Ernest Winchester

Biography

I must in all honesty, update this entry, for I stumbled onto the magic key to post a story on Smashwords. It was operator error not one of the poltergeist that I’m sure came preloaded in my computer that prevents me from getting what I want from it. For those of you who didn’t read this bio before—which I’m sure includes the rest of the world’s population—I repeat: I am an old man who loves to write. I started decades ago—the exact number is irrelevant—on a cast iron framed manual typewriter that would now serve little purpose beyond a boat anchor. I love composing fiction on the computer, mainly because of the spell check feature. Why someone who can’t spell worth a damn wants to write, I’ll never be able to explain. I take solace in the knowledge that some well-known writers throughout history were so afflicted. However, I must confess, that is about as far as I can go into this—to me—frightening world of cyberspace. I don’t have accounts on face book (wouldn’t touch it with a ten-foot pole. Almost nightly the news is filled with stories of people murdered by people they have contacted there.) I feel the same way about Myspace, a blog or personal web site. I don’t tweet or twit or what ever that is. That really seems silly--just call them and talk! So I’ll be contented to write and enjoy retirement until the final heartbeat or wayward city buss runs me over.

Books

The Hypochondriac’s Lament.
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Price: Free! Words: 350. Language: English. Published: June 20, 2012. Category: Fiction » Humor & comedy » Satire
(3.91 from 11 reviews)
The Hypochondriac's Lament
My Private Tutor
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Price: $3.99 USD. Words: 51,900. Language: English. Published: May 2, 2012. Category: Fiction » Erotica » Contemporary
Dennis Cooper: eighteen years old, struggling to finish high school a year behind other kids his age—desperately in need of tutoring. Alice Wilson: retired and widowed school teacher—desperately in need of some action in her bedroom her late husband never provided. Can they join forces to provide what each so badly needs? And can they keep their private lessons under cover?
Beware Back Alleys
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Price: Free! Words: 970. Language: English. Published: May 2, 2012. Category: Fiction » Erotica » Contemporary
(3.38 from 8 reviews)
Be careful in back alleys.
Musings while in traffic
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Price: Free! Words: 230. Language: English. Published: July 15, 2011. Category: Nonfiction » Transportation » Automobiles
(3.67 from 9 reviews)
What does that mean?
July 5th, 1776
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Price: Free! Words: 830. Language: English. Published: July 14, 2011. Category: Fiction » Holiday » Humorous
(4.71 from 7 reviews)
A discourse of history that may have been, though not likely.
Sabrina's Chastity Belt
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Price: Free! Words: 9,960. Language: English. Published: July 7, 2011. Category: Fiction » Erotica » General
(4.00 from 4 reviews)
The foursome of Betty, Sam, Sabrina and Bert has doubled into an octet of adults playing an expanded version of spin the bottle. When they go out for the party, they never know who they’ll be spending the night with.
Stacy and Harold on the Fourth
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Price: Free! Words: 18,530. Language: English. Published: June 29, 2011. Category: Fiction » Erotica » Contemporary
(1.57 from 7 reviews)
Stacy invites Harold to the family's Fourth of July barbecue to meet the family. How will he hold up against some of her crazy family members?
Pinochle or Strip Poker?
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Price: Free! Words: 12,410. Language: English. Published: May 25, 2011. Category: Fiction » Erotica » General
(4.33 from 6 reviews)
In the last story of this card playing foursome, I presented what I considered a silly little tale of a card game switch that teased of nothing more than a titillating amusement. But one reviewer’s prodding has enticed me to expand the story into something the players had secretly desired all along. So I bow to all five and give you this expanded erotic endeavor.
Bette's Surprise
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Price: $0.99 USD. Words: 5,430. Language: English. Published: May 1, 2011. Category: Fiction » Erotica » Couples Erotica
(4.75 from 4 reviews)
How does Bette revive a dull sex life with her husband? Try to find out what he secretly wants. But is she willing to do the unimaginable to revive that marriage when she discovers what that is?
Pinochle Anyone?
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Price: Free! Words: 830. Language: English. Published: April 29, 2011. Category: Fiction » Erotica » Contemporary
(3.67 from 6 reviews)
It’s just a harmless little card game among consenting adults.
Stacy and Harold at the Concert
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Price: Free! Words: 3,290. Language: English. Published: March 31, 2011. Category: Fiction » Erotica » Couples Erotica
(4.67 from 3 reviews)
Stacy and Harold’s afternoon at the town’s concert has some hidden excitement for Stacy. Will Harold’s plan give Stacy the jolt he thinks it will? Join them as the orchestra provides some unintended stimulus.
Stacy and Harold Go Streaking
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Price: Free! Words: 5,450. Language: English. Published: March 23, 2011. Category: Fiction » Erotica » Couples Erotica
(4.50 from 2 reviews)
As the school year nears the summer break, Harold wonders which adage will win out before fall: ‘Absence makes the heart grow fonder,’ or ‘Out of sight, out of mind.’ The thought of spending the entire summer without her just plain sucks. But as so often is the case, Stacy has her own plans.
Another Evening in Stacy's Dorm Room
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Price: Free! Words: 1,820. Language: English. Published: March 13, 2011. Category: Fiction » Erotica » Couples Erotica
(3.60 from 5 reviews)
Frequent visitor to the women’s dorm, Harold falls asleep and misses the mandatory time for all male visitors to leave. Will he be able to sneak out and at the same time, avoid the clutches of Stacy’s horny roommate, Val?
Fellatio
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Price: Free! Words: 770. Language: English. Published: March 7, 2011. Category: Fiction » Erotica » Couples Erotica
(2.57 from 7 reviews)
Fellatio
Stacy and Harold in College
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Price: Free! Words: 5,740. Language: English. Published: March 5, 2011. Category: Fiction » Erotica » Couples Erotica
(4.00 from 4 reviews)
Venture back half a dozen years to Harold and Stacy’s first encounter in her dorm room, where Harold discovers that the freshman is far from fresh. Can he possibly match the libido of this hot brunette two years his junior?
The Getaway
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Price: Free! Words: 4,640. Language: English. Published: March 2, 2011. Category: Fiction » Erotica » Couples Erotica
(5.00 from 3 reviews)
Mr. and Mrs. Anderson are a married couple who have been so busy running their company that they’ve forgotten they also have lives outside of it. Now Mrs. Anderson thinks she has a way to remind her husband that she is alive. Can he be persuaded that he is also?
The Next Sex Game of Stacy and Harold South?
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Price: Free! Words: 9,850. Language: English. Published: February 28, 2011. Category: Fiction » Erotica » Couples Erotica
(3.33 from 3 reviews)
Has Stacy been kidnapped? Or is she pulling the most outlandish sex game Harold has ever encountered? See if you can tell. And if you do, please let Harold know. He really wants to get to the bottom of this matter.
Musings While Doing Research On The Internet
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Price: Free! Words: 900. Language: English. Published: February 4, 2011. Category: Essay » Author profile
(4.40 from 5 reviews)
Beware! The Internet can be a terrible addiction. But I’m sure you know that by now.
The Sex Swing Rental
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Price: Free! Words: 3,060. Language: English. Published: February 1, 2011. Category: Fiction » Erotica » Contemporary
(4.56 from 9 reviews)
See Sheila, see how smart Sheila is at working her trade--the world's oldest.
Corporal Punishment
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Price: Free! Words: 2,410. Language: English. Published: January 23, 2011. Category: Fiction » Erotica » Couples Erotica
(3.75 from 4 reviews)
“Miss Winters: You are to report to room 114 at Four P.M. Wednesday for disciplinary action.” With that brief, intriguing note, an intense drama is about to unfold. Corporal punishment is legal in four tenths of the states. Will this young woman get what she has coming in one of them?
How the Bad Economy has Killed the Nightlife in Honolulu
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Price: $1.99 USD. Words: 4,130. Language: English. Published: January 10, 2011. Category: Fiction » Erotica » Contemporary
After a long dry spell, I’ve decided to imbibe in a few, only to find that the nightlife had left the building.
Mary's Toy
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Price: Free! Words: 1,300. Language: English. Published: January 4, 2011. Category: Fiction » Erotica » Contemporary
(4.00 from 17 reviews)
Mary’s truck driving husband is on the road and Mary is home alone and horny. What’s Mary to do?
My Operation: Part 2
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Price: Free! Words: 510. Language: English. Published: October 9, 2010. Category: Nonfiction » Health, wellbeing, & medicine » Cancer
(3.83 from 6 reviews)
Words of thanks to reviewers of previous posting.
My Operation
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Price: Free! Words: 510. Language: English. Published: September 9, 2010. Category: Nonfiction » Biography » Autobiographies & Memoirs
(4.22 from 9 reviews)
Some thoughts while facing surgery.
BDSM: Trial And Error
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Price: Free! Words: 5,050. Language: English. Published: August 20, 2010. Category: Fiction » Erotica » BDSM
(1.63 from 8 reviews)
Good subs are hard to come by. They must be nurtured and trained properly. When you develop the right one, she is a treasure to be cherished.
The V-8
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Price: Free! Words: 470. Language: English. Published: August 19, 2010. Category: Fiction » Drama » American
(5.00 from 4 reviews)
Some things you just don't think of in time.
The Meat Market
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Price: Free! Words: 890. Language: English. Published: August 19, 2010. Category: Fiction » Erotica » General
(2.56 from 9 reviews)
Three hundred years or more into the future: women rule the world and men are little more than useless chattel.
The Boss's Terms
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Price: Free! Words: 1,940. Language: English. Published: August 18, 2010. Category: Fiction » Erotica » Contemporary
(3.13 from 8 reviews)
For a year Ruth thought her boss was a perfect gentleman, until he found a way to prove her wrong.
The Butler's Duties
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Price: Free! Words: 960. Language: English. Published: August 17, 2010. Category: Fiction » Erotica » BDSM
(3.67 from 9 reviews)
Sometimes the duties of a butler go far beyond polishing silver.
The Girl In The Gondola
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Price: Free! Words: 1,730. Language: English. Published: August 17, 2010. Category: Fiction » Erotica » Contemporary
(4.10 from 10 reviews)
The American tourist was shocked when the naked girl exposed herself to him, but this was Europe and people here had a different attitude about such things. So he leaned back to enjoy the show—at first.

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Smashwords book reviews by Ernest Winchester

  • White Sheets on July 24, 2010

    Quirky! I like quirky. Where can I buy a set of those sheets?
  • Besotted: Erotic Journeys Through Time on July 24, 2010

    I love the writing. The only complaint is, the stories were too short. I would love to know how each ended.
  • A Thin Line on July 27, 2010

    I thought the 'hero' of this book was a real creep. That he got the girl in the end is a travesty of poetic justice.
  • Yolanda's Escape on Aug. 02, 2010

    Good sexy romp. My only complaint, it was too short.
  • Heart On Fire on Aug. 04, 2010

    Oh, God. Another boss fucks the hot secretary tale, who of course was eager to get his big dick after hours. Well at least the author threw in a little extra--he's also a werewolf. Ho-hum.
  • Shadow Musique on Aug. 04, 2010

    A little hard to follow, but worth the effort in the end. But really! A plain old dog? Where's old yeller when you need him?
  • The Touch of Isis on Aug. 09, 2010

    Short and very, very hot. I could have used a lot more of it.
  • Conrad's First Girl on Aug. 09, 2010

    Hot, hot, hot. Although the title doesn't seem to match the story--I'm sure she wasn't his first, even if he was her first. Would love to read of their next 'date.'
  • Required for Business on Aug. 09, 2010

    Short but predictable.
  • Love for Sale on Aug. 09, 2010

    Well, something different! I loved it. Maybe cause I'm and old man and wish it could have been me. Not that I ever had a wife like Betty though. My loss.
  • Jake on Aug. 09, 2010

    Oh God, how silly.
  • The Natural: An Office FemDom Story on Aug. 09, 2010

    This story, though short, it hot! The kind of story that I wish was around back in the stoneage when I was young. I might have started muff-diving much sooner.
  • Legs: A Mature Sex Story on Aug. 10, 2010

    Wow! Talk about your May/December match-up. Something tells me he's going to age quickly.
  • I Will Be Your Dominatrix on Aug. 10, 2010

    A little break from the boredom was all she needed.
  • Catering on Aug. 10, 2010

    Well, I missed the word gay when I downloaded this story. Not that I'm homophobic or anything--after all some of my best friends are--oh, wait a minute, maybe not. Anyway, I did finish reading it. It didn't turn me on like a good pussy eating story would, but at least I didn't puke, so no harm done. Now to find a good lesbo story to even things out.
  • A Slight Scar on Aug. 10, 2010

    Man! Not what I had expected at all. Well written. The reader has to feel for these caracters.
  • Addison Crouse, MBA : Flash Sex Fiction Office Erotica on Aug. 10, 2010

    Not only did I like this short, unusual story, but I read your 'A Slight Scar' earlier today and they make me hope that there is a chance that my own quirky stuff might be accepted somewhere.
  • Elvira on Aug. 10, 2010

    Okay, Joe. You really got me at the end of that one. But I can't believe that this story--all of them actually--have been posted so long without someone reviewing them.
  • Late Night With Elaine - A Short And Sweet Sex Story on Aug. 10, 2010

    I guess I didn't read the promo in time. At first I thought it was two gals. Then I didn't know the guy's name. Appartently all he needed was a fuse to set him off.
  • Erato on Aug. 10, 2010

    God, do I know that feeling; at least some of it. I've had times writing when I couldn't sleep. The scenes kept building in my mind keeping me awake. I probably should have gotten up and typed, even though it was two in the morning. Thank you for a story that shows me I'm not alone.
  • FLAMING HOT - Erotica Romance Short Story on Aug. 11, 2010

    Quick and dirty. Worth little.
  • 101 Degrees Fahrenheit on Aug. 12, 2010

    I don't know if this has the potential for a full length novel as others have sugested, but it is a great short story. Sexy and poignant.
  • Unplugged on Aug. 12, 2010

    Not Bad. A little short but hot. A different title would have kept the reader in the dark a while longer but that's okay.
  • Slick 50 on Aug. 12, 2010

    I can only ditto what the blurb said: A simple oil change will never be the same. This is a new way to lube the seat leather.
  • Paper Hearts on Aug. 12, 2010

    Finally, something worth reading. What a Joy. Not over done, just right.
  • Eternal on Aug. 12, 2010

    I waited a few days to write this review because the story really touched me. Thinking about it now, it still seems quite powerful. I felt the same way about Erato.
  • What Happened in Vegas on Aug. 12, 2010

    Wham, bam, thank you sir.
  • Vampire Tanning on Aug. 12, 2010

    Normally I pass on vampire stories, but having read several stories of S. Wolf, I couldn't pass. Glad I didn't, for I loved this tongue-in-cheek story. I don't remember how Bela Lugosi's Dracula ended but I'm sure it wasn't this sexy.
  • The Bathroom Break on Aug. 12, 2010

    Fairly run-of-the-mill sex but riddled with typos: next instead of neck, ask instead of as (twice), quotes wrong. Latoya, baby, that's what polishing is for.
  • Gun Moll A Short Sex Adventure Erotica! on Aug. 13, 2010

    I read this before I noticed who wrote it. I'm glad she wasn't a total bitch like so many of your other women, Joe. Nice change of pace. Thanks.
  • Ten Thirty-Eight on Aug. 13, 2010

    So that's how the bros in Motown do it. Interesting.
  • The Ghost Of Goodacre Hall on Aug. 13, 2010

    I loved it! I bet Miriam was a hoot in the flesh way back when.
  • Ready to Dance? on Aug. 15, 2010

    It's a good thing that these fictional BDSM Doms are all rich to afford all the goodies that go along with the lifestyles that the perverted writers come up with. Keep it up!
  • A Lady Pays Her Penalties on Aug. 15, 2010

    My God, where to start. If you ever assumed that a sadist was always on one end of a cane or torture device and a masochist had to be on the other, then this twisted story will certainly dispel that notion. In this case they both reside in the same sick mind. I can't elaborate on the array of pain inducing methods described in it, but I will say that at the end that I was relieved. I can't say more for fear of giving away something that troubled me until the end, so enough said.
  • Hot Shots on Aug. 16, 2010

    Reasonable well writen, but otherwise unremarkable story of seduction and surrender. But then again, she didn't really want to resist.
  • A Sultry State of Affairs - Part One on Aug. 16, 2010

    Don't bother with part two or beyond. I doubt it will be worth the effort.
  • Bleep! on Aug. 16, 2010

    Hot but scary. I must remind myself what the twenty-second amendment is all about.
  • Bleep! on Aug. 16, 2010

    Okay, I’m back. The twenty-second amendment doesn’t actually apply to this story, it only limits the president and not congress, but I’m being picky. I know what the writers are trying to say. I’ve been trying to send one of my little gems to Smashword but I can’t get it to work so maybe the law referred to in this story is blocking it. Too bad.
  • Hannah's Choice (An Erotic /Erotica Short) on Aug. 16, 2010

    Taking heed from the other reviews, I only read the first few pages and the next ad. Incredibly hot physical exam. In all the decades since I read of the ‘G’ spot, I’ve encountered few women who seemed to like it massaged and only one who actually squirted. But I keep hoping for more.
  • Overtime Pay on Aug. 16, 2010

    Well, this is certainly a different story. A little low in the sex department, but sufficient. It could make a much longer piece if the author followed the couple to other places. Greater variety you see, or the camera sees.
  • A Sultry State of Affairs - Part Two on Aug. 16, 2010

    Somehow I failed to notice this Part 2 when I read and rated Part 1. Although this part is hotter, it still lacks much plot.
  • Enya's Tale on Aug. 16, 2010

    Gruesome and very unsettling.
  • Hedo Two on Aug. 16, 2010

    Too much talking and too little action. About 99% to 1%. Boring!
  • Savoring Master on Aug. 16, 2010

    It's too cerebral. Just a degree short of tedious.
  • Delicia Marie and the Saran Wrap Affair on Aug. 16, 2010

    Nice! A very good read. It's too bad they can't make it more together but they're probably making the right choice. Damn, I hope I didn't ruin it for the next reader.
  • That One Night in Vegas on Aug. 17, 2010

    All this hot sex and nobody paid. Now I know it's fiction.
  • The Cats Will Play on Aug. 17, 2010

    I guess I missed the signpost: Twilight Zone ahead.
  • Sonnet Seduction on Aug. 17, 2010

    A long tedious trek to a destination hardly worth the trip. I guess if I were into the equivalent of Ninetieth Century ‘chick flick’, I might be more receptive. For poetry, give me Ogden Nash.
  • Almost Hemingway on Aug. 19, 2010

    Sorry but the story didn't quite grip me. Maybe it is too short to develope her character
  • My Pal The Bug #1: For They Know Not... on Aug. 19, 2010

    Okay as far as si-fi goes.
  • Cutting Edge on Aug. 19, 2010

    Often when I finish a story, I wonder that comes next. Not so with this one. I fear what comes next.
  • Moonlight on Aug. 19, 2010

    Prose bordering on poetry. What a beautiful story.
  • Her Master's Trust on Aug. 19, 2010

    Half erotic story--no make that three-quarters erotic story--and the rest a flimsy who done it, some of which gets in the way of the screwing.
  • My Women Call Me Sir on Aug. 20, 2010

    I guess it only works for the right minded man on the right minded women.
  • Be Mine on Aug. 20, 2010

    Short and sweet, but I fear I'm getting jaded from reading too many of these erotic stories.
  • Cat On the Prowl on Aug. 20, 2010

    Right off the bat, the first sentence left me shaking my head. I guess it would have made more sense if the word Dom was used instead of husband. I knew I was in for some strange matches and I wasn't wrong although the story ended just as the good stuff seemed to be starting.
  • Happy New Year on Aug. 21, 2010

    I seldom read gay material so this is fairly new to me. I never thought of asses having lips.
  • Canary (a short story) on Aug. 22, 2010

    Well written but a little weak on motivation.
  • The Deck Chair Arranger on Aug. 22, 2010

    What can one say about such devine work?
  • Big Girl Love - Erotica Romance Short Story on Aug. 23, 2010

    I am surprised that no one has reviewed this story before. I was drawn into it fully until near the end when all the typos, grammatical errors, missing sentence parts and tense swapping (sometimes in the same paragraph) became as a bicycle on cobblestones, very jerky and annoying. Overall, I liked it. The description of the blonde was breathtaking, and the sex was mesmerizing. Spend more time editing in the future. The imbedded music was different but I was hoping that I could listen while reading.
  • Intervention on Aug. 24, 2010

    I can only ditto what Jack said below. And I was relieved that there were no more than a half-dozen typos or grammatical errors. I hardly noticed them because I was so absorbed with the story.
  • Flight 715 on Aug. 25, 2010

    The author said at the end of this story that he enjoyed writing it. I wonder how, considering the subject matter.
  • Michael Gets a Harem on Aug. 26, 2010

    Too much verbiage and yet she stopped at the end saying she had gone too far. How silly.
  • The Song of the Sirens on Aug. 26, 2010

    Hot and erotic, and yet I felt as if something is missing. Maybe the next chapter?
  • The Stable Hand on Aug. 26, 2010

    Sorry, but this story is totally lacking logic. Many decades ago when I was twelve, I wrote a short story and I'm sure it was as bad as this one. (I don't remember if I finished it.) Erin, keep this story. In ten years you'll get a laugh out of it.
  • Right Round on Aug. 26, 2010

    What, no boiled pet rabbit?
  • No Orpheus on Aug. 27, 2010

    Sorry, but the story doesn't seem to match the description. Not very well. Too many things that didn't match anything.
  • Hypnotizing Chickens on Aug. 27, 2010

    Well written story, but I sure would have liked knowing who they were going to 'pop' and why. Too bad it wasn't the racist bastard.
  • Santa's Claws & Steven, Space Stowaway on Aug. 27, 2010

    I read a very similar story many years ago, but with a much grimmer ending. A young girl had to be jettisoned in outer space so that an already stripped down ship could make a much needed run with essential medicine. I'm glad this one had a happy ending.
  • Julia's Future on Sep. 09, 2010

    A sweet bit of fantasy.
  • What Would Junie B. Jones Do? on Sep. 09, 2010

    A very good story, although I could have done without the all-caps style. And I won't even mention the errors--oops, I already did. But it was only three, I think. I was absorbed so with the story, I didn't notice much.
  • The West Wind Blows on Sep. 09, 2010

    A well written story, but much too brief.
  • Ghost Hand on Sep. 10, 2010

    Ghost and ghoulies and things that go hiss in the night.
  • The Eighth Sacrament on Sep. 10, 2010

    I am delighted to be the first, of what I’m sure will be many, reviews of this wonderful story. It is so refreshing to read something that is devoid of typos and other errors that so many other works have, my own included. The only criticism I have is, it is way too short. The author has enough plot and charters for a full novel and I can only hope that is what she is aiming toward. Keep up the good work!
  • Jon...A Desperate Prequel on Sep. 10, 2010

    Great story. I was so engrosed I wasn't even looking for typos.
  • Miles from Ireland on Sep. 10, 2010

    A very touching and sweet story.
  • Adagio on Sep. 11, 2010

    Intended to be poignant, I'm sure, but it's only sad.
  • Les ombres de la nuit on Sep. 11, 2010

    Annoyingly pretenious.
  • Needing Nita on Sep. 11, 2010

    Egad, what a great story! The sex in chapter two was the best I’ve read in weeks, if not months. (Chapter seven was pretty good too.) I would have paid for it (the story that is.)
  • Amulet on Sep. 13, 2010

    Another polished gem from the talented fingers of S. Wolf—doesn’t he know that some people get paid for their work? Why he wants to give it away I’ll never know. (I could have done without the teasing little name game at the end, but I’ll say no more.)
  • The Cowboy's Wish on Sep. 14, 2010

    Titillating, but not what you’d call erotica, partner. But the humor makes up for it. I would love to see who wears out first. I suspect they are a good match.
  • Still Virgin on Sep. 14, 2010

    I hate to be the first to review this, because I'm not sure what I think about it. I will say, it's different.
  • Windy Pudding: A Chuck & Wayne Adventure on Sep. 15, 2010

    Cute, in a funny sort of way.
  • Porn Can Be Fun on Sep. 16, 2010

    Well, that was hot.
  • The Three Space Ships on Sep. 18, 2010

    The author should have not used the name Gruff in the first sentence, it was a dead giveaway. However, it is a cute rendition.
  • Chelsea on Sep. 20, 2010

    A short anecdote, cute but saying little.
  • The games we play on Sep. 20, 2010

    What a delightful short story. I loved it.
  • You Probably Won't Believe This, But on Sep. 21, 2010

    A lot of great old jokes but each one worth a belly laugh. I really like the cover picture.
  • Robbing Honey on Sep. 22, 2010

    I almost feel as if I should recuse myself from passing judgment on this story after the kind words the author tended toward me regarding my upcoming surgery. I take this opportunity to thank her again for those words. The story is a sweet slice of life, denoting the change of family status between a young boy and his now unfamiliar role of brother-in-law. The narrative is well written (although I wonder at the lack of spaces between sentences.) Could this be a formatting problem with a copying program?
  • Caring for the Elderly on Sep. 22, 2010

    A different view of Southern hospitality.
  • Old Men & Young Virgins: From Adam On on Sep. 23, 2010

    I usually only go after the free stuff, stories that is, but I just had to read this one so I bought it. I liked the reference to John Updike’s ‘Rabbit’ series as I have just completed reading the novels in the last year. (Although Rabbit died at a younger age than I am.) And being an old man, I can identify with the men mentioned in this amusing little essay.
  • Tipcat on Sep. 25, 2010

    Sorry but I didn't LOL (like offical lot.)
  • Science Fiction Pornography on Sep. 25, 2010
    (no rating)
    I shouldn't review this. I only read the first two and couldn't make any sense of it so I quit.
  • It's the Eyes on Sep. 26, 2010

    Cute. But as the oldest brother in my family, I winced, trying to remember how I treated my younger brothers.
  • Variety of Shorts: Collection of 'Short' Works on Sep. 26, 2010

    An eclectic group of short stories. Well written and at least literate, which is more than I can say for a lot of works listed here.
  • Paths on Sep. 27, 2010

    A nice idyllic path to all the paths taken in life.
  • Killing Max on Sep. 29, 2010

    This story gave me whiplash. I didn’t start catching on until the middle but I’ll say no more about that other than say the world is full of 'ifs,' some bigger than others. Another great story from S. Wolf.
  • Thyroids, a Love Story on Sep. 29, 2010

    Sorry, but I am having a hard time making heads or tails of this story. It's well written but doesn't seem to say much.
  • Remote Intimacy on Oct. 10, 2010

    I read this last month in a contest. It could have won, but the some of the others were great as well.
  • Bury The Past on Oct. 14, 2010

