Brit Suttell

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Smashwords book reviews by Brit Suttell

  • The Legend of League Park on Dec. 08, 2012

    This book was a gem. It was beautifully written and, overall, the story lines were well drawn and intersected nicely. I would highly recommend this book to just about any baseball fan. Stilgenbauer's love of the game seeps into every page. Like any woman who has truly loved baseball since a young age, I faced many snickers from boys growing up. These sexist prejudices, while not dominant in the book, were carefully and thoughtfully added. While I would love to give this book 4 1/2 - 5 stars, I just cannot for a couple reasons. First, throughout the first half of the book it is very unclear if the main protaganist, Gioia Rinaldi, pitches softball or baseball. Stilgenbauer is not very clear on this front and found myself constantly wondering whether Rinaldi wanted a scholarship for softball and baseball. Similarly, the mechanics in pitching a softball versus a baseball are very different, so I had a difficult time buying into the premise that Rinaldi could be so dominant at each. I think it would have been more believable had Rinaldi been a phenomenal baseball pitcher and a softball center-fielder. That would be more plausible because those throwing mechanics are more similar and have a strong center-fielding arm would translate better to baseball. Second, one of the shorter story lines concerning Rinaldi's brother is cut short and I am left wondering why. That particular story-line is abruptly abandoned when I felt that it really could have been continually weaved into the overall story. Despite these, at times, frustrating drawbacks, the book was great and I was sad when it was over.
  • An Honest Mistake: A Humor Tale on Jan. 13, 2013

    Unfortunately, this book was not very enjoyable. I think if the story had been any longer I probably would have given up on it. The story is about two sisters and their older brother. The male character is shown as a meat-head and jerk, which annoyed me. The author's attempt at writing in "teen-speak" also failed; none of the teenagers I deal with (which is a fair amount since I live at a boarding school) talk how the author portrayed them. Overall, I was very disappointed.
  • The Missing Text: A Short Humor Story on Jan. 13, 2013

    Unfortunately, this story was not very enjoyable. I think if the story had been any longer I probably would have given up. It is about two teenage girls who want to see the latest vampire movie with their boyfriends. There is some miscommunication and they end up missing their double-date. The male characters are shown as meat-heads and jerks, which annoyed me. The author's attempt at writing in "teen-speak" also failed; none of the teenagers I deal with (which is a fair amount since I live at boarding school) talk how the author portrayed them. Overall, I was very disappointed.