on Jan. 2, 2013 :
This story was very unique and utterly gripped me at times, but it also had some problems.
To start, there are many different dialects and thus many grammatical errors. The errors are carefully researched to reflect the dialect of each character's native upbringing. It isn't clear the errors are purposeful representations of the dialect and, as such, feeds in to my bigger complaint: not enough development.
I read 2/3 of the book and it felt like 1/3. Only at the end of the book did substantial development happen. Many characters present their point of view, most of them artificial components of the game. Artificial intelligence was one of my favorite concepts, it fiddled with the perception of life. I was disappointed that concept wasn't expounded upon. This is also a key complaint: lack of better explanation for unnecessary explanation. There were many great concepts brushed over and most action and dialogue could be condensed.
Though the book is written as excerpts from multiple points of views, it becomes quickly obvious the reader is to focus on only two. We get to know them slowly and, again, their growth is packed in to the last third of the book. There were too many characters for growth and reflection. Some characters felt abandoned.
The premise itself is incredibly interesting, though. I can't think of any similar stories. It draws inspiration from all kinds of fairy tales, but also everything from science fiction, to wizardry, to Aikido as well. There were descriptions as unique as the story. A particular one that stuck with me was about comparing deaths of parents:
"It's like a tooth coming out. There's a hole that hurts when you put your tongue into it, but you keep putting your tongue into it. You don't really want to, but you can't stop it. You always want to compare."
I cant think of anything similar to that simile. Incredibly unique and profound.
I don't want to go in to much detail about the story, because there is a great ending that I didn't see coming. That is something to marvel, an author who can write a twist without the reader expecting the curve.
This book has a lot of those bursts of profundity, because the premise itself is profound. Of the premise is artificial intelligence and of that we come to know the AI, or the self-aware, godlike, omnipresent and omnipotent quantum computer. It comes to be another focal character discovering itself and others. It introduces prevalent motifs like benevolence, punishment, purpose, survival, and evolution. The reader gets to experience the simultaneous birth of a mind and the creation of a God.
So overall, the writing could stand to be hit with a mallet by an editor, but the premise is so unique that it has the potential to be a very intriguing and resonating fantasy series. I really hope to see more from this writer.
(reviewed 8 months after purchase)
on July 29, 2012 :
A bargain for readers of this genre.
What I liked
This is an intelligent, creative, innovative story that combines fantasy with enough science fiction to make it feel within the realm of the possible.
Although and enjoyable stand-alone story, this is the first book in what may be a series according to the author, so if you like it there should be more to follow.
The tale is written entirely in the first person, but from the perspective of many different characters. Difficult to follow at times, the variety of perspectives eventually brings the whole story together in a surprise ending, closing all the gaps, and answering all the questions that mount as you try to digest the fast paced story.
What I didn’t like
I had some difficulty with the jargon and vernacular. The characters use a combination of UK jargon (difficult for a Canadian like me to follow), youthful jargon (through the view of young teens who often make up their own words and language) and what appears to be made up terms for the purpose of living in “The Land”. However I suspended my minor discomfort with that and fully enjoyed the story.
(reviewed 47 days after purchase)