N. S. Charles
Biography
N. S. Charles is more than a name. It's more than a gimmick. It's about stories, experiences, love and love, romance and action.
He is a lover of bass, pomegranate tea, scented oils and reading by Kindlelight. He's a dialogue lover, a feelings hound, a portrayer of poetry in body language and perpetrator of carnal sin.
He is a romance writer, a comedy scribbler, a poetic advocate. A foodie and artist, a human rights activist that believes in love for all, no matter what gender, creed or taste.
Of all aspirations, he hopes to wow you, whoo you, and tell you a tale that may or may not be entirely believable. He asks you to enjoy the ride.
Where to find N. S. Charles online
Books
Taking the Bride (Reluctant Breeding Gangbang Erotica)
by N. S. Charles
Price: $2.99 USD. 7820 words.
Published on June 9, 2013. Fiction.
Liz just got married, and now that she's been just hitched to the man of her dreams, she knows it's time to start a family, which she's been waiting to do. In preparation for their sweaty, sticky honeymoon, she's stopped taking her birth control and hasn't touched herself in days. She's all set and ready to go, but when her she hears a couple stumble in as she's changing gowns, can she bare it?
Dominated for the Weekend (Rough Interracial BDSM Cuckolding Erotica)
by N. S. Charles
Price: $2.99 USD. 16220 words.
Published on April 11, 2013. Fiction.
Danielle's lived most of her adult life as a submissive, and though happily married she yearns for something more, something darker and rougher. Her husband isn't a willing Dom, but when she explains what it is she really wants out of their sex life, he comes across an idea that changes everything.
Bred By My Brother (Taboo Breeding Erotica)
by N. S. Charles
Price: $2.99 USD. 11010 words.
Published on January 23, 2013. Fiction.
Stacy never thought she'd amount to much. In high school she was thin and gangly, all long twiggy legs and no curves. She got used to tuning out the boys and even her own stepbrother, Matt, but when he returns after two years overseas, everything changes.
But the way he looks at her?. It makes her feel like he's the one thing she's been waiting for all along.
Restrained by the Doctor (Doctor/Patient Medical BDSM Erotica)
by N. S. Charles
Price: $2.99 USD. 11210 words.
Published on January 16, 2013. Fiction.
Nearing thirty and growing desperate, Alyssa is eager to get on board when a friend agrees to set her up with a therapist specializing in orgasm therapy. She's been without a climax for fifteen years, and Dr. Eastlake seems like the key to breaking her humdrum sex life. For all of his good looks, he seems far more commanding and dominant than a therapist should be.
Bred by the Demons (Demon, Monster Sex Gangbang Erotica)
by N. S. Charles
Price: $2.99 USD. 11060 words.
Published on October 29, 2012. Fiction.
Years ago, Samantha made a deal with a devil. Magic, in exchange for her soul. Magic, in exchange for satisfying a horde of devils. When the demon comes calling again, with an entire clan of his brethren in tow, Sam is left to ponder whether she can handle being bred or if she'll succumb to their carnal ritual of lust and flesh!
Warning! 10k words of breeding and monster sex! Adults only!
His Command: The Black Billionaire's Will (An Erotic Interracial BDSM Romance)
by N. S. Charles
Price: $2.99 USD. 8110 words.
Published on October 16, 2012. Fiction.
Isabella Dean--Ivy to her friends--a hard-working and determined owner of her own business, has never fallen in love at first sight. But when handsome, pin-striped suited Everett Douglass makes a last minute order and she rushes to complete it, everything starts to change. When Everett insists she attend the event she's catering, with her on his arm, no less, she can't find a way to say no.
She Talked Me Into It...Again! (Bisexual MFF Menage)
by N. S. Charles
Price: $2.99 USD. 8150 words.
Published on October 3, 2012. Fiction.
Summer, a breath-taking and sexy college student, has had a reputation for walking on the wild side ever since she wrangled a jock and his roommate into a no-holds-barred threesome. When shy, cute Alan asks her to arrange something between he and his roommate she agrees, but not before helping herself to what he has to offer as a warm-up session for two horny guys who've been waiting all day.
Double Stuffed (Rough Sex With Strangers)
by N. S. Charles
Price: $2.99 USD. 8630 words.
Published on August 14, 2012. Fiction.
When Eva's roommate steps out for a few hours, she decides that getting herself off is more important than studying for a test. Imagine her surprise when two big jocks disturb her mid-session only to claim that they're looking for her sexy roommate. With sex on the brain, Eva takes it upon herself to demand satisfaction and winds up between two aggressive guys in a wild, rough threesome.
Waking Up With A Dick
by N. S. Charles
Price: $2.99 USD. 7400 words.
Published on August 7, 2012. Fiction.
When Olivia wakes up with a monster set of **** and ***** attached to her and her usual girl parts nowhere to be seen, she does what anybody would do. She takes it for a test drive. Things get a bit complicated, yet sweet, when her roommate Chloe wants in on the action and proves that not only does she love Olivia's new appendage, she's got the skillset to make the most of the opportunity.
The Main Dish (Gay Erotic Romance)
by N. S. Charles
Price: $2.99 USD. 7590 words.
Published on August 7, 2012. Fiction.
For years, Gary has worked on his skillset as executive chef of a hot Miami restaurant. When the owner, Vince, asks him into his office to celebrate making a cool million dollars with Gary's help, it's not long before the celebratory scotch makes Vince's lips loose and Gary finds himself backed against his bosses' desk.
Warning: This work of erotic fiction is intended for adults only.
The Ghost Light Haunting (A Dark Ghost/Paranormal Erotica)
by N. S. Charles
Price: $3.99 USD. 12590 words.
Published on August 7, 2012. Fiction.
Ashley isn't a believer in the paranormal in the least, but when her co-worker Chris asked her to join his ghost hunting group a year back she decided to join up. Now the group's cameraman, she comes along on a routine investigation only to be caught in an experience she can only deem as horrifingly erotic when a ghostly thing--a tentacle--bursts in and works one of their members to orgasm.
Skin and Ink (MFM Menage Erotica)
by N. S. Charles
Price: $2.99 USD. 12730 words.
Published on July 3, 2012. Fiction.
Remi's been lonely ever since her girlfriend walked out on her. Her upstairs roommates, James and Drew, have been there to help her laugh and rebuild her heart, but not her bed. She enlists Drew's expertise for a tattoo she's always wanted but mixture of attraction and tension gets the better of her - soon Remi's heated, horny and insatiable, hoping for an out this world double team.
