Two short pieces, n a slightly longer one.
Wouldn't go so far as to say the two are poetry,but yes, it's not prose :)
Do revert back to me. all comments welcome, good, bad, and even painful. :)
seriously??!! why english?? the language has been abused to such an extent as to make reading this torture!! the stories by themselves are interesting enough. if only reading them wasn't such a pain!!! kindly proof read. or get someone to do so!!!
the previous reviewer must be related to you, or in a real rush to get through the story!!
it had a lot of potential, unfortunately was completely massacred by the writing style!! were you TRYING to sound like some catalogue?!!
the characters weren't fleshed out. the plot left unexplored. it might as well have been told in 5 lines flat....
sorry, if i sound too harsh...but either leave"romance" noovellas to women...or stop tagging it as "romance"!!!