The Darkness Unseen
Claire is a normal girl searching for answers not just concerning life but also her sister's 'suicide'. Her search leads her down a path where she unleashes a darkness so great it threatens the very world we live in.
Price:
Free!
- Category: Fiction » Plays & Screenplays » American
- Category: Fiction » Young adult or teen » Religion
- Published: Nov. 21, 2011
- Words: 280
- Language: English
- ISBN: 9781301875207
Tags:
spiritual
About Mich O'Michaels
i'm an eccentric aspiring author and poet with great taste in music (or so i tell myself). Hoping to get published very soon.
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Reviews of The Darkness Unseen by Mich O'Michaels
Brendon Lewis
reviewed
on April 9, 2013
Crap it is. Deserves no star rating but for the time you took it to pen it, and for an average plot framework, i am giving this 1 star!
Improve your grammar.
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Gerty So
reviewed
on March 5, 2013
I Loved this story..... please keep writing.........
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Lora Keene
reviewed
on Nov. 25, 2011
Nice job. The story has a good basis.
Liked it.
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GlennAndSasha Gabriel
reviewed
on Nov. 24, 2011
Hi Michelle... very nice story. I felt the worry and anxiousness. Good job!
I like your style. Please keep writing! Can't wait to read your next one!
Hugs
Sasha
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GlennAndSasha Gabriel
reviewed
on Nov. 23, 2011
(no rating)
Hi Michelle. I see you are from Nigeria. Welcome to Smashwords! I thought your story was really good. Takes some time to get used to the formatting of text, but after a time we get it. Please keep writing! One thing you can count on... Some people will like your work, some won't, so what! Just keep on writing. There are many of us here that would love to read what you write!
Hi Michelle. I see you are from Nigeria. Welcome to Smashwords! I thought your story was really good. Takes some time to get used to the formatting of text, but after a time we get it. Please keep writing! One thing you can count on... Some people will like your work, some won't, so what! Just keep on writing. There are many of us here that would love to read what you write!
(review of free book)
Tom Banks
reviewed
on Nov. 23, 2011
Michelle. WELL DONE!!! In case you don't know, the one who gave you only one star, is well known as someone who can only make herself feel important at all by putting down others! She is known by most on smash words as someone to ignore. When people see her name they just laugh. Your story was quite good. Please keep writing!
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Jane Doilly
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on Nov. 21, 2011
Rarely do I bother to write expletives, but there is only one word for this short story — "Garbage." Spelling is poor. Grammar is non-existent. Plot is rubbish. Gives e-books a bad name.
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