Devil's Playground (Paranormal Gangbang Erotica)
by N. S. Charles
Price: $2.99 USD. 11780 words.
Published on June 23, 2012. Fiction.
Sophie is a lonely, awkward girl with a will to get what she wants. With the power of a family heirloom--a magic tome--she first summoned the demon Kuzo, whom gifted her a sexy, voluptuous body. At a price. Every thirty days he requires her to offer her body to him in a carnal contract that she wants to break. Except when Sophie casts her spell she gets a lot more than she bargained for.
Road Head: The Bundle
by N. S. Charles
Price: $5.99 USD. 24320 words.
Published on May 31, 2012. Fiction.
These are the first three short stories of the erotic menage story Road Head serials.
This bundle contains an explicit erotic romance featuring gloryhole blowjobs, m/f, f/f and m/f/f pairings as Zack, Kari and Tiff, old college buddies make a trek across America en route to California and make a point to screw in every state! Over 20,000 words of ADULT serials in the short story form.
Buttfuck Buick (Anal First Time, MFF Anal Threesome) (Road Head: Chapter 3)
by N. S. Charles
Price: $2.99 USD. 15270 words.
Published on May 30, 2012. Fiction.
Tiff's next door neighbor Fred is a handsome older guy with a special place in her heart as a father figure. He was her first--the first guy to put it in her butt!
In the present, Zack's car finally dies and when he takes Tiff with him to find a replacement, it's only a matter of time before her libido gets the better of her and they end christening his new car in raunchy anal style!
Menage a Car (MFF Threesome) (Road Head: Chapter 2)
by N. S. Charles
Price: $2.99 USD. 6600 words.
Published on May 9, 2012. Fiction.
Tiff, Kari and Zack are back for round two in this sequel to Road Head! When Tiff is feeling left out, she decides to seduce quiet Kari for what turns into a hot, no-holds-barred romp down Interstate 40! Menage à trois? How about Menage à car!
Warning: This 5,000 word adult short story contains a hot threesome between friends, oral sex while driving, a high speed hookup, and a rest stop reaming!
The Magic Touch (An Erotic Romance)
by N. S. Charles
Price: $4.99 USD. 20720 words.
Published on May 2, 2012. Fiction.
Coda and Aria were the closest friends until five years ago, when Aria was taken away to study in the ways of sorcery. Traveling together in the present, against his better judgment Coda finds himself undoubtedly attracted to his mage companion, whose pink hair and amazing body leaves him breathless night after night. She is the key to ending his loneliness, but he doesn't know where to begin.
Backseat Booty (Road Head: Chapter 1)
by N. S. Charles
Price: $2.99 USD. 5160 words.
Published on April 18, 2012. Fiction.
During a routine snack run in Kansas, Tiff decides it's time for her childhood friends Zack and Kari to finally get together. She wanders off to find some fun of her own, leaving them have some alone time. Tiff's guaranteed to have some sexy fun, but will her friends?
This 3,500 dirty ADULT work contains a convenience store gloryhole, a banana blowjob and a steamy backseat hookup!
The Roommate: A Sweet Indulgence (Interracial Erotica)
by N. S. Charles
Price: $2.99 USD. 10700 words.
Published on April 15, 2012. Fiction.
Erin's roommate, Leon, is a delicious hunk of chocolate, something she works with everyday in an out-of-home bakery that's practically taken over their kitchen. When he gets mad, and Erin sees something in his caramel eyes that sparks a flame in her heart, and a craving she's had for quite a long time, rough sex with her black roommate.
This ADULT work is 10,000 words of rough interracial sex!
The Hunt (Erotica; Erotic Fantasy)
by N. S. Charles
Price: $2.99 USD. 7480 words.
Published on April 15, 2012. Fiction.
A battle with the fearsome denizens of the dead sees the warrior Dalin with a new charge, the beautiful Anessa, a maiden eager to please. But something just doesn’t seem right. When things begin to take a turn for the worse, can Dalin resist Anessa’s alluring, yet supernatural charm?
This 7,000 word story contains a building fantasy world amidst a beautiful woman willing to please her rescuer.
Hot N Ready: Deep Dick Gangbang Supreme
by N. S. Charles
Price: $2.99 USD. 11060 words.
Published on April 15, 2012. Fiction.
Delivery girl Christina does more than just deliver fresh pizza to your door. In this first installment of a new series, Christina delivers to a birthday party, only to be coerced into a lap dance that goes too far. Soon, everyone wants slice, and this delivery girl takes it upon herself to make sure service comes with a smile.
Contains an explicit ADULT situation with males and females within!
Dorm Sluts: The Collection (College Erotica Three Pack)
by N. S. Charles
Price: $6.99 USD. 29710 words.
Published on April 4, 2012. Fiction.
Dorm Sluts: The Collection contains three college themed erotica short stories in a single bundle. Lisa gets dominated and spanked by a roommate, Desmond experiences his first encounter with another guy when things heat up with Brad's date Summer, and Eve takes on her professor in a sexy schoolgirl fantasy.
Warning: This group of stories contains 30,000 words of ADULT m/f and m/m/f situations.
She Talked Me Into It! (Bisexual MMF Threesome) (Dorm Sluts 2)
by N. S. Charles
Price: $2.99 USD. 8990 words.
Published on March 27, 2012. Fiction.
When Desmond agreed to let his jerk of a roommate set him up on a blind date, he didn't think he'd be back in bed by ten, pretending to be asleep while he watched his roommate with a girl. Things heat up when the beautiful Summer sees right through him and guides him into something he's always wanted. A taste of his roommate. Warning: This 8800 word story contains explicit m/m/f situations.
Fucking the Professor (Student and Teacher Anal Erotica) (Dorm Sluts 3)
by N. S. Charles
Price: $2.99 USD. 8340 words.
Published on March 8, 2012. Fiction.
Eve has been longing after her professor for a long, long time, but she fears he hasn't noticed her dreamy stares. When she decides to up the ante and he catches her in the act, will she be able to convince him to succumb to her every desire?
Warning: This ADULT work comprises 8000 words of hot action. It contains m/f, oral sex, explicit and anal sex, and a horny wife that likes to watch.
The Unexpected Visitor
by N. S. Charles
Price: $2.99 USD. 9790 words.
Published on March 4, 2012. Fiction.
Michael enjoys being alone, but when his sister asks if a friend can stay a few nights, his normally quiet lonely world is thrown for an interesting loop.
