Reviews of Mary's Toy

Writing average, rather clinical description.

Not bad for such a short book.

How can anyone take a story seriously when the front cover looks like it was drawn for a children's book? This is seriously messed up right here. The story itself, average. Decidedly average.

I'm not sure which was worse, the story or that ridiculous picture for a front cover. Seriously, what the hell is that thing supposed to be? A dildo or a bong?

not really my kind of story but nice slow pace. i would have liked more graphic descriptions,

A superbly intriguing tale, short, sweet, incredibly erotic and oh so sexy. Delightfully detailed, perfectly described, with an exquisitely executed finale.

I just loved this story. It was great. Every woman should own one of those. They are great. The story sure gets you turned on.

That was fantastic!! Short sweet and hot

A well written erotic tale; short, sweet, and delivers at the end with a nice hot finish. Good stuff.

I look first for good writing, which certainly includes proper grammar. The style and voice are up to the author, but I expect the author to take me somewhere else and make me believe the story. Dialog that sounds right is a plus. These expectations are why I go to Ernest Winchester: He's dependable.

Mary's Toy--five stars.