    Beautiful, heart-rending story.
  • Love Never Dies on Oct. 30, 2010

    A well written, sex for the senior set, story with an ending I don't want to give away, so I won't.
  • A Mother's Day to Remember on Oct. 31, 2010

    Amusing read. Well worth two minutes of anyone's time.
  • Immortal Blush on Nov. 04, 2010

    I thought the author was delaying describing the dilemma the goddess was in for dramatic effect. To not reveal it at all was very irritating. I didn’t like that at all.
  • Erotica Author Bares All on Nov. 08, 2010

    I was fortunate to download this delightful story when it was free, but I would have gladly paid. A great story well worth the price when one is placed on it. Lots of sex as usual from this prolific author. Job well done.
  • Lust in the Dust on Nov. 10, 2010

    A short, hot and well written story. Too bad it didn't include any of the other nights.
  • Whet Appetites Of Virtual Strangers on Nov. 16, 2010

    Another slippery, juicy, gushing, cum filled tale from the master of the genre.
  • Dirty, Funky, Nasty on Nov. 16, 2010

    The title alone says it all.
  • Madeleine's Life, A Short Story on Nov. 17, 2010

    A poignant story of family loss and adjustment.
  • Fun With Dick on Dec. 04, 2010

    Way, way, too much sugar, chocolate, whipped cream, cinnamon, syrup, eggnog, chocolate sauce and other sticky stuff for my taste. Ew. His teeth should rot out.
  • Six Catholics and an Atheist on Dec. 06, 2010

    I read it but forgot to count. Now I don't know why I should have done either.
  • Erotic Tales: Ride A Cock Horse (Revised) on Dec. 08, 2010

    A Sybian for the aristocracy!
  • The Comfort of a Woman on Dec. 09, 2010

    Wow! Not quite what I expected. But deeply satisfying none the less.
  • With A Little Yelp From My Friends on Dec. 10, 2010

    Not your usual style of training.
  • Die Already on Dec. 15, 2010

    Strange, very strange.
  • Catherine's Wheel on Dec. 16, 2010

    I have not read such exquisite prose in a long while. The beautiful words describing the pitiful fate of poor Damon, how he will suffer. And how he will love it.
  • The Cat And The Fiddle on Dec. 16, 2010
    (no rating)
    I should have paid closer attention to the tags of this story. If I had done so, I wouldn’t have down loaded it. The first paragraph was all I needed. I am so sick of stories where pain and submission are equated with love. I will not rate it because I don’t think my bias should come into play.
  • Aeroparts Factory on Dec. 17, 2010

    Interesting that this story of an Aeroparts Factory should come on the anniversary of the Wright brothers’ first flight. Well written story depicting greed and skullduggery in an unlikely age.
  • Spore on Dec. 17, 2010

    Eww!!
  • Well on Dec. 18, 2010

    Spooky it is. Spooky and sad.
  • A Real Boy on Dec. 20, 2010

    I can’t believe this story has been posted for a year and no one has reviewed it. But then I’ve had it downloaded for a while before I got around to reading it too. It is so funny I laughed out loud at several places and I seldom do that when I’m alone. It sure gives a new meaning to the term ‘woody’. Great job JL.
  • 2/4 Cavalry: Oh Do Me A Favor? on Dec. 21, 2010

    Wow! All that killing. All that action. But not a clue as to who, where, when, or why. The reader would like to know.
  • The Horror Days on Dec. 21, 2010

    Bah, humbug.
  • A Christian Analysis Of Atheism on Dec. 22, 2010

    I managed to wade through this muddled nonsense to the very end, though I don’t know why. I did find it interesting that the author sited many intelligent people whom he lists as atheists. I also found it disturbing that in the second to last paragraph, he seems to discount the occurrence of the Catholic inquisition of the middle ages. The author seems to say, 'If you're not with us, you're against us.'
  • Princess of Power on Dec. 22, 2010

    I guess the first thing to determine is, who is the author? Somehow I’ve downloaded two versions of this story with two different authors. Just today. Is it Jada Wright or London Shye. Either way it is the same unremarkable story. As I started reading it the first thing to jangle my senses was the tense switching. Past tense, present tense, past tense, all within the first two paragraphs. Getting annoyed with that, I skipped down to discover that this is not a complete story. So I didn’t bother finishing reading it. The author needs lessons in composition. Also anatomy lessons. If the slave losses his penis, it is an amputation, not a castration.
  • My little Christmas story on Dec. 23, 2010

    Sugary, but sweet enough to bring a tear to the eye. Very well done.
  • X is for X-mas on Dec. 24, 2010

    Cute update to an old tale. The author almost had me with the red herrings.
  • A Gruesome Christmas on Dec. 25, 2010

    Gruesome about covers it.
  • Enduring Memory on Dec. 25, 2010

    An incredibly erotic story. So soft and yet hard hitting. I wanted it to go on and on.
  • The Brave Tale of Maddie Carver on Dec. 26, 2010

    Too confusing.
  • It Waits on Dec. 26, 2010

    Two paragraphs do not make even a short shory.
  • Portrait of Bittersweet on Dec. 27, 2010

    A well written but disturbing piece. Reminds one not to touch the artwork in a gallery.
  • Britney's Peers on Dec. 27, 2010

    Ah, the girl is wise beyond her years.
  • Princess of Power on Dec. 28, 2010

    Ashley, you are right. The current version is different from either of the two I downloaded on the twenty-second. The tense changes have been corrected. Also paragraph breakdowns. You’ll note that it was copyrighted in 2002. It seems there are more versions of this story than pseudonyms, which is okay, we writers are allowed to do that. What surprises me is, the reload didn’t strip away my review. I’ve seen writers do that. I suspect they want to get rid of unflattering reviews. Some can be so thin skinned. I’m glad this author chose not to do that. A review should be accepted for the reviewer’s opinion, flattering or not. Also, I finished reading the original version and found it rather disturbing. I wonder, also, if you read the same thing between the lines as I did at the childbirth scene. Was there a male twin born and disposed of? I can’t help wonder if Leanndra intends for the human race to die out at the end of her generation. I also wonder what time frame a ‘moon’ is. Obviously not a month, but then, we don’t know if this story is even set on planet Earth with its moon. I’ve downloaded the continuing story ‘Castle Queen,’ but haven’t read it yet. Perhaps more details will come with it. I've upgraded my rating to two stars with the corrections and look forward to reading the next segments.
  • A Digital Doomsday on Dec. 28, 2010

    I give it three stars for humor. I don't own any of the ithings so I'm not interested in any of them. So why did I download this and read it? It was short and free. I do agree with the reader mentioned near the end of the piece. I think the entire Internet system will come crashing down soon from overload. Maybe on Dec 22, 2012. Hmmmm.
  • The Iceman Cometh on Dec. 29, 2010

    Well, he couldn't say he hadn't been warned.
  • Songs of Lesser Voices-A Holiday Short Short Story on Dec. 30, 2010

    They must have been really bad to not be able to sing a carol.
  • A Holiday Explained-A Holiday Short Short Story on Dec. 30, 2010

    A short read with the ending chuckle well worth it.
  • Howdy, Winnie, & the Bombshell on Dec. 30, 2010

    Give me a minute, I'm still trying to decode it all.
  • A Fish Tale on Dec. 31, 2010

    A wopper of a fish story.
  • Stretch on Dec. 31, 2010

    Well written. Tantalizingly so. But poor Lenny. He only needed a little stretch. Not…
  • Baking Day. Eternal love of a mother . on Jan. 01, 2011

    Too confusing to bother with.
  • Happy New FEAR on Jan. 01, 2011

    Almost makes me glad I spent New Year's eve alone.
  • No Foreplay Required on Jan. 01, 2011

    Ride 'm cowboy!
  • Juggling the three balls on Jan. 02, 2011

    Not much in this short piece.
  • Dark on Jan. 03, 2011

    Hot story but too predictable.
  • My Favorite Threesome: A Short Story on Jan. 04, 2011

    Slow start. Somewhat heated ending. Overall, so so.
  • A Very Bad Easter on Jan. 04, 2011

    This is a well written but bizarre story. Poor kid.
  • Canaanite Barbie on Jan. 04, 2011

    Funny in a cute sort of way, or maybe it's cute in a funny sort of way.
  • Bone Saw on Jan. 04, 2011

    I can't say much about this disturbing story without giving away the ending, but I am reminded of Egar A Poe's victum in 'The Pit and the Pendulum.'
  • Family: A Sci Fi Short Story on Jan. 04, 2011

    A very sad family.
  • Reunited And It Feels So Good on Jan. 05, 2011

    Hot and steamy, just as you expect from this author.
  • Hot And Juicy on Jan. 05, 2011

    Boring. And also dull.
  • A Bestiary of Unnatural Women on Jan. 06, 2011

    Ashley, I have spent about an hour trying to conclude the gender of you first name before writing this review—checking your Bio first. Why? Because I don’t want to commit a faux pas (again—long story) when I speculate on something I’ve read or heard and definitely have concluded in the last few years reading erotic material on the Internet: that women write much better prose in the genre than men. Not that both sexes can’t and don’t produce total crap. They do. But this is supposed to be about your latest book, ‘A Bestiary of Unnatural Women.’ Though I’ve only read three of the stories to date—I like to savor something this good, like fine Christmas chocolates—I look forward to the other half dozen. Each of the three golden nuggets just blew me away. Having read ‘A Lady Pays Her Penalties,’ last summer, which I loved as well, and have downloaded ‘Wives in Service,’ in the fall, which I look forward to reading, I am convinced that women are the superior writers at this genre. None of your stories cross over into more than a titillating hint of porn. Keep up the good work and rest assured, when you decide to charge for it, I will gladly pay.
  • The Red Shoes on Jan. 06, 2011

    I read this twice, trying to understand the relationship between Caleb and Jane. Not husband/wife, not father/daughter. I guess in the end it didn't matter.
  • The Bonds of Wedlock on Jan. 07, 2011

    Such a wonderful dinner party. And the dessert, well who would have guessed? Certainly not Alan.
  • The Birthday Surprise on Jan. 07, 2011

    Much better than the other story posted here. By the way, is there a word missing from your bio. 'husband' perhaps.
  • Noah's Ark Between 2 Buns on Jan. 07, 2011

    Well, I lamented elsewhere that I was tired of cookie-cutter stories and this is certainly not one of those. Very different and very strange. I liked it!
  • Fat Sucker: A Short Story on Jan. 07, 2011

    Be sure to read the instructions on the bottle.
  • Tia Maria on Jan. 07, 2011

    Si, Senorita and Senora. Si! Si! But a sentence or prehaps a partial paragraph seems missing near the hot scene. Por favor?
  • What About Bob? on Jan. 08, 2011

    A story as old as the industrial age.
  • Cow Tipping on Jan. 08, 2011

    I don't get it, man.
  • Steamy Shoppers on Jan. 09, 2011

    It just proves, men have a one track mind no matter where the track is laid.
  • Dead Letters on Jan. 09, 2011

    Beautiful story. Well written.
  • Thirty Minutes or Less on Jan. 10, 2011

    A story hot enough to overlook the grammatical and word usage errors. Loved it.
  • Traps on Jan. 10, 2011

    Okay, I read it. Now what did I read? It made no sense.
  • Kate and Ben on Jan. 12, 2011

    A very well written story, short but touching, very touching. I wondered why the author didn’t identify the war, but then I remembered that all wars have this story. I also wonder if there was a pronoun error in the last sentence. I can’t say more.
  • Carl The Caterpillar on Jan. 12, 2011

    I could read this to my youngest grandchild but I can’t save it. She’s in school now and will soon know about grammar, syntax and punctuation—all of which this story lacks. Also common sense. If the bird doesn’t eat, it will starve. Sorry, but that's the way life is.
  • One Wish on Jan. 12, 2011

    I re-read the wish and it still doesn’t seem to match the fulfillment. Maybe I’ve been reading too much lately.
  • Circulatory System [Injustice is Served - Book 1] on Jan. 12, 2011

    An eye for an eye--or in this case...
  • Obsessive Compulsive Dismemberment on Jan. 12, 2011

    Oh well. At least in the end he came clean.
  • Straustrup story on Jan. 12, 2011

    So I thought, one hundred fifty words. How could that go wrong. Oops!
  • The Bar on Jan. 12, 2011

    Aside from needing to read two-thirds of this story before I had the slightest idea what it was saying, I guess it was okay--sort of.
  • Adopted on Jan. 14, 2011

    This story did not match the description other than it was in English. Didn't like it at all.
  • The Vampire Across the Hall on Jan. 14, 2011

    It is amusingly different, but I can’t decide if I like it or not. So I’ll give it three stars and move on. Oh, by the way, how tall is 155 cm?
  • Sock Monkey's Accident on Jan. 15, 2011

    Cute. Good thing Grandma was there.
  • X-child on Jan. 16, 2011

    Very poorly written. Lacking proper grammar. I will not bother reading any further episodes.
  • Not Another Vampire Story on Jan. 16, 2011

    Okay, ten minutes or less to read less than nine hundred words wasn't such a waste. But I get annoyed with obvious 'tease' postings.
  • Gibberish on Jan. 16, 2011
    (no rating)
    I don't know if my dictionary can stand the strain. Some day when the rains keep me inside, I may try to check out some of these words.
  • Just a Plain Pizza on Jan. 16, 2011

    Funny, in a plain sort of way.
  • Night On A Boat on Jan. 16, 2011

    A couple of short pages. A couple of missing letters (typos?). And a bit of a timing problem. The protagonist was called out late a night, but ends by saying the sun was going down.
  • Stages of Invisibility on Jan. 17, 2011

    Poor guy. But don't we all feel that way sometimes.
  • The Volunteer on Jan. 17, 2011

    A slow and plodding start for such a quick and abrupt ending.
  • The Day The Earth Died on Jan. 17, 2011

    A compelling and realistic portrayal of what many experts consider to be an inevitable phase of Earth’s existence. It—the Earth—has survived it before and may again though it’s questionable if mankind will. We can only wait to see.
  • Dan's Accidental Convertible on Jan. 17, 2011

    A little hard to follow with the strange format but I guess that was the point. Not sure I understood the ending.
  • Ashes to Ashes on Jan. 18, 2011

    Good story. Well written.
  • 2012 on Jan. 19, 2011

    Interesting, but will we be buried under 2012 stories in the next year and a half?
  • The Surgeon's Hearse on Jan. 19, 2011

    Cute.
  • Small Favors on Jan. 20, 2011

    I liked this story despite the occasional missing punctuation that forced me to re-read some paragraphs to de-code what they meant. I also could have done without the foreign language—(Hebrew?), although I did appreciate the translations provided by the Rabbi. I suspect that Lenny and Marcie are destined to have an interesting life together. Should be fun.
  • I love you ya know... on Jan. 22, 2011

    I don't often read poetry, but I did enjoy this one. Nice.
  • Peeping Tam on Jan. 24, 2011

    They stopped just when the good part seemed ready to start. Oh well, maybe next time.
  • A Taste Of Things To Cum on Jan. 26, 2011

    These two are doing so well on their own that I hate to criticize their terminology. I believe what Lance referred to as doggie style near the end of the story; the Kama Sutra calls The Reverse Cowgirl. But who am I to intervene during a good fuck.
  • Girls On Film on Jan. 26, 2011

    As Lucy said at the end, “You have a great job.” And Darren, you did a great job of writing. Speaking of jobs, where can I learn to take pictures like that? That’s the job I want!
  • Water on Jan. 26, 2011

    Prose that reads like poetry. I do love encountering it.
  • Manet's Picnic on Jan. 28, 2011

    A clever juxtapositioning of the two parallel stories, one old, one modern, yet the same. The only complaint I have is the slip in point-of-view when twice the word ‘my’ should have been ‘her,’ unless I totally got it wrong, at the point of the story where Victoria is staging the display. But we all do it, those of us who try to arrange words in a way that makes sense.
  • Hosanna on Jan. 29, 2011

    A bit confusing in some of its transitions early on,(which were clarified with a re-read). I had assumed that it was a slave ship but it wasn’t. Life was harsh then for so many.
  • Magnum Tales ~ D is for Deeply on Jan. 29, 2011

    A tantalizingly well-written story of hot sex and binding love. It should last forever.
  • Magnum Tales ~ C is for Cum on Jan. 29, 2011

    Ah, the joys of vacation sex. But damn it, I haven't read these joyful little stories in sequence so maybe I'll have to read them again. I don't mind.
  • Magnum Tales ~ A is for Anal on Jan. 29, 2011

    A-Can be for awesome too, because this story is all of that. I would loved to have been the fly on the wall that night.
  • Magnum Tales ~ B is for Blowjob on Jan. 29, 2011

    Boy oh boy! Don't we all dream of the mile high club. But what are the membership dues?
  • Thirty Minutes Till on Jan. 31, 2011

    Nothing like letting passion brew for two years before sampling it again. Like fine wine it must have gotten better with age. I also wanted a chance to thank you for the reviews you have given some of my stories. They were much appreciated.
  • The Machines on Jan. 31, 2011

    Every Si-Fi writer worth his salt has written this story. And the sad truth is, it's probably going to be true, one way or another, sooner or later.
  • Softly on Feb. 02, 2011

    Wow! Reverend, can I borrow your hanky?
  • Pilgrims on Feb. 02, 2011

    Short and touching.
  • My Paranormal Experience on Feb. 03, 2011

    Bah, humbug.
  • Elastic Band on Feb. 03, 2011

    More than slightly short.
  • Where Do We Go From Here? on Feb. 04, 2011

    By far the best story from this author that I have read so far. She proves here that life can be such a big unknown.
  • Dispatch #47: The Taking of Signal Hill on Feb. 05, 2011

    Another war the history books forgot about, and just as well.
  • Zombies Don't Trick or Treat: A FREE Living Dead Halloween Poem on Feb. 06, 2011

    Two things I don't usually go for, don't like that well, Zombies and poetry, I think usually smell, but this was very short and and thankfully free, so I read it and found it’s really quite funny. Now I know my attempt at poety blows, So I promise, from now on I’ll stick to prose.
  • In Her Moment Of Triumph on Feb. 06, 2011

    Ah, as Ginny might have said, what a thousand words can emote, three thousand can thrice. Great picture painted with those nearly three thousand words. I did get a little confused by the change of quotation marks on the last page. And I suspect an error of gender in reference to his (her) foot when she was distorting his face. But self-editing is so difficult.
  • Valentin’s Day - Short story on Feb. 07, 2011

    The addition at the end explained a lot—such as, why the sentence structure of the story was so awkward and hard to follow. It is a poor translation from Italian into English.
  • Wide Open on Feb. 09, 2011

    Never one to mince words, this author starts her story full thrust, so to speak, and never lets up.
  • The Storm on Feb. 09, 2011

    An exiting mixture of struggle and remembrance. Good tight writing, with a lot said in very few words.
  • Seducing Jason on Feb. 09, 2011

    One of the best, one of the most intense sex scenes I’ve read in a very long time. Masterfully done.
  • A Rose for Shyla on Feb. 09, 2011

    Ah, the vanity of the vain. The annoyance of the arrogant. The...hell, I can't think of any others.
  • What I Nearly Forgot on Feb. 10, 2011

    What beautiful musing—reliving such earlier times. But please; old man as fifty-four. He’s just a young'un.
  • A Kiss From the Love of My Life on Feb. 10, 2011

    Short and very sweet.
  • Magnum Tales ~ E is for Ennui on Feb. 10, 2011

    Well darn. Why have I never been invited to a party like that? Hot sex everywhere.
  • Gray Lake on Feb. 10, 2011

    Great writing and a great story.
  • Sex with a Shooting Star on Feb. 11, 2011

    A tragic story of missed communications and incredible loss.
  • Photo Shoot for Two, Joy for Three on Feb. 12, 2011

    What to say, what to say. Except maybe, wow! That was one spicy story. And to think, it was his first as he said after the end of it. I will definitely look forward to other stories in the future.
  • Special Delivery on Feb. 12, 2011

    I was all set to complain that there were too many of these same stories, then had to switch to too many of the other same stories.
  • Help Wanted on Feb. 13, 2011

    Talk about your false advertising, but in a good sort of way. The guy knows how to work the list.
  • The Day Long Since Seen on Feb. 14, 2011

    Okay I guess, if you like that sort of thing.
  • Pyjama Series: The Meeting on Feb. 14, 2011

    Short and mildly amusing.
  • Growing Season on Feb. 14, 2011

    Annoying that it wasn't available in PDF or RTF. Also annoying to be a short tease for a longer work.
  • For Crying Out Loud! on Feb. 16, 2011

    I’ve just sworn off FemDom stories but I couldn’t resist one from Severin Rossetti and I’m glad I didn’t. I was sure that the master wordsmith could tell one in a way that would enthrall the reader and I was right. Wonderfully done, as always.
  • The Will to Kill on Feb. 16, 2011

    The will to kill was part of the motive. Revenge fueled it.
  • S.Wolf Sampler on Feb. 20, 2011

    Being a big fan of S. Wolf (I won't tell you what the S. stands for, he might want it kept secret) I want to warn you that his writing is very addictive. With that in mind, you'll surely want to finish reading any sample you try on for size. You won't be disappointed. Good luck and good reading.
  • Dirt on Feb. 20, 2011

    Very philosophical, this piece. A homily to the essence of mankind, and the dirt from which we came.
  • Spot of Gold on Feb. 21, 2011

    I read this as I waited for my own story to upload to Smashwords. Good way to kill time. Although I'm sure it was set in the modern era, (she worked in an electronics store,) it could have used a bit of filler. But as a quick read, it wasn't half bad.
  • Andie Adams in The Interview on Feb. 22, 2011

    Hot and horny, and only part one. (I had to hunt to find that and for a while I thought I had imagined it.) The skeletal plot certainly hints at more so I’ll only give this one three stars until I see more. Love the picture.
  • Blain's Mates on Feb. 23, 2011
    (no rating)
    I often read stories that are short and free and this one fell into that category. The problem is, now I don’t know what I’ve read. I think I’m just too analytical to understand stories of this nature. So I’ll refrain from giving it a star rating, leaving it to others who seemed to have enjoyed it.
  • The Dam on Feb. 23, 2011

    Oh, damn, I mean dam. A story straight out of the Twilight Zone.
  • Andie Adams in A Woman Knows on Feb. 24, 2011

    And the story continues with a quicken pace. Some stories pause with a cliff hanger--this one ends with a table hanger. Can't wait for the next one.
  • Bloodlust on Feb. 24, 2011

    I seldom read vampire offerings and with a title of “Bloodlust,” I surprised myself by reading this one. As I’ve written many times before in reviews, short and free seem to entice me more than anything. In this case, I’m glad I succumbed. “Bloodlust,” is a gritty, messy, erotic story that seemed to succeed on many levels. It is a powerful test of wills between the captive and the captor. I can’t say who wins. Maybe we’ll never know.
  • Fingering Rachel on Feb. 24, 2011

    Nice tease! Two star penalty for being too short.
  • Hot Tales: 1-Sex on the Beach on Feb. 24, 2011

    I've often wondered about sex on the beach. Doesn't sand get in the you-know-what? Ouch! There I go, worrying about things again.
  • The Train Ride on Feb. 27, 2011

    There's a bit of a mismatch between what she is thinking and what happens during Valentine's Day, not to mention what happens on the train. But otherwise, a nice smutty, quick read.
  • The Bloody Countess on Feb. 27, 2011

    A short grisly tale of a very vile woman. By the way, an assistant in crime is an accomplice not accomplish.
  • Riley's Dream on Feb. 27, 2011

    One incredibly hot and sexy story. The kind that almost makes me wish I were a woman to enjoy another woman the way Ava and Riley are doing.
  • Thaw and Serve on Feb. 27, 2011

    The reviews run the gamut. I thought the story was well written and the end--well a twist is a twist.
  • Her Husband her Sissy Maid on March 02, 2011

    This story needs some serious proofreading. In many places the wrong pronoun is used and it is not the mixture of male to female conditioning for the maid in training. There is point of view confusion here. Also, there is an implication that the detective was a ruse set up by the Madame, Rebecca. This was not resolved in the end. Some nice sex scenes, but not enough to offset the problems.
  • The Seduction of Gabriel Stewart on March 03, 2011

    I read this story back when I first signed in with Smashwords. I’ve just stumbled onto it again when I clicked onto the wrong spot and was surprised that I hadn’t reviewed it back then. Maybe I just didn’t know how. As the old saw goes, better late than never. This is a very good read. A little surprising considering the mindset of society at the time depicted in the story. Makes one believe that there is hope for humanity after all if she could follow her instincts and go with her gut.
  • Dye, Change on March 06, 2011

    Such a sweet, no make that bittersweet little story. Like the proverbial ships almost passing in the night—only bumping while passing. Will they bump again?
  • The Lost Girls on March 06, 2011

    Lovely little story that saves me the trouble of reading Bram Stoker’s tome.
  • Mayberry R.F.D., the Place I Want to Be on March 07, 2011

    Yes, Mayberry R.F.D. was a place to inspire pleasant thoughts. I guess we all have one place to reminisce about. I have to admit that Petticoat Junction with those lovely gals crawling out of the water tank dripping wet—well maybe those aren’t the Mayberry kind of thoughts I should have.
  • Midnight Snack on March 07, 2011

    Very poor grammar. And Grandpa's not so healthy either.
  • Someone In The Wolf- A Short Prelude to "Caligulove" on March 08, 2011

    Well damn. A nice sexy romp interrupted by a murder.
  • Meat Your Maker on March 08, 2011

    Cute and humorous (and funny too).
  • Cookie No! on March 08, 2011

    Hey! He forgot to tell what temp to set the oven to so we can uncook them.
  • Meat Your Maker on March 08, 2011
    (no rating)
    Oh, I checked out Darrel's bio and picture. I suspect he's related to Homer Simpson.
  • My Trailer Trash Girlfriend and her Family (Part 3) on March 08, 2011

    I guess I got the idea of parts I and II from the description so part III was a filler. Good sexy read. Will he start looking for cousins to screw too? lol
  • One More Time on March 08, 2011

    I had a small problem with the experimental formatting, but I think I managed okay. The story was different to be sure and some of the bike terminology was confusing, but other than that it was an enjoyable read. The sex was enough to keep it interesting where it was but the long exposition of the road got a bit tedious. Overall, I give it four stars.
  • Indestructible on March 09, 2011

    A well written but strange piece of work. Who would have believed that the angels and demons could be--well, I don't want to give it all away.
  • Magnum Tales ~ J is for Jealous on March 09, 2011

    Okay now they're fighting. They might as well get married and make it official. But I wonder, what will X, Y, and Z be?
  • Famous Last Words on March 09, 2011

    The author leaves it to the reader to conger those last words and more darkly, the images on the video. How dastardly can the reader’s imagination get? Well written, but troubling story.
  • The Box on March 11, 2011

