Sabreena Rayy

Smashwords book reviews by Sabreena Rayy

  • The Automat on May 06, 2013

    When this book began, I was confused and bored. Reading about this character's routine of a life was very boring and it had me wondering if Horace (the main character) felt as if his life was boring. Then, I started feeling sorry for him. Especially when we get to meet his wife. His wife was a b!**h and he was pathetic. But then, he meets a pair of big, brown eyes and his life changes forever. You can kinda tell that this guy is a little coo-coo, put you really get to see how much after he meets these eyes. I didn't like the fact that the book was written in first person and all in his head - with a few dialogue thrown in here and there - but it worked for this particular story, as the MC was kinda 'not all there'. Also, there were some grammatical, spelling, and other editing errors that were annoying to come across. My ebook also had text that was bold as well as not bold, and I wasn't sure if I was supposed to know the difference between what was going on or if this too were a mistake. Even though these errors were annoying, the story was just so compelling. Once I started to read, it was hard to put it down. Though he's crazy, you really feel for this guy and want to justify all the crazy things he's doing. This is also the first book I've completed on any ebook device (because I much rather prefer a paperback copy). Yay!