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- Bakkian Chronicles, Book I - The Prophecy
on Dec. 24, 2011
This book uses so much foul language it overshadows everything else.
It had potential, but the author seemed to think they needed to insert foul words into almost every bit of dialog. Perhaps the author thought they were making the story more realistic, or more gritty, but no one truly speaks like that. It's just distracting.
One would think that if someone is creative enough to write a story, they'd be more creative in their dialog as well.