    Hum? Is the box a allegory? I wonder.
  • The Way to Will on March 12, 2011

    A well written story. Interesting in its presentation and really holds the reader's attention. It would be nice to know how they worked out their future.
  • Houseguest on March 12, 2011

    The first few pages were rather confusing. A re-read helped a little but… And so many things remained inconsistent, bordering on absurd. But the reader must make allowances. Beyond all that, it was a rather good, though somewhat baffling, story.
  • Brigadoon Comedy Club on March 12, 2011

    Well, at the author's invite, I read. I'm not sure I enjoyed, however.
  • A Different Kind of Death on March 14, 2011

    Okay, we knew that there was a big build up to something, but now I can't say what to spoil the ending.
  • The Valley of the Black Pig on March 16, 2011

    It's a sad world we live in. But I guess it always has been.
  • Elina on March 16, 2011

    What a delightful story. Well written and soft, with a light undercurrent of sexual tension, yet no one’s clothes came off. A terrific change of pace.
  • A Brush of Love on March 17, 2011

    A sweet, touching story of what might have been--but was not.
  • Chat to Death on March 18, 2011

    Not much.
  • Past Not Presented on March 19, 2011

    I suppose there is a story here somewhere. Guess I missed it.
  • 50 Ways To Annoy Your Friends on March 19, 2011

    By way number two, I was wondering about the age of the author. Later I decided it didn't matter. I wanted to give this two stars, so I went back to find the funny one but I think the author had removed it by then.
  • The Surgery on March 20, 2011

    Very poorly written. Many punctuation errors. Many tense changes.
  • The Massage on March 20, 2011

    A reasonably erotic story, but in serious need of editing.
  • Riley's Surprise on March 20, 2011

    Oh woman! So much fun to be had with the entire house to run around in naked. Who gets to say what they do next?
  • The Princess & the Penis on March 22, 2011

    I lost track of the number of times I laughed out loud reading this very funny fractured fairytale. I recommend it for anyone who needs a lift.
  • Coming Out - The Short Saga of Russell Kelly on March 23, 2011

    An intriguing story of a man who has to get knocked for a loop to get back on the right path.
  • Naughty Marietta and Other Stories on March 23, 2011

    Ah, the imagination of a writer—topped only by the imagination of the reader. If only he’d waited till the complete manuscript was ready. Very funny short piece.
  • Wicked Game on March 29, 2011

    Hell hath no furry like that of a woman...well, you know the rest.
  • Let’s Get Drunk and Play Hammer Darts on March 29, 2011

    Oh those college kids. What they won't think to do when they're full of beer.
  • Cake on March 29, 2011

    Delightful, just delightful.
  • Wicked Game on March 29, 2011
    (no rating)
    Yeah, 'scorned,' that's the word.
  • Sexapalooza on March 30, 2011

    Ah, sex as it can only be among the fae. What the hell are fae, anyway?
  • Love in the Elevator on March 30, 2011

    The ups and downs of crazy love, or could it just be lust?
  • Busted on March 30, 2011

    Don't sweat it kids. Daddy was young once too. How else would Anna be there?
  • Hush, Hush, My Love on March 31, 2011

    I give this story four stars. It was well written with but a minor need of proofing. But I must give a review to the previous reviewer. The crux of the story was blatantly given away by Aaron so that the next reader (me and others) was deprived of the timing of the revelation that the writer intended. Too much information, Aaron.
  • Stiletto Blues on March 31, 2011

    Against my better judgment, I tried to read this. I say tried because I didn't understand a bit of it.
  • A causa da homossexualidade. ( Português) on April 01, 2011
    (no rating)
    Why put the description in English if the story is not?
  • Her Massage on April 01, 2011

    Hot and to the point. I can't help wonder how often this might happen in the privacy of the massage room.
  • My Girlfriend's Roommate (An Erotic Short Story) on April 01, 2011

    Oh boy! Such a fertile mind to come out with a hot story like this. I need to look for more.
  • Hide and Seek: An Erotic Interlude on April 01, 2011
    (no rating)
    I was hoping that I would find some understanding before the end of the story, but the story ended too soon. I was left with nothing.
  • The Lancelot Effect on April 02, 2011

    It's hard to say who's who and what's what here.
  • The Wolf She Married on April 02, 2011

    I enjoyed werewolf movies as a kid when Lon Chaney Jr. was the consummate screen werewolf. Of course he never fucked in the forest. This tale is well written though somewhat cliched.
  • Cyber Lover on April 02, 2011

    A mildly interesting story, stopping too soon for good erotica. But I bet real women in the real world are desperately hoping that computer geeks don’t have that ability, because that would be, well, scary. What happens in cyber-world, should stay in cyber-world
  • Jumping Bones on April 02, 2011

    Easily, lust at first sight. But what will they do for an encore?
  • A round shiny object on April 03, 2011

    A single object at that amount? Not US. Then whose?
  • Big Black Shiny Boots on April 03, 2011

    Did the man in the black shiny boots have time to be surprised? I wonder.
  • Hitchhiker 2 - Marvin on April 03, 2011

    Reminds me of why I don't pick up hitchhikers, especially 260 pound men in worn leather jackets.
  • Confessions of a Queer Englishman on April 04, 2011

    This Englishman couldn't see straight until straight hit him over the head. Very good read.
  • Failure to Launch on April 04, 2011

    The reference to the ancient computer reminds me of the old computer term GIGO, garbage-in-garbage-out. Fred seems like a lot of garbage. But does he get results?
  • Young Love on April 04, 2011

    The stuff of tragedy.
  • Zerendipity on April 05, 2011

    Categorized as erotica, this story failed to deliver, and the plot was no compensation. The last sentence made me wonder if the author borrowed the name Kai from the Hawaiian word for ocean.
  • Payback on April 05, 2011

    Can payback be a life sentence? If you're lucky.
  • The Brief Case of the Briefcase on April 06, 2011

    As a self-professed writer, I hesitate to review this short piece, as I’m sure most any untainted individual loathed to venture near one stricken by the plague in the Middle Ages. Could venturing near it infect me? I hope not!
  • Pearls of Winsome on April 06, 2011
    (no rating)
    I was blithely reading along when the term B M shook me from my reverie. Being a gentile, I didn’t realize the author was talking about a Bar Mitzvah until I finished the paragraph. Talk about a rude awakening. I barely got my orientation back before the end of the story.
  • Personal Trainer on April 07, 2011

    Obviously I missed the 'point.' Senseless.
  • You Choose on April 07, 2011

    I guess this is a build-up to a one line joke. I'm not sure. I see from her bio that she is from my part of Southern Illinois.
  • Le Chocolat on April 07, 2011

    How have I missed this story for the last several months? What a delightful read. Do I dare say anything about the fickleness of women?
  • Crazy Emma on April 08, 2011

    Delightful little tale of a woman caught in the throes of lust at first sight.
  • Uncle Joshua and the Grooglemen on April 08, 2011

    Interesting but chilling story from the backwoods. Very well written.
  • Family Album on April 08, 2011

    What a tender and touching story, mingling memories with a possible future. So well written that it was a joy to read.
  • Bolero Man on April 10, 2011

    I read this when it was first posted and got little out of it. Noting the other reviewers’ praise, I’ve just re-read it and still fail to see anything erotic in it. I guess it’s over my head.
  • He stepped from my dreams on April 10, 2011

    A sweet, fluffy bit of romance if the reader doesn’t think about the back-story too much.
  • Innocent Victim on April 10, 2011

    This story was undoubtedly repeated millions of times the world around. As devastating as it was for the victors, imaging what it was like for the vanquished.
  • Taking a Chance on April 10, 2011

    Normally when I’ve finished a hot piece of erotica, I’ll say just that, ‘Hot,’ with possibly an adjective attached. But this delightful story deserves much more than that. It is a pleasant love story, slowly easing into an erotic tale with just the right tempo to reach the climax, both sexually and plot wise. Very well done!
  • Thelma on April 10, 2011

    How many versions of this tale are there around the world anyway?
  • A Thousand Tears on April 11, 2011

    What a heart-rending story. Beautiful and sad.
  • In memory of Linda on April 11, 2011

    It would be a cold heart to have never known such love.
  • Alien Monster on April 11, 2011

    A touching, well written story. One entity finding peace in the proper time.
  • Cupcakes and Elephants on April 11, 2011

    It's like having a tune in your head that you can't get out.
  • From the Fire on April 12, 2011

    A bit of chemistry here: a conflagration needs both the oxygen mentioned in this story, and something to combust with. The atmosphere of Earth has no such element, only non-combustible nitrogen. If it did, it would have long ago experienced the apocalypse so mentioned. But the Earth’s history has experienced such similar catastrophic events in the past, so it’s conceivable it will happen again. Everything seems to occur in cycles.
  • Les Femmes de Chambre on April 12, 2011

    A fat, skinny, obese, sloppy, drenched, lesbian cum-fest, devoid of only a few cocks to finish the lot. My only complaint: too damn much French, language that is.
  • A Work in Progress on April 12, 2011

    This is a great story depicting the interaction of one would be writer with one supposedly her subordinate who she looks to for inspiration.
  • I Can't Help That I'm A Slut (Part 2) on April 13, 2011

    If you like your sluts hot and their sex unending, then this is a story for you. It is a middle story of three (maybe more?) that end in cliffhangers, which is a little annoying—especially this one because there is no third one available at this time. But we live with what we get.
  • i on April 13, 2011

    I usually skip poetry because it is often unreadable, at least by me. I’m glad I didn’t skip this one although it didn’t read like a poem. Instead, it read as a sad testament to a lost love and life, well two perhaps.
  • New York and Chador on April 13, 2011

    Maybe it would mean something if I knew what a chador was, or the reference to the elephant, or...
  • Where's the Money? on April 14, 2011

    I just did a quick read of ‘WTM’ and wanted to post an equally quick review. There is a lot of information that I know nothing about, so I’ll need another read (maybe several) to get the real meat. I signed on to Face Book some months ago and still can’t understand how to use its basic operations, let alone all the special ones listed in this article. I signed on to it at my publisher’s recommendation, but my book (erotic e-book) isn’t due out until August so I hope to garner some understanding before then. I have several free stories on Smashwords that seem to be well received—well sometimes—and have enjoyed the reviews posted there. I do however; refuse to call something as short as four or five thousand words a book as Smashwords does. But to each his/her own.
  • Pas de Deux on April 18, 2011

    Imagine my surprise when two reviews came in together for my operation essays so long after the last one. That quickly changed to trepidation when I recognized your name. I was certain I was about to receive a spitting cobra’s dose of venom for the one star reviews I had given two of your stories. I try to rate stories as I feel them. That may very from day to day depending on my mood. (I truly loved your story of the Parisian chambermaids Juicy coffee break. [The capital J is not a typo]) Also imagine the delight (dare I say shock) when I read your reviews. I thank you very much for your kind words and encouragement. It has been over six months since the operation now and, so far as I can tell at this juncture, I’m doing as well as could be expected considering my age. (Aches and pains aplenty.) Re-reading your review, I must at this point pass along my condolences for your losses from colon cancer. As I stated in the second missive, it was only luck that my doctor sent me off for screening. (Which I can’t recommend enough.) I had no symptoms. I cringe at your mention of my style. For the life of me, I can’t discern any style in my writing. Perhaps the word bland might come to mind. I try to put on the screen what pleases me and if it pleases or amuses others, then great. As to the reference to the pretty nurses, that was an honest judgment hampered by my weakened condition, the IV and the catheter I was impaled with. If I had a choice, I might have dallied longer just to enjoy the smiling faces, especially once the tubes were removed. And now the down loads—the two operation essays have three hundred sixty four. Rather paltry compared to the twenty-one thousand plus the other nineteen stories have garnered to date. Most of them are erotic in nature so that just shows what the reading public wants. I guess I’ll just have to keep pandering to it. And I accept your offer (threat?) to read every one of my stories to point out my typos. If there is a Divinity, then He or She surly knows I make a lot of them. I had one correspondent recently point out a typo in my Bio, but I told her I was leaving it in to prove I’m human. Okay this is supposed to be a review of you story ‘Pas de Deux.’ You undoubtedly know by now that I’m not well versed in French, so I have no idea what the title means. I read the story three times and got a little additional from it with each read. I can only hope that the coffee wasn’t too hot, but I assume it was. His fault I guess, for not paying attention to her return, but I suspect that the encounter was inevitable. Your style far surpasses mine, as does Shakespeare’s, whom I can’t read either. I wish you all the best with your work and I must get back to mine. I’m putting the most recent polish to a long novel that I started a few days after posting ‘Operation 2.’ (Is a writer ever ‘done’ with a story?) It spewed out of me for over two months at a rate of over two thousand words a day. Could it have been aftereffects from the morphine? I’ve never had such action before or since. Again, thank you and read more of my drivel if you like.
  • Eight Seconds Less on April 19, 2011

    War is hell. That goes back at least one hundred fifty years. Probably a lot more than that. Yet we never learn. Each generation has to learn it all over again.
  • A Case of Writer's Block on April 19, 2011

    I read it twice but got more out of the description than the story. Well, that's the way it goes.
  • Elvy's Heart on April 20, 2011

    I'm confused, but that's nothing new.
  • Quirky Little Gutter Rats on April 20, 2011
    (no rating)
    I'd like to rate this, but I don't understand it enough.
  • Therapy Session on April 20, 2011

    The switching from third person to first and back was jarring. One point it was in the same paragraph. I don't want to give away the ending but I wonder if 'she' was Elaine?
  • Sister-In-Law on April 21, 2011

    If Philadelphia is the city of brotherly love, then wherever these sisters live is easily the city of sisterly love—in the very best way. I can’t help wonder if the author is a trained masseuse, because he surely seems to know the way around a supple body. If I was to play devil’s advocate at all, it would be to point out some very minor head hopping and POV switching. Giving the sister/wife a name might have helped. Otherwise, this is one of the hottest stories I’ve read in a long time.
  • Renewal on April 21, 2011

    Several points in this story bug me, and I don’t mean the virus. I’m sure the day is coming when a hacker or rouge government will manage to kill the entire Internet system. To start with, such a rouge operation with a minimal satellite capability can launch a few hundred musket balls or ball bearings into the geo-synchronous orbit, but in the opposite direction that the usual satellites go, and all satellites in that orbit will be blacked out in a day. Next, how does the protagonist intend to survive in the mountains after the Government of the Unified Earth had destroyed all the animals? Did he stuff enough food into his pack to last seven years? In paragraph eight, he states that the droids worked exactly as he had designed. Was he a part of the mass wipeout of human life. And lastly, what does he expect to come out of the mountains to in seven years. Not a place in which I’d like to live.
  • A Subway Encounter on April 21, 2011

    Oh boy! What a lucky young man. That will be one subway ride he won't forget.
  • Hysteria on April 22, 2011

    Odd! Two stories. Same title--Hysteria. Two fictitious accounts of very real nineteenth century quack treatments of “Hysteria” in women. Stories of machines designed to do what a man should have been taught to do.
  • Hysteria on April 22, 2011

    Odd! Two stories. Same title. Two fictitious accounts of very real nineteenth century quack treatments of “Hysteria” in women. Stories of machines designed to do what a man should have been taught to do.
  • His Friend on April 23, 2011

    Oh man, oh man! And it’s only football season. Wait until basketball when the men can really dribble all over the court. But I have to ask, when did Jack get in there?
  • Taken in the Taxi (erotic menage) on April 23, 2011

    How dare those evil men treat her that way, giving her everything she wanted with promises of more?
  • A CANDLE IN HER HANDS on April 27, 2011

    It was short, so it is not surprising that it said nothing.
  • Neighbor on April 27, 2011

    Life goes on. Well, for some. But not for others.
  • Memoirs From The 82nd Floor and Descending on April 28, 2011

    Reminds me of the Gene Wilder movie about the girl in the red dress. I don't remember if he got her or not.
  • Magnum Tales ~ M is for Maybe on April 28, 2011

    It’s been a while since I’ve read an alphabet story from J. M. Hadley. Does that mean I might have missed one or two? Let’s see? M? Only thirteen to go. Can he keep the heat up to Z?
  • Return to Wildwood on April 29, 2011

    I’ve had this delightful saga of erotica tucked away in my ebook file for several months now, though I’m not sure just when or from where I purchased it. I’ve intended to take the time to read it every time I cross it and today I finally did so. I’m sorry I took so long to read it for it is an amazing story of submission (which I normally don’t care for) and fantasy (also a genre that I generally pass on) combined to form a hot tale of both. I will definitely encourage readers to sample it even if, like me, you might think you’d not care for it. It’ll prove you wrong.
  • Surprise on April 30, 2011

    A short, mildly erotic tale, that is a relief when the author stresses this story is only role playing.
  • The 23rd Of June on April 30, 2011

    A rather sweet story but very muddled by the experimental formatting. Hard to follow, forcing me to re-read several sentences to see who was talking.
  • Ablaze on May 01, 2011

    Not much of a retelling of Rumplestiltskin.
  • Bloodfetish - Erotic Stories & Poetry on May 01, 2011

    Normally not my choice of reading material, this pulled me in and held me till it chose to liberate me. I can only say I’m glad I have free will to refrain from reading more—for a while. But damn, I do have to say it’s well written. Also, I liked the picture even though the model is probably over a hundred by now.
  • New Windows on May 02, 2011

    In a flash it's funny. And horribly close to the truth.
  • Selena Misbehaves on May 03, 2011

    Fairly standard BDSM story, well written but lacking certain ménage elements with the new master being drawn in. Can two masters dominate one sub? Perhaps more is to come.
  • Face Fear: Russel's a Glory Seeker on May 04, 2011

    Kohala is the oldest mountain on the Big Island and long dead; therefore, a volcano didn’t burn the short-lived survivor of this crash. In the years I’ve lived here in Hawaii, there have been several such crashes of tour chopper and fixed wing aircraft, so the story is quite plausible. It is interesting and well written for such a short piece of fiction.
  • Taken by Two Lovers (menage a trois) on May 05, 2011

    Well, holy cow guys! I hope you at least give her some of the profits.
  • From Bitter to Sweet on May 06, 2011

    Delightful! Who ever thought chocolate could be such a delicious form of revenge? But, oh girls, the calories. Now I must read it again, like a second bon-bon from the box, who can resist.
  • Working Away on May 06, 2011

    This incredibly delicious story reinforces what I’ve said and written before; women can write much better erotica than men could ever hope to achieve. The subtle nuances of this story forced me to read it twice to be sure I understood the final sentence. It’s there.
  • 3 Powers: 3 Short Works on May 08, 2011

    Three strange but very interesting stories to read. Clearly showing a very creative mind at work and well written as well. Delightful.
  • Riley's Mistake on May 08, 2011

    This story was too short to sort out all the complex issues involved, thus it came to an unsatisfactory ending.
  • Lost Cherry: Missionary Position Part One on May 10, 2011

    This story has a little ‘Nineteen-eighty-four,’ blended in with ‘A Brave New World.’ Though the sex is way beyond either. I did find that the idea of the students spending years(?) studying sex and remaining virginal a bit of a stretch. Maybe the upcoming three stories will clarify that.
  • Getting Down to Business: Missionary Position Part Two on May 10, 2011

    Well our girl on a mission is doing her best to spread the word, not to mention the action. The academy has taught her well, but there is more to come, I mean cum.
  • Graded on a Curve: Missionary Position Part Three on May 10, 2011

    The tale is degenerating into a pubescent boy’s wet dream. But a damn hot one to say the least.
  • Woman Seeks Same: Missionary Position Part Four on May 10, 2011

    Well, I finished reading them (all four), and I’m left with one serious nagging question. If the machines had reduced human sex to plug-in computer games, then how did the human race continue without physical interaction? And why would people marry as Milani encountered the man and wife in the hotel?
  • The Latex Dress on May 10, 2011

    Oh, just think of those poor South American trees, drained of their sap to make those exquisite garments. Does it seem worth it? I like to think so.
  • Rain Whore on May 11, 2011

    And here I thought she’d just catch pneumonia, or a bad cold at least. Fun read.
  • Slipstream on May 11, 2011

    Though not my usual preference in reading material, I found this extremely touching. How does anyone explain such a relationship?
  • Dare: The Boss on May 12, 2011

    Oh the trouble a little alcohol can get some one into—or five some ones. This is the first of the five I’ve read. I hope the other four are just as hot.
  • Dare: Stripper (an erotic short story) on May 12, 2011

    Okay, that’s two. Three hot and sexy stories to go.
  • Dare: Threesome on May 12, 2011

    I can’t help wonder how the five girls will relate all their stories at the shower. That should be one mind blowing party.
  • Dare: The Waiter (erotica) on May 12, 2011

    This was listed as the fifth story but should have been first. They all had a week to carry out their assigned fantasies, but this gal managed in less that an hour. And doubled the dare. Double Dutch Dare! Now that’s one hot story.
  • Biker (erotica) on May 12, 2011

    This was the last in the string of five stories. Last for me to read, that is. But I see it really didn’t matter, they weren’t in any sequence. Just five loosely related stories. Five dares to be done in a week before the bridal shower of one of them. I’m disappointed that there doesn’t seem to be a wrap-up of the tales. Maybe if we, the readers, give the author a little encouragement, she’ll give us that tally. We can only hope.
  • Warhorse and Donkey on May 13, 2011

    Tora, you have written a very insightful short story. I see a wonderful future for you. Mahalo for sharing it with us.
  • Hot Tales: 11-More Sex on the Beach on May 13, 2011

    I’ve only read a couple of these stories, but already they seem to repeat too much. I guess there is only so much people can take of sand, sex, suds and swapping.
  • Hot Tales: 8-Guess Who is Coming for Dinner? on May 13, 2011

    Number eight! At least there wasn’t any sand in this one, though the action at and in the pool was damn hot. I wonder what the author will be giving the reader by number sixty-nine?
  • Sometime on May 14, 2011

    What a touching and delightful story. But, my god, how old would Sarah and Walter be by then?
  • The Duel on May 14, 2011

    Ah, if only Hamilton and Burr had been so inventive, early American politics might have taken a different course. I’m sure they could have found a suitable arena for their duel.
  • Edible Art and Other Flash Fiction on May 15, 2011

    Nice, in a flash.
  • The Attic on May 15, 2011

    Maybe I should wait and let someone else rate this collection. This genre is not my usual reading interest. I read it because it was short and free. Each of the stories had its own effect. Some I thought were too short and unexplained. Others I simply didn’t understand at all.
  • All in a Days Work on May 15, 2011

    A nice, hot, but all too predictable fantasy—marred by several punctuation errors.
  • Faery Tail on May 15, 2011

    I could only stomach about half of this filth before I had to quit. It is boring, disgusting and just plain stupid.
  • Dead Man Talking on May 16, 2011

    I opened this story only because of the confusion about the title, which was it—Nab or Man? Now I see it’s been reposted as Man. Then I saw the formatting. Very strange. I skimmed some and discovered that it is like that throughout. Too confusing to bother with. Sorry Sean, your style is just too odd.
  • Jonah: Texas Ranger on May 16, 2011

    Cute. But it would have been better if the author hadn't given away the "twist" in the description.
  • Touched on May 16, 2011

    Okay, it was labeled as erotica and erotica is what we got—more or less. Actually less. What we got more of was bad syntax, poor grammar and fragmented sentences. Some of it is so bad that one has to wonder if English is the author’s first language.
  • Overheated on May 16, 2011

    Not bad for a quickie.
  • The Cliff on May 16, 2011

    All I wanted was a quick read to kill some time before Jeopardy came on, not a cliffhanger—literally.
  • A Dom's Gift on May 16, 2011

    Very strange treatment. Don’t know if I’d recommend it.
  • The Massage Therapist on May 17, 2011

    Oh, the talents of those sweet oriental girls.
  • It Lives In Dark Places on May 17, 2011

    A far cry from the erotica I normally read, but a grisly change of pace to be sure. Intriguing story, intensely told.
  • Lenny Smiles on May 17, 2011

    I need to start with the formatting. In PDF and RTF, the words were scattered all over the screen, which made reading the story difficult. HTML and JAVASCRIPT didn’t have that problem. Now to the story. Nicely written though ending with a rather typically clichéd finish. I wonder if we are supposed to think that Casey let Lenny hit the last pitch. If it was a fastball it was unlikely Lenny could have been expected to connect with it. Nice that he came out the hero, though.
  • Accidental Alien Anal on May 17, 2011

    I don’t know if I want to rate this story with a single star or five. The writing was so bad that it was funny, which may have been the author’s intent. The grammar was shoddy as was the overall composition. I’ll just keep the image of her ass sticking high in the air in mind and give it a three.
  • Night Watchman on May 17, 2011

    Well written but rather gruesome.
  • It Started With a Joke on May 17, 2011

    Hot times on the cul-de-sac, or what an eager couple can find across the way.
  • Melissa's Research on May 18, 2011

    Ah, if only reality were like that.
  • Licorice Whipped: Raunchy Tales on May 18, 2011

    A hot foursome to while away an hour or so. You can’t beat it.
  • The Flirt on May 18, 2011

    Worth a chuckle—maybe even a guffaw. Really cute.
  • Drowning on May 18, 2011

    I could have used an English to American dictionary while reading these enchanting stories. Though the lack of it didn’t dispel the delight from reading them. The heartstring-tugging end of ‘Our Little Secret,’ didn’t suffer from the lack. What an amazing narrative.
  • Conquered People on May 18, 2011

    What started out as a reasonable story disintegrated into a confusing one with no discernable ending.
  • The Talisman on May 19, 2011

    Silly story. Told in a very inept manner.
  • Otter Bend Lake on May 19, 2011

    I started out thinking I wasn't going to like this story, but it grew on me. Good writing.
  • The Last Birdsong on May 19, 2011

    What a delightful, heart-rending story. Thank you for sharing it.
  • Li'l Red in the Hood on May 19, 2011

    Quite funny. Loved it.
  • Dying With My Children on May 19, 2011

    As least there was love for one.
  • Unt on May 21, 2011

    Amazing detail from a gal on her first coon hunt. And probably her last. Very well written.
  • Playback on May 21, 2011

    Awkward to read. But some of the message got through. I think. Certainly a different format.
  • Blow for Blow on May 21, 2011

    This was a lot less than the previous Heidi story, or should I say Li’l Red? Nowhere near the humor as well. But it gives me a chance to thank you for the reviews and let you know that I am putting the finishing touches to a follow-up story to the strip-poker tale. I’m getting a little long winded in it, over eleven thousand words so far and not quite done. I also note that the only two reviews you have given were two of mine. I could get a swelled head at that rate. But there are many other respectable word slingers out there, so read on.
  • The Ommm Nest, Volume 1: Strokes of Love on May 22, 2011

    Far too wordy. The repetition became annoying very quickly. But the story reminds me of the doctors who treated female patients for ‘Hysteria’ in the eighteen hundreds with manual stimulation of a similar nature. I do have to say, the man has the touch.
  • Day on May 22, 2011

