Nice story. Well written and entertaining. It seemed a bit rushed toward the end and I would have liked a bit more character development for some of the secondary people. Overall, though, it is a good book.
Thanks for sharing it with us!
This short story is well-written. I didn't really find it believable but that doesn't mean it is a bad story. I'm not really sure if this qualifies as a mystery (as there is no detective work involved) but it's entertaining if one likes the answer spelled out with no clues provided in the story.
The Mystery at the Guest House
on Dec. 10, 2011
Good story. It needs to be proofread. I think it's hard to figure out the answer because there are no clues for the reader. Also, it seems unlikely two best friends would not have shared such a big secret between them. Without giving away the ending, I felt a bit let down with the ending. There were too many other ways the real killer could have pointed the crime to someone else, but chose not to do so.
My Christmas Angels
on Dec. 15, 2011
This is a good book with an interesting storyline. Although some of it was predictable, it is well-written and heart-warming. With that said, I didn't like the use of the words "the mother" throughout the story. It gives the impression that each speaker is somehow passing judgment on the child's mother and it creates a tone of depersonalization. I feel that most people would say "her mother" or "the girl's mother" instead of "the mother." It's not a big issue, but made it difficult for me to stay "in" the story sometimes. Overall, good holiday story. Thanks for sharing it with us.