The Clever Detective: Story 1 (A Fairy Tale Romance)
on June 23, 2011
This story was okay. It gave me a smile at the end when she taunted the dragon but otherwise, it just seemed kind of dull. I'm hoping that the next story in the series is a little better.
The characters were good. I liked the story but thought it could have been longer. I think that there could have been more character development and more in depth about their situation. Something that bothered me is that she is an empath but couldn't sense that he loved her? Overall, a cute quick read.