The last time Michael saw Lacey she wasn't so... enticing. Can he resist his unexpected visitor?
9000 words of steamy sex comprise this ADULT work. Warning: Oral sex, thick cocks, masturbation, rimming, m/f sex and a lonely bachelor
Spanked and Fucked (BDSM & Spanking Sex) (Dorm Sluts 1)
by N. S. Charles
Price: $2.99 USD. 12790 words.
Published on March 3, 2012. Fiction.
Lisa always thought herself better than her roommates, but during a late night encounter she suddenly finds herself succumbing to a new form of punishment. Maybe all she needed was discipline...
12000 words of immersive, sizzling ADULT action. Warning: BDSM, spanking, humiliation, explicit and anal sex.
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Smashwords book reviews by N. S. Charles
- Her Sexy Knight
on March 21, 2012
Her Sexy Knight is a well-written fantasy romance with period appropriate dialogue and a wonderful build up to a fantastic ending that could easily continue. A great example of erotic romance.
- The Devil's Taint (Paranormal Menage Erotica)
on March 25, 2012
A captivating tale where the buildup is very essential to the action, but the action takes you to entirely different place. This could be the beginning of a great, well-written, and a bit scary series.
- My Best Friend's Brother 3 (Sleepover Sluts)
on April 20, 2012
This new installment ramps up the ante, but keeps things sweet and light at the same time. There is a serious romantic tone that makes the heart go pitter-patter from the get go, but Brian doesn't disappoint. The sex here is hot, and steamy, with an amazing threesome. Not to mention that the sheer description of the characters will have you salivating from the start!
- Taking His Booty (Erotic Pirate Tales #1)
on April 29, 2012
This is a great short story, and it moves along at an amazing pace with enough "Pirates of the Carribean" meets the adult title "Pirates", to make it part adventure part sexy. Julianne Reyer is in top form here, as word choice and general knowledge(methinks somebody knows a bit about these settings) craft a believable adventure tale sprinkled with multiple erotic scenes that fit both the era and environment properly.
I really hope this is the first in a series!
- Abraham Lincoln: Presidential Fuck Machine
on May 05, 2012
I'm wary of gay intercourse in erotica. Sometimes it's too unbelievable with only a hint of lubrication before people are pounding each other silly. But Abraham Lincoln: Presidential Fuck Machine? Holy crap! This is one hot story! I'll definitely be looking forward to the next installment. My only complaint is that I felt it ended abruptly, and even though I'm one to keep track of where I am on my e-reader, I was so into this that the ending took me completely by surprise.
If you're looking for humor interspersed with some incredibly hot sex, this title isn't one to ignore!
- Lily's Bloom (First Time Lesbian)
on June 02, 2012
Lily's Bloom is a story rich in romance, but it definitely puts doesn't skimp on the erotic. I enjoy the more realistic witty things that characters say in writing, because I feel it captures real life, and in this short, the rapport between Lily and Dawn makes it more real.
My only complaint is that I would've loved a longer, more slow-burning romance so we could explore both characters in more depth.
- The Perfect Gangbang: M+/f domination, arranged kidnapping
on June 02, 2012
Irina knows what she wants and where to get it, it just so happens to be a bunch of big, rough guys that use her as they please.
The setup out of the way, Irina is at the mercy of the bunch, and they take pleasure in their jobs. The action here is dirty and hot, descriptive and oh-so-raunchy as Irina gets supremely dominated. Thinking about it makes me want to give it a re-read.
My only concern is that the story isn't really about Irina. We're introduced to her and her fantasy, but we know nothing about her. Despite this fault, the action is very strong here.
- Werecake
on June 03, 2012
Fully expecting this story to be full of hilarity, I wasn't disappointed. Chase, although the "bbw" tag is applied is only allured to as "voluptuous". I think a little more in depth description is need, but she's definitely a funny, and very horny person to initiate sex with a werecake, but I think the real star is the guy! I was genuinely surprised at the erotic parts, but it gets increasingly dirty and satisfying the further you go.
- Good Boy
on June 03, 2012
C.M. Knox has hit it out of the park! Well-written and believable gay erotica is hard to find, and that's fact, not opinion. Lubeless anal is another tragedy that this author doesn't portray.
As a fan of erotica, I love slow burn stories. The ones that give you a sense of the characters, the world around them, what turns them on. Knox, fashionably so, twists a gorgeous and rather raunchy tale of two men who both know what turns them on, and in part, will turn you on.
This is a short story, yes, but it's full, complete, and may leave you wishing you were one of these two. You were warned.
- Riding the Sea Bitch (Erotic Pirate Tales #2)
on June 10, 2012
I want more.
Julianne Reyer makes me want more. More pirates, more masterfully described historical erotica, more people pegged with a peg leg! This story is a masterwork, blending action with environment and sex. I cannot speak enough about the author's skill in both pace, diction, and a bit of comedic timing in a certain sexy scene.
Riding the Sea Bitch sees Captain Anne Hitchcock return as our strong heroine, and caught in a bit of a pickle. Once again, the author's word choice evokes a sense of the time period, making this sexy, swashbuckling adventure an all-encompassing journey.
- The All-American Fuck Doll
on June 10, 2012
I wanted to peg this story as the same old song-and-dance student and professor tale, but I couldn't. This is a sexy, mesmerizing tale that I felt could have benefited from more character development and a longer, more drawn out sex scene.
Keep the momentum on this in all stories to come, please!
- Sissy Boyfriend Collection 2 (Parts 4-6)
on June 10, 2012
There's something so intriguing about sissification, and this bundle captures it. The shorts are poignant, with hot action bookended by Michael's thoughs and amplified by the presence of Beth. The last story leaves a bit of epilogue desired, but other than that, this is a great collection.
- Sinner
on June 11, 2012
Usually, when one dictates that something is "more of the same," it's a bad thing. Fortunately, when it comes to this author, it's a great thing.
Sinner picks up where Good Boy left off--and if you haven't treated yourself to that wonderful bit of erotica, please do so. Father Burke has had a week of calm, and just as he thinks, as he moves and longs Justin winds back in his office for a second round of cat and mouse. Justin is still the strong youth he was a week ago, and Father Burke is too.
The tense, deeply characterized power play has a sexy build-up and delivers on all the erotic bits. I look forward to this trilogy's conclusion.
- Tentacle Sex 1 The Glob (Monster Sex)
on June 14, 2012
This story reminds me of a story I read as a teen and stuck with me through the years. In that story, the titular alien has two cocks and goes to town on a lucky woman, and this story instantly brought the memory of that back up.
