Though the ending is a little harsh due to the circumstances in it, the story itself is good. Well written, themes that give insight to the characters presented, which are well enough and we as readers are not bashed over the head with them (something I always appreciate), and the eventual twist subtly hinted at throughout is revealed well when it's the right time. Kudos to the writer.
This provides an interesting view on the symptoms of "that" (won't spoil) and dealing with it, especially from the perspective of the person not physically suffering from it. A nice and original work, with a good flow and characters who are genuine and likeable.
Well, this was well written, but I've come to expect that from you. It was also cute and it was nice to get more insight on Keesha, and it's always nice to get to know the secondary characters too. And that Shayna sure was perky, huh? Then there was the Hello Pony thing, it did give me a good laugh.
Overall, a good, cute story, and it's always nice to see you write more of the CD world and the folks in it.
Other than a couple of spelling mistakes, this was a pretty good short story. Puts you right into the situation with characters who feel real and the little flashback was nice to get to know them better. It was short, did what it had to do and did it well, certainly worth a read.