Zone Defence

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Nathan Kent wasn't thrilled with the idea of completing his final year of university at a completely different institution from where he'd started, but the opportunity to join one of the top varsity field lacrosse teams had been too much of a temptation to pass up. But then he met his new roommate, Aaron Campbell, and he knew he was in trouble. More

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About Leigh Jarrett

Canadian Author of Gay Contemporary, Fantasy, and Sci-Fi Erotic Romance

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Review by: Kia Zi Shiru on March 09, 2012 : star star
This book had a 5star review and reading the description I thought I would really enjoy the book.

Sadly the opposite is true. The story sounds promising but there is only so much you can take before you stop believing in the story. It looked like a romance story but the writing nears more to erotica, but it isn't. Sex scenes are written awkwardly, at one point the head of a dick is called a "perfect mushroom cap" and a nipple is "white of excitement", this turned me off, not on.
Suspension of believe only goes so far, when the characters break up and one of them immediately moves in with their ex on the same day it fully stops to be believable. The story ran so fast I could not keep up with what was going on.
The narration constantly switches between the two main characters, without a warning, every other sentence could be the other one thinking. It constantly took me out of the story and I could never figure out which character was who because they sounded so alike in voice.

I would advice the writer to read some gay erotica by male writers to see how they handle sex language and look at how other writers handle narration.
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Review by: Trevor Davis on Jan. 31, 2012 : star star star star star
Fantastic love story. Thanks so much.
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