on April 06, 2011
I am on the second book. While I love the story plot, I do find that they definitely need some help with present/past tense and with words used in the right context. There instead of their, put it in their pocket rather than them in line with sunglasses. Miss Alina, I praise your initiative, but am thinking that you need to get someone else to read before you publish so that the words are in proper context.