 5000 words. But this one really did leave me hanging -- it ends very abruptly without resolving the plot threads at all (although it does bring a sex scene to conclusion). A shame, because I thought it was a really promising set up.
  • The Humiliated Virgin Witch (m/f, forced pseudo incest, bestiality) on June 28, 2014

    Intriguing world-building adds interest to this story of a lecherous mage who_really_ shouldn't be allowed to administer the "treat of obedience" to the graduating class. Has a nasty little twist at the end. Mdom and S&M themes in addition to the listed tags. Quite a few missing words in the text, could really use a copy edit, but 4 stars anyway.
  • The Humiliated Lady Fire (Forced, Humiliation, Bestiality Erotica) on June 28, 2014

    Not exactly Game of Thrones fanfic, but very clearly inspired by the series. The Duke struck me as unctuous, but I definitely appreciatehis use of an ancient work of pornography to facilitate his seduction. As usual for Amber, a copyedit would really help, but I like it anyway.
  • Succubus In Heat, Paladin In Bondage on June 29, 2014

    Hot + plot, what's not to like? With a novel bondage/forced masturbation element.
  • Tori and Me - Volume One (Short Story) on July 03, 2014

    Short, but has some verve. Features Mdom with ass-to-mouth in addition to listed tags.
  • Daddy's Fluffer (Taboo, Step Daughter Daddy Oral Sex) on July 03, 2014

    Interesting variant on all the stepdaughter stories where the wife is unavailable: she's plenty available, but the dude has performance issues.
  • Tori and Me - Volume Two (Short Story) on July 08, 2014

    In this installment. the narrator and Tori trade dominant and submissive roles back and forth. Lots of dirty talk. Kind of surprising how much milage Pulcher gets out of relatively few sex acts: 2-parts into the story there's a lot they still haven't done.
  • Tori and Me - Volume Three (Short Story) on July 09, 2014

    Tori story continues its gradual escalation. The complicated Ds interplay is what makes this story really work for me despite a few fetish elements I'm not so into. This is the one that convinced me to add Pulcher to my buy-everything-by list.
  • Watched and Wanted I: The Sorcerer's Offer on July 14, 2014

    Walks an odd tightrope between romantic and creepy (sex acts depicted are consensual, and in fact consent is withheld for a while, but both parties repeatedly contemplate the violation of consent). Feels like the first chapter of a longer work.
  • Two Girls, Four Claws (Taboo Erotica) on July 18, 2014

    Definitely check the sample before buying, this story has such tortured syntax that it's sometimes hard to follow, like "Colossal house, soaring fence, and a vast pool were the first things that Emily spotted. Up unit then, she was looking at that houses and tried to imagine how the life looks in them. She was curious wheatear the life was sometimes rough for them as it was for her. With the widen eyes, she was hoping she might finally find out."
  • Vines of the Alraune (Mating with Monsters #1) on July 18, 2014

    Unusual mix of two familiar fetish elements - the narrator's plant-lady has no character trait beyond an insatiable hunger for sperm -- like the bimbo genre -- but she also has tentacles. I found it more weird than hot, but it did hold my attention.
  • The Warlord's Golden Whore on July 27, 2014

    I was expecting thinly veiled Daenerys/Drogo fic (hopefully with tv-age Dany, not book-age Dany) but although the vibe is GoT-ish, it's more of a Dothraki invading Westeros scenario. Nicely executed.