Location: India
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Aug. 04, 2013
Rikky Bhartia
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Haughtiness in Love
on Aug. 06, 2013
Heena its very nice story, I read it and the best thing is that though it had a slow start but later it made me glued to it till the very end, your writing is fresh and good and may become a real good one but needs some polishing. Whatever be the case it was good, he names chosen were nice IBA JAWL and the climax was very romantic and funny though a little predictable. There were certain flaws and certain gaps in the story but its expected from a debut writer, the best scenes were Jawl hiding in her car, the confession by IBA, but the weakness was how Abhi called Riya? There was no background to show there link?? and there was grammatical weakness though very few but not accepted in writing world. Presentation was very good could had been better. In short would like to read more from you, some polished work.. Keep writing.. best of luck.