Sin's Bite

Adult
Rated 3.00/5 based on 3 reviews
The Fates can be fickle - even moreso when they fate a vampire girl with a slayer for a mate...but differences only make the passion burn hotter. More
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Words: 5,130
Language: English
ISBN: 9781465830067
About Patricia Bates

Patricia lives in British Columbia Canada with her son, husband, two dogs, and two fish. An avid reader, she writes on a daily basis in a wide variety of genres. For more information on her, check out her websites.

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Reviews

Review by: hrhsophia on Dec. 28, 2012 :
An ok read.
(review of free book)

Review by: Shayna Gier on June 04, 2012 :
What I Loved:

There wasn't anything I particularly loved about this book. It wasn't bad, just nothing really stands out.

What I Didn't Like:

I didn't feel connected to the characters at all. It was erotic, yes, but it would have been more so if we'd been given more time to get to know the characters.

My Overall Review:

This book is about 11 pages long, 20 pageturns if you are reading a Kindle at a small-sized font. That being said, I have read other short stories within erotica and they all had some decent plotset–ups, so I don't hold this lack-of-plot or character connection as understandable. Is it difficult to make readers connect to characters in so little time? Yes- but it can be done. Besides, while the words themselves evoke sexual connotations, true eroticism happens when a reader is intimately connected to the characters engaging in the sexual acts.

That being said, if you are looking for an erotic paranormal story just to get turned on, this might be your book. If you like substance and character development- skip it.

Disclaimer:

This book was provided for me at no charge, nor was I given compensation
of any kind for this review. This review only reflects my personal opinion.
(review of free book)

Review by: Shayna Gier on June 04, 2012 :
What I Loved:

There wasn't anything I particularly loved about this book. It wasn't bad, just nothing really stands out.

What I Didn't Like:

I didn't feel connected to the characters at all. It was erotic, yes, but it would have been more so if we'd been given more time to get to know the characters.

My Overall Review:


This book is about 11 pages long, 20 pageturns if you are reading a Kindle at a small-sized font. That being said, I have read other short stories within erotica and they all had some decent plotset–ups, so I don't hold this lack-of-plot or character connection as understandable. Is it difficult to make readers connect to characters in so little time? Yes- but it can be done. Besides, while the words themselves evoke sexual connotations, true eroticism happens when a reader is intimately connected to the characters engaging in the sexual acts.

That being said, if you are looking for an erotic paranormal story just to get turned on, this might be your book. If you like substance and character development- skip it.

Disclaimer:

This book was provided for me at no charge, nor was I given compensation
of any kind for this review. This review only reflects my personal opinion.
(review of free book)

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