Sally and Elaine definitely get it and get it good in this short, but a few odd sentences keep this from being all it could be. Also, though the mention of the time period lends itself well to the diving suit, I think it's an unneeded detail. The action is great, descriptive and hot, and I think I might be marking this as a favorite and coming back to it, despite the minor issues.
- At His Service: The Billionaire's Beck and Call (A BDSM Erotic Romance)
on June 22, 2012
I hate you Delilah, for being a dirty lady and something of an amazing tease. If this is just a taste of what you have in store, I shudder to think what readers will be in for when the next chapter arrives...and the next.
The story is tried and true, "Fifty" tested and approved. It doesn't read like that amateur writing though. Delilah Fawkes presents a straitlaced, engulfing prologue to something that can only end hot and steamy.
Isabeau's characterization comes off strong, but Chase Drake is the star. He's dominant, and though Isabeau doesn't come off as a submissive, his nature is more-telling than the words can display. Coming out of dreams, movies and novels, you know Chase Drake before you know him. You just know what to expect, and Delilah's characterization of a billionaire expecting the world doesn't disappoint.
Bravo, Miss Fawkes.
- At His Mercy: The Billionaire's Beck and Call, Part 2 (A BDSM Erotic Romance)
on June 26, 2012
As stated previously, "The Billionaire's Beck and Call" is a story tried and true, "Fifty" tested and approved. Chase Drake is a larger than life, dominant, confident billionaire and Isabeau Willcox is his not-so-submissive, strong-willed secretary.
"Beck and Call" isn't just something in the vein of "Fifty", it transcends it. Miss Fawkes isn't afraid of pacing, isn't afraid to build story, isn't afraid to build tension, and isn't afraid to use dirty words.
There is no "down there" here. The writing is poignant and dirty. It refuses to baby us by making us believe we're reading sex when we aren't. Chase Drake is imposing and real, and like stated before, you know him before you know him. He's predictable in his ways, but his characterization refuses to accept that. You know he's going to make you ask for it, but when he does, you're hot and bothered and wanting it already. He brings it out of you, out of Isabeau, and that is the the true power behind Delilah's words. It isn't a story when you read it, it's an experience.
Bravo, Miss Fawkes.
- The Mermaid and the Wolf (Twisted Desires)
on July 02, 2012
This is a cute, sexy romp between a mermaid and a werewolf that goes from a bit mushy to fireworks hot. The word choice here dabbles between sensual and spicy, but describes the action eloquently. Characterization is taken as far as it can be carried in such a short story.
- Strip Searched by the Cop
on July 02, 2012
This is my second Catherine DeVore erotica short and I'm very, very happy to say that her blistering hot style easily transcends the bounds of m/f and m/m relationship. This quick is fast and furious, personally sending me sky high as soon as the thick-fingered officer got forceful with Jenna. This is one of the stories that reads from the first and feels like it's happening to you as it happens. Definitely a great read.
- Mindfuck
on July 02, 2012
Whoa.
I didn't think that I'd be reading something like this upon the first few paragraphs, but I did. This title is so poignant and well written, and although it takes a few pages to really get into the present tense style, that's when the story is taking off. That's when you're really Ryle and all of these things just start happening.
I'm sad to see that this is just erotica, that Sophie Baxter isn't writing science fiction with that immensely creative brain she has. This is truly one of the hottest short stories I've read, and it even takes you to a different place, to maybe what the metaphor or sex and love is all about.
Bravo.
- Brainfuck
on July 02, 2012
Sophie Baxter really understands how to intertwine her own brand of science fiction with action, erotic and otherwise, to twist a tale that sucks you in. The present tense style is difficult to settle into at first, but within a few paragraphs, this title takes off.
The writing style is quick, precise, and that enables it to suck you in. I hope this isn't the last we see of Ryle!
- Lariat Lesbians (western lesbian bdsm erotic romance)
on July 02, 2012
This is a little bit of erotic romance bundled neat and pretty with a BDSM flair. The tale of Katherine and Dorothy is mostly sexual, but it has a personality and characterization all its own. I would love for this to have been a longer, fully developed story with a bit of struggle and conflict, but as is, Lariat Lesbians is a bit of kink and a lot of heat.
- Step-Son Seduction
on July 05, 2012
JB Richards will set you on fire!
This story is a tightly wound exposition that, while suffering from a few mistakes of tense/spelling and one odd passage, is a sexy, sensual build that won't disappoint.
Though it is a short, the characters are fully realized, which is hard to do and fit sex in too. For that, I applaud this writer, though I would've loved to see the acts suggested this time around instead of maybe next. It's a delicious cliffhanger, so if you like a well-written, explosive read, check this one out!
- At His Command: The Billionaire's Beck and Call, Part 3 (A BDSM Erotic Romance)
on July 05, 2012
Three parts into The Billionaire's Beck and Call, and we've come to what seems to be the real meat of the story. Part three, however, inverts some of what we've come to expect of the writing as it delivers what we expect of the type of story.
Don't get me wrong, these aren't bad things. Curious Isabeau's naivete is the star this time. The Drake household is a mystery to her, from the decor to the staff. This installment takes a motif of exploring the unknown, asking questions and receiving answers that translates well between Isabeau's day and her ensuing playtime. Luckily for Isabeau, her curiosity leads to a sexy and submissive encounter that's sure to wish you were her.
As always, looking forward to the next installment!
- The Last Alpha (M/f Werewolf Breeding Erotica)
on July 08, 2012
This tale's setup is nice but it's plagued by a bit of stiff action during the fighting in the beginning. The second scene of violence flows better with better diction and word choice that segues nicely into D/s sex.
While the sex is great, the alpha's dominant side seems to come out of left field. Perhaps he isn't characterized enough for this not to be a bit of a shock, but while dominant in the scene there was no pretext for him to be so. He hasn't previously been stated to be an alpha, just a lone, lonely wolf. Also puzzling is Jane's sudden change from a near feral, unappreciative woman to being on the no-questions-asked receiving end even if she's going through a heat cycle.
The unconnected dots here are puzzling, but don't take away from the sexual writing once you're into it.
- Teach Me: Training Sarah 1 (BDSM erotic romance)
on July 08, 2012
Great, but short and plagued with the odd typo here and there. The dialogue here, especially between Carl and Angie, is organic and warm. It feels like two people that know each other well conversing.