    Interesting, and certainly something different. It was a good quick read and well worth the few minutes it took to complete. I do wonder how the author managed to learn about the African girl’s life in spite of the class that was supposed to provide the information.
  • Choice on May 22, 2011

    Interesting detail. Though I had to wonder who the foe was.
  • A Balmy Evening Footjob on May 23, 2011

    Sometime I get my money’s worth, sometime I don’t. With this story, ninety-nine cents was wasted. The grammatical errors were too numerous to count, and it was a very short piece.
  • Sapphires: Lesbian Vignettes on May 23, 2011

    Three tantalizing tales of the softer sex, proving how soft and sometimes hard they can be. Especially when it comes to tongues hard in the right places. Strange thing though, there is a paragraph repeated near the end of the last story. I guess it was hot enough to be said again. Loved the picture.
  • The Old Lady That Tends the Graveyard. on May 23, 2011

    Delightful little story.
  • A Bear Story on May 23, 2011

    It was my laugh for the day.
  • Quilt of Seas on May 23, 2011

    Such a sad and disheartening story. Flawlessly written.
  • Ayudenos on May 23, 2011

    I hope it's only fiction.
  • Ass Play - On Me! on May 23, 2011

    Ah, I can only dream of such action.
  • Why Waste English Setters on Dog Shows? on May 24, 2011

    Not at all what I expected, but a fun read to be sure. Perfectly constructed.
  • My First Threesome on May 24, 2011

    These three are going to die of dehydration from all the juice they lost. One very hot read!
  • Right Here Waiting For You on May 24, 2011

    Short and dull. But at least it was free.
  • Peanuts on May 24, 2011

    Sometimes funny, sometimes confusing—no, make that often confusing. But certainly something different.
  • Harpy on May 24, 2011
    (no rating)
    What?
  • Riley's Redemption on May 24, 2011

    The category was labeled erotica-lesbian erotica, and there was none. But the author clearly stated that in the description. She also states that it is up to the readers’ reaction to determine if she will continue with the story of Riley and Ava. If my single vote counts, then I say, please continue. It’s a story that deserves to be finished, though the episode I just read hints that their love will persevere.
  • Flaws on May 24, 2011

    I can count as two of my flaws that I took the time to read this and then worse, try to make any sense of it.
  • Slum Life on May 24, 2011

    I have a vague idea what this is supposed to be, but then again, I’m not sure.
  • The Swing on May 25, 2011

    Studying the painting and envisioning the photographs, I can’t help but wonder about the painter and the days or weeks it must have taken to paint the portrait versus the milliseconds the camera took to capture the images described in the story. Could he—the painter—have partaken of the model as the photographer did? Could anyone blame him? Excellent writing! Delightful imagery.
  • Friends and Lovers on May 26, 2011

    More an outline for a much longer story than a story in itself.
  • The Gift on May 26, 2011

    A little difficult to read, the way it jumps around. But well worth the effort.
  • Mother Of The Groom on May 26, 2011

    Very hot, very well written tale. Love the way both points of view were presented.
  • Welcome to the Fish Tank: An Erotic Fairy Tale on May 27, 2011

    How do I describe this fish tail-er tale? Different, certaintly. Erotic, yeah, that too. A dream? Perhaps.
  • The Night Before Haloween on May 28, 2011

    Oh, gee wiz, how spookie--not!
  • Serving Under the Spotlight on May 29, 2011

    I can't help but wonder how long it will be before the 'friends' forget to tell her which restaurant they'll be going to.
  • Stealing From Death on May 29, 2011

    A pleasant short read of a rather unpleasant subject.
  • A Right Stitch Up on May 29, 2011

    I don’t have a cleaning person under my feet so how am I to know where some of my ideas come from. The Muse works in mysterious ways—sometimes.
  • 1s Upon A Time on May 29, 2011

    A lot of supposition here, and the amazing thing is, it seems to make sense.
  • A Fish Tale on May 29, 2011

    And apparently the lighthouse will keep its secret.
  • To Be Frank on May 29, 2011

    To be frank, it was obvious by the third paragraph.
  • Turned Out on May 29, 2011

    It read like a soap opera, which is not necessarily a bad thing.
  • The Spirit of the Dunes on May 29, 2011

    She sounds like a flower child, a generation past due.
  • The Letter on May 30, 2011

    Nothing like a special deliverly from a hot male man. Good short story.
  • Emmit on May 30, 2011

    A story so good I gave it a second read to pick up the details I missed the first time through. I suggest others do the same.
  • Teaching Nina on May 30, 2011

    Such an intense, yet gross fantasy. Worth the price.
  • The Dryad's Call on May 30, 2011

    Oh the Gods smiled on her and she was at last satisfied.
  • Emily's Fantasies on May 30, 2011

    Spurted, squirted and converted. This author has a very dirty mind, or should we say lascivious libido.
  • Burn In on May 30, 2011

    A truly horrible tale. One that could give a person nightmares.
  • Listening In on May 30, 2011

    Mother dear knows best.
  • A Passion Spent on May 31, 2011

    Well why shouldn’t she be turned on while looking at a cock that is truly hung like a horse? Very well written short piece of hot erotica.
  • Thanking the Receptionist on May 31, 2011

    It must be nice, having so much money and influence that you can get anybody to do what you want, just the way you want it. And boy, does she want it!
  • Charlotte of Little Dean on May 31, 2011

    Too short, too condensed and too simplistic.
  • Friends Through & Through on May 31, 2011

    A chance encounter, an accidental exposure and the inevitable yielding to the basic animalistic urges. Sooner or later it had to happen. But made all the funnier by certain typos such as the female protagonist suddenly growing a penis.
  • Benjamin and Mariah on June 01, 2011

    A sweet little fable.
  • Barefoot in the Dunes on June 01, 2011

    Very sweet.
  • Courage To Believe on June 02, 2011

    Another Mary, though not Mary Poppins, appears in time to set a family right. Lovely tale of a woman who needs to worry about dehydration, from the way she tears up all the time. Nice chick-lit love story with plenty of sex (beyond a point), but not a single four letter ‘C’ word to be found.
  • A Fork in the Road on June 03, 2011

    A short tale of things that go thump in the night.
  • Mariner's Cove (Contemporary Beach Romance) on June 03, 2011

    A well-written story of a young widow on a two-week respite encountering a young lawyer, both with children in tow, which changes each of their lives. Love blossoms under the most unusual of circumstances.
  • Faces of Aloha on June 03, 2011

    Aloha exists in some. Not it others. What else can I say?
  • Birthday Surprise on June 04, 2011

    Mildly erotic.
  • A Woman's Lust 1: The Harbour on June 04, 2011

    Not bad. Not bad.
  • And Holly Makes Three on June 04, 2011

    Very well written and incredibly hot story. It’s hard to imagine a better birthday present to get him off and send him off.
  • Toaster on June 04, 2011

    Si, I like story. Make sense? No. But I like anyway.
  • Why I am so Unlucky? on June 05, 2011

    I very seldom read poetry. This is a good example of why.
  • Dementia on June 05, 2011

    The bad thing: I’m old enough to be suffering from the same thing. The good thing: I don’t have a wife hovering nearby to remind me.
  • Tomato on June 05, 2011

    But isn't the customer always right? Cute story.
  • The Field Recordings Of Henry Gowen (1. The Flight To Detroit) on June 05, 2011

    So? Does that really count for the mile high club? I wonder.
  • Getting Down To Business (Rapid Release Stories) on June 05, 2011

    As she said, “It’s a pleasure doing business.”
  • Room Service (Rapid Release Stories) on June 05, 2011

    Such a stroke of luck. Several strokes really.
  • Lisa Gets Cured on June 05, 2011

    Oh the wonders of modern medicine! The doctor is so talented.
  • Dance With Me on June 05, 2011

    Lessons learned right.
  • Friends With Benefits on June 06, 2011

    So when does the friends part come in?
  • Madness and the Modern Home on June 06, 2011

    Nelson, great story and I really enjoyed it. Why is it women have to have everything their way? Oddly, in a novel I’ve written and have yet to finish polishing, an old wood-burning kitchen stove figures prominently. I hope to find a publisher for it some day. I also must confess, I’ve never played pinochle but I remember my parents playing many eons ago when I was a kid. I only selected that card game to fit into the story that led up to ‘Pinochle or Strip Poker?’ After online research. You might enjoy it too. ‘Pinochle Anyone?’ Thanks for the review, by the way.
  • Lustful Desires on June 06, 2011

    Had I read the tag, I wouldn't have downloaded.
  • Time, an Essay on June 07, 2011

    Everything promised and a whole lot more. Peace.
  • Unwrapped (an Erotic Short Story) on June 07, 2011

    A good erotic story, somewhat marred by grammatical errors and tense shifts. Another re-read and polish seems to be in order.
  • Singing Fool of Afghanistan on June 07, 2011

    So a guy goes a little loony after being shot. Who wouldn't?
  • Tis the Season on June 08, 2011

    I was wondering if they had an oven big enough for the main course, but...well I shouldn't say any more. Cute but ghoulish. Isn't that the point?
  • Turkey Trot on June 08, 2011

    Well Mary, welcome to Smashwords. You found spelling errors where I found many switches in person, first person, third person and back. I also became annoyed with the repetition of the dance and sweater, etc. But like you said, it was free.
  • Dalston Junction on June 08, 2011

    A very well written story that will surprise the reader in the end. Couldn’t have foreseen it coming.
  • Caligulove- A Short Story on June 08, 2011

    A story very hard to follow in the beginning. It’s not until mid way that the relationships begin to jell. Very graphic violence. Not for everyone.
  • A Fine Line (Contemporary Beach Romance) on June 09, 2011

    Looking over the five reviews already given to this novella, I notice two things. First, all the reviewers are women. Does that make the story chick-lit? I guess so. Second, they all gave the book five stars. Do I dare break the string? The love, hate fine line alluded to in the title carries through out the work and provides the sparing that goes on between the two protagonists. I can’t say more without giving away some of the plot, so I won’t. It was a good read overall, well worth its sixth five star rating.
  • Within the seams on June 09, 2011

    I worry about this author.
  • Temptation on June 09, 2011

    And I thought she was just a dog.
  • poems from within on June 09, 2011
    (no rating)
    Heather, you requested more feedback so I will endeavor to do so. First let me say that I do like certain aspects of your writing. It is clear and lucid. You have not fallen into the trap that many young writers do of writing as if they were tweeting or what ever that damnable stuff is that so many do. I’m an old fuddy-duddy I know, but I have a lot of respect for the English language and would like others to do likewise. Language must change if it is to grow and reach new heights, not sag into a quagmire of sludge. My reference to worrying about you has to do with the dark and sinister tone of the stories, ‘Within the Seams,’ and ‘Lustful Desires.’ You of course, have every right to use whatever style or genre you choose and I hope you could become the next E. A. Poe. Now I must reverse myself here, for I just read the Ebook description of your latest posting, ‘Poems From Within.’ You must realize that the description is the first exposure the reader has of you and your work. This one is riddled with punctuation and spelling errors. Run everything that you write through spell check to get it right before posting. You will seem much more professional that way. Please rework it and repost it so I will know you will take my advice to heart. Do not expect reviewers to only heap praise on your work. It is a way for you to learn and improve so long as they are honest. Not all are, sorry to say. Writers have to develop a thick skin to ward off the slings and arrows…well, you know the rest. I want to say that I wish you the best with your writing and keep at it. Practice is the only way to improve. P S. I didn’t read any of, ‘Poems From Within,’ because poetry is not my thing as a rule, (Ogden Nash aside.) Again good luck and keep at it.
  • Lunch Time Surprise on June 10, 2011

    How many twists can one ending have? I’d love to say more but I can’t without giving something away.
  • Reflections on June 10, 2011

    Idyllic little respite in a very picturesque place.
  • Elevator on June 10, 2011

    I can definitely see the influence of the Twilight Zone here.
  • For Mother: A Short Story Collection of Two on June 10, 2011

    Well written but very sad stories. The first without a beginning, the second without an end.
  • Woman, First on June 11, 2011

    Worth a quick chuckle.
  • Awash on June 12, 2011

    I'll agree with the other reviewers that this is a well written short piece, but I can't help wondering at the end.
  • Watch Me on June 13, 2011

    With neighbors like that, who needs a strip club?
  • Photo Shoot on June 13, 2011

    Oh yes. The modeling contract? Did they forget to sign it? Well, maybe later. I’m sure they can get it all worked out.
  • Half A Man on June 15, 2011

    Like the man, half of this story seems to be missing. As a result, it doesn’t make sense.
  • Oliver's Painting on June 15, 2011

    I’m not sure about this other than to say it could have used a closer edit. I’ve seen worse but I’ve seen better.
  • Not Really Galileo on June 20, 2011

    Ah, but did they or did they not see something?
  • M.W. on June 21, 2011

    How could something so short get so boring so quickly?
  • The Idea Man on June 21, 2011

    I can easily imagine the neat man in the black suit, or some similar attire, visiting Jules Verne in the eighteen hundreds or Gene Roddenberry more recently.
  • 03:08 on June 23, 2011

    Not much.
  • Cookie's Reunion on June 24, 2011

    For some there’s no end to the reunion. But why should there be?
  • So and Sew on June 24, 2011

    The so and so got hemmed in good.
  • Native Lust on June 25, 2011

    A well written but terrifying tale that one can only hope never happens to any tribe that we know. Our worst enemies? Well, maybe.
  • Mirror on June 26, 2011

    This author/cartoonist is striving for a new format. I wish him well but regret that I am not a fan.
  • The Curious Case of A. Fly, Esquire on June 26, 2011

    Are you sure this is the way it really happened? Oh well, I guess the judge will straighten it all out. But then you know the legal system.
  • The Horn on June 26, 2011

    Somehow I thought there'd be more to this than there was.
  • Decision LZ1527 on June 26, 2011

    Very funny. An amalgam of the starship Enterprise and Herman’s Head. I’d love to imagine the utter chaos of a sexual encounter between the Chris Murray and the Michelle Walker. Systems overload for sure.
  • The Tale of the Landlady's Mirror on June 26, 2011

    Very elegantly written. But a very confusing ending. What was supposed to have happened?
  • Spanking Clarice on June 26, 2011

    Ah, the delights of religion well applied.
  • Small Graces on June 30, 2011

    Not bad, but leaving the reader wanting a whole lot more.
  • Hot Air Balloon, an erotic fantasy on July 02, 2011

    Okay for a short short of hot air.
  • Class Ass on July 03, 2011

    A quad of hot, sexy stories, marred slightly by the notion of a woman so wantonly screwing the deliveryman only two weeks after the death of her husband. Put that aside, and you’ll be sure to enjoy the heated romps.
  • Sex Zombies on July 04, 2011

    Normally when I see the word ‘zombie,’ I will spin the wheel on the mouse to continue on down the list of works available on Smashwords, but the name S. Wolf was enough to make me pause. I know his writing well enough to expect more than the usual stuff within the zombie genre. I wasn’t disappointed, for he delivered his usual quality of work, with plenty of tongue-in-cheek banter. And you thought zombies wanted to eat you brains? Think lower with this delightful tale. Read it and see if you don’t agree.
  • On Bended Knees on July 05, 2011

    A shameful tease.
  • Lick Me! on July 06, 2011

    Let me guess. No, on second thought let the next reader guess.
  • Goin' Down on July 06, 2011

    I guess we never tire of the sex in the elevator stories.
  • Monday Blues on July 06, 2011

    I had to read it a second time to understand what the description meant. Only the young could experience that.
  • Gotcha! on July 07, 2011
    (no rating)
    I'm flagging this so I can find it later. But now I must leave.
  • Gotcha! on July 08, 2011

    I read this yesterday when I didn’t have time to write a review. At that time there was only Debra’s single star review stating simply that she didn’t like it at all. Judging from that, I expected to dislike it as well, but read it anyway. I further had dread when I saw the BDSM tag among others. I generally despise BDSM stories. Once reading it, I have doubts that the tag is proper, for it is far from the typical story of that genre. It is certainly a dark tale, one of domination at gunpoint. The writing was certainly different. The style is unlike any I’ve seen before and I found it intriguing. I must point out questions I have about the story’s location. There is reference to ice flows breaking audibly, yet the area seems hot and muggy. Strange. I do wish the author had given some inkling as to the location of the story and the factious tribes mentioned in the brief flashback. This review should have been posted before the one by James, so it is a little out of sync with his five start rating. I often get a little suspicious when a story gets such a glowing report from a reviewer who seems to have arrived at Smashwords in tandem with the story he or she is reviewing. But stranger occurrences do happen. I agree with James as to the title and artwork matching. More so after reading the story. (Ouch!) The story is obviously an ad for the book ‘Kikaffir.’ I’m sorry to say I will not be reading it, having been frightened off by the tag at the end.
  • Yellow on July 16, 2011

    With the style that this young lady displays, it is obvious that she has a future as a poet.
  • All Day, All Night Marianne on July 16, 2011

    Too bad Cyrano didn’t get proper billing.
  • The Little Death on July 18, 2011

    Jocelyn, welcome to Smashwords. Your short story was sweet and well written. I encourage you to continue.
  • Proper Motivation: A Fish Story on July 18, 2011

    Oh God, yes!
  • From the Heart on July 18, 2011

    Well, maybe, just maybe...
  • A Chicken in the Outhouse on July 18, 2011

    Only a grandpa could match the punishment with the crime.
  • Plights Of A Patriarch on July 18, 2011

    Ouch!
  • Sunrise In The Bedroom Window on July 18, 2011

    At least there was reconciliation.
  • Speak Easy, Join Your Community Theatre on July 18, 2011

    I'm sure I could't manage any of it. But at least I can "talk" to my computer.
  • Come This Way on July 19, 2011

    Oh that Heidi, she sure knows the way to a man’s hard, ah, I mean heart.
  • Life Lessons from a Tree on July 19, 2011

    This got boring very quickly. But I finished reading it despite that. Pretty pictures though. Three stars for the pictures.
  • Charity Begins at Home on July 19, 2011

    It's only fiction, it's only fiction. Keep telling yourself that. But man! What fiction.
  • The last stroll on July 19, 2011

    The lettering was so small that it was a strain to read.
  • Naughty Mommy's Fantasy Collection: Co-Workers on July 21, 2011

    The kind of substance every man would love to have. Think he’ll ever tire of it? Good read until it hit a minor speed bump. ‘Throes’ not ‘throws.’ But then I’ve made that same mistake.
  • On Bended Knees - Vol. 2 on July 21, 2011

    It ends with "The End," but is it really? Somehow I think not.
  • Arnold Gets an Education on July 21, 2011
    (no rating)
    Seems vaguely familiar.
  • Spying on Linda on July 22, 2011

    So which will win out: jealousy or voyeurism?
  • Be Unique on July 22, 2011

    There is a difference between being unique and being foolish or just plain annoying. Yelling behind old people can give them heart attacks. I know, I'm an old man. Loud noises make me jump and I'm sure that isn't unique.
  • The Prude and the Spy on July 22, 2011

    I read about a third and that was all I could stand. The author used two boring sentences to describe the girl's first sexual experience. How dull.
  • My Dearest Isabella on July 22, 2011

    Well, that was different. Not sure how I feel about it though.
  • Janice on July 22, 2011

    What a delightful tale of erotica. I can easily see these two as lifelong soul mates. And she might want to share ‘the big guy,’ who knows?
  • Spacer Tales: The Alien Monks on July 23, 2011

    Interesting story, a little hard to follow with so many references to ‘alien’ life but amusing anyway.
  • Spacer Tales: The Explorer on July 23, 2011

    Nothing like a good yarn to get the audience engrossed.
  • Beemer Rescue on July 23, 2011

    Now in reality, the tow operator would have been a hundred pounds over weight and had butt crack to match her cleavage.
  • The Donor on July 24, 2011

    Delightful story. But I hope she realizes that their child will, by all odds, favor her ancestry over his. But maybe if they keep having babies she might get what she wants—who knows.
  • In the Dark on July 24, 2011

    Short and hot. And definitely different.
  • Happy Village Lodge (Three short stories in one) on July 26, 2011

    I’ve read two of these before but didn’t mind reading them again. And the new one, the golf story, was just great. Gives new meaning to hole in one. Definitely par for the course. Readers! Grab this while it’s free. You won’t regret it.
  • My Introducion To Bigotry And Discrimination on July 27, 2011

    Alas Andy, it may be a long wait.
  • How Long Is A Piece Of String? on July 28, 2011

    Wonderful piece of exposition here Graham. So good to see some clear thinking on this subject.
  • Santa's Daughter on Aug. 18, 2011

    What a sweet story to bring the feeling of Christmas here in the middle of the summer.
  • Magnum Tales ~ Y is for Yes on Aug. 18, 2011

    Well, we almost made it to Z. Now there's nothing left but a long boring marriage. Right? Huh?
  • Gina's Secret: I know what I want on Aug. 19, 2011

    Gina has grown from a little girl into a badass big girl. Stay out of her way if you can't give her what she wants.
  • Nikki and her Teacher on Aug. 19, 2011

    Terrific job Nikki. Solid story with just enough raw sex to be hot but not so much as to be porn. I loved it.
  • Long Arm of the Law on Aug. 19, 2011

    All of that and no Miranda rights. Do you believe it?
  • A Rainy Day on Aug. 25, 2011

    Who minds a little bad weather when indoor games like these are 'handy.'
  • A Special 24 Hours on Aug. 27, 2011

    Unlike Jessica, I managed to read all of this bit of junk, though it wasn’t easy. It read as if written by a teenage—a young teenager. I can say nothing more.
  • Parchment Of Passion: Helaine's Diary on Aug. 27, 2011

    Yuk! This reads like a poor translation from a foreign language.
  • Switch: an erotic short story on Sep. 02, 2011

    What an incredibly hot and delightful story. I usually don’t care much for BDSM stories, in spite of the fact that I’ve written a few, but this story had just the right combination of mastery and yielding. The reader can easily imagine the welts administered to Amy’s ass, back, and the rest of her body. But I must admit that the sole reason to read and rate this story was a way of thanking the author for his rating of four of my stories today. To show that the author is truly into BDSM, an obvious glutton for punishment, I must point out that Nathan has read, or at least, reviewed twenty-five or twenty-six stories today alone. I have been neglecting Smashwords of late, buried in my own writing. (Fourteen days and thirty-six thousand words into a new novel.) And now must get back to it. Happy reading everyone.
  • Girl's Night In on Oct. 01, 2011

    A delightful story, written in prose edging upon poetry. One thinks of ships passing in the night, except it’s daytime and they can see each other. How enchanting. The best I’ve read here in a long time.
  • Collar and Bone: a Split-Self side story on Oct. 02, 2011

    A well written, but quite confusing story. (The cross-gendered name didn’t help.) Things were made all the more puzzling when no attempt was made to explain the relationship among the characters. By the end, it became obvious that this was only a tease for a longer work. Though listed as erotic, it simply wasn’t.
  • Amulet 2 on Oct. 19, 2011

    In the author's note at the beginning of this book, he suggests that the reader read 'Amulet' due to the continuing nature of the story line. Having read 'Amulet' over a year ago, I can add a strong second to that idea. After a year I had forgotten many of the story lines and plots and know that it would have helped had I not waited so long before reading 'Amulet 2'. The reader must keep an open mind and a good recall to get through this delightfully intriguing book.
  • Not Quite Casper: an Aether Vitalis Short Story on Oct. 20, 2011

    A very well written and quite amusing little story. Though I don't believe in the afterlife, I loved the fictional concept.
  • Teasing the Wildcat by Mina Carter & Bethany J. Barnes on Oct. 21, 2011

    Not bad, not bad at all.
  • The Gardener on Oct. 23, 2011

    Strange syntax this writer has. Yoda writing porn like.
  • The Scientist on Oct. 23, 2011

    This writer's style grows tiresome very quickly.
  • The Hardware Store on Oct. 23, 2011

    Silly. (Black and white shirt turned green?)
  • Stepsister Campout on Oct. 25, 2011

    Danny and Jessie, at each other’s throats as only siblings can do. But will two weeks on a family camping trip give them a new prospective on life as stepsiblings? One heated, well written story that seems to have the potential for more to come.
  • I Need More on Oct. 26, 2011

    We should feel sorry for her, and I guess we do.
  • A For Effort on Oct. 28, 2011

    It’s been a long time since I’ve seen anything on Smashwords by Francis Porretto, or maybe I wasn’t looking hard enough. Loved this short, sweet and somewhat confusing story. (Did she or did she not have a real problem?) I tried to backtrack to his earlier stories but ran into a strange glitch when trying to recover the Priestess story. Maybe it’s just something in my computer from the massive crash I had three weeks ago. Anyway, great short.
  • My Sexy Stepdaughter on Oct. 29, 2011

    When the uncanny similarity between his stepdaughter’s looks, body, character, and desires match his late wife’s, can hot and handsome stepdad, Mike, keep his mind and hands off? Or will the attraction between them prove to be undeniable?
  • Halloween at Rusty's on Oct. 31, 2011

    Once past the confusing beginning, this was worth a quick chuckle at the end.
  • The Megan Diaries ---- Happy Birthday on Oct. 31, 2011

    What do you expect from a place that has a clown for a mascot?
  • Looking for Mr. Right on Oct. 31, 2011

    Mr. Right? Yeah, sure, right.
  • April's Fool on Nov. 01, 2011

    A bit skimpy on details, but we get the idea.
  • Daddy's Candy on Nov. 01, 2011

    The candy that won't make cavities, yet fills them.
  • The Happy-Unhappy Bridegroom: a ghost story on Nov. 05, 2011

    Written in typical British prose, suggesting that of the century before last, the story was well done, though I wondered at the gender of the narrator. But surely Lucille, being a proper lady, wouldn’t entertain a gentleman overnight.
  • Tit for Tat on Nov. 06, 2011

    The old five finger discount pays dividends—for the victim.
  • The ABCs of Erotica - A is for Anal on Nov. 06, 2011

    Okay for a tease. Needs more to be good.
  • One of Those Days on Nov. 08, 2011

    Some nightmares you just can't seem to shake.
  • Sexy Briefs: Knickers in a Twist on Nov. 11, 2011

    An eclectic group of stories, some bizarre, some rather mundane, but all do have one commonality—sex. They cover the range from the aforementioned mundane to way out paranormal. (I’ll leave it to the next reader to catalog them). One or two you won’t believe, and maybe another you don’t want to believe
  • Sexy Briefs: Tasty Little Tails on Nov. 11, 2011

    An eclectic group of stories, some bizarre, some rather mundane, but all do have one commonality—sex. They cover the range from the aforementioned mundane to way out paranormal. (I’ll leave it to the next reader to catalog them). One or two you won’t believe, and maybe another you don’t want to believe
  • Rose and the Alien on Nov. 11, 2011

