Rita Gnap

Smashwords book reviews by Rita Gnap

  • Death In The Arena on Nov. 18, 2011
    (no rating)
    Overall the book was a good read. It jumps a bit excessively at the beginning and doesn't stay in one place long enough to develop a lot of suspense. I don't like the screen play format, Brinling could have added a few descriptive sentences to accomplish the same result as the stage directions. If he could write the beginning, like he did the end it would be wonderful. I also felt the description of characters lacking to aid in solving the mystery. The only characters described well were the two sexy females, Alicia and Cassie--how sexist!!