GROSS!!!! It started out ok. But when you got the 18year old girls into it was just too far. I thought it was ok until then. I could deal with no one having names, and some of the other problems, but that is just sick.
Great short story. Wonderful characters. Great romance. The sex scenes were a flop, but it was alright, because I found myself caring more about the characters. I'd like to read another story to see what happens after the story ends.
I loved it!!! Great writing style, wonderful plot, and fun characters. I want to know what happens's next. These characters could be in a full length novel. Keep writing. I want to know what happens to Grey for sure, and to know more about her adventures before this story took place. I loved it!!
While the Navy Seal bit was unrealistic... the basic plot was good, the characters belivable and the story fun. A good story, even if at times you're thinking, "That would never happen." The writer makes your forget about it and enjoy the ride.