Reviews of Murder On The Mountain

This is a tightly-written, tense short story with a surprise at its conclusion. The black humor which is one of the signature features of its writer's oeuvre is again in evidence here, and effective for its allegorical impact.

I loved this story than the others.very well written with a clever ending.

Written well, but written to be clever, this fast moving short story takes a very specific viewpoint and tries to drive home a point.

While not knowing what the story was about, I already knew the ending almost immediately. It felt very transparent, and it did not have the same impact knowing how clever the author was trying to be. It is very difficult to write a surprise ending like this, especially if the story loses its impact because the reader catches on before they are supposed to.

Very clever writing. I was not expecting that for an ending. Well done!

I really liked this story. Well written with a twist.

I have got to tell you, was surprised in the end! Nice! Not real fond of people who... murder as they do.

I used to be one of those jerks. No more.
The story caught me off guard.
Perfect writing to me.

Great story but ending surprisd me.
I agree!
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Very interesting idea for a story. Love this one!

Wow! Great twist at the end!