I always seem to read stories out of order.
Caroline is more real in this one as she interacts with Jasmine and Dahlia. It helps that she has a name which she lacked until the end of the other story. She still isn’t likeable, sneaking up on and startling Dahlia and getting right into her personal space.
And just how does she manage to see ‘between the glistening folds of her pussy’ and everything else Dahlia does to herself, when Dahlia has only opened her jeans button and undone the zip and would have her hand in the way too.
I find this writing as a voyeur does nothing for me, I don’t like Caroline at all, but the writing itself is quite good in this story.
2 typos: buzzing below my belly flared fiercely > flare fiercely;; my eyes away her > eyes away from her;;
(review of free book)