    This story makes me wonder if the alien was from Krypton because he sure seemed to be a super-man.
  • Sold!!! on Nov. 12, 2011

    Sold!!! When I saw the title, I assumed it would be set in a bygone time where slavery was common. But no, it is in a time of automobiles, running water, and electricity. Yet no mention is made of the price paid for, or the legality of her servitude. Instead, we are subjected to poor grammar, lousy syntax, constant shifting of tense. (The first paragraph is past tense only to shift to present in the second. From then on, it is back and forth. Then, without as much as a passing of a baton, we are subjected to point of view changes difficult to follow. But the worse is coming. Right now I am nearing the three quarter point and I don’t think I can finish for I am so disgusted with the sickening plot that it is becoming too much to read. If the reader is to believe that this man loves her, he or she won’t by this point of the story. Appalling!
  • The Photoshoot on Nov. 13, 2011

    Should he add an extra tip on top of her modeling fee? Or perhaps she should compensate him for additional services rendered? Either way this was one hot modeling session.
  • Naughty Secretary on Nov. 13, 2011

    I have to agree with nearly every point made by the previous review, though I wonder why, if she liked it so well, she didn’t give it a few stars at the very least. I’ll make up for her obvious oversight by giving it five, though I should discount it a point for spelling
  • The Heist on Nov. 13, 2011

    The beginning and ending don't match.
  • Dahlia: a Club Coquette Tale on Nov. 15, 2011

    As a man, I don’t know a glittering black Bordello pleaser from a low-top Chuck Taylor, but I love when women discuss their clothing. Almost as much as I love watching them remove them. A very well written and seductively understated story.
  • The Misadventures of a Heroine #2 Self Discovery on Nov. 16, 2011

    Very, very strange.
  • Cherry Knocking on Nov. 21, 2011

    Short and hot. Just like her encounters.
  • Katie and Juliet on Nov. 24, 2011

    My, my. What a hot inspiring little tale.
  • Layover on Nov. 27, 2011

    Though well written, this story is missing something--like a story maybe?
  • The Black Bag Gang on Nov. 27, 2011

    Well, that was different. Delightfully so, I might add. A chuckle a day keeps the doctor away, or something like that.
  • My Christmas Candy Cane on Nov. 27, 2011

    I see we are to be deluged with Christmas stories now. This one wasn’t too bad. It would have been better if the author hadn’t slipped out of first person to third person for one paragraph near the middle. Also, it would be prudent to add a disclaimer that inserting a sugary confection into a vagina is an invitation for a yeast infection
  • Merry F*@king Christmas on Nov. 27, 2011

    Three fairly interesting stories, but I had to laugh at the last sentence of the third story. As it reads, it means that James belongs to another man.
  • Surf's Up on Nov. 30, 2011

    An interesting little snatch of juicy erotic writing. I know you said to only tell you if I found no errors, but the truth is, I did. Not enough to mar the story though.
  • The Tent on Dec. 02, 2011

    Wow! What a great piece of writing.
  • DT - Take him down on Dec. 02, 2011

    Leave it to Graham to give us the raw facts.
  • Benect's Mistress on Dec. 03, 2011

    Oh, the agony and ecstasy of a sex slave.
  • The Hen Party on Dec. 06, 2011

    A female version of a circle-jerk. Masturbation with an audience.
  • Believe! on Dec. 12, 2011

    To believe or not to believe, that is the question. Or is it the answer? When you're seven, it's a fine line.
  • Thou Shalt Not Cheat on Dec. 12, 2011

    Ah, yes. What will He do now, or he for that matter? To make one thing out of another is something. But to make something out of nothing? As Deb says, that is simply divine.
  • Small Mercies on Dec. 12, 2011

    This is one of those stories that I'd like to rate without writing a review.
  • Fake! on Dec. 24, 2011

    This article needs to be read along with its companion piece ‘Free’. Together they provide a compelling truth to the sad state of epublishing.
  • Take Me! on Dec. 25, 2011

    What a hot little present for a Christmas morning. My only complaint, like the un-named protagonist, is it seemed to finish before it/she was done. But as she said, the morning was yet to come.
  • Fire & Ice on Dec. 29, 2011

    The hot and cold, the Yin and Yang. So well described. So short that the reader wants more, a lot more.
  • How not to have sex on Dec. 31, 2011

    What a delightfully charming tale of woe. But it could have been much worse considering what an insect sting would do to such delicate exposed flesh. Recommended reading along with other stories from this author.
  • The Netsuke on Dec. 31, 2011

    Oh, the mysteries of the Orient. What a thrilling journey she has ahead of her.
  • A Lonely Ghost Girl on Jan. 01, 2012

    Short but nicely done.
  • My Girlfriend the Lap Dancer on Jan. 03, 2012

    Oh, the joy of finding your true love.
  • Brendella and the Overfriendly Enchantress on Jan. 04, 2012

    This story was moving along so nicely, so enticingly. Then it took a turn and vanished into left field.
  • A Ship in the Night on Jan. 05, 2012

    A very sweet story, (too short to be labeled a novella), is badly flawed by the lack of editing. So many misused words and tense changes make it annoying to read.
  • Vampire Lust: From the Devoured series on Jan. 06, 2012

    I don’t normally read vampire stories but this one was short, so I thought, ‘what the hell.’ I’m glad I read this short juicy tale of lust and seduction.
  • Brendella and the Trouble With Crystal Balls on Jan. 07, 2012

    Perhaps the fortune teller can tell fortunes, perhaps not. Either way, he is a wise man.
  • Kisses Sweeter Than Wine on Jan. 07, 2012

    Though a very short story, this was so loaded with grammatical and tense errors that it made for a very jarring read
  • The Ink Beneath on Jan. 08, 2012

    How sad.
  • Secret Lovers (#1) on Jan. 08, 2012

    Confusing.
  • Ribbon on Jan. 10, 2012

    Very poorly written. Needs a lot of polishing. Plot is rather illogical—who in their right mind would submit to such treatment?
  • Once A Woman on Jan. 10, 2012

    Nice.
  • To The Walls on Jan. 11, 2012

    The author tried but failed to make something erotic with this.
  • Rubbish on Jan. 11, 2012

    Strange. What? Man or woman? Who?
  • Cherries on Jan. 11, 2012

    Makes no sense what so ever.
  • Degrees of Love on Jan. 11, 2012

    Well, better than the others.
  • No Good Deed... on Jan. 12, 2012

    A little on the ‘sappy’ side but a sweet story just the same. Like so many self-edited stories, it needs another read through to clean out the errors. They are minor.
  • Cherries on Jan. 12, 2012
    (no rating)
    B. Handy. I want to take this roundabout way of thanking you for your review of my admittedly silly story ‘Pinochle Anyone?’ When I saw the notice from Smashwords so soon after my reviews of your works, I assumed it was going to be what I refer to as a ‘retaliation review’ as I often get after a less than stellar review of another author’s work. Such authors seem to want retribution in kind. But yours wasn’t, I was happy to see. Everything you said was a simple fact. As I’m sure you know, self-editing is a losing proposition. An author knows what he or she meant to say and the mind simply refuses to notice errors. And speaking of ‘losing,’ loose and lose are a few of my many bug-a-boos. I need to create a red flag in my mind to check when I’m tempted to use either. As to ‘letting them hatch,’ (meaning not picking up a hand until all cards were dealt.) It was a phrase I heard used often as a youngster while hanging around in my parents’ kitchen while they and their friends played cards. I didn’t realize that it must be a colloquial expression. I took a second read of ‘Cherries’ after seeing the word marijuana in the tags. I didn’t remember seeing the word in the story. Sorry to say, I still don’t get it. Maybe it’s because I didn’t do drugs in my youth. (And I’m far too old to start now.) Your story does somewhat recall Carroll’s ‘Through the looking Glass.’ I’ve read that he was on drugs while writing it. And getting back to editing—even working with professional editors as I have done with my published books—there is no guarantee of a clean MSS. After I received my print copy of my first novella from the publisher, I found errors, some of which were not mine, alas. No doubt you’ll find some in this missive in spite of my re-reading it several times. I read your bio, so I wish you all the best and encourage you to keep plugging. Ernie
  • Mimosa (Cocktail Series #1) on Jan. 12, 2012

    A very well written, very sexy little story here. But why do I get the feeling that there’s a lot more to come. Just because the author told us so? I can’t wait.
  • Quick Change on Jan. 12, 2012

    A most strange menage a trois.
  • About Falling in Love on Jan. 13, 2012

    From the mouth of babes...
  • Duck-N-Cover on Jan. 13, 2012

    In and out like a yoyo.
  • The Nosy Neighbor on Jan. 13, 2012

    Not bad. Could have used more editing during the time it was removed and reposted though. Several typos and miscues still remain.
  • Wedding Night Tease on Jan. 15, 2012

    Well, as a guy I don't find it all that cute.
  • The Running Girl on Jan. 16, 2012

    A little beyond strange, maybe a lot beyond.
  • The Lovership 2: To the Rescue on Jan. 16, 2012

    For a stew, waiting on the back burner until the hunger gets so intense that she needed a large helping, he was ready to satisfy her just as she needed.
  • The Lovership 1: An Erotic Discovery on Jan. 17, 2012

    I read these two stories out of sequence, having downloaded ‘An Erotic Discovery’ last month but not getting around to reading it until now. I was a little dismayed at the time lag between the two—so much time, and presumably activity, undocumented that I must wonder what all happened between to make them slip so easily into each other in ‘To the Rescue.’ There are a number of problems with this story, mostly minor. Tense changes, present, past, present. Also annoying, the head hopping in the last paragraph of chapter 2. But these in no way distract from a very hot, very sexy story. Now, if we only knew what happened in the years between? And where will these two go from here? Also, what a great pair of names for such hot lovers.
  • Red Eyes Wizard on Jan. 17, 2012
    (no rating)
    The description has so many typos that I don't think the story would be worth reading, so I won't.
  • The White Tower on Jan. 17, 2012

    This is one of the dumbest stories I’ve ever read
  • Sex Raft - Sexy Sea Adventures #1 on Jan. 18, 2012

    This story is listed as: fiction, erotica, comedy/humor. So let’s see—fiction? Definitely for there is nothing realistic about it. Erotic?—not much. Comedy/humor—also pretty weak.
  • Sex Island - Sexy Sea Adventures #4 on Jan. 18, 2012

    Oh good! One last red hot ejaculation to wipe out all the others. No more concern about this improbable lot.
  • Unbeatable - An Erotic Short Story on Jan. 18, 2012

    Excellent story! Deeply realistic. So delightfully appealing in the modern world.
  • The Sauna on Jan. 18, 2012

    Oh the fun girls can concoct when left to their own devices
  • The Apartment Complex- Rebecca on Jan. 19, 2012

    John, welcome to the wonderful world of Smashwords. I liked your story but would have enjoyed it more if you had spent a little more time cleaning out some of the grammatical and tense errors. I know in your bio you asked the reader to overlook them, but it would make your work, (even as an amateur), more appealing to the reader. I couldn’t count the number of times you switched from present to past and back. I was hooked right off with the title and its sub-title Rebecca, and look forward to a second offering about Heidi. And surely there are many more juicy young co-eds in the complex waiting their turn with a helpful older man. You know the old saying, ‘one good turn deserves another.’ Good luck with your writing.
  • Fly on the Wall on Jan. 20, 2012

    Quick and cute.
  • Clive on Jan. 23, 2012

    A strange story made worse by some kind of formatting error.
  • The Menu on Jan. 26, 2012

    The description says Glenn will be satiated at the end of his initiation ordeal. Luckily he is a young man filled with hormones and entering puberty. Who else could stand a chance of surviving a menu like that? A cute bit of quirky writing.
  • Peeping Dom on Jan. 26, 2012

    Poor Dom, caught peeping. Now he must pay the Dom. Isn’t he lucky it’s an installment plan so he can pay every week?
  • Horny Emo Dykes in College! on Jan. 26, 2012

    This is a very, very confusing story—or is it more than one story with a common theme? Chapters 1 and 2&3 seem to be separate stories with only a common first person, unnamed female protagonist. Then we have the cousins. Here at last, the protagonist has a name, Evelyn. But the cousin seems to have at least three, Cherry, Jen, and another I can’t recall. The sex with this story was pretty weak compared to the first two. Overall a somewhat uninspiring story.
  • The Apartment Complex- Rebecca and Amber on Jan. 26, 2012

    When John has two succulent sisters vying for his attention, how does he decide whom gets his services first? More hot times next door in the complex
  • The Apartment Complex- Jackie on Jan. 27, 2012

    John has ventured out to the other buildings in the complex and at the same time climbed the generational ladder. He’s conquered the sisters, could a mother, daughter scenario be next?
  • Have You Had the Surgery? A Tale of Love, Lust, and Detachable Genitals: transgender sex, sci-fi erotica on Jan. 27, 2012

    The mishmash of pronouns and even nouns made this a very confusing read. Was Nell two people? Who or what was Ze? Not very erotic either when envisioning the slimy slug genitals.
  • Deadly Seductions: Busted on Jan. 27, 2012

    The biggest surprise to me was that the other reviewers gave this story such high praise. To start with, this story was terrible. Okay, maybe not so much the story as the writing. The punctuation was appalling, the grammar was awful, and the spelling was twisted. “Four-play” should be foreplay. The beginning needed some exposition as did much of the rest. It was difficult to keep the dialogue straight without proper tags. The ending was not what I expected, so I’ll give it an extra star for that. Otherwise I would have only given it a single star.
  • Fucking the Gamers on Jan. 27, 2012

    One very spicy and well written ménage. My only complaint—how long do we have to wait to find out what happens the next day?
  • My Sexy Man on Jan. 27, 2012

    Ain't love grand?
  • The Little People on Jan. 28, 2012

    You have to admire a writer who can use the word, esoteric. Delightful story.
  • Company: an erotic short story on Jan. 28, 2012

    Holy Hanna! What a hot and well written story. This reader could easily envision it made into a video. I’d watch it over and over.
  • Break on Jan. 28, 2012

    As I’ve said before, I normally don’t care much for BDSM stories. But once in a while one like this comes along and, well…
  • Heart Spell on Jan. 29, 2012

    I can't believe I've had this story tucked away in a folder for a year and a half before pulling it out to read. Like wine, maybe it inproved with age.
  • Rough Games: Anal Blackmail on Jan. 30, 2012

    The title says it all. Love the picture.
  • A Scheduled Encounter on Jan. 30, 2012

    A good steamy, short encounter, lacking any background but plenty of details.
  • Satisfying Rachel on Jan. 30, 2012

    A reasonably well written story—giving me an unintended laugh midway when the middle-aged boss says of his new younger employee, “Besides, I’m almost half her age. She’s 25 and I’m 42.” That almost off-set the ending. Oops, there is no ending. It is only the first of three linked stories. There was no hint that this would be the case, otherwise I may not have purchased the story. Disappointed? Yes.
  • Squirt on Jan. 30, 2012

    Okay, I think the count is now fifty million and one stories about sex between step siblings. But this one is different, well a little. At least they’re not at the obligatory age of eighteen. They left that back a decade and a half ago. I sure hope the bedding has a chance to dry out before the maids come in tomorrow.
  • The Vengeful Tendril on Jan. 31, 2012

    Oh hell. The description didn't say anything about poetry. I guess that is the torture. I hate poetry.
  • Betty's Black & Blue Bottom on Jan. 31, 2012

    I guess if I read enough of this stuff I’d start to understand what someone might get from it. Right now I don’t. I guess it’s just not in me to hurt people.
  • In A Days Work on Jan. 31, 2012

    I hope he doesn’t have too many exhibitionists on his path or he’ll be worn out by the end of the day.
  • Mischievous on Jan. 31, 2012

    What indeed was in there?
  • Cum In My Kitchen on Feb. 06, 2012

    She better be careful. They might charge her for the extra work. Then again, maybe she'd be the one getting a discount.
  • Hurting Elena on Feb. 06, 2012

    With that title, I had assumed at the very least, some D/s or m/s, and almost passed on this story. The pain was spread and difficult to weigh between the two.
  • New Neighbors- Substitute Dad on Feb. 08, 2012

    I was a little confused at the beginning of this story, assuming that it was another of the episodes of the protagonist in the apartment complex. But I caught on quickly. It would have been easier on your regular readers if you had given this new guy a different name, but it is too late now. Nice, hot story—one that makes this old man green with envy. Keep up the good work.
  • Call to Duty- Raven on Feb. 08, 2012

    I love the way you’re using more dialog but you still need to pay attention to tense. Several times you started a paragraph past tense only to switch into present tense. Not everyone is bothered by that I know, but… I’ve often wondered just what a tongue ‘ring’ would feel like and your description was delicious. But I thought it was called a stud, so what do I know?
  • Wish Upon a Star on Feb. 08, 2012

    Well Jiminy Cricket, what do you know about that?
  • Packed Carriage on Feb. 09, 2012

    Ah, those Brits. Staid? Well, perhaps a little, until…
  • His Virgin Babysitter on Feb. 09, 2012

    Oh, boy. Another man does the babysitter, one in what?...ten million? NOT!!! This is a hot story with not only one of the sexiest deflowering scenes, but a strong plot to drive it to its tantalizing end. But wait, the end is not yet in sight. They’ve still got all night to go. Damn, what good writing.
  • Craving the Crop (A BDSM Quickie) on Feb. 09, 2012

    A well crafted, well polished, scenario, that, as with so many, leaves me shaking my head in disbelief as to how and why anyone could enjoy such activity.
  • Hope and Dreams 1- My Deliverer on Feb. 10, 2012

    Oh how the fates have smiled on these two in their time of mutual need. Could they be any happier?
  • Cooking Naked on Feb. 11, 2012

    Too much erotica for a cooking show, too much cooking for a good screwing.
  • Switch on Feb. 11, 2012

    Dare he trust the 'true' nature of womanhood?
  • Test Drive on Feb. 11, 2012

    This is one of the best stories I’ve read in a long time, if I can get past the rather inane plot concept. But I’ll overlook it and give it a five star review.
  • Valentine's Day Orgy on Feb. 12, 2012

    Surely they don't restrict such parties to once a year?
  • Mom Is A Slut - The MILF Files Book 1 on Feb. 12, 2012

    Not bad for a quick hot romp. Needs some editing, missing words here and there.
  • Pounding The Ex on Feb. 12, 2012

    How are guys to ever know what the f— their women really want?
  • Swallowing For Daddy on Feb. 13, 2012

    Run of the mill, one in ten million such step-daughter step- daddy stories. They get old.
  • Death Wears A Black Basque on Feb. 14, 2012

    Huh? I read the description. Weird? Yes. Horror? I missed that. Items in the tags? Didn't see much of those either. Maybe I should have seen the movies.
  • The Storyteller on Feb. 16, 2012

    A powerful story, bordering on quality literature that, skims erotica without dwelling too deeply. It leaves plenty of room for future episodes.
  • The Dance on Feb. 16, 2012

    An enchanting tale of palace intrigue, deception and revenge.
  • Jasmine's Game on Feb. 16, 2012

    Oh, the stupid things we men will do just to get in the game.
  • First Time For Everything on Feb. 17, 2012

    Maybe the first time, but surely not the last.
  • Friend's of Mine on Feb. 17, 2012

    With friends like these, who needs anyone else.
  • The Point Volume 1 on Feb. 18, 2012

    I managed to read about a third of this mundane story before I gave up. The author has obviously never heard the adage, ‘show, don’t tell,’ for this is a boring tale of an attempt at a communal life style without the titillation hinted at with the label ‘erotica.’ I did skim further and found nothing to indicate it would be worth reading more.
  • My Liza on Feb. 18, 2012

    First, it would have been nice if a PDF option were offered. I hate reading HTML almost as much as I hate Kindle. This story is ten times longer than it should be. It meanders, telling of the Texas economy and oil booms, then wanders to the owner and his hot tempered wife only to leave them unattended. The story is nearly half over before the reader is introduced to the titled, ‘Liza.’ Then more wandering around telling of educations and wildflowers before finally, near the end, we get to the, by then improbable love story. Are we the readers to believe that these two girls could live together for two years without an inkling of a spark between them? I was well into wishing I’d spent my 99 cents elsewhere before then.
  • She Was Right-Excerpted from Beg For Release! Four Stories of Female Domination on Feb. 18, 2012

    Distasteful.
  • For the Taking on Feb. 19, 2012

    For the taking, so she took him, again and again.
  • The Great Outdoors on Feb. 19, 2012

    Plenty of raw sex to delight the voyeuristic reader, especially the tree top posting, yet quite different from so many run-of-the-mill others. I'm sorry I didn't run across this sooner.
  • Never Give Up on Feb. 19, 2012

    Poor Tom, will he ever manage with all the under helpful and overly helpful women around him.
  • Never Give Up 2 on Feb. 19, 2012

    I think it was someone in Alice in Wonderland who said, ‘curiouser and curiouser.’ Well, this story is that and more.
  • Never Give Up 3 on Feb. 20, 2012

    Okay, one virgin down, one to go.
  • Ginger's Snatch on March 06, 2012

    Sweet Ginger. Too bad she didn't hear the sage advice. Never get drunk at the office Christmas party. You might slip up and say the wrong thing. Now look what she has to do to make amends.
  • Reindeer In Training on March 12, 2012

    A tale, or is that tail, worthy of a red bottomed reindeer, once she was properly trained. She, and he, pulled off their Christmas spectacle with style and grace only a well-trained submissive and her master could
  • Wilder on March 14, 2012

    Such a nice place to spend a few minutes in. Such colorful imagery to watch others’ arousal.
  • Melissa on March 18, 2012

    Ah, there's no love like self love.
  • Playtime on March 27, 2012

    A bit of run-of-the-mill as far as erotica goes, but a nice five minute distraction. My only regret is, I was reading it, not living it.
  • The Revenge Of Sister Hood on March 30, 2012

    A silver bolt? I thought vampires required a wooden stake. Maybe in England.
  • Horny Devil on April 05, 2012

    This story is not all that bad, yet it has grammatical errors that keep it from being truly good. The protagonist begins by referring to his prey as you, then switches to her/she. Near the end there is a reference to ‘young ones,’ and at first I thought the reference was to his young women prey, not others of his ilk. Confusing. Annoying too, is the ending cliché.
  • Melissa's Party on April 10, 2012

    I’m glad to see that Mel kept a little in reserve for her husband. It’s the least the poor three time cuckold could expect.
  • Honey, I miss you.. on April 20, 2012

    Very sweet and touching. The ending brings a tear to the readers' eye.
  • Backdoor Bath on April 21, 2012

    Oh, if only every man could know such an agile, athletic woman.
  • Wanton Abbey - Parts 1-3: A Chamber Maid's Tale, The Butler's Quarters, Lady Jessica's Ball on April 23, 2012

    Beware readers: this is not a full story but only a tease. I feel cheated that the posting I paid $2.99 for ended with, to be continued… However, what is there is quite slutty, and for that reason, I give it two stars.
  • All The Pretty Boys From Charm School on April 30, 2012

    In the end, the author tells us we, the readers, must make our own visuals, so we do. Perhaps much gorier than he would have intended.
  • The Empress Alamonda on May 02, 2012

    By far the best story I’ve read in quite a while. Delightfully sexy without a hint—well, maybe a little hint—of indecency. Then I noticed that the author also wrote ‘The Duel,’ so I should have known that a wonderfully inventive wordsmith was a work here. Now I must check out the others she has written.
  • Irresistible Temptations on May 02, 2012

    I’ve read many of Ms. Shuel’s stories and was surprised to note that I had missed this one. It is easily one of her best. Though short, it is a hot one, well worth a quick read.
  • La Belle Dame Sans Merci on May 02, 2012

    A most inventive mind, coupled with an incredibly creative skill. Imagery a mere human shouldn’t possess. Such a delight to read one of this author’s works.
  • Sibling Rivals on May 02, 2012

    A well written but incomplete story. What did happen afterwards?
  • She Needs to Be Used on May 02, 2012
    (no rating)
    I skimmed through a few spots but it looked so nasty that I doubt I’ll read it. As a result I don’t think it would be fair to give it a rating.
  • Jessie on Top on May 05, 2012

    One wham, bam, thank ye cowboy, and see you in the morning.
  • Jungle Fever on May 05, 2012
    (no rating)
    The description told me more than the story did. Waste of time reading the story. Didn’t understand much of it.
  • Snow on May 10, 2012

    Short and, well, too short. Is there more to cum, ah, come?
  • The Princess and The Dragon on May 26, 2012

    Not much.
  • Casual Sex with Amy on May 26, 2012

    A few disjointed sentences, but not bad. The idea came through okay.
  • Doctor, Doctor on May 26, 2012

    Not bad. Not bad. Maybe next time.
  • Strangers: The Photographer (Erotic Short Story) on May 29, 2012

    Though well written and titillating, this story is a little pricy at $2.99 for less than four thousand words. Also, there is the open statement that more episodes will follow.
  • Revenge Between Stations on May 29, 2012

    I do believe the title covered it.
  • Filling Rachel on May 29, 2012

    As the story continues, so will the review.
  • Tutoring Rachel on May 30, 2012

    Well that was a real downer. Segment two, ‘Filling Rachel,’ ended with ‘to be continued, yet segment three did not continue with anything more than the name Rachel. Whatever happened with her and her boss? Bummer!
  • Sensual Erotica 1: Loving Amy on May 30, 2012

    Well it was going along sweetly then turned bitter with no sweet ending. I’m disappointed.
  • Bound on May 30, 2012

    Sad.
  • Sexcapades On The Sea on May 31, 2012

    Flat!
  • Good With His Hands on June 02, 2012

    I assumed Isobella was English, judging by some of the writing style, but I see she’s Australian. (What is a singlet anyway?) The story is good, but needs a little editing. We can only assume the construction on the cottage may take a long time.
  • A Wonderful Surprise on June 02, 2012

    Well that should have surprised him. It surprised me because I didn't read the tags.
  • Bound and Spanked on June 02, 2012

    BDSM 101.
  • Secret Lovers (#3) on June 04, 2012

    I couldn't tell male from female, so it didn't make sense.
  • James And The Giant Bubble Butt on June 06, 2012

    Okay, that was different. Don't think I'd like to try it though.
  • Wham Bam Ma'm on June 06, 2012

    He forgot the 'thank ye ma'am.'
  • The Stag Party on June 07, 2012

    Well that was certainly a stag party for the ages. I’d love to mention the ending but I wouldn’t want to give it away. But I will say, if the reader likes odd endings, he or she will love this one.
  • Winter Nocturne on June 08, 2012