Sarah's introduction to The Rule is successfully portrayed, though Carl is very brash with his words. Beware that his word choice/speech patterns may not your kink, but make no mistake, he is a dom's dom.
However, this title is short, and though this is obviously a series, the abrupt cut off is jarring.
- Two Girls, One Pup
on July 11, 2012
The premise here is new, a mixture of two kinds of paranormal creatures.
But the things that I don't like almost make this a miss for me. Several times words repeat themselves and many descriptors are placed word for word in adjacent sentences that stymie a building mood. Bouncing breasts are mentioned several times as a pinnacle of outward and physical consequence of the Jonah's frantic action as he fights for his soul.
I would have loved to see more description on Jonah's end of the intercourse, since it's written in third person limited. Describing the sensations in his body and his mind as his soul goes would have taken this to a different level.
When it comes down to it, this story lacks characterization from the succubi sisters and is almost a run of the mill encounter with demons thrown in and forced sex. The action, though it starts slow and takes some breaks, ramps up toward the end. A plus for me is that the werewolf spends time in his shifted state and it gives the story a flair, too often a were is only mentioned in passing to milk a genre.
- Turned by the Vampire
on July 11, 2012
As with most short stories, I feel like this is too short. The dismal resolution of the argument in the beginning gives an in medias res feeling that doesn't quite resolve itself. Alluding to the argument during the drive or at the bar feels like a better choice since we never get to know more about Alicia. Starting and ending the story on Ryan's thoughts would have made for something neatly wrapped.
The flirting in the bar and the ensuing car ride are what take this story to the next level. The writing is clean and precise, with a winding build that lends itself to quite easily to arousal. The sex is wonderful, a visceral and delightfully gritty erotic scene.
- Roadside Service
on July 11, 2012
I have one complaint about this story, and that's the lack of a real ending. So much time was spent building this amazing relationship, the tension, the passion and after the great sex happens we're left on that high note of climax.
My question is, what happens next? Even two of three paragraphs would suffice, for such a well-written piece.
- Keeping it in the Family Bundle
on July 11, 2012
Having read one of JB Richards' shorts before, I knew that I was in for a treat with this bundle, or I hoped that I was, anyway. I wasn't disappointed in the least, though some small typos pop up in each story, they take place where you'll notice them the least. The action, if you need that spelled out.
And yes, the action of these stories is that hot. They range in description from long to fast, but all of them are incredibly dirty and read with enough heat to boil water.
Individually, the stories are great. The build and poignant characterization of Step-Son Seduction breathes life into what could be a common premise.
In Stuffing the New Step-Sister the utter lack of dialogue makes it something new entirely. This one took me by surprise, as it takes a certain kind of writer to make something so ridiculously white-hot out of a story where the characters barely talk. Again, the characters are fleshed out even without words.
Mother in Law Menage starts out with the opposite, there is plenty of talking, plenty of tension, and once the storm hits a whirlwind of energy sucks you in and doesn't spit you out until everybody's satisfied.
This bundle is amazing. Wonderfully developed characters, clean, enticing prose and dirty descriptions of both sex and feeling give these stories an umph that will leave anybody satisfied.
- Big Rig Bukkake 2: Hauling Ass (Gay Trucker Threesome)
on July 11, 2012
Rex Handler has a talent for smooth characters, clean prose and comedic writing.
I personally don't read much gay erotica because it almost comes off forced. The characters aren't very believable and the situations are usually downright ridiculous and involve a lot of straight boys going gay within the span of a couple of minutes.
This isn't the case here. There's no straight boy hunting without a chase, there are believable characters and an especially hot sex scene. Very, very hot. The characters are whacky, but that's true to life, and it makes for a good read.
- The Day My Daddy Blackmailed Me (virgin sex family taboo)
on July 11, 2012
This story is both sweet and steamy at the same time. The description of Anna's relationship with her stepfather and how he's provided for her and her mother is touching. The love she has for him is very obvious and when he threatens to take that all away it's easy to understand how it could utterly shatter Anna's world.
On the steamy side, he wants her. The uncomfortable buildup of sex turns into a hot experience as blackmailed Anna really gets into it. The only downsides for me were the overuse of "Daddy" in Anna's dialogue, though during the sex it really drives that taboo aspect home.
Also, it should be noted that Scarlett Skyes writes in British English. A bonnet is British English for the "hood" of a car in American English.
- At His Insistence: The Billionaire's Beck and Call, Part 4 (A BDSM Erotic Romance)
on July 11, 2012
Four chapters in and Delilah Fawkes is still keeping her wonderful diction, style and pace without missing a beat.
At His Insistence starts out in medias res, just like a cliffhanger from an old magazine, drawing you right back in to the story. Personally, the story feels empty for the first few pages, and it should. Isabeau and Drake have such a dynamic between them that her worry and his absence really do feel odd.
Luckily enough, his antics are always one step ahead, so when Isabeau decides that she's indeed willing to push her limits the build starts. Chase is great at manipulating her just right and the author is great at channeling that. There is a psychology here that trickles down through Isabeau that's highly erotic.
It makes the reader squirm in anticipation, and there is something to be said about creating longing in a reader through prose and how much skill it takes to pull that off.
- Company Costume Party Cuckold
on July 11, 2012
I'm not sure that I even understand what I just read. Seriously. A peg lower than Victorie Lazer's Dick-Theft Trilogy in outright ridiculousness, Company Costume Party Cuckold is a bit funny, a bit 2012 imitating years gone by, and a whole lot of sexy.
Personally, I'm against quick builds in short stories, but at some point one has to let the fantasy take you. This parody of some pretty famous martial artist turtles makes the joke on so many levels that is hard to keep track. The thing that really makes it wacky though? Each of these guys is actually really, hilariously, and all too conveniently into April, May--excuse me, June--and she's drunk "enough" to let her husband's buddies take her in a wild gangbang that he's in on, but you'll have to read to find out how.
If you're into seduction and winding stories, this one isn't for you, but if you're willing to suspend disbelief for a few moments, this is one hot treat.
- Needful Wangs: The Demon Dick-Theft Trilogy
on July 11, 2012
I've never read wackier prose than this and still maintained the ability to be turned on by it. The Demon Dick-Theft Trilogy is a hilarious title for a collection of hilarious stories. If you like comedy and engaging prose wrapped around hot and steamy erotica, then you've found a collection for you.
