Location: United States
Member Since: March 15, 2011
Paul Zimmerli
Biography
Once a warrior/poet, now a forgotten dweller in civil service anonymity, in Wichita Falls, Texas, "150 miles from anywhere and six inches from Hell."
Books
This member has not published any books.Paul Zimmerli's favorite authors on Smashwords
Herb Blanchard
Latest book: DEPLOYMENT VIETNAM -Part 1. Published on September 16, 2011.
Smashwords book reviews by Paul Zimmerli
- Blood City Chronicles: The Black Petal
on Sep. 23, 2011
This may be a good book. I don't know. It's not in a format I can read at the moment. Why not at least a PDF version?
- Lt. Commander Mollie Sanders
on Jan. 19, 2012
I agree with aussiematt... This is the core of two fine novels that need fleshing out. As a service retiree, I agree the rank is too low for the actions the heroine supposedly takes, but military fiction writers often under-grade their protagonists like this because they don't understand the levels of authority each rank carries or lacks. Overall, however, I've enjoyed it. At least the author knows what a spell-check button is for, unlike most Smashwords authors, unfortunately... She has a good writing style that, as a retired journalist, I fully appreciate. Please take a good look at this book, break it into a novel about Commander Mollie Sanders and one about Captain Mollie Sanders, and flesh them out with a little more detail and verbosity... You've got a couple of money-earners here if you do it right. Oh - and get a reviewer who's a retired naval officer to take a look at them and make suggestions...