The Fall of the Illistarta
on July 13, 2011
Interesting concept, but could have used some polishing. Needed a proofread and some work on the dialogue. Probably would have been more entertaining if the narrator's involvement was revealed closer to the end instead of so close to the beginning. Would have left some intrigue. I do like the idea of a soul forge though, and would be interested in reading a full length novel about it, once the author hones his craft a little more.