There are few flaws here that I can see, and although there are some things that would scare some off, the prose doesn't focus enough on them to be an issue. In the first story, our hero makes a deal with a demon, sells his manhood and is subsequently put through the ringer with it. Other stories hinge on the character's orientation having the ultimate say over whether they enjoy an act or not. Victorie Lazer has cleverly written Ken into a predicament. He never reveals his preferences to a key, so when he gets taken by Nestir it doesn't register that something could inherently wrong for him.
But it doesn't end there. The sequel sees heroine Dee bartering for said manhood and although its stated that she is into a deep menagerie of erotic thing, girl with tool personally got my blood boiling. The way each sensation is described resonates well and Victorie Lazer keeps that momentum going into the third story, which is a serious mash-up of sexuality and humor as boy meets girl meets demon.
Thank you, Victorie Lazer, for a piece of erotica willing to push boundaries and encourage fun while doing so.
- Geek Girl Gameshop Gangbang
on July 12, 2012
One has to suspend disbelief considerably to imagine that orgies can happen at your everyday game store. But if you're willing, and you pick up a little title called Geek Girl Gameshop Gangbang, you might just be in for the ride of your life.
There are a few unrealistic qualities to the story. A bunch of trim, fit, able bodied gamers getting it on for one thing, but that's something I'm willing to look past. As a person with a history of gaming and being in these kind of shops, it's a hot, secret fantasy to double or even triple team the girls there if somehow they were up for it.
Almost as if in apology for the unrealistic parts, we're given Tina, a deeply characterized twenty-three year old that's been around the block a few times that's harboring a crush of some sort for guy that frequents the shop. If Anya Asarovna isn't a gamer herself, I'd be deeply surprised. The knowledge here is in depth and real, giving nerds a kind of culture porn to go with their literal porn.
Of which, I'm proud to say, isn't skimped upon. Characterization and plot aside, there is some amazing dirty, hot, sexy, steamy raunchy things in this short that while not out of the ordinary gamut for an orgy/gangbang story, are described with so much detail that you aren't likely to last the whole thing without reading one-handed.
- Female Companion Model Unknown (mf trillionaire robot Sex)
on July 12, 2012
Scarlett Skyes crafts a beautiful story from beginning to almost end. Xavier is a forceful, dominant businessman and by his own narrative voice explains that he's never had want of anything due to his position his family's money.
The erotic scenes in this novella prove two points about his character at different times and are written wonderfully, showing both sides of this character in an amazing way that happens to also be extremely steamy. The scene in the beginning is such a great example of D/s reluctance that it's simply tantalizing to read the rest, knowing just how well the author can use her words. Scarlett definitely understands how to build scenes and breathe life into characters.
- Pound That Step Daughter into the Ground
on July 15, 2012
JB Richards' word choice and prose read sexy and succinct. This title is a mix of taboo and sensuality from the beginning, with Travis immediately attracted to a woman that looks almost exactly like his wife. Shae plays it up too, sharing in his attraction and making it known.
There's a nice seductive chase that's well-written from Travis' point of view and reading about Shae whittling down his defenses creates an extremely hot read, combined with the know-how to craft scorching sex that require one-handed reading. There isn't a debate here, you will be reading one-handed by the time this story is halfway through, anticipating just what Shae will think of next.
On a lesser note, without spoiling things, I would've liked more of a conclusion. More cause and effect and reprecussions.
- The Day My Daddy Shared Me (mfm threesome family taboo)
on July 18, 2012
This story is a naughty taboo made real with an extra helping of dirty. Anna and her stepfather, Harvey, are back. In a situation that can only build tension the two are strung out and sex-starved, sneaking around behind her mother's back for a taste of each other.
For Harvey, this is more of the same, he's the same forward man he was in the last installment, sans any real development. Anna on the other hand, has gone from a demure, shy sort of creature into somebody willing to throw caution to the wind and go for what's in front of her. If this is a side to the character we simply didn't see before, it's okay, but Anna's characterization has taken a jarring turn from innocent to open rather quickly.
I would have enjoyed this more if there was a push from Harvey and not merely an idea put there for Anna to play off of. A kind of slower build marked by a true seduction. Despite flaws, the action is indeed hot. Anna gets double teamed and spit roasted, loving it the entire time.
- At His Instruction: The Billionaire's Beck and Call, Part 5 (A BDSM Erotic Romance)
on July 22, 2012
I don't know if I can keep writing glowing reviews for Delilah Fawkes without somebody hunting me down. This installment has it all, sex, domination, submission, sex. Those two listings of sex are two different things too, not just there for dramatic effect. Chase Drake is still a mysterious static character but Isabeau this time around? Changes. In so short a time, she can honestly look back and see herself as a different person.
I like new, naughty Isabeau. She's more than just a simple submissive. For every bit of trust she gives Chase, he instills in her a naughtiness that she slowly realizes is blooming in the best of ways. There's a reason Isabeau is swept up: Chase is making her play fast and hard, take risks for big rewards. It takes a risk-taker to make billions and it takes another risk-taker to deliver under a desk in one of the most erotic scenes I've ever stumbled upon.
The word choice in this scene alone is immersive and new the series. Sex between the two is sex, give or take a few outstanding opera gloves and dangling, dizzying heights. A under the desk blowjob in a very risky environment from within Isabeau's head? Simply delicious.
If Delilah Fawkes can craft oral sex this well, wait until she finds out how to get that raw energy, that raw talent, into every piece of literature she writes. This is a five, I only wish it came earlier in the series, but the building story made it very, very worth it.
- There are No Female Smarfs (Transgender Parody Menage Erotica)
on July 25, 2012
This was a fun little romp. Big on nostalgia, and that's a plus for me. I would've loved more description though, maybe a third person limited point-of-view from one of the three, and bunch more detail concerning Smarfette and her extra bits. The writing gets the mind going, working on what was already there, which can be improved on. If you have the visual library, this is a pretty hot tale.
A sequel is in order though. There was also Sassette, the "Smarf"ling.
- Suckin' My Straight Roommate (Gay Blowjob Erotica)
on July 26, 2012
Blowjob erotica is usually much like a blowjob itself. Some can do it well, some can do it mediocre, some slob on the knob with no real feeling for it. Then there's some girl of guy who can knock you off of your feet, unabashed by how very into it they are. A growing number of these kinds of stories, always written from first person points of view for that maximum effect, are deftly crafted.
This aptly named title is one of those stories. Sure, Kyle wants to get his roommate's tool into his mouth, but it's the back and forth between the two that makes this short amazing. Eric is a bro, he's into sports, he's into girls, and most of all he loves attention and getting his junk gargled. He's funny in ways that make you roll your eyes, surprising in ways that make Kyle's mouth water.
