The Darkness Unseen

Crap it is. Deserves no star rating but for the time you took it to pen it, and for an average plot framework, i am giving this 1 star!
Improve your grammar.

I Loved this story..... please keep writing.........

Nice job. The story has a good basis.
Liked it.

Hi Michelle... very nice story. I felt the worry and anxiousness. Good job!
I like your style. Please keep writing! Can't wait to read your next one!
Hugs
Sasha

Hi Michelle. I see you are from Nigeria. Welcome to Smashwords! I thought your story was really good. Takes some time to get used to the formatting of text, but after a time we get it. Please keep writing! One thing you can count on... Some people will like your work, some won't, so what! Just keep on writing. There are many of us here that would love to read what you write!

Michelle. WELL DONE!!! In case you don't know, the one who gave you only one star, is well known as someone who can only make herself feel important at all by putting down others! She is known by most on smash words as someone to ignore. When people see her name they just laugh. Your story was quite good. Please keep writing!

Rarely do I bother to write expletives, but there is only one word for this short story — "Garbage." Spelling is poor. Grammar is non-existent. Plot is rubbish. Gives e-books a bad name.