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  • The Kildaran on March 12, 2013
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    Adam Gaffen and Dick Evens for mostly beginners this was a fine work. I find that it still needs some polishing and editing though. I really only have a couple of things to say about this book and it's really about your writing of this book. Any one reading this book has more than likely read the first five so you drove us to distraction by belaboring explaining who characters were and how they got there since we already knew it. Kurt was the wrong character for the whole bomb plot for the way you wrote it since he did not have to track katya down he knew who she was and that she worked for the Kildar and knew where the Kildar hung out also kurt had better options to follow if he wanted to nuke the kildar and he would have been after the kildar not Katya and if he was after katya he would have known for sure she was there before he set off the nuke. on a personal note I did not particularly care for the end since I felt you turned the Kildar into a whiney little girl and you made pierson out to be a scum bag. Now a note for John Ringo you need to be taken to Singapore and cained for inflicting that trash you called Tiger By the Tail on us and if they did a little editing on this book I would have been willing to buy it and it kicked your ass as it is