Getting a blow job behind a dumpster from a street walker while worrying about being robbed by her pimp???? I saw nothing erotic about this book at all
Firstly I personally don't like the front cover which looks more like it should be on a gardening book. Secondly there is no structure or paragraphs in the book it is basically an essay. Thirdly it is a mildly good story however it doesn't flow as well as it could have done.
Quick and to the point. I do like a tad more storyline but I get the idea. :)
You reviewed one of my stories... Thanks...I wrote a second one and if you read it let me know what you think.