There's something here that reveals a love of the craft. Both the writing and the oral, thank you very much. The writing is poignant and deceptively hot. It's one of those tales that flies by because it's so good that it feels like the real thing. One-handed reading ahead. I warned you.
- At His Word: The Billionaire's Beck and Call, Part 6 (A BDSM Erotic Romance)
on Aug. 03, 2012
My heart palpitated when this became available. The Billionaire's Beck and Call has been a guilty pleasure of mine for some time, between its erotic novel setup, everyday heroine and Fifty Shades coattailing. The difference, however, is that Fifty is Fifty and The Billionaire's Beck and Call is so very much better.
This is part six. After six installments one would assume that we would be on a decline, but Delilah Fawkes has turned this into more than what came before it. Isabeau in chapters one and two was completely different, and thus the main plot points centered around her and her training, her and everything new in Drake's world that she'd never experienced before. Five saw her fall into place as a submissive, six brings in a new formula. From here on out it's about new experiences and plot, two things that have been hinted at and now realized.
I think Delilah Fawkes is terribly good at this. Isabeau's billionaire realizes how hard it is to trust him despite the odds, despite what she thinks. So in parallel he ties her up and shows her why she can, and it's downright amazing. Mm-mmm.
- His Roman Master 1: The Kidnapping
on Aug. 03, 2012
As wary as I am upon finding male/male erotica, this title doesn't disappoint. There's a nice story here that builds into an intense and wildly hot scene involving some master and slave play. This title does things right, an interesting pair of characters, a researched time period and crisp, well-written prose. True, this kind of story isn't for everyone, but for those seeking reality accompanying their erotica, look elsewhere. This is a tale of an age gone by, it's almost irrelevant how realistic it can be.
Unfortunately for me, the constant switching of points of view were upsetting. They are thoroughly marked off, however, which is nice. Personally, a limited third-person would've worked best for my experience, but I respect what the author has done. ...especially with the sex.
- Public Sex: Dining Out (Gay Public Display Erotica)
on Aug. 03, 2012
As a person that values long, wordy reviews, it pains me when I can't think of anything more than, "amazing" to describe something. This short is hot and sweet, I merely liked it up until the end, but the twist made me love it. Quirky and unexpected as it was, the sheer raunch factor of it shot my enjoyment through the roof.
- At His Desire: The Billionaire's Beck and Call, Part 7 (A BDSM Erotic Romance)
on Aug. 27, 2012
I'm afraid I've run out of words to use without repeating myself. I've said before that I'm very into The Billionaire's Beck and Call, but on the sly, as romance normally isn't my thing.
Delilah Fawkes keeps it interesting however, steering away from the buildup the first five parts took. Isabeau is more confident and in part sexier for it, and although plot beats out action in these later stories, I'm staying for the plot.
Watching Isabeau conquer hurdles as she discovers just what she's capable of keeps this story fresh. Based on plot alone, I would have rated this a four this time around, but there's a very, very, very satisfying erotic scene buried in here that hit the right spot.
- At His Warning: The Billionaire's Beck and Call, Part 8 (A BDSM Erotic Romance)
on Aug. 27, 2012
I want to give part eight all of the stars. Just as seven skimped on the sex with a healthy dose of plot, we come into the cafeteria line and make sure that the old lady gives us a double helping of sex to go along with our plot. We've got a big appetite, growing boys and girls, you know?
At His Warning is a sexy, sexy time, equal parts dialogue, sex, plot, sex and dialogue. And sex. This is one of the hottest scenes yet, although I won't spoil it for would-be readers.
My review, though usually lengthy and full of praise can be boiled down to this: You'll be reading one-handed, no doubt about it. Also, take off your undies, they might spontaneously combust for every bit of hot, hot romance stuffed into this short.
- Teenage Strap-On Gangbang (Lesbian Group Sex and Spanking)
on Sep. 09, 2012
It's very hard to give four stars to such an enjoyable story, but despite what stood out from it, there are some concerning elements. A few of sentences are sticky and odd, maybe a remnant of a first draft with words out of place that killed a bit of the lovely immersion a few times. Toward the end things get a bit jumbled, but mostly because our heroine loses focus on anything but what's going on down below. But for its cons, the author does an over the top job of laying the characters out and having them build over so short a story.
The copious amount of action here is good, great even, but miss a delectable, gritty over-description that could take this from erotic to downright dirty. Not to be mistaken, the story is very raunchy and very fantastically envisions giddy, teenage strap-on loving, but a few passages really lacked the descriptive punch to make this a five star.
Please keep up pacing like this in future stories, but I'd definitely love to see more of the main character thoughts/style of thinking integrated into the prose with a recurring theming or phrase.
- At His Side: The Billionaire's Beck and Call, Part 9 (A BDSM Erotic Romance)
on Sep. 10, 2012
Torn between a guilty pleasure love of The Billionaire's Beck and Call and giving critical reviews, I'm honestly dumbfounded by the ending of this series.
The plot picks up where the last installment left off. Isa and Chase are hot on the heels of Lex, whose attempt to flee the country is going pretty swimmingly. Though the situation is tense as the two men square off, there is nothing new about the situation that hasn't featured in cop dramas besides Isa.
Since she's the hero, it's only appropriate for her to shine here, which is a nice change from the usual man foiling the villain. Though Isa was never a doormat, Chase has brought such confidence and trust into her life and character through their relationship that she is able to cooly play the situation to her advantage.
This, however, is more of a subtle thing, but long-time readers will hopefully pick up on the changes that got them where they are in this finale.
Of course, in true Delilah Fawkes fashion, our story wraps not with hugs and laughter and love, but steamy, heavy, fetishy and leather-collared and gartered kink. There's no long, drawn tension for this scene, but oh, it's nice. Please feel free to think that you're prepared for it, because you aren't. It could make a wet bikini bottom burst into flame.
Also, there are some hugs and laughter and love. All in all, though this story brings nothing new to the table, both genre-wise or plot-wise, The Billionaire's Beck and Call is a delightful journey of a woman opening up and becoming somebody she never knew she could be. Other stories have done BDSM, romance and erotica, but none are Delilah Fawkes, and Delilah's writing is what makes this series so special.
- Lush Curves (A BBW Erotic Romance)
on Oct. 07, 2012
Lush Curves, upon it's first look, is a very simple equation for romance. Moneyed, alpha male; mousy, unknowingly beautiful temp or secretary.