    I almost passed on this one when I saw the word paranormal. Not my cup of tea, or bottle of Bud Light. But then I saw it was about writing and, well, what writer can pass on that. Glad I didn’t. Terrific story. Well written and, though I’m not sure I grasped it all, delighted in the imaginative dream sequences. Clearly worth five stars.
  • Lola at One O'Clock on June 09, 2012

    A great story if the reader doesn’t trip over the ‘Britishisms.’ Is there such a word?
  • All For Nun on June 11, 2012

    I guess nun doesn't always mean none.
  • Taking the Babysitter on June 11, 2012

    Oh damn, what a hot story! Surely you'll tell us about their next babysitting session?
  • The Tree Of Life on June 12, 2012

    A short, strange tale of paranormal tree pollinating.
  • The Exploits Of Eni, Meaney, Myne & Mo Episode 1 - The Dresser And The Singer on June 12, 2012

    Who knows the preformer better than the dresser?
  • I Need It Now on June 12, 2012

    An interesting short, but I wonder at much of the punctuation and word usage. This writer often fails to end a quotation with punctuation. And don’t the British distinguish between, fiancé and fiancée?
  • How Does Your Garden Grow on June 12, 2012

    Shades of Jimmy Stewart and ‘Rear Window.’
  • Fucked by my daughter's boyfriend on June 15, 2012

    Three paragraphs was about all I could stomach.
  • Erotic Fairy Tales:: The Three Sisters on June 16, 2012

    As bare bones as any tale can be. Also bare bodied, which is a good thing.
  • An Introduction to - A Flying Fuck on June 16, 2012

    Damn cute story. Not what I'd expected but quite funny.
  • Laundry Day on June 17, 2012

    Oh gosh, I mean wow. Agh darn. I’m so embarrassed. I mean, it’s…well never mind.
  • Thomas on June 17, 2012

    Touching story. Very well written.
  • The Toy on June 18, 2012

    An excruciating read, certainly for the male reader. And not for the tale alone but for the number of times I was forced to the dictionary. Once found a typo—perhaps. Thought it might be a British spelling but I guess not. Not sure I want to wade through any longer missives from this author, though the writing is challenging, if decidedly maddening.
  • Most-Wonderful Afterglow on June 20, 2012

    After reading The Inconsequence of Guilt I knew I had to read more of this author’s material, though it was with a bit of fear after the jarring ending of that story. This one is sweet, not the gritty sweetness of sugar but more the honeyed taste of vaginal secretions on one's tongue.
  • Heat and Fire (Part 1): Underground Pleasure on June 20, 2012

    Definitely needed editing. Good quick read for a, well, quick read. Now on to the second part.
  • Heat and Fire (Part 2): Office Surprise on June 20, 2012

    Unfortunately the second part is worse than the first. Riddled with typos and grammatical errors too numerous to be counted. I hope there won’t be a third.
  • Office Romp on June 21, 2012

    Good writing but a somewhat run-of-the-mill story.
  • The Mirror's Edge on June 23, 2012

    This story started off with an incongruous first half sentence. The rest was a somewhat tedious read. What is locs? The word isn’t in the dictionary.
  • "Mommy, there's something under my bed." on June 24, 2012

    Goose bumps everyone!
  • My Michelle on June 26, 2012

    Confusing, but I guess it was meant to be. Someday I’ll learn to read the tags
  • When All is Lust on June 26, 2012

    I almost didn’t bother reading this after the previous reviewer’s statement that this story had no ending, but after reading it, I’m sure it had a definite ending. I’ll say no more for the next reader to make up his or her own mind.
  • Love on the cards on June 26, 2012

    Nice quick read.
  • Steven & Emma on June 26, 2012

    A lot of simplistic and often awkward sentence structures along with points of view that are impossible to achieve.
  • Strangers: The Executive (An Erotic Short Story) on June 28, 2012

    Damn, I hate when a good story ends without ending.
  • Lady Catharina's Comeuppance on June 29, 2012

    Oh the ecstasy of revenge. And remember kiddies, electricity is our friend.
  • Cinderella is the Belle of the Ball (An Erotic Fairy Tale) on June 29, 2012

    I don’t think Walt Disney’s story ended like this.
  • The Studio on June 29, 2012

    Well that's a whole new snap of the shutter.
  • World of Dark Seduction on June 29, 2012

    Okay let’s start. Bad spelling, bad grammar, bad syntax, and—oh yeah, we’re to believe that three years after losing electricity, the phones still work.
  • Cinderella is the Belle of the Ball (An Erotic Fairy Tale) on June 29, 2012
    (no rating)
    But I bet he can spell Cinderella, unlike the cover artist for this story.
  • Are We Losing Our Independence? on June 30, 2012

    There is some truth in this somewhat overly simplistic article.
  • A Cowboy's Kiss in Wyoming on June 30, 2012

    A delightful story of two people of differing worlds trying to find a common ground to make a match.
  • Woody's Shorts #1 joey & maddie on July 01, 2012

    With the men away, the girls will play in this too short episode.
  • Cinderella is the Belle of the Ball (An Erotic Fairy Tale) on July 01, 2012
    (no rating)
    I'm so happy to see the cover corrected. I love when authors check back to their reviews. Best of luck.
  • Empty Compartment on July 02, 2012

    Ah, those Brits and their sense of humor, or is that humour? You know how fond they are of an extra u. Imagine him posting this as ‘erotic.’ Well, it did have a smidgen, toward the end. Very low key and staid, I did say he is Brit.
  • War Torn Ass on July 02, 2012

    With a gal like that servicing the troops, who needs the USO.
  • War Torn Ass on July 02, 2012
    (no rating)
    Oh, I just noticed that this your first day here, so welcome to Smashwords.
  • Ask Me Again on July 03, 2012

    Finding love in the midst of family tragedy, Robbie and Torrey stumble onto one another in the supermarket. Though it’s been two decades since high school, each remembers the other in their own special memories. Can love overcome the hurdles life places before them?
  • The Mirror on July 03, 2012

    Can we say Narcissus?
  • Lesbian Book Club Orgy on July 03, 2012

    Not bad, not bad. But I have to assume that the fictional book read wasn’t ‘Fifty Shades of Gray.’ I down loaded a free sample of it and quickly realized it is a bunch of drivel. Glad what little I read was free.
  • Brennan's Lust on July 04, 2012

    A sad lament.
  • My First Spanking on July 05, 2012

    Poorly written. Lousy sentence structure. Not much of a story here at all.
  • Brennan's Not Alone on July 06, 2012

    I’m so happy that Brennan has found himself a pal who is also a bed buddy to help him forget…what was her name again? I appreciate your review of my story, Beware the Back Alley. If you like the humor, try The V-8 or, July 5th, 1776, though to understand The V-8, you have to be old enough to have seen the old TV commercials.
  • My Valentine's Slave on July 07, 2012

    I downloaded this for free, wanting to sample a new author and hoping I could give the story a good review. Unfortunately I can’t. It is a run-of-the-mill story, lacking anything new. Its plot borders on silliness. I was hoping to give the author a better welcome to Smashwords but I do want to offer a couple of words of encouragement. Keep trying.
  • Obalda on July 08, 2012

    It’s been ages since I’ve read such exquisite prose, prose that borders solidly against poetry, telling a tale so wickedly that I must beg for more.
  • The Old Man And The Sea Monster on July 08, 2012

    I'll have to think about this one for a while.
  • Baseball Bats And Ballpoint Pens on July 08, 2012

    Damn Shane, you had me frightened for a moment there. Maybe I need a break, or is that a brake? But not to worry, I’ll be back.
  • The Magic Garden on July 08, 2012

    I was hoping for a little, no, a lot, more detailed description of the queen. I’m sure she is beautiful.
  • Alice in Wanderlust (An Erotic Fairy Tale) on July 08, 2012

    Well, I'm confused. There is reference to over twenty fairy tales here but only a fraction of one story and no clue how to get to any more.
  • Copper Soldiers (The Devil's Forge) on July 10, 2012

    Readers stop! Before reading this, jump ahead a hundred years to read ‘Yesterday I Died’ before reading this story. Though chronologically reversed, you’ll understand when you finish reading this one.
  • Yesterday, I died (The Devil's Forge) on July 10, 2012

    Read this, then go to 'Copper Soldiers.' Together they equal five stars.
  • When Writers Attack on July 11, 2012

    First amusing, then confusing. Was this supposed to be one story? The amusing part was funny. The other wasn’t particularly my style.
  • The Swimming Pool on July 11, 2012

    Such a sweet interlude—chaste, yet promising so much more.
  • Micah, The Fierce Takes On Emma, The Brave on July 11, 2012

    A decidedly different formatting, but I like it. A number of typos that could have been weeded out with another read through, but I know how hard it is to find them all. Looking forward to more of your stories.
  • The Nanny and the Neighbor - Hardcore Erotica on July 11, 2012

    A reasonably hot fantasy, marred by so many typos.
  • The Year Lease on July 12, 2012

    You mean a doctor can really do that? Damn, I hate being poor.
  • Baby Grace on July 12, 2012

    I can only agree with the previous reviewer but I do wonder if the author meant vulnerable instead of venerable. There were other miscues but I won’t bother looking back for them.
  • An Indian Slave Capture and Breaking on July 12, 2012

    Awful, just awful!
  • Lisa Gets Photographed on July 24, 2012

    Okay, except for the English vernacular.
  • The Umbrella's Shade and Other Award-winning Stories from the Stringybark Short Story Award on July 25, 2012

    I’ve only read three so far, but to paraphrase the old movie, ‘short stories are like a box of chocolates…’ you know the rest. They should be savored, not gulped down on Christmas morning. But in the three, I’ve gotten my money’s worth, which is not an aside, considering I downloaded it when it was free. Story one was touching, showing that life moves on. I sure would like to know what ‘wares’ were in the box George bought in story two, but maybe some things are better left to the readers’ imaginations. Story three is ‘Twilight Zone’ quality, very well written. I did have a little trouble with some of the Australian vernacular. I see they use ‘leant’ like the English do, and I’ve no idea what kind of dog a ‘healer’ is. ‘Gully Trap?’ Maybe I’ll come back after I’ve read more.
  • Taste of Her on July 25, 2012

    What a deliciously, flavorful, taste of Ms. Wu’s talent—no puns intended. (Who the hell am I kidding?) After a couple of helpings of her work (The other was The Swimming Pool.) I simply must add my name to her favorite author list.
  • A Lover for Rachel on July 25, 2012

    I normally pass on anything that has paranormal, fairy, wizard, or any other such tags but I tried this one and wasn’t disappointed, though a little confused at the end requiring a second reading of the last few paragraphs.
  • The Chastity Contract on July 25, 2012

    I'm about a quarter way through and I'm not sure I can finish. All I can say is, TGIF, thank goodness it's fiction.
  • Taxi (Book 1) on July 28, 2012

    Nice story but seems a bit illogical.
  • Can Chocolate on July 29, 2012

    If you like your porn without that annoying side issue, a plot, then this if for you.
  • Sex Stalker on July 30, 2012

    I download stories and books faster than I can read them and often get so far behind that I lose track. I’ve had this story tucked away in my e-folder for nearly two years and just now stumbled across it to read. Good story, but I wonder if the author considered a follow up. It screams for closure.
  • The Gladiator on Aug. 01, 2012

    A sexy little short story that could have been much shorter had all the annoying repetition been removed. And I do wonder at the tag, ‘romance’ considering the encounter was nothing more than a stud service.
  • The Gladiator on Aug. 03, 2012
    (no rating)
    Ah. I see 'romance' has been removed. Very good.
  • Hotwife Shorts, Dawn's First Time on Aug. 04, 2012

    Hmm. Just how open minded can a guy be?
  • The fairy tale of Maksudu on Aug. 04, 2012

    In the land of Maksudu they didn’t know grammar either.
  • Maid to Order - Part 1 on Aug. 04, 2012

    Okay, so the title was over the top.
  • Taken (An Erotic / Erotica BDSM Menage Romance) on Aug. 05, 2012

    An immensely readable and enjoyable love story, which takes the reader into a relationship that, is growing even as it splinters into a bitter sweet ending. Excellent writing.
  • You Made Her Meow? on Aug. 06, 2012

    Doesn't he know that a gentleman doesn't kiss and tell, or all that other stuff?
  • Milk for Sir A Lactation Fantasy (Lactation erotica, breast milk erotica) on Aug. 07, 2012

    It’s always a crap-shoot trying to understand what one human is demanding from another, especially when it comes to something as intimate as sex. Does this story expose something along those lines, and how realistic is it? Read it yourself and see.
  • Pineapple Pleasure on Aug. 07, 2012

    Well, that was different—perhaps too different. Or maybe it’s just British, in which case too British. And your pineapple, well it looks painful. But maybe that’s just my American straight way of looking at it. At least I think I’m a straight American—never tried the alternative to know. Maybe some day.
  • A Birthday Wish on Aug. 07, 2012

    Not bad. Not great, but not bad.
  • Inked on Aug. 08, 2012

    A so-so story with a lot of grammatical errors to stumble over. Could have been better without them.
  • Inked on Aug. 08, 2012
    (no rating)
    What a strange coincidence. I just noticed that a year ago today you reviewed one of my stories. I hope you found what you were looking for.
  • Delicious on Aug. 10, 2012

    All the bunp and grind a threesome can make.
  • Punished and Fucked by My Professor on Aug. 15, 2012
    (no rating)
    There are so many of these silly stories that it is not worth reading, let alone reviewing.
  • The Gynecological Visit on Aug. 17, 2012

    Well at least the doctor knew the territory.
  • The Trouble with Love is... on Aug. 21, 2012

    The trouble with love is: this story is written in English vernacular. At least I think that is the problem. I started off thinking I was liking the story and was willing to set aside the awkward sentence structure. Is it British to say ‘was sat’ rather than ‘was seated’? Once could be a typo but three times? And I’m sure it isn’t normal for anyone to switch tense, back and forth, present, past, present—sometime in the same paragraph—sometime in the same sentence. I liked the plot and the sex depictions were hot, but overall, I can only give it a three star rating.
  • How Many Licks? on Aug. 23, 2012

    Oh gosh. Was I supposed to count. I didn't. Sorry. I thought it was about an all day sucker. My bad. Maybe I should read it again.
  • Though I Burn: Trivia Chaney's Arising on Aug. 30, 2012

    Smashwords has just acquired a fascinating new talent; one that I hope will contribute for ages to come. Jameka Brown has a way with words that few other writers have. The images she creates are sheer magic.
  • Expanded Pleasures, A Submissive Friend Adds To Our Swinging Pleasure on Aug. 30, 2012

    Let me see, did Matt cover everything? Yes, I think he described ever possible combination short of bringing in the animals.
  • Lost in Him on Aug. 31, 2012

    Flatly written—makes for a dull read. Serious need of editing and rewriting. Ryanin needs to learn the difference among, quite, quit, and quiet.
  • Stella's Erotic Revenge on Aug. 31, 2012

    To think I paid for this! It is awful. Grammar and syntax are dreadful.
  • Dying in Azairia on Sep. 02, 2012

    A nicely written bit of nonsense with no ending.
  • Naughty or NIce on Sep. 02, 2012

    Well this wasn’t what it was supposed to be. It was a short-short with a longer tease of another book for sale.
  • Snowed In, With His Girlfriend and Her Stepdaughter on Sep. 03, 2012

    This was a well written tale of an extreme no holes barred (pun intended) fuck fest that would over work any normal group of sex deviants. How any of them could walk at the end of that weekend is beyond imagination.
  • My Ex-Girlfriend's Daughter (And Her Friends) on Sep. 03, 2012

    What an incredibly hot story. Any man’s wet dream, a seemingly endless parade of hot eighteen year old bodies begging to be taught how to enjoy sex. Then a little extra bonus thrown in.
  • Bred By the Succubus: paranormal futanari impregnation erotica on Sep. 03, 2012

    Well that was certainly different. Very different.
  • Smutlets: Impure Thoughts - Delicious: Sexy, Smutty and Salacious on Sep. 06, 2012

    Such a lucky couple to have one another. And something extra to share with the locals.
  • My Naughty Roommate on Sep. 07, 2012

    Oh the joys of the sisterhood! If only I could join them.
  • You’ll Never Believe This: The Horny Bartender on Sep. 09, 2012

    You're right. I don't believe it.
  • Jeffrey on Sep. 12, 2012

    Parting is such sweet sorrow.
  • Caught In His Web on Sep. 12, 2012

    I don't know what to think about this. Maybe today I'll get an e-mail that will tell me what to think.
  • The Apartment Complex- Linda and Lori on Sep. 12, 2012

    That guy John sure is one lucky fella.
  • Smutlets: Impure Thoughts: Divine: Carnal Connection on Sep. 13, 2012

    Ah, another fine bit of smut from the pen (pens?) of Lance Little. I want to take this opportunity to offer an invite to fellow avid reader and prolific reviewer, hrhsophia (am I to guess that hrh stands for Her Royal Highness?) to read some of my works here at Smashwords. If you want to comment, feel free. I would suggest that you start with ‘Corporal Punishment’ as a lead in to the Harold and Stacy series. At your discretion of course.
  • The Discreet Lesbian - Mandy & Kathleen’s Romantic Getaway on Sep. 13, 2012

    About half way through I started wondering if there was a story buried in here. By the end I concluded—not much unless the reader is into travel guides.
  • The Wrong Place at the Right Time on Sep. 14, 2012

    A very well written tale with quite a different twisted plot.
  • Train Ride on Sep. 20, 2012

    Well written and intoxicating. Delightfully exotic story.
  • Idyll No. 11: A Monolog for Any Man on Sep. 21, 2012

    Well that 'secret' was rather disturbing. But I won't give it away.
  • Rescue on Sep. 23, 2012

    Not the erotic story I expected, but one well written tale instead. It begs a continuation.
  • How To Cope With A Disability on Sep. 28, 2012

    Gerty, you are a very brave person to put yourself out there like you do. Keep trying. I’m pulling for you. Best of everything. Ernie
  • Melody's Passion on Sep. 28, 2012
    (no rating)
    Some time back I tried to read this story only to give up and left a poor review. I have since discovered that the author has a disability. I removed the poor review and made the effort to finish reading the story. It is still a struggle and I suggest that the author learn to use some punctuation especially quotation marks as they will make it easier on the reader. I wish the author the best of luck. Ernie
  • The Cellar on Sep. 30, 2012

    Lucian, Welcome to Smashwords. I see today marks your first day here so I wish I could greet you with a better review. Unfortunately your story lacks much in the area of suspense and it was easy to guess the ending long before it ended. It also was punctuated with annoying changes of tense, past, present, past—on and on. On a brighter note, I’ve seen worse, much worse. So keep trying and good luck.
  • Crossing A Line An Erotic Tale Of A First Time Call Girl And Her Two Clients on Oct. 03, 2012

    A tight, well written and very sexy story. Only a couple of typos did I notice. And what can I say about the cover art? Lips and lingerie, all red and all full.
  • Boy on Oct. 06, 2012

    Not bad. A word missing here or there. Good imagery
  • In the Kitchen on Oct. 06, 2012

    It’s very short so don’t expect much, that way you won’t be disappointed because there’s little here.
  • Glory, Glory Holelujah on Oct. 07, 2012

    I don’t know what poppers are but I can’t help wonder if it’s possible to D O on them. And I'm sure I'm not interested in the web site.
  • A Bonded Band: Jensyl and Larren on Oct. 15, 2012

    Silly but reasonably well written story. A few typos here and there. Too bad it is so truncated.
  • The Red Bra on Oct. 18, 2012

    What a delightfully quirky little tale. But I have to ask, did it fit?
  • The Blacksmith and the Flower on Oct. 18, 2012

    Oh the pain of the pun.
  • Survivor's Tale: Grandchild's Lament on Oct. 23, 2012

    Hum. Interesting story. Strange, but interesting.
  • The Anniversary on Oct. 26, 2012

    Oh yes, that day. Let's hope she can move on. Life is for the living.
  • Spank on Oct. 26, 2012

    A somewhat mundane story, leaving me, at least, wondering what the shifters are. I thought werewolves and Dracula were shifters. There is no clue in this story who these girls are.
  • Josh Takes a Plunge on Oct. 27, 2012

    Good old Josh. Stoic to the end.
  • How I Turned My Husband Into My Bitch on Oct. 27, 2012

    What looked like an intriguing plot turned out to be very disappointing. The grammar, syntax, punctuation—all needed some serious editing.
  • Never Give Up 4 on Oct. 27, 2012

    Well, I hate to say it, but I was a little disappointed with this one. It seemed no more than a rehash of the three that came before it.
  • Lonely Child on Oct. 28, 2012

    I would love to have read how his 'meeting' went.
  • Naked on Oct. 28, 2012

    That was certainly a close shave.
  • James, Ellen & David on Oct. 28, 2012

    Well orchestrated. It takes practice to manage so well.
  • Mondays with Langford on Oct. 29, 2012

    If I give this a good rating, will I be damned?
  • Upstairs Hot in the Attic on Oct. 30, 2012

    I can’t help but wonder if that hole was big enough to…well…
  • A Guide To Get Thru Abuse on Oct. 30, 2012

    I hope your heart felt story will help people in need.
  • All of Me on Nov. 01, 2012

    The sweetness only woman can achieve.
  • The Drowning of Scott McGee on Nov. 02, 2012

    Oh damn, the irony.
  • Smashwords Writing Duel on Nov. 02, 2012

    As I began reading this story, I started to think of the irony of a simple grammatical error early on, (there for their). But then I saw it throughout and I wondered if perhaps the author was pulling our collective leg. (Which one, I won’t speculate about.) Could it be the British way of spelling? Either way, I did love his story, but fear looking in the mirror and seeing myself.
  • Arousing Amelia on Nov. 03, 2012

    The more I read, the sillier this story became. And the twist, well it was rather stupid.
  • Arousing Amelia on Nov. 03, 2012
    (no rating)
    Deliza, an unexpected twist, and it was, I missed it by a mile, is still stupid.
  • The Sissy Sort on Nov. 04, 2012

    Okay men. I hope you paid attention to this story. You know we made a serious mistake letting women vote. So go into the voting booth and mark the box: No to women’s suffrage.
  • For the King ~ Medieval Erotica on Nov. 05, 2012

    Ah those crazy royals. And what a price those pay who serve them.
  • Shower Time on Nov. 05, 2012

    They're going to be all wrinkled and pruned, but worth it.
  • Kendra Part 1: The Business Trip on Nov. 06, 2012

    A very tantalizing adult fantasy but it should have come with a disclaimer: Kiddies, do not try this at home.
  • The Lady Wore Red - Chapter 1 on Nov. 07, 2012

    Oh. A succubus. I guess it's more than I thought it was.
  • Forbidden Sex At The Moon Cult!!! on Nov. 07, 2012

    Not much of a story here. And on a technical note, on the moon the Earth doesn't rise. It has the same side toward Earth all the time.
  • Sensitive ~ Paranormal Erotica on Nov. 07, 2012

    What was there was okay, but it had a very abrupt and unsatisfactory ending.
  • The Massage - An Erotic Massage and Sex Erotica Story on Nov. 08, 2012

    An all too typical story of a massage going too far.
  • Personal Shoppers - A Lesbian Orgy on Nov. 10, 2012

    How nice that they could all work together so fluidly.
  • The Secret Beach on Nov. 11, 2012

    Intended as a teasing lead-in to the longer work, this story is all that and more. Well written and delightfully erotic, it can be read alone, but makes the reader hunger for more.
  • Bra Straps on Nov. 12, 2012

    Okay he’s writing. He’s telling us something. What caught my attention were the ashtrays. They allow smoking? I guess. Well the girl, the redhead, cleans the ashtrays. But maybe it’s in England where she works. I can tell by the spelling. Of certain words. So do they allowing smoking in places where they eat there? I guess. I'm glad I don't have to eat there.
  • The Talker on Nov. 12, 2012

    Confused? Yes. Though I’m sure if I were a patron, I’d not be on Wednesday.
  • Time and a Button on Nov. 12, 2012

    I’ll not re-read it to try to understand who’s who. Sorry.
  • My Boss's Husband on Nov. 14, 2012

    Not bad. But I bet she doesn't look forward to anymore parties with her boss.
  • Liz After Work on Nov. 14, 2012

    Think Byron will be back for more?
  • Ultra XXX: Ass Freak VS Chubby Girl on Nov. 14, 2012

    I guess I won't live long enough to see this brave new world.
  • The Lady Wore Red - Chapter 2 on Nov. 19, 2012

    This story is getting more confusing and I fear it will only get worse.
  • Option Three - With a Stranger on Nov. 21, 2012

    What a hilarious tale, no, make that tail. Or better yet, tails considering they, tails, were all over the place.
  • Kendra 3.6: Greg & Alan on Nov. 22, 2012

    I miss Kendra.
  • Blood Demons of Titan on Nov. 23, 2012

    The description says this is number one. I think that is enough.
  • Always Be There on Nov. 24, 2012

    It’s not very often I read something that brings tears to my eyes, but I’m not ashamed to admit that this story did. It is so heartrending and sad I doubt anyone could finish reading it and not brush back a tear. Sure, it is riddled with poor grammar and syntax that make it obvious English isn’t the author’s primary language, but that doesn’t matter. Only the loving story does.
  • Hot For Ma on Nov. 24, 2012

    Okay, now he gets what he’s wanted for so long.
  • Sister Mary's Cherry on Nov. 29, 2012

    Yeah, it's an old joke, but such a nice one.
  • Leslie's Destiny - The Final Chapter on Dec. 01, 2012

    Poor Leslie, with what he/she went through, it’s a wonder ‘they’ didn’t wind up in a padded cell. The final chapter was a long time coming, no pun intended, and I missed it last summer. With so much time to work on it, I would have thought Dana had enough time to edit it better. Some of the typos are amusing, some confusing. Anyone thinking of buying the earlier chapters—don’t. As the descriptions say, this is an anthology of all the earlier three as well as the final one.
  • Eating Christine on Dec. 03, 2012

    After all the hundreds of pseudo-incest stories, I expected this one to be among them in the end. I’ll just have to be content to reassure myself that it’s only fiction.
  • Poolside Pussy on Dec. 04, 2012

    What a way to heat up an already hot summer afternoon.
  • Stroke It! Masturbation Instructions on Dec. 04, 2012

    I wonder if he is going to charge for the lesson.
  • Stroke It 2: The Stepsister (Masturbation Instructions) on Dec. 04, 2012

    What a nice companion piece to the other masturbation story. Like bookends with all the gooey stuff in between.
  • Spanking Nancy: Swinging Short Stories on Dec. 05, 2012

    Great story with a troubling ending. The reader can only hope future stories end better.
  • Tasting Nancy: Swinging Short Stories on Dec. 05, 2012

    Whether it's fiction or not, it's hot! Can't wait for more.
  • Megan and Darcy on the Farm, Book 1: Bo Hawg Grind on Dec. 06, 2012

