I am a 58 year old businessman sho lives in northern Florida. I work a lot of hours a week and try to squeeze in time to write every week.
Writing is therapy for me, helping me to clear my mind of these thoughts that overpower me. I do not write for money but for enjoyment. I am not trained nor do I intend to become trained but I have has some positive reviews so I thought I would give this a try.- If you would like to send me a message email me at firstname.lastname@example.org
on Jan. 19, 2012 :
John, welcome to the wonderful world of Smashwords. I liked your story but would have enjoyed it more if you had spent a little more time cleaning out some of the grammatical and tense errors. I know in your bio you asked the reader to overlook them, but it would make your work, (even as an amateur), more appealing to the reader. I couldn’t count the number of times you switched from present to past and back.
I was hooked right off with the title and its sub-title Rebecca, and look forward to a second offering about Heidi. And surely there are many more juicy young co-eds in the complex waiting their turn with a helpful older man. You know the old saying, ‘one good turn deserves another.’ Good luck with your writing.
(review of free book)