Java script/Smashwords really has this story messed up! However, when I read it the second time I found it to be a very good story. The author took you right down a road and brought you home. Nicely done, and I can't wait until the author posts more books!
Oh, please tell me you are working on the next in the series! This is my kind of reading! This is similar in style to my favorite author, James Patterson. I think that I have found another favorite author! More please!! Wish I could rate this higher.
The sadness with which it started, the intensity in the middle and the joy that it brought in the end made it a true Christmas gem. I hope that a lot of people will read this eBook and realize that Christmas is not necessarily about buying gifts, but more about caring about others.
There were parts of this story that had me breathless. The fear that must have been felt by everyone involved at the time must have been overwhelming. To realize that this actually happened, and is still haunting you... incredible. I can only begin to imagine, that in order to make this fiction, all that you must have left out is the true identity of the guilty parties. I'm sorry that this happened in your life, but I am glad that you were able to write about it in the manner that you did.