    Yee-ha! Go to it cowgirls. I would have given the story a full five star review, but the typos kept jaring me off the read.
  • My Roommate Is A Slut: An Erotic (M/F) Reality Tale From The Man's Point Of View on Dec. 06, 2012

    From the man’s point of view, the title says. And what a view it was.
  • As Pleases My General – a raunchy kitchen table fable on Dec. 07, 2012

    Naoko has a writing style that takes some patience to accept. Patience that this reader almost failed to endure. Almost half way through I was about to quit. What a lovely, heartfelt story I would have missed. Even now I’m rereading it to find the parts that I so hurriedly overlooked and failed to understand until the final twist. And what a twist! I dare not say more for fear of letting the goose out of the bag. I encourage the next reader to hang on to the end.
  • As Pleases My General – a raunchy kitchen table fable on Dec. 07, 2012
    (no rating)
    Having reread the story, I am ashamed to say this dullard missed so many of the obvious clues, hanging out in plain sight much like Poe’s ‘The Purloined Letter,’ before reaching the twist, worthy of O’Henry. I challenge the next readers to pay close attention to sentences and partial sentences that seem to make no sense. They will.
  • The van Sietter Bride Who Brought Happiness in Her Pocket on Dec. 08, 2012

    It was a trek, but I did manage to slog through the too many characters with too unpronounceable names and too many confusing side plots. And in the end I had to wonder what her pocket was, though with a dirty mind, I might guess.
  • Beach Fun on Dec. 08, 2012

    It’s hard to imagine sex that hot ever cooling, but it always does.
  • The Low Lovers of Dame Anastelle Yrai on Dec. 09, 2012

    I was starting to wonder at the title. The opening scene certainly depicted her taking a low lover, but the final…well I’ll let the next readers find out for themselves how low he was. I still don't know what a sworn lord is.
  • Paying the Rent on Dec. 13, 2012

    Ah yes. That old trick.
  • Forbidden Fruit on Dec. 14, 2012

    Delilah, you tricked me into reading this, you little devil you.
  • A New Beginning on Dec. 17, 2012

    There are several inconsistent threads that are woven through this tale. In the first story ‘Princess of Power’ we are told that “Other than being raped by a Runaway, she (Simone) has never been intimate with anyone.” But now we are told she had a loving husband and was pregnant with his child when she entered the valley. Also, I wonder who could nurse the newborn Kayla during the time Monet was traipsing around the Galapagos Islands. And speaking of the islands, how could one island be so much different than the one containing the valley? I am glad this tale has come to an end. The writing is too stilted to wade through any more.
  • Satin & Oak on Dec. 18, 2012

    The story reminds me a little of O’Henry’s Gift of the Magi, but without the disappointing ending. It has a medieval feeling to the setting until the electric lights came in. That made it a little jarring.
  • A Man for the Season on Dec. 18, 2012

    Why do I envision Will Farrell in his elf costume while reading this? And I’ve never seen the movie.
  • Christmas in Venice on Dec. 18, 2012

    A poignant, well written story of an affirmation of life.
  • The Copier Room on Dec. 18, 2012

    Just the illicit spark she needed to perk up her life.
  • Horizon on Dec. 19, 2012

    Not much of a story here.
  • Command Performance on Dec. 20, 2012

    Okay, what’s my safe word? I’m ready to throw in the towel. Half way through and this book is getting too disgusting to finish.
  • Sensual Moments on Dec. 20, 2012

    Such a sensual, arousing young lady. At least I assume she’s young, but I’m certain she’s sensual and aroused.
  • Last Call on Dec. 20, 2012

    The opening of this story reminded me of Shirley Jackson’s story, ‘The Lottery,’ the high impact story we all read in junior high school. This story had a similar impact.
  • The Train Vol. 1: A short erotica story on Dec. 22, 2012

    Sorry, I'm not going to be suckered in.
  • A Werewolf in Office Clothing on Dec. 24, 2012

    Well that was a different take on Little Red Riding Hood. Would have been a better tease if the ‘W’ word wasn’t in the title.
  • Island Slave: Sara meets the Master on Dec. 26, 2012

    A very disturbing and unsatisfactory story.
  • Apple of Sodom on Dec. 29, 2012

    With the strange names, at least strange to me, I assumed that this story was set in a fictions world until I encountered the word Nigerian. It’s hard to imagine an educated person having such an intense bias against her own, and only, son. The sentence structure that I found hard to decipher I attribute to the writer being unfamiliar with English. At least it was short and free.
  • 'Avocado' An Erotic Adventure of Spirit and Sensuality on Dec. 29, 2012

    Strange this. Well several strange things really. The story? Yes, but I’ll get to that in a second. The first strange thing is, I downloaded the book over a year and a half ago and promptly forgot about it, along with scores of other stories and books that I intend to read and forget about. Strange that Smashwords claims that I bought it and now own it, allowing me to post this review. I don’t remember buying it, but I guess I did. Strange that I downloaded it again last month on Kindle because it is no longer available in PDF which was my original download. Strange that the book has been on Smashwords for two years now and no one has reviewed it. I say the story is strange because I had trouble reading it with all the ‘foreign words’ that I didn’t know. Likewise I had a problem with Stuart’s finances, broke or nearly broke one minute, yet always with a handy fistful of cash when he needed to fund Uma’s welfare or buy a plane ticket. I find it strange that more editing didn’t go into this—tense swaps, past, then present, rattle me. Also Mike becomes Mark. I got a bit perturbed by some of the plot twists near the end with some things left unanswered, but I can’t say more now. But overall, an interesting read. Learned a little about dreadlocks.
  • The Glut on Dec. 30, 2012

    A rather cheap transaction, but sometimes worth it.
  • Par For The Course on Dec. 30, 2012

    I’ve got to stop trying to read stories written by British authors. Who was the wit that said something to the effect that, “America and England are two countries divided by a common language.” I give it a few points for the spots I found humorous.
  • Health, The Bible & You : Part 5 - Jesus Recommends Carrot Juice on Dec. 31, 2012

    I think even an atheist could find a chuckle here with this piece. And I agree with Clarissa that it could stand some ‘fattening up.’
  • Sherry Takes a Ride on Jan. 04, 2013

    A very weak story made much worse by bad spelling, punctuation, and grammar. Needs some serious editing.
  • The Chase on Jan. 06, 2013

    Until the last sentence I wasn't sure I was liking this. That last sentence made the difference. I don't.
  • Naughty on Jan. 09, 2013

    Run of the mill step-siblings’ affair, and yes, it sorely needs editing.
  • Nightmare in th Cockpit on Jan. 21, 2013

    Good read except for one thing--one too many words in the tags line. Took all the suspense out of it.
  • Reaching the Top on Jan. 23, 2013

    Three or four paragraphs were all I could stand. I know it’s short but really, the bad grammar, syntax, and punctuation, or lack of, made it too difficult to finish. I assumed that the writer was not from an English speaking country—and I was right.
  • Sunrise Suprise - A Quick Licks Short Story on Jan. 24, 2013

    Too short.
  • Docile on Jan. 26, 2013

    I downloaded this story a year ago today, the same day it came out. So why am I just now reviewing it? Well, to start with, I didn’t read it until last week and when I saw the date I decided to wait until the one year mark. After all the author had waited a year, so one more week shouldn’t matter. But the review you ask? Not a bad bit of S/F. Interesting if lightweight erotic story. I didn’t care all that much for the ending, but I don’t want to give anything away for the next reader.
  • Your Bath is Ready, Madame, No. 2 in the series 'At Your Service: The Tennis Star and her Stewardess' on Jan. 27, 2013

    Interesting what money can buy.
  • The Winding Stairs Part #1 on Jan. 28, 2013
    (no rating)
    Too short a tease to judge. Needs to be available in PDF.
  • Retail Wedding on Jan. 29, 2013

    Cute bit of satire.
  • A Bedtime Myth on Jan. 29, 2013

    A little heavy for a childdren's story.
  • Amber's Agreement, Submissive Summer Book 1 on Jan. 30, 2013

    This is a very well written and sexy tease for the next in the series, yet quite confusing as to what is truly next. In one offering Greg is Amber’s step-dad, in another he is, or rather was, her mother’s boyfriend two years before. As much as I’d like to follow the story line, I hesitate to do so while not sure which is the proper line. I also wonder what a mirror edition is supposed to be. As much as I’d like to give this story a five star rating, I must deduct for the confusion.
  • Up Skirt on Jan. 31, 2013

    I often think of erotica as adult fairytales, and this tail, ah, tale was excellent. Loved the surprise visual at the end.
  • Lusting While Dusting on Jan. 31, 2013

    I'm sure I read this many months ago and was surprised to not see a review here from me. I could have sworn I'd posted one. I know for a short/short, story that is, not the cleaning implement, this deserves all the fives it's been given including mine.
  • She Only Wore a Shirt to the Funeral on Feb. 12, 2013

    A very nicely written story, but as I was reading, I was looking for an explanation for the titled shirt. But I guess in the end we have to realize that she was on a fishing trip and the outfit was her bait.
  • Window Treatment on Feb. 22, 2013

    I am such a terrible procrastinator. I downloaded this story a year and a half ago and just today got around to reading it. According to Smashwords, I bought it but I don’t remember. If I did, it was well worth the money, for it is a very delightful story with a delicious plot. Well done Ellison James.
  • All The Right Places on Feb. 22, 2013

    The saga of Wendy Parker continues as she and her boyfriend find as many new places to have public and nearly public sexual encounters as possible. Good read, but a little disconcerting with numerous typos and other miscues.
  • Center Stage on Feb. 22, 2013

    The ever deepening story of Wendy Parker moves into even greater exposure as she and her boyfriend find a new ‘stage’ for their sex acts.
  • Peeping George on Feb. 23, 2013

    Ah, the unexpected perks of the job.
  • Death of Maxine on March 08, 2013

    In an incredible stroke of irony, I read this posting just minutes after reading the story of the young Californian woman’s death at the paws of a lion. The opening segment of the story seemed to match the gruesome details from the California incident only too well. But the critique of the story? A gripping tale, devoid of all backstory—who, what, why, when, or where. I’ll only demerit one star for that.
  • Cute Cuke Girl on March 09, 2013

    Cute cuke of a story. Easy to over look a few typos.
  • Erin on March 13, 2013

    Tess, you’ve begged and begged, so now I’m going to give it to you. I liked your story, maybe even loved it. Ass play can be fantastic and reading about it can be as well. So I’ll give your story four stars. Why not five? Well there were some errors—not many and not so bad as to be distracting. Also, your listing all, or most, of the other stories as ‘you set the price.’ I don’t like that. If you want paid, say so. Put a price, be bold. Now that I’ve seen a little of your work I might go ahead and buy one. I’m sure that is what you were after, putting this one for free. Sneaky. Keep up the good work.
  • Making Up on March 14, 2013

    Great story. Not so much hard core, definitely not hard core. But hard hitting all the same. Like setting a rat trap, the big kind that can break a finger if you’re not careful. You can’t be sure you can pull away before it goes off. A few typos.
  • Playing with Food on March 14, 2013

    Strange and without ending.
  • Experimentation on March 15, 2013

    Oh the things some find sexually stimulating? But as they say, to each her own.
  • Nature Hike on March 15, 2013

    Vengeance is his, saith her lord.
  • Kissing Cousins on March 19, 2013

    I’m totally confused—not by the story but by the previous review. I suspect it was written for a different story as it seems unrelated to this one. As to this one, it’s okay but not great.
  • Only a Kiss on March 25, 2013

    A romantic little interlude, and a primer of things to come, oops, cum.
  • Dana: a slut is born on April 17, 2013

    Even as short as this story is, I couldn’t get past the first few paragraphs. Perhaps the writer would be well advised to write in his native language for he does very poorly in English.
  • Banging the New Girl on April 21, 2013

    Just another day at the factory.
  • Wandering Hands: An Erotic Horror on May 01, 2013

    I guess I should be grateful; the only thing I get when I fall out of bed is bruised.
  • Wandering Hands: An Erotic Horror on May 01, 2013
    (no rating)
    I just noticed that this is not only Frankie’s first story, but also his first day here on Smashwords. Welcome. I wish you a long and fruitful time here.
  • I Love You on May 05, 2013
    (no rating)
    Must be a joke. I count three.
  • Bad Kitty: A Story of Convenient Sex on May 07, 2013

    The very first word of this story is wrong. It should be ‘it’s’ not ‘its.’ From there it goes downhill, getting sillier by the paragraph. So silly that it becomes funny, and for that I give it two stars.
  • Hershey's Wet Dream... on May 07, 2013
    (no rating)
    This story is so silly that I wasn’t going to grace it with a review—but I want to pass a word to Mickysmit. True, there is a lot of just plain garbage here on Smashwords, but if you sift through that garbage you’ll find some real gems here as well. Good luck reading.
  • GLASS on May 18, 2013
    (no rating)
    This story will not download.
  • Impossible To Resist on May 19, 2013

    Not bad for a quick, hot read.
  • Fun In Barcelona on May 20, 2013

    Very well written. Hot as well--hot.
  • Sunday In The Park With Dawei (Short Story) on May 28, 2013

    Nearly prefect work, but could have used a last read through to catch the few remaining grammatical errors.
  • The Spank Race on May 29, 2013

    Fiction? Damn I hope so.
  • Teacher's Pet on June 04, 2013

    And to add to hrhsophia's review, a well rounded eighteen-year-old ass.
  • Watching & Playing on June 05, 2013

    The story is very hot, though somewhat disjointed. It is hard to imagine he could wait a week to perform his part of the action. Also, some of the errors were quite funny. At one point, “She let out of a soft groin…” I assume it should have been a groan. Overall, not bad.
  • Well, I Sure Love It on June 06, 2013

    A hot tale of a single minded woman getting what she really wants, over and over and over, keeping all her friends and their men happy in the process. Such a fiend for fellatio.
  • 3 Erotic Flashes on June 09, 2013

    3 flashes that were erotic. What more can one say?
  • Courtship ~ Medieval Erotica on June 30, 2013

    A well written and enticing story, though a little disappointing that it’s only a tease—well two teases.
  • The Bitch Slap on July 02, 2013

    So poorly written I couldn’t get past the first page. Grammatical errors are far too numerous. Obviously, English is not this writer’s first language.
  • So You Want To Write Erotica? on July 05, 2013

    An excellent collection of solid advice for writers of any genre. Counsel I would love to pass along to any number of writers (and I use that term loosely) on Smashwords. But that might revive feuds better left alone.
  • Hypnosister on July 05, 2013
    (no rating)
    I’m going to refrain from rating this story because of the confusion I’m in now. The first chapter was titillating enough to rate four stars but the second left me totally baffled. I get the feeling it is a parody of those children’s books that my grandsons enjoy, but having never read any, I’m not sure. Several of the other reviews failed to mention it as well so…who knows? Could use some commas in key places.
  • Lunch Break on July 13, 2013

    Hated the point of view. Made for a very awkward read. Writer needs lessons in grammar and punctuation.
  • Bear on July 14, 2013

    What a delightful retelling of Goldilocks and the—well this time just one bear. But one was all she needed with this Bear.
  • Impish Kisses on July 16, 2013

    Well written, but much too short.
  • Feeders 1: The Attack on July 20, 2013

    Hum, not sure about this story, not sure at all. Seems okay, but then it didn’t seem to end right. Oh well, other stories to read and many to write.
  • Intimate Strangers on July 22, 2013

    Its many grammatical errors make for a jerky read.
  • Encounter with a Stranger on July 22, 2013

    Too many sentences start with ‘he,’ ‘she,’ ‘him,’ etc. Also, each person’s dialog requires its own paragraph, as in paragraph six and elsewhere. Other errors as well—‘day’ should be ‘say?’ in paragraph five. You need to re-read carefully before submitting.
  • Old Friends on July 23, 2013

    Not bad for such a short piece.
  • The Sale of the Year on July 23, 2013

    Interesting turn of events. Not a bad read at all.
  • Costume Play on July 23, 2013

    Party time anyone?
  • Housewives in Love on July 23, 2013

    Oh, the hot Mondays in the cul-e-sac.
  • When the Boss Submitted on July 23, 2013

    A whole new take on labor/management negotiations.
  • Mother Never Told Me: Story 1 on July 28, 2013

    Nice coming out of hiding story.
  • Encounter: Seaweed on July 28, 2013

    Beware the Caribbean sea-monster.
  • Red Hot Slut on July 31, 2013

    Red hot certainly covers the story. Love the twist. And now a PS. Marketa, thank you for your review of Stacy and Harold at the Concert. Anytime someone shows an interest in my Stacy and Harold stories I suggest they read Corporal Punishment first. It was the first written but not the first in the story line. It gives a playful introduction to their games.
  • Marion's New Job on Aug. 05, 2013

    Too abrupt an ending.
  • Pictures of Jemima on Aug. 11, 2013

    Tess, terrific story. Exquisite action and dialogue, though I got a little confused when the girls were at the muddy beach. I reviewed your story Erin several months ago and promised to buy one—though I’ve downloaded others—and this is the promised one. I’m sure I’ll do others but don’t know when I’ll get time to read more. Keep up the good writing.
  • Mr Floppy Meets Miss Hottie on Aug. 11, 2013

    Cute but not too original.
  • Erin’s Birthday on Aug. 11, 2013

    Oh, those girls. What one doesn’t think of the other one will. But isn’t that why we love them so.
  • Grocery Whore: BDSM Flash Fiction on Aug. 14, 2013

    Like the other reviewer, I thought this is way too incomplete.
  • Kink Spring: BDSM Flash Fiction on Aug. 14, 2013

    This author specializes in incomplete stories. Short is one thing, but unfinished is another.
  • Sleepover: BDSM Flash Fiction on Aug. 14, 2013

    Unlike the other two, this one at least had an ending. Not bad.
  • Groomed Cuckold on Aug. 16, 2013

    Confusing.
  • Sheriff Gregg & The Painted Lady on Aug. 17, 2013

    Well the story, like the sheriff, had a beginning and an end, but it seems strange that all the other stories, nine as I count, are sandwiched within this one story. Too bad to know the end before beginning any of the others.
  • Sheriff Gregg & The Butterfield Sequestrian Society on Aug. 17, 2013

    Two down and eight to go.
  • Sheriff Gregg & The Oriental Visitor on Aug. 17, 2013

    I must say I’m glad this is the end, for I was getting quite tired of the single-mindedness of the plot. I do like the way it was wrapped up in the end. Quite tidy I must say.
  • Succubus Bites: Tasmin on Aug. 17, 2013

    Delightful story, intriguing even. Loved it.
  • Punishing a Cheating Wife on Aug. 17, 2013

    What a mess!
  • Letters from a Stalker on Aug. 17, 2013

    I'm not sure I understand. But maybe I'm not supposed to.
  • The Preacher's Daughter on Aug. 20, 2013

    Oh God! Oh Jesus! Oh Christ! Oh Jehovah! Oh Father in heaven, what a de-lightfully decadent story.
  • Preserved on Aug. 21, 2013

    After that turn at the end, I don't know what to say. In fact, I can't say anything other than, it was wierd.
  • Dave's Blow Job on Aug. 21, 2013

    Not at all what I expected. Totally off the wall.
  • A Sleeping Beauty on Aug. 21, 2013

    Disney never tried this in his cartoons.
  • Rude Awakening on Aug. 21, 2013

    Great what we have to look forward to in the future. I wonder how soon it might be.
  • In The Temple Of Erotia on Aug. 21, 2013

    Off to a fair start.
  • Her First Time on Aug. 21, 2013

    I was hoping for a better ending, but the story was good.
  • Brenda the Bitch on Aug. 21, 2013

    Oh man, are they going to have some exciting sessions.
  • The Manipular Chronicles on Aug. 22, 2013

    I managed to finish reading this but it was difficult. It is so lame it borders on ridiculous. Add in the number of grammatical and spelling errors to make matters worse. I see it is part 1, but I won’t be looking forward to part 2.
  • Compulsion on Aug. 22, 2013

    A very well written, but extremely depressing story.
  • California Genie on Aug. 22, 2013

    A lovely genie story. And so close to Barbara Eden’s birthday.
  • A Mother’s Sweet Punishment (Step Mother-Step Daughter Lesbian Story,Taboo Sex) on Aug. 23, 2013

    Enticing story, but badly in need of editing. Poor grammar and tense switching. What was the (x) after the policeman appeared? And why did Mike become Steven?
  • Once Upon Forever on Aug. 23, 2013

    A well written story. I just wish I understood it.
  • Masquerade (Short Story) on Aug. 23, 2013

    What a sexy read. I hardly noticed tripping over the miscues.
  • Cate: A Care Giver Providing Real Care Part 1 on Aug. 24, 2013

    A good story but a couple of problems: one—the tip of a penis is a glans not gland. Two—I found three different spellings of thong, one comically, ‘tongue.’
  • Donna Dominates on Aug. 25, 2013

    What a hot new game for Donna. Is it all she had hoped?
  • Tara and the Tech on Aug. 25, 2013

    Who knew nerds could be so naughty?
  • Banging Becky on Aug. 25, 2013

    All he needed was a woman with the will to get the job done. Good story.
  • Priscilla The Prize on Aug. 25, 2013

    As Priscilla The Prize said, “Yeehaw. What a ride.”
  • The Washing Machine on Aug. 25, 2013

    I’ve heard of washing machines pulling extra duty cycles like this. Motorcycles too, idling while women straddle them until they both overheat, machine and woman.
  • Frannie the Titless Wonder on Aug. 25, 2013

    Amazing first time for them both. Loved the story.
  • Keeping Terry After School on Aug. 25, 2013

    Such a naughty girl. But will she learn her lesson well enough before the next time?
  • Whores on Aug. 26, 2013

    How many times was that naughty word used? Yet each time it seemed to mean a little something different. What a great story! I'd give it ten stars if I could.
  • Double Play on Aug. 26, 2013

    Sick.
  • Torture Me on Aug. 27, 2013

    A bit perverse, maybe more than a bit, but it seems she got what she asked for. Her husband sure was a fast learner.
  • Exercise Bike Sex on Aug. 27, 2013

    Quick and hot.
  • The Captain on Aug. 28, 2013

    Nice. Softly done and nice. A lot of typos though.
  • Ofiice Domination Dilemma (Love Triangles #1) on Aug. 29, 2013
    (no rating)
    I don’t know if I’ll bother reading this. Having a typo in the title makes one wonder about the author’s competence and concentration. I did read a few paragraphs and the style seems rather juvenile. Maybe I’ll check back later to see if the author has corrected things. There is another in the description, “Ofiice and sutlers”
  • Finalizing The Divorce on Aug. 29, 2013

    So so.
  • Strictly Come Dancing on Sep. 01, 2013

    Oh my word! What a hot story.
  • Divine Push, Divine Pull on Sep. 05, 2013
    (no rating)
    It read as if it was saying something important. Unfortunately I didn’t understand what.
  • Daddy for a Day on Sep. 12, 2013

    This is the first of John’s stories I’ve read in a while. I caught his earlier ones and enjoyed them, overlooking the typos and miscues back then. I’m happy to report that his writing is improving, though I still saw a few. This story is very hot and I assume there will be sequels to it. Keep up the good work John.
  • Ten Things Worse Than Rape on Sep. 15, 2013

    Food for thought. Or is it thoughts of revenge?
  • Holidays in the Sun on Sep. 19, 2013

    If you’re going to do the nitty gritty, you better be clear which is the nitty and which is the gritty. Then later, if you want, be sure if you’re ready to swap the gritty with the nitty. Or something like that…
  • Taking a Chance - Isabella Part One on Sep. 20, 2013

    I downloaded this a few months ago but just now got around to reading it after seeing the second issue posted. It is quite a fanciful adult fairytale as so much good erotica is, but not to be taken seriously or given any thoughts of emulating, of course. And Megan, you must realize what looks like bad spelling and grammar to us is only the Brits way of writing, though I must admit, it does make an awkward read at times.
  • Funny Butt Lover on Sep. 20, 2013

    It's so good when the right people find each other. And welcome to Smashwords Dawn.
  • Greta's Game on Sep. 24, 2013

    I downloaded this story a few days ago and since then have tried at least five or six times to read it. I say ‘try’ because the farther into the ‘game’ the story gets, the more depraved the ‘game master’ becomes. Half way through now, I must give up and quit reading for the master promises that the plot will only get worse. I give it one star only because I can’t cut one in half.
  • The Erotic Exploits Of New Lesbian Desires Volume #1 - Discovering Desires in the Girl-Garden and Please Misses Officer (Erotica By Women For Women) on Sep. 25, 2013

    An intriguing intro to lesbianism 101. But I don’t understand why she was fired for simply joining a rally against discrimination. Is that institution all that conservatively blue nosed?
  • Strangers On The Beach on Sep. 27, 2013

    Sexy? Not really. A turn-on? Not so much. But it is what she asked for, so who am I to object?
  • The Package on Oct. 01, 2013

    Well that left us with a lot of questions. Like who really did order the package, or was it just a mistaken delivery? And most of all, what was in the second package?
  • Girl-Nerds Like it Harder (Erotic Romance) Book 1 on Oct. 01, 2013

    I just finished reading your story. It was a fair read. When I checked the next two in line I noticed you had the same description for all three. If you want readers to buy the others, you need to tell them what is in the next stories.
  • The Righteous Government on Oct. 02, 2013

    Shades of 1984.
  • Nursed - an erotic short story on Oct. 02, 2013

    Delightful story. But the end was a bit confusing.
  • ....The Morning After - an erotic short story on Oct. 03, 2013

    Good story, but to be honest, I can’t imagine sex being a cure for a hangover. But then it’s been years since I’ve had a hangover—or sex for that matter.
  • Going (On My) Back to School on Oct. 04, 2013

    I believe you’re trying to seduce me Mrs. …
  • Big Girl Poison 13: Walter's Demon on Oct. 05, 2013

    Funny and kind of cute. But only about three star cute.
  • Bubble Trouble on Oct. 06, 2013

    Disjointed ending. Really no ending at all.
  • Bubble Trouble on Oct. 06, 2013
    (no rating)
    Vanessa, had I read the description and its ‘spoon fed information’ I too would have known it was her boyfriend she was missing and not (pick one) dead/alive, husband/boyfriend/dom, imaginative non-existent lover, ghost, etc.) The sound of the helicopter could have brought tears to her eyes because he was killed in one. A story should be replete within itself and not need external description. And come on, a few showers? You sure it’s not the South African heat? LOL
  • Ecstasy of the Grape on Oct. 07, 2013

    I normally enjoy welcoming a new writer to Smashwords and always hope to give a good review. But in this case all I can do is encourage the writer to take extra time to carefully re-read a manuscript before submitting. This story, though admittedly a fresh storyline, is so riddled with misspellings, typos, and incorrect and repetitive word usage that the best I can give it is two stars. I do hope the writer makes that effort in the future.
  • Absolutely over the Moon! on Oct. 08, 2013
    (no rating)
    There is a problem here. Nothing is downloading but three words: Microsoft Word Doc.
  • BDSM THREESOME. on Oct. 08, 2013

