20 something year old recent grad trying to figure this real life thing out. If you have tips on how this real life thing works, please drop me a line...
Engages in too many hobbies and activities, but to much dismay doesn't really accomplish much that matters.
Generally has a lot of fun and enjoys time... most of the time :)
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- A Cynic's Guide to Everything
on May 08, 2011
There is nothing wrong with writing thoughts and generate what will be a very enjoyable pillowbook. However the author's approach is wrong from the start.
The author provides nothing in the first three pages to make the reader want to continue reading. While I personally like reading about other people's thoughts and opinions, it is really only enjoyable when it can be related back to the reader. In this case, it is like listening to that annoying friend with whom you had gone out for coffee and wonder when she's going to stop talking vainly about herself regarding matters that you really don't care about.
I can't really recommend this work. I really do like the concept, but it requires more refinement.