Location: United States
Member Since: March 07, 2011
Bernie Wilhelm
Biography
USN BM1 Coronado amphib base San Diego Ca. Navy for 15 years. Homerown Evergreen colorado. Like to fish and travel.
Books
This member has not published any books.Smashwords book reviews by Bernie Wilhelm
- Charlie and Lindsay Meet Lady GaGa
on March 13, 2011
ghImagination running wild. Thoughts just like what those people use to occupy their brain cells evidently. Even the joke by Kato K was spoofy and really camp. This was obviously written to see just how many gumbies are watching these three media tramps. As for the story-- it as great and now we will read some of the serious stuff by this Addison Gast
- The Gaines Agenda
on May 02, 2011
This one is right along the lifstyle of the two boy computer genesus of america. This one is obviously Bill Gates but it could also be Zukenburg. B.Zaid puts the plot together solidly in the first 300 words then, takes the reader across the mountains of "What's going to happen next here???" and then drops you right in the middle of a new plot and changes the storyline to make the novel even longer than you think when it will end. Not to give the end away but it would be interesting to see how many readers can really understand the ending's meaning here. I give Blaine Zaid a 10 for a great story.
- Death on a Rocky Little Island
on May 02, 2011
Cork is a jerk. The story here goes up and down the scale of understanding but when you get to the end,.....it is a real laugh. I read this one twice. I love these characters.
- Betraying Nexus
on May 02, 2011
Should I say it was a mind blower?? Good stuff IMHO. The Character Kayle only makes a short appearance and then he is dropped and that kind of left me hanging. The part about the little girl and what happened to her gave the two main characters justification for what they wind up doing.
- Class Warfare at the Convenience Store
on May 02, 2011
If this is a typical small town in.......Where? I guess the plot was to show urban developement can not be halted,....unless the developer runs out of money???? Where was it supposed to go? ( The story?)
- Ambition, part two
on May 02, 2011
If he bangs two more chics, one of five things will happen. His dick will fall off, He will get stuck in her like a dog gets stuck in the bitch and has to wait for his dick to get soft again before pulloing it our or,.....probably the chic will pull a Loretta B on him and cut it off and put it hanging on her rear view window in her Beamer. If she can't get her rocks off then why is she fucking his brains out? Good story---reminds me of my life in L.A. whn I was going to school in Westchester.
- Hannah's Choice (An Erotic /Erotica Short)
on May 02, 2011
Women write the best fuck stories. The pussy that squirted was a winner. I remember one of those!!