    It is hard to call this a story because it has no title, author listed, or plot. It is merely an attempt at pure porn. It has only one paragraph, it seems, and many errors throughout.
  • A fear of lust (A fear of love #2) on Oct. 11, 2013
    (no rating)
    Lisa, I just read your bio and see that you are only sixteen, which technically makes you too young to read adult material, let alone try to write it. You need to take English and composition classes while in school, concentrating on sentence structure and punctuation. You do have a good sense of story line so I encourage you to continue writing. Best of luck.
  • A fear of lust (A fear of love #2) on Oct. 11, 2013
    (no rating)
    Lisa, I do hope you read all of my comment attached to ‘A fear of lust 2.’ I am trying to encourage you, not put you down. You have good potential, so please keep learning and writing. To answer your question: “is punctuation a story?” it is a major part of writing, making your thoughts clearer for the reader, so please do try. I’m going to remove the rated reviews to this and your other stories to encourage your readers to check out your work. Again I say, best of everything.
  • Submitting To The Mistresses - Lesbian BDSM Erotica on Oct. 11, 2013

    Editor needed: apply inside.
  • The Operation on Oct. 13, 2013

    Somehow I was expecting something more at the end.
  • My Best Friend on Oct. 16, 2013

    This is not the story depicted in the description, which is a good thing considering the participants are too young for the story line. The author asks if she should continue the story. Sure, if she bumps the ages a couple of years.
  • The Prostitute on Nov. 01, 2013

    This is a well written and intriguing short story, a little too short perhaps. It certainly leaves this reader wanting more.
  • Mallory and Greer on Nov. 01, 2013

    Something a little different. At places the POV was a little confusing, but otherwise okay
  • Lasting Impressions 1 on Nov. 02, 2013

    Ms. Grey-Bear was reminded of old detective novels, I thought of Rod Serling’s Twilight Zone, only Mr. Serling had the decency to finish a story in thirty minutes. This story is only a tease, so readers beware.
  • The Faeries on Nov. 02, 2013

    And I thought the faeries were cute little things like Peter Pan’s Tinkerbell.
  • The Dead Husbands Club on Nov. 02, 2013

    I truly hate reading a story to have it end with a variation of ‘to be continued,’ but to wade through 108 pages to come upon one is intolerable—especially when there was no warning.
  • Bed Bug Ridden on Nov. 03, 2013

    A bit drastic, but could be effective.
  • Sexting with "Colorado" - A True Story By Lilian Vyse on Nov. 03, 2013

    So this is what sexting is all about? Do you have enough fingers for everything?
  • The Life & Loves of Melody Davis - Gina on Nov. 03, 2013

    This story had such an incredible realism to it that I had to backtrack to check that it is listed as fiction. The love making is so tender, so touching, and yet so intense, it’s breathtaking, however not a word of it is pornographic. I can only repeat the word, incredible.
  • Carry On, Carrie Moon on Nov. 03, 2013

    I’ve read this before and I’m surprised I didn’t give it a review. I could have sworn it was a long time ago, though I see it’s only been up since August. Whatever, it’s a very intriguing story, well worth four stars
  • My Story Of You on Nov. 03, 2013

    Confusion here until I remembered the genre.
  • Selling Jessie on Nov. 04, 2013

    When it comes to doing business, Jessica is all pro—and then some.
  • Cameraman For A Lesbian Porno II The Maid and the Schoolgirl; An Erotic (F/F/M) Reality Tale From The Man’s Point Of View on Nov. 04, 2013

    Oh, the poor cameraman, thanklessly slaving away at his craft.
  • Fireworks on Nov. 06, 2013

    Short and to the point.
  • Tilly and Elmer Get Warmed Up on Nov. 07, 2013

    A big ditto on the editor advice. Just having each character’s sentence in a separate paragraph would make reading much easier. Delightful story though.
  • After The First (a flash fiction story) on Nov. 08, 2013

    If he needs to feed, then why does he let his food go to waste?
  • Encounter: Pirate (Spaceport) on Nov. 09, 2013

    Alfred, if you thought the picture was bad, you should have tried to read the story. It was worse.
  • All for me on Nov. 09, 2013

    So so.
  • Love in the City of Love on Nov. 10, 2013

    They go to the city of love to only make love one night? What a waste.
  • A Taste of The Gaudens Project on Nov. 10, 2013

    Very thin with the story line.
  • Ryan on Nov. 11, 2013

    Cute story. Could've used a little more though.
  • Tricks-n-Treats on Nov. 11, 2013

    Not bad. Certainly not the sinister ending I had feared. Oops, have I said too much?
  • Wash Me on Nov. 12, 2013

    This story has been hiding away in my ebook folder for two and a half years waiting for me to stumble across it. And of all days to do that, I just brought a load of laundry up from the machines to my apartment. What a delightfully funny tale of hangover induced nightmarish proportions. I hope the author hasn’t been holding her breath waiting for me.
  • She Was The Gateway Drug on Nov. 12, 2013

    Gateway drug? But to what? Strange little story.
  • Anal Intensity on Nov. 13, 2013

    Aaron needs to keep track of what he writes. One minute he says, “she’s naked except for her shoes,” then a few paragraphs later it’s, “After pulling her panties off with his teeth, Josh…” I have to give him credit for the intensity of his story though, no one had a chance to breath..
  • Body on Fire on Nov. 14, 2013

    She should be careful. She'll burn out like a candle burning at each end.
  • The Rescue on Nov. 15, 2013

    It’s good to know that chivalry isn’t dead. But I can’t help wonder if he intends to mete out her punishment in front of all the others. That would be quite a show and it appears that the Lord would be all for it.
  • Tilly and Elmer Go to Las Vegas on Nov. 15, 2013

    Well did they or didn't they...get the picture?
  • Meeting Strangers on a Train- Men's Erotic short story on Nov. 15, 2013

    Nice story but could use some editing and well placed comas.
  • Online Spanking: Excerpt on Nov. 15, 2013

    Well not much backstory, but judging by the tags, it was only to be about spanking anyway.
  • Online F%ck Match- Men's Erotica on Nov. 15, 2013

    Nothing like a dinner and a show.
  • In The Mood For Anal on Nov. 16, 2013

    Now there is one college boy who will wear a smile clear into the next semester.
  • Dance with Me on Nov. 16, 2013

    Such a delightful, sweet story of a love finally resolved, growing more intense for the wait.
  • To Have and To Hold on Nov. 19, 2013

    Yes the ending makes one wonder. Did she, or didn’t she?
  • North Country on Nov. 19, 2013

    How hard will guilt drive a man?
  • Running on Nov. 19, 2013

    A nice little 'who done it?'
  • Neighbors on Nov. 19, 2013

    Double twist at the end of this one.
  • Seduction In The Woods on Nov. 19, 2013

    How could it be an urban legend if it’s in the woods…waiting…waiting…?
  • Living Doll on Nov. 19, 2013
    (no rating)
    read soon
  • Upstairs - Downstairs Part One on Nov. 20, 2013

    This story proves what I so often have thought, that women make the better erotic writers, being much more attuned to the subject I assume. But before I leave, I must point out something comical. It seems that Millie had two left breasts.
  • Middlemonth on Nov. 20, 2013

    A more natural—and necessary—ménage as you’ll ever find.
  • Nymphomaniac on Nov. 20, 2013

    The constant switching of first person points of view was a little distracting, forcing me to often re-read the first sentences of paragraphs to keep things straight.
  • Spying On My Roommate on Nov. 21, 2013

    If you need an energetic, cum filled tale, this is it.
  • Christmas Came Early on Nov. 21, 2013

    Like Santa, the delivery man comes but once a year, at least for her.
  • Cum For Dinner on Nov. 22, 2013

    The unfortunate thing is, this probably happens sometime, somewhere.
  • Passion Chronicles on Nov. 22, 2013

    I would like to welcome you to Smashwords. I just wish I could do so with a better review than what I’m about to give. Your description promises far more than the stories deliver, I’m sorry to say. First, second person POV is always awkward, in my opinion, and made more so in the final chapter. You describe things that happen at both the beginning and end that as a first person author you can’t possibly know. While your POV is your choice, I do encourage you to continue writing.
  • You're The One That I Want on Nov. 22, 2013

    An hot, intense, erotic clearing of the air between the two, though it might have had a bit more meaning with a little backstory. Very well written.
  • Something So right on Nov. 22, 2013

    Well, this story has a plot a bit different from most, a plot that made me glad I hadn’t read the tag before. There’s nothing like waking to a new lover each morning. Well written despite the few typos.
  • Rachel's Penance on Nov. 22, 2013

    Great! Totally great. And I’m finally learning that trainers are shoes, not small bras for pre-pubescent girls. But I’d sure love to read a follow up to this story.
  • What a Big Wiggly Butt Can Do: A Novelette on Nov. 22, 2013

    Great story, but I’m a little disappointed with the cover art. It should be a big wiggly butt.
  • Adventurous Couples on Nov. 23, 2013

    A string of four loosely strung tales, so loose that I thought the third one was a different jewel entirely. All delicious and leaving this reader wanting more, much more.
  • Astara Disrobed on Nov. 24, 2013

    I was confused at first, not comprehending what I was reading, but then comprehension slowly sank in, then I was unable to walk away until I finished. Such a delightful read with such a touching ending.
  • Pumpkin Spice #1; The Purrfect Treat on Nov. 24, 2013

    Oh well. One is as good as another, I guess.
  • The Philosopher Queen on Nov. 24, 2013

    Kind of cute.
  • Christina Wants a Threesome on Nov. 24, 2013

    What Christina wanted, Christina got.
  • Miriam and Lionel on Nov. 24, 2013

    The old goat got his nannies.
  • Remember on Nov. 24, 2013

    Eww!
  • Adventurous Women on Nov. 24, 2013

    Good, very good.
  • 3 LESBIAN SHADES OF GAY! on Nov. 24, 2013

    Several pages of text is repeated in the middle. Hard to sort out.
  • Sweet Agony on Nov. 25, 2013

    A little backstory might have been nice about the bet.
  • Mrs. Van Houten, CEO - The Femme Dominion Series #1 on Nov. 25, 2013

    Now that’s one job interview any man with the right qualifications would love to receive.
  • Thirty Strokes: Erotic Discipline Confessions on Nov. 26, 2013

    And to think, they happily paid for this.
  • Nuns Learning New Tricks #1 - A New Policy on Nov. 26, 2013

    Oh, for heaven's sakes.
  • Virgin on Nov. 26, 2013

    Hot and ready.
  • Ripples of Desire on Nov. 26, 2013

    Don’t mess with the green eyed lady of the lake unless you are willing to pay for your transgressions.
  • Mandy's Therapy (femdom strap-on fun) on Nov. 27, 2013

    A fine turn of events--a very fine turn.
  • Harvest Boons on Nov. 29, 2013

    Not bad, certainly different.
  • Yes ... Mr Richards on Dec. 01, 2013

    Well, wasn't that sweet?
  • Christina's Skool Daze BJ on Dec. 03, 2013

    Wow! For a gal that doesn’t swallow, she sure made up for it. Now I want the rest of the story.
  • After Gym Quickie on Dec. 03, 2013

    Good one.
  • My Friend's Older Brother on Dec. 03, 2013

    Hog tied and horny.
  • 12 Days; the Sixth Day of Christmas on Dec. 03, 2013

    It's hard to imagine husbands and wives acting that way, but we'll imagine it anyway.
  • Tales of the Handmaidens: Nadine & Agwe: A Passion Denied on Dec. 03, 2013

    Confusing, even with the ‘scorecard’ at the end.
  • The Broken Needles on Dec. 03, 2013

    Cute.
  • Bachelor Party Mistake on Dec. 04, 2013

    I can only say, "He should have seen it coming."
  • Lamb on Dec. 05, 2013

    A wham, bam, but no thank you sir.
  • The Visitor on Dec. 06, 2013

    A style so different it’s hard to read, yet so compelling it’s impossible to put down.
  • From Hair To Eternity on Dec. 07, 2013

    Not bad. Not great, but not bad.
  • His name is Roy on Dec. 07, 2013

    Checking the author’s bio, we see that he is not from an English speaking country, which might explain his lack of skill with it. Granted, the stories are silly, but it’s fiction.
  • The Lusty City Chronicles on Dec. 07, 2013

    Makes me glad I don't live in his city.
  • The Tutor (MILF 2, Book 1) on Dec. 07, 2013

    There is nothing like a tutor with all the skills needed for the job.
  • The Interview on Dec. 08, 2013

    In the end she says she understands. I can’t say I do. Like how she can both stand and sit on the train at 8:17 in the same sentence. Or why she didn’t tell us she masturbated while on the train until much later. And I wonder how many such intense interviews can Nathan conduct in a given day?
  • Diaries of 68+1 on Dec. 08, 2013

    I keep asking, why do people with only a slim grasp of ESL keep trying to write in English. This is dreadful.
  • Erotica: 3 Ultra Short Casting Confession Sex Stories: 1 on Dec. 09, 2013

    Three up, three down…a perfect inning. You can’t ask for more.
  • Layers, Chapter 1 on Dec. 09, 2013

    Well this was different. Very different. At this point I'm usually complaining that the story ended too abruptly but I see that there are nine more and the tenth is the finally one. Werewolves aren't my things so I don't know if I'll read all the others. Maybe one more. At least the writing is decent.
  • Old Ebenezer The Gravedigger on Dec. 10, 2013

    What a sweet tale.
  • Bonfire Night on Dec. 10, 2013

    Shades of Mark Twain.
  • Dead Monk's Shoes on Dec. 10, 2013

    Cute.
  • Sonny's Swimming Lessons on Dec. 10, 2013

    I read the story, then the reviews, then reread the story.. Two and a half years after the story was first published, I get the feeling that the author took some of the reviewers’ evaluations to heart, which is what a review is all about.
  • The Sock on Dec. 10, 2013

    Cute. Very Cute.
  • Rovotica Volume 1 on Dec. 12, 2013

    Quite a similar theme with most of the stories.
  • PassionCon on Dec. 16, 2013

    Nice. Different in a good way. A little light on the erotic side but that's okay. And so much potential for a sequel.
  • The Maid and Master Henry on Dec. 17, 2013

    My first review with the new style. Not used to it. The story was interesting but I thought there was a lead in story to it, though I can't find it now.
  • Molly's Sexual Curse on Dec. 18, 2013

    I’m sorry to say that the plot to this story is rather lame. In the beginning, Tristan wanders through a labyrinth of stairs and dark hallways before acquiring Molly, yet somehow knows that the nearby backdoor is a shorter exit. I was enticed into buying it wondering how the curse was to be removed. But it was dispensed with in less than a page near the end with little credible explanation. Up to that point we readers were subjected to many points of the plot that didn’t make much sense starting with Molly standing after coming out of the cage and again at the end of the same paragraph. How did Molly’s picture of the witch get into a book with her byline long before he managed to find the camera like a needle in a haystack? Or the beginning of Chapter 6 where Molly is tied to the bedpost naked but in the same page Tristan tears off her clothes leaving her completely naked—again? I believe that is the same place where he blindfolds her yet manages to lock eyes with her a few paragraphs later. Come on author, pay attention to what you write. Or why Tristan asked Molly at the pool if she can squirt after the bed drenching the day before. Is his memory that short? Then a certain Max appears out of nowhere having kidnapped her and begins torturing her until Tristan, the hero, appears equally out of the blue to rescue her and other girls. And how could Max be so close to them at the pool and Molly not spot him?
  • Nuns on The Run on Dec. 18, 2013

    I'm surprised it didn't say, 'to be continued' because it certainly felt unfinished.
  • Deer Dancing (Tales of the Reluctant Shaman) Real Story Safe Sex Project on Dec. 20, 2013

    I’m not sure what to make of this story or even if it is a story. Definitely pushing a safe sex theme so that is good.
  • Trevor's Odd Assay on Dec. 21, 2013

    If Trevor's a bit confused, he's not the only one.
  • Spangled on Dec. 22, 2013

    Such a loss.
  • Replacement in Heaven on Dec. 25, 2013

    Interesting, if a little off the cuff.
  • Oblique Vengeance on Dec. 25, 2013

    Such a powerful story, well written with strength and candor.
  • 18 and Cleaning House: Story 9 of the 18 Collection on Dec. 28, 2013

    Rather silly, but amusing just the same.
  • The Life and Loves of Melody Davis - Lisa on Dec. 29, 2013

    Melody Davis, girl Casanova, but with a heart of cream cheese. The girl who makes us root for more states to pass gay marriage laws, then maybe she can settle down to the one love of her life, whoever she is.
  • Sissy Dreams: A Gift for You on Jan. 01, 2014

    Strange.
  • Our Dirty Secret (Magic Dildo Erotica) on Jan. 01, 2014

    All the horny girls should get to lucky.
  • His First Time on Jan. 01, 2014

    So so.
  • Beneath the Sheets on Jan. 06, 2014

    I hate stories that leave you hanging.
  • You Don't Know Half Of It on Jan. 06, 2014

    Ah, if only all couples aged to well--and in sync too.
  • Workers Playtime. on Jan. 06, 2014

    I would have expected a higher percentage than that.
  • Helen: A BDSM Tale on Jan. 07, 2014

    A very well written story, but in the end, can we tell who is really in charge?
  • Stitching Inseams: Nyra and Astrid on Jan. 08, 2014

    I loved it--truly loved it.
  • Jo, T-Girl Goddess! 1 (Transgender Erotica) on Jan. 08, 2014

    Very confusing with the gender twisting. Still, not a bad read.
  • How Kiwa met Dracula on Jan. 09, 2014

    Very primitive writing.
  • Still the One (School Daze) on Jan. 09, 2014

    Nice read. It begs for a sequel.
  • The Ex! on Jan. 12, 2014

    Very poor story, badly in need of editing.
  • My Only Concern Was To Please Him: Vol. 1 on Jan. 12, 2014

    Needs editing.
  • Whiteout (Three's Allowed, Book 1) on Jan. 14, 2014

    A little far fetched, but then so was Paint Your Wagon.
  • Lipstick "Lesbian" on Jan. 15, 2014

    One hot, delightful story.
  • Midnight Matinee on Jan. 17, 2014

    So, so.
  • Young, Dumb & Full of Vigour on Jan. 18, 2014

    A rather abrupt ending.
  • The Swan Princess on Jan. 18, 2014

    Gruesome, very gruesome.
  • Lamb on Jan. 20, 2014

    A well written story, but sorely lacking in the, who, where, why and other details needed to flesh it out.
  • Lamb on Jan. 20, 2014
    (no rating)
    And yes, I did eventually realize I’d been suckered into reading a werewolf story—a genre I would normally avoid.
  • Nigel's Threesome on Jan. 20, 2014

    The last word said it all. "Amen." What a wonderful tale.
  • It's Her on Jan. 21, 2014

    Her who?
  • Business Proposal on Jan. 21, 2014

    A very hot story, but the follow up story sounds flaunt with intrigue.
  • The Milking Stool: An Excerpt From The Novella "Sex For Fun and Profit" on Jan. 23, 2014

    And so it begins.
  • Last Night on Jan. 24, 2014

    What's good for the goose, is good...
  • Scarcity on Jan. 24, 2014

    A very well written and biting story, though I would have been pleased to have the story filled out more.
  • Strangers on Jan. 24, 2014

    Confusing at spots and badly in need of editing.
  • Rock & Roll: A Story of Forced Feminization on Jan. 24, 2014

    Never underestimate the perversion of a sex fiend, or two.
  • Coven Wars Part 1: Opening Movement on Jan. 27, 2014

    It might be better to wait for the whole thing so you won't be left with a cliff hanger. It does show promise.
  • Him and Her on Jan. 28, 2014

    I should complain that it ended in a cliffhanger. Well, not really ended. But it was enticing, so I won’t…complain that is. The author did leave an out. A feed to the rest of the story as Paul Harvey used to say.
  • The Quicky on Jan. 29, 2014

    Considering the attitude these two had of one another in the beginning, it’s hard to believe that they ever got together at all. The quicky described was one solution to the spot they were in but enticed them for more.
  • The Barbie Lez Fantasies - Week 5: The Gynecologist (Lesbianism) on Jan. 29, 2014

    Hard to tell what's real and what is not.
  • A Hell of a Love on Jan. 29, 2014

    Sad tale.
  • Right Here, Right Now on Jan. 29, 2014

    Well written but with a predicable ending.
  • Kate's Double Feature (Free First Two Chapters) on Feb. 01, 2014

    Brief. Too brief.
  • Ned on Feb. 06, 2014

    Touching.
  • Hot-wife Chloe: Creating a Cuckold on Feb. 10, 2014

    This is a strange husband to accept a situation like this. But it’s only fiction, we hope.
  • Teach Me How It's Done #1 on Feb. 10, 2014

    He's a dirty old man in the best possible way.
  • Farm Girl on Feb. 11, 2014

    Farm Girl has been sitting in a folder in my computer for over three years now and every time I spotted the picture of her sitting on the tractor, I reminded myself that I needed to read it. Finally, at long last, I have. Though not truly an intense bit of erotica, it was a good heartwarming read none the less. I am a little confused at the legality of the ending but I’ll accept it as plausible. I’d read the Priestesses way back when and thought I’d reviewed it but I don’t see in there. It was an amazing story and Ashley Zacharias’s review covered it quite well.
  • He Walked In on Feb. 16, 2014

    Less than half a story.
  • Adventure In A Glorious Hole Revisited on Feb. 16, 2014

    I read both versions in one setting to make a full comparison, and found little difference beyond the POV change. I can’t imagine what anyone would complain about with either rendition. Did see one me that should have been he.
  • Coda on Feb. 18, 2014

    Perhaps if the author gave us a hint of what her transgression was, we might understand what we were reading.
  • Foreign Affairs on Feb. 24, 2014

    A reasonable tale of girl on girl, good enough to overlook the scattered typos and grammatical miscues, though I would have liked some hint as to how Ayumi knew Susan by name. Am I to assume it will be followed by another story of these two? Also you should have better consistency with the title. On the cover it’s ‘FOREIGN AFFAIR’ but the Smashwords listing has it ‘Foreign Affairs.’ Nice cover, by the way.
  • Come With Me To The Tree on Feb. 26, 2014

    Very strange.
  • Passion at a Conference on Feb. 27, 2014

    So much for corporate ethics. As to the writing, many POV errors as well as tense switches.
  • Bondage with the Boss on Feb. 27, 2014

    There’s nothing like the enthusiasm of a young couple on the rungs of the corporate latter.
  • Cincinnati Charm on Feb. 28, 2014

    A very well written and sensuous story. I certainly hope there will be more to follow.
  • Shown The Ropes on March 01, 2014

    Billy gets his money's worth--every cent of it.
  • Two Plus Me Equals Three on March 02, 2014

    A very hot adult fairy tale.
  • Seducing My Roommate on March 03, 2014

    And now for an honest review: I truly love a great lesbian story and while this one is not great, it is good enough for the money, and not bad for a first time effort.
  • Ruined on March 04, 2014

    A very well written and intense bit of erotica. My only complaint was it ended way too soon, begging for more.
  • The Shaman's Daughter: An Asian Erotica Short Story on March 05, 2014

    It's a good thing the author gave us pictures of the fruit or we'd never have gotten it.
  • Not Meant To Be on March 07, 2014

    Ah yes, the ships passing in the night.
  • Strap on Initiation on March 07, 2014

    Oh to be that lucky.
  • Wildcards — Sex with a Twist on March 09, 2014

    Well we were promised sex with a twist and we got it.
  • Zoe: Bared on March 09, 2014

    Excelent.
  • So Scandalous! on April 20, 2014

    As a sixty-nine year old, I can only say I wish this wasn’t fiction.
  • Vanilla Dreams on May 18, 2014

    A well written story but the ending is a little confusing.
  • Crossing That Last Line on May 18, 2014

    Written well enough to wish it was longer.
  • Gender Reversed Sex Tales on May 18, 2014

    Nearly every character in this posting is too young for the material. It should not have been submitted here.
  • Deserved Spanking on May 22, 2014

    I didn’t need to check this author’s bio to guess his primary language is not English—but I did anyway. (He’s from the Czech Republic.) Perhaps he should get an editor well versed in English before proceeding. The story falls short of being interesting.
  • Bought: A Fantasy BDSM Tale on May 25, 2014

    An interesting and sexy interlude.
  • Porcelain: A BDSM Story on May 25, 2014

    Does the punishment fit the crime?
  • Unexpected - Book 3 of 8 on May 25, 2014

    The author claims to having never read a book cover to cover. This obviously includes any English textbooks judging by how poorly written this story is.
  • The Life That Ends: The Reborn deleted scene on May 25, 2014

    Okay if you believe in reincarnation—but really?
  • That's What Friends Are For - A True Story of Erotic Friendship on May 26, 2014

    A very hot read of a very hot, illicit sexual encounter.
  • A Naked Trip to the Supermarket on May 28, 2014

    A fair start--but where is the rest of the story.
  • Katie vs Dave on May 30, 2014

    It feels like I've been here before.
  • Jennifer's Secrete on June 01, 2014

    This story needs a serious rewrite or an editor’s touch. Too many sentences began with a noun or pronoun. And I wonder if the author really meant to say ‘Secrete’ instead of secret in the title. But then again, Jennifer did squirt a lot so maybe…? Quite a number of typos and misspellings throughout as well. The plot wasn’t so bad, but I’d like to see a better ending.
  • Charles Wallace's Favorite Toy on June 02, 2014

    A well-crafted bit of fiction—I checked to be sure—otherwise I’d suggest the cat be banned from the bedroom.
  • Wanna Play? on June 04, 2014

    Not bad. Not bad at all. In fact pretty damn good.
  • Gift from the sex Gods on July 21, 2014

    Very poorly written. No punctuation, no paragraphs, no plausible plot.
  • Fired on July 22, 2014

    Doesn’t make sense, how could she be fired, as the title suggests, before she is hired? The writing could use some editing and the end hints at a sequel but says nothing about one.
  • Satiated: A Short Story on July 23, 2014

    Not much of a story here, just a little barebones narration followed by violent, crushing brutality.
  • Bathtub Jim on Aug. 17, 2014

    Is this complete? It doesn't seem like it.
  • Culture Shock on Aug. 24, 2014

    Not bad. But I've never know Kalbi to be spelled with a G.
  • No Shame, No Regrets on Aug. 25, 2014

    Not bad, but a readthrough might have corrected all the typos.
  • Matrix Reversal on Aug. 28, 2014

    Nonsense.
  • Why Do Men Rape Often? on Aug. 28, 2014

    Pure B.S.