Reviews of The Unsuspecting Mage: The Morcyth Saga Book One
by Brian S. Pratt
“Want to be a mage? Then do we have the job for you…”
Sounds great for a veteran role-player. When on-the-job training entails battling demons, learning magic through trial and error, and living in a world without toilet paper, things could get rough. But to be dropped in the middle of a forest and having to do it on your own with no instruction…welcome to James’ world.
Reviews of The Unsuspecting Mage: The Morcyth Saga Book One by Brian S. Pratt
M. Pars
reviewed
on Aug. 28, 2013
I have to agree with my fellow reviewers - the book lacks tension and the present tense is very difficult to follow. I think that the use of the present tense takes away any depth, rendering the story flat. I certainly would not pay money to read the remaining volumes.
(review of free book)
Jeremy Drewett, Jr
reviewed
on April 7, 2013
Was hard to get into story with present tense writing.
(review of free book)