Upon its first few pages, it echoes the same kind of formula, though it oddly opens to just where we want it to be. The stage is set rather than portraying a back story or introducing our characters fully. We're thrust into the limelight with our bum in the air and a playboy Scotsman intently checking us out from behind, Delilah's short story nature showing itself. This leaves the first few snippets devoid of any real build because we don't yet know Aolani or her admirer, Gavin.
This makes Delilah's words feel nervous, though she wants to please, eager at bat and hoping to hit gold. It's readable in her style. At first each perspective reads similarly, flowery Aolani being woefully close to the Scot's high-spoken brogue in thought. For readers unaccustomed to the perspective switch style of writing it can be jarring to be switched so often, but it begins to work better a few pages in.
When Delilah relaxes you can feel it settling into the words and setting the mood. As she slips into something she's a little more comfortable with, conversation, Aolani and Gavin start hitting it off. Maybe a little too well.
There's a touch here, a fragrance there. Aolani longs and though still a bit flowery, Gavin handsomely craves. He broods, she gives off charming, real reactions amidst researched culture and colloquial hints to speech patterns.
A few pages is all it takes for Delilah Fawkes to catch where she wants to go. After a few stumbling, quick switches back and forth she sticks with Aolani and builds, builds, builds before crushing our hopes and swapping back to Gavin who does the same.
Aolani starts to read as sensible, cute and downright real, her passages throwing us forward into what can only be a tumultuous storm. Fawkes' well placed swaps land us a step forward with Gavin, daring to defy the storm, to defy what his position should say of him. The purple prose falls away and he starts to read grittier, dirtier, quicker and to the point. Maybe it's the tension talking or maybe, at this point, Delilah falls in line with his character.
Lush Curves on the outside proves that Delilah Fawkes is versatile, she can take anything and put a piece of herself into it to create something different. On the inside, it's a delightful prologue to what I hope will be a rollercoaster of a ride. If anything, Delilah's learned how to turn on the tease, how to push you to the edge and yank you back. She knows how to make you want it, even if you don't know what it is.
Her ability to breathe life into characters throws me back to finding an erotic book in my grandmother's bookshelf as a preteen and being so excited to see what comes next, chapter after chapter.
- Do Me First, Daddy (Taboo Defloring Erotica)
on Oct. 14, 2012
Do Me First, Daddy is a sizzling blend of tension amidst a well-written, smoldering seduction. Tara Nova, with a dazzling bit of storytelling, lands us in the shoes of virginal Stephanie about to embark on a camping trip with her mother and stepfather. She's young, unsuspecting and coy.
There are a few sections where the story is being told rather than shown, but they are only a couple in number and fly past, explaining just enough before we're front and center again. The seduction here is a pleasurable and equal mix of longing, hesitation and tension. Stephanie's interlaced thoughts give us a view inside of the young woman's head that is both mystifying and magical, linking the visible hesitation of both parties through the burgeoning, unbidden sex kitten inside. The sex is refreshing but hot, Tara Nova will have you squirming and biting your lips in anticipation before any action really starts.
- Blind Date with the Billionaire (Billionaire BBW Erotic Romance)
on Oct. 22, 2012
A sense of weariness never fails to elude me whenever I begin reading something labelled romance, but erotic romances were one of the first series that could keep my attention, even in my youth. Though things are different now, the genre still exists and it's better than ever.
Blind Date with the Billionaire follows more traditional guidelines but is a simple testament that modern writing trumps tropes from the 80s and 90s that I once consumed between fabric-wrapped layers of cardboard. It takes time to build, describing Monica and her insecurities in a relatable way that most readers will appreciate if they're looking for a story based on the BBW aspect. Though she isn't described as the biggest, she's had apt amounts of trouble based on her weight.
They way she meets and ends up on a date with her billionaire admirer isn't exactly blind, he knows about her, they've been chatting for months online but without seeing each other's full body pictures, but it's a technicality. The meeting ends up being fresh and full of whimsy, the two of them hitting it off well, an undercurrent of sexual tension practically crawling Monica's skin.
Good points can be picked out of the story blindly. Any one passage or scene is very well written, adds to the story or plays on an insecurity. Finding flaws came down to being nitpicky, actually. A few lines of dialogue are capped with names, and though in literature it's an easy way to distinguish who is saying what, in reality two close parties speaking face to face rarely use them. Gabe also tends to switch out of a broader vocabulary into a pedestrian colloquial speech a few times, breaking his character.
Although, to actually find those cons, I really had to try. These are not actually critical story-breaking issues, and anybody else could simply not be bothered by them. Cordelia Baxter shows a talent for erotic romance that I would like more of. It's sweet and smiley, giving the reader a sense of actually being in the room with both characters.
- Lush Curves 2: Swept Away (A BBW Erotic Romance)
on Nov. 15, 2012
The second serial in Delilah Fawkes new series, Lush Curves, is breathtaking. In my review of the first, I mentioned some problems: jarring point-of-view switches, the characters almost reading the same, a nervousness in the writing style, but Fawkes has once again risen above things that seem to fault her, taking reviewer's words in mind and stepping back up to the plate intent on knocking this next serial out of the park.
Which she does, and the ball lands in the next town over.
Lush Curves left us with a cliffhanger ending in one perspective only to start us off with the other. Aolani is the same, cute, sensible, flowery, real, and the opening to this serial has enough steam to keep any train going for some time to come.
The real eye-opener here is Gavin. He's been re-written with a voice that's distinctly male and also moneyed Scot, brusque, brash and high-spoken. It's a delight reading his passages. Through his eyes we see what Aolani can't, what she's missing, and how his very real attraction to a beautiful woman of size is doing to him both inside and out.
It's hard not to say more without spoiling parts of the story, but this latest segment had me turning up the fan and wishing for a part 3. Immediately.
- Some Girls Like Big Girls (BBW Lesbian Erotica)
on Jan. 10, 2013
It's hard to view a story objectively when it hits kinks that you love, because everything that you love about it ends up being subjective and relative.
On the other hand, good writing is good writing is good writing, and Jessie Jordan presents a story written in such a quirky, well-written manner that you would swear it's a personal experience perceived through rosy fantasy glasses
Her eyes for character makes it's mark as both women come across as real, psychologically representing the difference between what we are and what we want/can express of those wants in such a short period of time.
Did I mention that this is erotic? Erotica at its best, a bit thought provoking, a bit sticky and as it should be, wonderfully fun and well-crafted. If the subject matter is up your alley, please give Jessie Jordan a try.